| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde said simply [simply]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.519 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.071 | | effectiveRatio | 0.071 | |
| 87.66% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1621 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "really" | | 1 | "perfectly" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 62.99% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1621 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "resolve" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "comforting" | | 3 | "velvet" | | 4 | "unreadable" | | 5 | "chill" | | 6 | "unsettled" | | 7 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 97 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 69.22% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 97 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "tried to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 110 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 61 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1637 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 44 | | wordCount | 1396 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.36 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 19 | | Eva | 1 | | National | 1 | | Museum | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Nyx | 8 | | London | 2 | | Park | 1 | | Isolde | 7 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "National" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.819 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "light that seemed to come from no particular direction" | | 1 | "quite name" | | 2 | "looked like deliberate, intelligent motio" | | 3 | "looked like liquid moonlight" | | 4 | "not quite touching the nearest trunk" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 7 | | per1kWords | 4.276 | | wordCount | 1637 | | matches | | 0 | "not with water but with what looked like liquid moonlight" | | 1 | "Not just the chiming flowers or the bell-leaves, but something beneath it all" | | 2 | "not the faint inner light she'd grown accustomed to, but a deep, arterial crimson" | | 3 | "not crushed but actively moving aside, creating a corridor of bare earth" | | 4 | "not fear, exactly, but a species of careful attention" | | 5 | "not at her but at the path, at the light pooling between the silver trees" | | 6 | "not painfully, but insistently, the way a hand burns" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 43.08 | | std | 30.5 | | cv | 0.708 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 96 | | 1 | 57 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 58 | | 4 | 34 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 109 | | 8 | 32 | | 9 | 43 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 100 | | 12 | 34 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 83 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 44 | | 17 | 31 | | 18 | 33 | | 19 | 69 | | 20 | 48 | | 21 | 27 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 94 | | 24 | 91 | | 25 | 84 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 39 | | 28 | 52 | | 29 | 52 | | 30 | 58 | | 31 | 49 | | 32 | 55 | | 33 | 39 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 30 | | 36 | 39 | | 37 | 4 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | |
| 88.42% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 239 | | matches | | 0 | "were everywhere — carpeting" | | 1 | "was vibrating" | | 2 | "was glowing " | | 3 | "was responding" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 16 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 110 | | ratio | 0.127 | | matches | | 0 | "The oaks — if you could call them oaks anymore — rose from the earth like the knuckles of something buried vast and deep, their bark gnarled into shapes that almost resembled faces." | | 1 | "They moved like smoke poured into a human mold — tall, fluid, and wrong in a way that made Rory's hindbrain want to crawl out through the base of her skull." | | 2 | "Not temperature, exactly — more like texture." | | 3 | "Richmond Park was still there, technically — she could see the grass, the path, even a distant dog walker frozen mid-stride — but it was flattened, like a photograph pressed against glass." | | 4 | "They were everywhere — carpeting the ground in drifts of color that had no business existing simultaneously." | | 5 | "Isolde smiled — the small, unreadable smile she deployed when she found something amusing but didn't want to commit to the admission." | | 6 | "Isolde had given it to her three weeks ago — pressed it into her hands in the back of Silas' bar with nothing but a riddle about cutting through what couldn't be seen and a look that suggested Rory was going to need it soon." | | 7 | "As they moved past the center, Rory began to notice structures — or rather, the ghosts of structures." | | 8 | "Not just the chiming flowers or the bell-leaves, but something beneath it all — a low, resonant hum that she felt more in her sternum than heard with her ears." | | 9 | "\"The grove is waking,\" Nyx said, their form flickering — solid, then smoke, then solid again." | | 10 | "The Heartstone was glowing — not the faint inner light she'd grown accustomed to, but a deep, arterial crimson that threw red shadows across the wildflowers at her feet." | | 11 | "The silver trees were leaning inward, their bell-leaves ringing in a rising cascade, and between their trunks she could see deeper into the copse — could see that the path of white stones continued, spiraling downward into a depression or a hollow where the light from the drifting stars gathered in a pool." | | 12 | "There was something in her voice that Rory hadn't heard previously — not fear, exactly, but a species of careful attention that bordered on alarm." | | 13 | "It burned now — not painfully, but insistently, the way a hand burns when you've been holding it too close to a flame." |
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| 91.05% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 876 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 44 | | adverbRatio | 0.0502283105022831 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0136986301369863 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 110 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 110 | | mean | 14.88 | | std | 12.21 | | cv | 0.82 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 29 | | 1 | 33 | | 2 | 1 | | 3 | 33 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 31 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 1 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 48 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 32 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 26 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 60 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 35 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 36 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 24 |
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| 50.61% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.36363636363636365 | | totalSentences | 110 | | uniqueOpeners | 40 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 83.41% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "She didn't want to look" | | 1 | "She stopped at the edge" | | 2 | "They moved like smoke poured" | | 3 | "She'd gotten used to it." | | 4 | "She turned to look back" | | 5 | "Her voice didn't carry the" | | 6 | "They had already moved deeper" | | 7 | "They were everywhere — carpeting" | | 8 | "She crouched beside one of" | | 9 | "It leaned toward her palm" | | 10 | "She left no footprints." | | 11 | "She had never left footprints," | | 12 | "It was too deep, too" | | 13 | "They hung in the air" | | 14 | "Her phone was in her" | | 15 | "She didn't want to know" | | 16 | "She touched the hilt now," | | 17 | "It was the sound of" | | 18 | "She'd only just noticed because" | | 19 | "They were unsettled." |
| | ratio | 0.341 | |
| 33.17% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 70 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones looked older" | | 1 | "The oaks — if you" | | 2 | "She didn't want to look" | | 3 | "She stopped at the edge" | | 4 | "The crimson gem pulsed once" | | 5 | "Nyx materialized from the shadow" | | 6 | "They moved like smoke poured" | | 7 | "She'd gotten used to it." | | 8 | "Nyx said, their voice arriving" | | 9 | "Rory stepped between two of" | | 10 | "The air changed immediately." | | 11 | "The London damp that had" | | 12 | "She turned to look back" | | 13 | "Richmond Park was still there," | | 14 | "Her voice didn't carry the" | | 15 | "The sound fell out of" | | 16 | "They had already moved deeper" | | 17 | "The grove opened up around" | | 18 | "The first thing she noticed" | | 19 | "They were everywhere — carpeting" |
| | ratio | 0.854 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "The London damp that had been clinging to her jacket since she'd locked up her delivery scooter in the car park simply ceased to exist, replaced by something cl…" | | 1 | "They had already moved deeper into the clearing, their shadow-form rippling where it passed through shafts of light that seemed to come from no particular direc…" | | 2 | "They were everywhere — carpeting the ground in drifts of color that had no business existing simultaneously." | | 3 | "Bluebells and foxglooves grew alongside things she didn't have names for: spiraling stalks topped with translucent petals that chimed faintly when the nonexiste…" | | 4 | "It was too deep, too purple, scattered with lights that might have been stars but were too close, too large." | | 5 | "A path of flat white stones that led toward a copse of silver-barked trees whose leaves rang like tiny bells in the not-breeze." | | 6 | "The grove was vibrating at a frequency that existed just below conscious perception, and it had been doing it since she'd stepped through the stones." | | 7 | "The Heartstone was glowing — not the faint inner light she'd grown accustomed to, but a deep, arterial crimson that threw red shadows across the wildflowers at …" | | 8 | "The wildflowers parted for her, not crushed but actively moving aside, creating a corridor of bare earth that smelled of rain and something sweeter, something t…" | | 9 | "There was something in her voice that Rory hadn't heard previously — not fear, exactly, but a species of careful attention that bordered on alarm." |
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| 53.57% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx said, their form flickering — solid, then smoke, then solid again" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered, and the wind carried their voice from every direction at once" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.444 | | leniency | 0.889 | | rawRatio | 0.083 | | effectiveRatio | 0.074 | |