| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he gestured vaguely [vaguely]" | | 1 | "he said finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 53 | | tagDensity | 0.283 | | leniency | 0.566 | | rawRatio | 0.133 | | effectiveRatio | 0.075 | |
| 95.33% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1070 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 80.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 90.65% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1070 | | totalAiIsms | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 44 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 44 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 82 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 52 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1062 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 18 | | wordCount | 728 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 0.55 | | worstName | "Silas" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Silas" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Silas | 4 | | July | 1 | | Tuesday-night | 1 | | London | 2 | | Rory | 3 | | Soho | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Singapore | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Nest" | | 2 | "Silas" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Evan" | | 5 | "Eva" |
| | places | | 0 | "July" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Soho" | | 3 | "Cardiff" | | 4 | "Singapore" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 30 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like they needed something stronge" | | 1 | "sounded like something she would've said," | | 2 | "seemed younger than he had walking through the door, younger than his suit and his Singapore stories and his careful spine" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1062 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 60 | | mean | 17.7 | | std | 17.78 | | cv | 1.004 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 61 | | 1 | 35 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 1 | | 5 | 40 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 49 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 55 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 46 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 36 | | 26 | 25 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 68 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 26 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 51 | | 40 | 21 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 29 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 42 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 19 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 44 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 132 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 82 | | ratio | 0.085 | | matches | | 0 | "The Raven's Nest smelled the way it always did—old whisky soaked into wood, the faint char of the fireplace Silas never let burn out even in July." | | 1 | "He turned, and there it was—the same lopsided grin from sixth form, except now it sat on a face that had learned to be careful with itself." | | 2 | "He laughed, and for a second the years peeled back—seventeen, both of them, sneaking cans of cider onto the roof of the leisure centre." | | 3 | "She poured it slow, watching him from the corner of her eye—watching how he sat, spine straight, hands folded like he was in a meeting rather than a bar in Soho." | | 4 | "\"She's proud of you. Even if she doesn't understand the—\" he gestured vaguely at her, at the bar, at the rag in her hand, \"—current arrangement.\"" | | 5 | "She recognised the gesture—he used to do that with a can of cider on the leisure centre roof, turning it and turning it while he worked up the nerve to say something true." | | 6 | "The bar noise filled the gap where his sentence would've gone—someone's laugh two tables over, the clink of glasses, the low hum of a radio Silas kept tuned to some jazz station that never seemed to play anything Rory recognised." |
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| 92.17% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 572 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 28 | | adverbRatio | 0.04895104895104895 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01048951048951049 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 82 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 82 | | mean | 12.95 | | std | 11.42 | | cv | 0.882 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 34 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 27 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 31 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 26 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 31 | | 45 | 27 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 69.92% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.4634146341463415 | | totalSentences | 82 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 34 | | matches | | 0 | "More grey at the temples" | | 1 | "Then he sat down at" | | 2 | "Instead she picked up another" | | 3 | "Somewhere behind her, in the" |
| | ratio | 0.118 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 34 | | matches | | 0 | "He stood in the doorway" | | 1 | "He turned, and there it" | | 2 | "He laughed, and for a" | | 3 | "she asked, sliding a coaster" | | 4 | "She reached for the good" | | 5 | "She poured it slow, watching" | | 6 | "she said, setting the glass" | | 7 | "She hadn't remembered saying that," | | 8 | "He waited for more, the" | | 9 | "She didn't give him one." | | 10 | "he said, careful now, like" | | 11 | "She set the glass down" | | 12 | "he gestured vaguely at her," | | 13 | "He turned the gin glass" | | 14 | "She recognised the gesture—he used" | | 15 | "His jaw tightened at the" | | 16 | "he said finally" | | 17 | "He looked at his drink" | | 18 | "She wiped the bar top" | | 19 | "she said, and meant it," |
| | ratio | 0.647 | |
| 48.24% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 34 | | matches | | 0 | "The Raven's Nest smelled the" | | 1 | "Rory wiped down the bar" | | 2 | "The man who walked in" | | 3 | "He stood in the doorway" | | 4 | "Rory's rag stopped moving." | | 5 | "He turned, and there it" | | 6 | "He laughed, and for a" | | 7 | "she asked, sliding a coaster" | | 8 | "She reached for the good" | | 9 | "She poured it slow, watching" | | 10 | "she said, setting the glass" | | 11 | "She hadn't remembered saying that," | | 12 | "He waited for more, the" | | 13 | "She didn't give him one." | | 14 | "he said, careful now, like" | | 15 | "She set the glass down" | | 16 | "Tonight he was in the" | | 17 | "he gestured vaguely at her," | | 18 | "He turned the gin glass" | | 19 | "She recognised the gesture—he used" |
| | ratio | 0.824 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 34 | | matches | | 0 | "Before the flight north with" |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 45.45% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 22 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory wiped down the bar top with a rag that had seen better decades, half-listening to the murmur of Tuesday-night regulars, when the door opened and let in a s…" | | 1 | "Somewhere behind her, in the shadow near the bookshelf that wasn't really a bookshelf, she felt the space where Silas usually stood, listening without listening…" | | 2 | "His jaw tightened at the name, though he'd never met the man, only heard the stories secondhand through the same gossip network that had delivered him her emplo…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 53 | | tagDensity | 0.245 | | leniency | 0.491 | | rawRatio | 0.077 | | effectiveRatio | 0.038 | |