Run: 2026-07-01-01KWE8Q30DH261MWFJ5SEJ37R9

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Duration:
34.1s
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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The three deadbolts on Eva's door took Rory longer to work through than she wanted, especially with wet hair dripping down her collar and a phone buzzing uselessly in her pocket. She yanked the last bolt free and pulled the door open, ready to snap at whoever had been leaning on the buzzer for the last two minutes. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing, cane resting against one shoulder, rain beading on the shoulders of a charcoal suit that had no business looking that clean in this weather. "You're soaked," she said, because it was easier than anything else that came to mind. "London does that to a man who insists on walking instead of taking a cab like a reasonable person." "Nobody insisted you walk." "No," he agreed. "Nobody insisted I come at all." Ptolemy wound himself around Rory's ankles, unbothered by the stranger at the door, and she nearly tripped stepping back to let Lucien through. He didn't wait for an invitation past that — just moved into the flat like he'd never left it, eyes flicking over the towers of books, the scrolls unrolled across the coffee table, the general chaos Eva called a filing system. "Charming as ever," he said. "Though I recall this place having fewer candles and considerably less risk of spontaneous combustion." "Eva's not here. If you're looking for information, you'll have to come back." "I'm not looking for information." He set the cane against the sofa's arm, and the small click of ivory against wood filled the silence better than either of them could. "Then what are you looking for, Lucien?" His amber eye caught the lamp light. The black one gave nothing back at all. "Does it matter what I say I'm looking for, or only what you'll believe?" "That's not an answer." "No," he said. "It's a question. I've gotten good at those. Fewer people get hurt when I ask instead of tell." Rory crossed her arms, aware of how her jumper clung damp to her shoulders, aware of the crescent scar on her wrist that itched whenever her pulse picked up, which it currently was, infuriatingly. "You could've called." "You'd have let it ring out." "Probably." "There we are, then. Some honesty, finally arriving fashionably late." She moved past him toward the kitchenette, mostly to put distance between them, and put the kettle on more out of habit than hospitality. "Last time I saw you," she said, back to him, "you handed my location to a man who wanted to carve information out of me with something sharper than words. So forgive me if I'm not thrilled to find you dripping on Eva's carpet." "I gave him a location three streets from where you actually were." "That's not the same as not giving him anything." "No. It's not. It's the difference between betrayal and survival, and I'll let you decide which one applies, since you're so fond of deciding things about me without asking first." She turned. He hadn't moved, hadn't reached for the theatrics he usually wrapped himself in — no smirk, no idle twirl of that cane. Just standing there, rain still clinging to the ends of his platinum hair, looking like a man who'd rehearsed leaving more than arriving. "You could've told me. After. Instead of vanishing for three months." "I could have." His voice dropped, lost some of its polish. "I told myself you didn't want to hear from the man who put a target on your back, however small, however necessary. I told myself a great many convenient things, Aurora." Hearing her full name in his mouth did something unfair to her chest. "And now? What changed?" "Nothing changed. That's rather the point." He finally looked away from her, down at the cane, at his own hands. "I've spent three months telling myself I did the right thing, and three months not believing it for a single night." The kettle clicked off behind her, forgotten. Ptolemy leapt onto a stack of books and knocked a scroll to the floor, and neither of them moved to pick it up. "You don't get to just show up," she said, "soaked through, quoting French philosophy at my ceiling, and expect that to undo three months." "I'm not expecting anything undone. I came because I was tired of the lie I'd been telling myself, and I didn't have anywhere else that lie made sense to say out loud." "That's not romantic, Lucien. That's just sad." "I never claimed otherwise." The corner of his mouth almost lifted, that old familiar half-smile she'd hated herself for missing. "You look terrible," she said, softer now, some of the fight bleeding out of it. "High praise, coming from you." "I didn't say it as praise." "I'll take what I can get." She reached past him for a towel hanging on the back of a chair, and the movement put them closer together than either had planned, close enough that she could see the rain drying at his collarbone, close enough to remember exactly why three months of silence had felt like drowning slowly instead of all at once. "Here," she said, pressing the towel into his hands instead of her own choices. "Dry off. Then you can explain to Eva why there's a demon-blooded fixer dripping on her ancient texts." "And you? What do I explain to you?" She didn't have an answer ready, and for once, she let the silence sit instead of filling it with something sharp. "Start with why you actually came," she said instead. "The real reason. Not the rehearsed one." Lucien looked at her for a long moment, towel forgotten in his hands, water still running from his hair down the side of his face like he hadn't noticed it in the first place. "Because I missed you," he said, "and I've run out of clients interesting enough to distract me from that fact."
created_at"2026-07-01T07:18:55.47Z" 7/1/2026, 7:18:55 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said instead [instead]"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.262
leniency0.524
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.048
94.92% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount985
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
74.62% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount985
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"silence"
count3
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"pulse"
2"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences32
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences32
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences62
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen57
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords987
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions26
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions12
wordCount546
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.55
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Eva2
Rory3
Moreau1
Ptolemy2
Lucien3
Hearing1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Moreau"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Lucien"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
45.83% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences24
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like drowning slowly instead of al"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount987
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean20.14
std15.61
cv0.775
sampleLengths
058
130
215
319
44
59
664
720
813
95
1025
117
1215
1314
144
1521
1634
173
186
191
2010
2124
2244
2312
249
2530
2647
2711
2842
2913
304
3141
3230
3324
3432
357
364
3716
3815
395
406
416
4257
4332
448
4521
4616
4734
4820
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences32
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs90
matches(empty)
50.69% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences62
ratio0.032
matches
0"He didn't wait for an invitation past that — just moved into the flat like he'd never left it, eyes flicking over the towers of books, the scrolls unrolled across the coffee table, the general chaos Eva called a filing system."
1"He hadn't moved, hadn't reached for the theatrics he usually wrapped himself in — no smirk, no idle twirl of that cane."
80.83% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount545
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"old familiar half-smile"
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.05504587155963303
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.01834862385321101
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences62
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences62
mean15.92
std11.69
cv0.734
sampleLengths
031
127
230
315
419
54
63
76
823
941
105
1115
1213
135
1425
157
167
178
1814
194
203
2118
2234
233
246
251
2610
2724
2844
2912
309
3130
322
3322
3423
3511
3611
3731
3813
394
4020
4121
427
4323
4424
4532
467
474
4816
4915
78.49% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.5
totalSentences62
uniqueOpeners31
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences26
matches
0"Just standing there, rain still"
ratio0.038
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences26
matches
0"She yanked the last bolt"
1"she said, because it was"
2"He didn't wait for an"
3"He set the cane against"
4"His amber eye caught the"
5"She moved past him toward"
6"she said, back to him"
7"He hadn't moved, hadn't reached"
8"His voice dropped, lost some"
9"He finally looked away from"
10"she said, softer now, some"
11"She reached past him for"
12"she said, pressing the towel"
13"She didn't have an answer"
14"she said instead"
ratio0.577
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount24
totalSentences26
matches
0"The three deadbolts on Eva's"
1"She yanked the last bolt"
2"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
3"she said, because it was"
4"Ptolemy wound himself around Rory's"
5"He didn't wait for an"
6"He set the cane against"
7"His amber eye caught the"
8"The black one gave nothing"
9"Rory crossed her arms, aware"
10"She moved past him toward"
11"she said, back to him"
12"He hadn't moved, hadn't reached"
13"His voice dropped, lost some"
14"He finally looked away from"
15"The kettle clicked off behind"
16"Ptolemy leapt onto a stack"
17"The corner of his mouth"
18"she said, softer now, some"
19"She reached past him for"
ratio0.923
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences26
matches(empty)
ratio0
8.93% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences16
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Lucien Moreau stood on the landing, cane resting against one shoulder, rain beading on the shoulders of a charcoal suit that had no business looking that clean …"
1"Rory crossed her arms, aware of how her jumper clung damp to her shoulders, aware of the crescent scar on her wrist that itched whenever her pulse picked up, wh…"
2"Just standing there, rain still clinging to the ends of his platinum hair, looking like a man who'd rehearsed leaving more than arriving."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.238
leniency0.476
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.048
81.1442%