Run: 2026-07-01-01KWE8Q30HE6GWK0JW343ZWPZC

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Duration:
31.3s
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$0.023136
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Amazon Bedrock

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest smelled the way it always did—old whisky soaked into wood, the faint char of the fireplace Silas never let burn out even in July. Rory wiped down the bar top with a rag that had seen better decades, half-listening to the murmur of Tuesday-night regulars, when the door opened and let in a slice of grey London evening. The man who walked in wore a suit that cost more than her monthly rent. He stood in the doorway for a second too long, scanning the room like he'd wandered into the wrong postcode. "Christ," he said, "this place is exactly the same." Rory's rag stopped moving. "Marcus?" He turned, and there it was—the same lopsided grin from sixth form, except now it sat on a face that had learned to be careful with itself. Fewer lines than she expected. More grey at the temples than she remembered. "Rory Carter. Didn't think you'd actually still be pulling pints." "Didn't think you'd still be alive, the way you drove that Fiesta." He laughed, and for a second the years peeled back—seventeen, both of them, sneaking cans of cider onto the roof of the leisure centre. Then he sat down at the bar like he'd never left, like eight years hadn't happened in between, and the illusion cracked at the edges. "What'll it be?" she asked, sliding a coaster toward him out of habit rather than necessity. "Whatever's good. Surprise me." "You used to only drink lager. The cheap stuff, in the blue cans." "People change, Rory." She reached for the good gin, the one Silas kept for people who tipped well or looked like they needed something stronger than beer. She poured it slow, watching him from the corner of her eye—watching how he sat, spine straight, hands folded like he was in a meeting rather than a bar in Soho. "So," she said, setting the glass down. "What happened to you?" "Investment banking happened to me. Canary Wharf, mostly. A few years in Singapore." "Singapore." "You'd hate it. Too clean." "I don't hate clean." "You used to. You used to say clean was for people who'd given up on being interesting." She hadn't remembered saying that, but it sounded like something she would've said, back when she thought Cardiff was a cage and London was a door. Before Evan. Before the flight north with nothing but a duffel bag and Eva's phone number scrawled on a napkin. "You look different," he said. "Older." "Sharper. Like someone sanded off the soft bits." "Someone did." He waited for more, the way old friends do, thinking the years owe them an explanation. She didn't give him one. Instead she picked up another glass and started drying it, though it was already dry. "I heard about the law thing," he said, careful now, like he was stepping onto ice he wasn't sure would hold. "That you didn't finish." "News travels." "Your mum told my mum. You know how it goes." "I know how it goes." "What happened?" She set the glass down harder than she meant to. Somewhere behind her, in the shadow near the bookshelf that wasn't really a bookshelf, she felt the space where Silas usually stood, listening without listening, the way he did with everyone. Tonight he was in the back room, some appointment she wasn't privy to, and the absence of him left her exposed in a way she didn't like. "I found something better to do with my time," she said. "Delivering Chinese food." "You've done your research." "Small world. Your mum again." "She talks too much." "She's proud of you. Even if she doesn't understand the—" he gestured vaguely at her, at the bar, at the rag in her hand, "—current arrangement." "Nobody understands the current arrangement. That's rather the point." He turned the gin glass in slow circles, not drinking, just turning it, the ice clicking against crystal. She recognised the gesture—he used to do that with a can of cider on the leisure centre roof, turning it and turning it while he worked up the nerve to say something true. "I thought about looking you up," he said. "After you left Cardiff. I had your number for a while. Never called." "I changed it anyway. After Evan." His jaw tightened at the name, though he'd never met the man, only heard the stories secondhand through the same gossip network that had delivered him her employment history. "I should've called before that," he said. "Before all that happened. Maybe you wouldn't have—" "Marcus." "I'm just saying—" "Don't." He stopped. The bar noise filled the gap where his sentence would've gone—someone's laugh two tables over, the clink of glasses, the low hum of a radio Silas kept tuned to some jazz station that never seemed to play anything Rory recognised. "I'm not the guy who fixes things by showing up eight years late," he said finally. "I know that." "No. You're the guy in the suit who found a girl behind a bar and felt sorry for her." "That's not—" "Isn't it?" He looked at his drink instead of at her, and for a moment he seemed younger than he had walking through the door, younger than his suit and his Singapore stories and his careful spine. "I missed you," he said. "That's all. I saw the sign outside—I didn't even know this was your place, I was meeting a client two doors down and saw the green neon and thought, that's exactly the kind of place Rory would end up owning." "I don't own it." "You know what I mean." She did. She wiped the bar top again, though it didn't need it, giving her hands something to do that wasn't reaching across the space between them. "It's good to see you," she said, and meant it, even through the ache of it, even through the strange grief of realising the boy who'd shared cider on a rooftop had become a man she'd have to get to know all over again, if she wanted to know him at all. "You too," he said. "Even like this. Even—" he gestured at the bar, at her apron, at the version of her life he hadn't expected to find. "Even like this," she agreed, and poured herself a drink for the first time that night, because some reunions needed one.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"he said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.283
leniency0.566
rawRatio0.133
effectiveRatio0.075
95.33% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1070
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
90.65% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1070
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"crystal"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"crystal"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences44
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences44
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences82
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen52
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1062
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount728
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.55
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Silas4
July1
Tuesday-night1
London2
Rory3
Soho1
Cardiff1
Evan1
Eva1
Singapore1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
4"Evan"
5"Eva"
places
0"July"
1"London"
2"Soho"
3"Cardiff"
4"Singapore"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences30
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like they needed something stronge"
1"sounded like something she would've said,"
2"seemed younger than he had walking through the door, younger than his suit and his Singapore stories and his careful spine"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1062
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean17.7
std17.78
cv1.004
sampleLengths
061
135
29
34
41
540
610
712
849
916
104
1113
123
1355
1411
1513
161
175
184
1917
2046
215
221
238
242
2536
2625
272
2810
295
302
3168
3211
333
344
355
364
3726
389
3951
4021
416
4229
4315
441
453
461
4742
4819
4919
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences44
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs132
matches
0"was stepping"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences82
ratio0.085
matches
0"The Raven's Nest smelled the way it always did—old whisky soaked into wood, the faint char of the fireplace Silas never let burn out even in July."
1"He turned, and there it was—the same lopsided grin from sixth form, except now it sat on a face that had learned to be careful with itself."
2"He laughed, and for a second the years peeled back—seventeen, both of them, sneaking cans of cider onto the roof of the leisure centre."
3"She poured it slow, watching him from the corner of her eye—watching how he sat, spine straight, hands folded like he was in a meeting rather than a bar in Soho."
4"\"She's proud of you. Even if she doesn't understand the—\" he gestured vaguely at her, at the bar, at the rag in her hand, \"—current arrangement.\""
5"She recognised the gesture—he used to do that with a can of cider on the leisure centre roof, turning it and turning it while he worked up the nerve to say something true."
6"The bar noise filled the gap where his sentence would've gone—someone's laugh two tables over, the clink of glasses, the low hum of a radio Silas kept tuned to some jazz station that never seemed to play anything Rory recognised."
92.17% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount572
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.04895104895104895
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.01048951048951049
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences82
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences82
mean12.95
std11.42
cv0.882
sampleLengths
027
134
215
320
49
54
61
727
85
98
1010
1112
1224
1325
1416
154
1613
173
1824
1931
207
214
2213
231
245
254
2617
2726
282
2918
305
311
328
332
3416
355
3615
3721
384
392
4010
415
422
4310
4431
4527
4611
473
484
495
69.92% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.4634146341463415
totalSentences82
uniqueOpeners38
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences34
matches
0"More grey at the temples"
1"Then he sat down at"
2"Instead she picked up another"
3"Somewhere behind her, in the"
ratio0.118
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences34
matches
0"He stood in the doorway"
1"He turned, and there it"
2"He laughed, and for a"
3"she asked, sliding a coaster"
4"She reached for the good"
5"She poured it slow, watching"
6"she said, setting the glass"
7"She hadn't remembered saying that,"
8"He waited for more, the"
9"She didn't give him one."
10"he said, careful now, like"
11"She set the glass down"
12"he gestured vaguely at her,"
13"He turned the gin glass"
14"She recognised the gesture—he used"
15"His jaw tightened at the"
16"he said finally"
17"He looked at his drink"
18"She wiped the bar top"
19"she said, and meant it,"
ratio0.647
48.24% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount28
totalSentences34
matches
0"The Raven's Nest smelled the"
1"Rory wiped down the bar"
2"The man who walked in"
3"He stood in the doorway"
4"Rory's rag stopped moving."
5"He turned, and there it"
6"He laughed, and for a"
7"she asked, sliding a coaster"
8"She reached for the good"
9"She poured it slow, watching"
10"she said, setting the glass"
11"She hadn't remembered saying that,"
12"He waited for more, the"
13"She didn't give him one."
14"he said, careful now, like"
15"She set the glass down"
16"Tonight he was in the"
17"he gestured vaguely at her,"
18"He turned the gin glass"
19"She recognised the gesture—he used"
ratio0.824
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences34
matches
0"Before the flight north with"
ratio0.029
45.45% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Rory wiped down the bar top with a rag that had seen better decades, half-listening to the murmur of Tuesday-night regulars, when the door opened and let in a s…"
1"Somewhere behind her, in the shadow near the bookshelf that wasn't really a bookshelf, she felt the space where Silas usually stood, listening without listening…"
2"His jaw tightened at the name, though he'd never met the man, only heard the stories secondhand through the same gossip network that had delivered him her emplo…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.245
leniency0.491
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.038
84.0586%