Run: 2026-07-01-01KWE8QPS3DB5X62JZPKR2WCCN

Run Details

Duration:
31.1s
Cost:
$0.022124
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The three deadbolts took Rory longer than usual, her fingers fumbling on the last one when she heard the knock again. Ptolemy yowled from the windowsill and darted under the sofa, scattering a stack of Eva's research notes. She yanked the door open ready to snap at whoever had the nerve to disturb her at midnight, and the words died somewhere behind her teeth. Lucien stood in the hallway, rain darkening the shoulders of his charcoal suit, cane hooked over one forearm like an afterthought. His black eye caught the hallway light strangely, the amber one not catching it at all. "You look surprised," he said. "I did knock." "You could've called." "I did. Four times." He tilted his head, water dripping from his slicked-back hair onto the collar of his shirt. "You didn't answer, which either means you lost your phone or you're still furious with me. I'm guessing the latter, given the state of your face right now." "My face is fine." "Your face is doing something complicated." She almost laughed, caught it before it escaped, and folded her arms instead. Behind her, the flat smelled of jasmine tea and old paper, and she was suddenly conscious of how she must look — hair scraped back, an oversized jumper that had definitely belonged to Eva at some point, no shoes. "What do you want, Lucien." "May I come in? It's rather wet out here, and I'd rather not conduct this conversation in a corridor that smells of someone's dinner." "That's curry from downstairs. It's actually lovely." "I'm sure it is. May I?" She stepped back before she'd decided to, and he moved past her with that same unhurried grace he always had, cane tapping once against the floorboards before he tucked it under his arm. He took in the flat — the towers of books, the maps pinned to the wall with red string connecting locations she hadn't wanted to explain to him, the general chaos that was Eva's idea of organised research — and said nothing, which was somehow worse than if he'd commented. "You've redecorated," he said finally. "This isn't my flat." "I know whose flat it is." He turned, and there it was — that look, the one that made her stomach do something unpleasant and familiar. "I know where you're staying, Aurora. I've known for three weeks." "Then why haven't you shown up until now?" "Would you have let me in three weeks ago?" She didn't answer that, because the honest answer was no, and they both knew it. "So what's changed?" she asked instead. Lucien set his cane against the arm of the sofa, careful, like everything he did was careful, calculated three steps ahead. He looked older in the lamp light, or maybe just tired, the kind of tired that didn't come from lack of sleep. "There's a problem," he said. "One I think you'll want to know about, given your involvement with a certain restaurant and its owner." "Yu-Fei." "Yu-Fei," he agreed. "Though that's not really why I'm here at midnight in the rain, and you know it." "Don't." "Don't what? I haven't said anything yet." "You're about to. I can see it happening on your face, that particular thing you do before you say something you think is charming and I think is infuriating." "They're not mutually exclusive." "Lucien." He exhaled, and something in his posture shifted, the practiced ease dropping just slightly, enough that she caught a glimpse of whatever sat underneath it. He looked toward the window, toward the rain streaking the glass, rather than at her. "I should have come after you," he said. "When you left Le Rêve, that night. I should have come after you instead of standing there like an idiot with a glass of wine in my hand, watching the door." "You had your reasons." "I had excuses. There's a difference, and you were right to call them that at the time, even if I didn't have the grace to admit it then." Rory sat on the arm of the chair across from him, careful to keep the coffee table between them, careful to keep some kind of distance that felt necessary even if she couldn't articulate why. Ptolemy's tail flicked from beneath the sofa. "You told me I was a liability," she said. "That whatever this was between us, it made you sloppy. Those were your words. A liability." "I remember." "So which is it, Lucien. Am I still a liability, or did that change too, along with your sudden willingness to show up in the rain?" He looked at her then, properly, the amber eye and the black one both fixed on her face like he was trying to read something written too small. "You're still a liability," he said. "You make me want things I have no business wanting, in my line of work. That hasn't changed. I've simply decided I don't particularly care anymore." "That's not the same as an apology." "No. It's not." He leaned forward, elbows on his knees, hands loosely clasped. "I am sorry, Aurora. For Le Rêve. For the weeks after, when I let you think it didn't matter to me, when it mattered a great deal. I'm not good at this — the saying of things. I'm considerably better at the not saying of things, as you're well aware." "I noticed." "I'm trying to be different about it. Right now. This is me trying." Rory studied him — the rain still clinging to his shoulders, the cane resting against the sofa like a held breath, the careful, unpractised honesty sitting strange on features built for concealment — and felt something in her chest loosen, just slightly, just enough to be dangerous. "You said there was a problem," she said. "With Yu-Fei. Tell me about that first." Something like relief crossed his face, quickly hidden, though not quickly enough that she missed it. "There is," he said. "But it can wait five more minutes if you'd rather sit here and be angry with me a while longer. I find I don't mind either way, so long as I'm not standing in that corridor."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he said finally [finally]"
1"she asked instead [instead]"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.277
leniency0.553
rawRatio0.154
effectiveRatio0.085
65.72% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1021
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count2
3
adverb"loosely"
count1
4
adverb"quickly"
count2
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"really"
2"slightly"
3"loosely"
4"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
75.51% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1021
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"calculated"
count1
3
word"practiced ease"
count1
4
word"flicked"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"familiar"
2"calculated"
3"practiced ease"
4"flicked"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences32
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences32
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences66
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen49
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1028
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions8
wordCount535
uniqueNames3
maxNameDensity0.56
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory3
Eva3
Lucien2
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
36.36% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences22
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"Something like relief crossed his face, quic"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1028
matches(empty)
65.66% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences66
matches
0"was — that look"
1"enough that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean21.42
std18.78
cv0.877
sampleLengths
038
126
237
38
43
548
64
76
852
95
1024
117
126
1383
145
154
1637
178
189
1915
206
2143
2223
231
2419
251
267
2729
284
291
3040
3139
324
3328
3442
3525
362
3726
3828
3932
407
4163
422
4313
4447
4515
4616
4740
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences32
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs104
matches
0"was trying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences66
ratio0.061
matches
0"Behind her, the flat smelled of jasmine tea and old paper, and she was suddenly conscious of how she must look — hair scraped back, an oversized jumper that had definitely belonged to Eva at some point, no shoes."
1"He took in the flat — the towers of books, the maps pinned to the wall with red string connecting locations she hadn't wanted to explain to him, the general chaos that was Eva's idea of organised research — and said nothing, which was somehow worse than if he'd commented."
2"\"I know whose flat it is.\" He turned, and there it was — that look, the one that made her stomach do something unpleasant and familiar."
3"Rory studied him — the rain still clinging to his shoulders, the cane resting against the sofa like a held breath, the careful, unpractised honesty sitting strange on features built for concealment — and felt something in her chest loosen, just slightly, just enough to be dangerous."
85.47% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount530
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.05660377358490566
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.018867924528301886
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences66
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences66
mean15.58
std12.47
cv0.801
sampleLengths
021
117
226
321
416
55
63
73
820
928
104
116
1213
1339
145
1524
167
176
1833
1950
205
214
2226
2311
248
259
2615
276
2821
2922
305
3118
321
333
3416
351
367
3729
384
391
4025
4115
428
4331
444
4528
4635
477
489
4916
65.15% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.45454545454545453
totalSentences66
uniqueOpeners30
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences24
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences24
matches
0"She yanked the door open"
1"His black eye caught the"
2"He tilted his head, water"
3"She almost laughed, caught it"
4"She stepped back before she'd"
5"He took in the flat"
6"he said finally"
7"He turned, and there it"
8"She didn't answer that, because"
9"she asked instead"
10"He looked older in the"
11"He exhaled, and something in"
12"He looked toward the window,"
13"He looked at her then,"
14"He leaned forward, elbows on"
ratio0.625
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount23
totalSentences24
matches
0"The three deadbolts took Rory"
1"Ptolemy yowled from the windowsill"
2"She yanked the door open"
3"Lucien stood in the hallway,"
4"His black eye caught the"
5"He tilted his head, water"
6"She almost laughed, caught it"
7"She stepped back before she'd"
8"He took in the flat"
9"he said finally"
10"He turned, and there it"
11"She didn't answer that, because"
12"she asked instead"
13"Lucien set his cane against"
14"He looked older in the"
15"He exhaled, and something in"
16"He looked toward the window,"
17"Rory sat on the arm"
18"Ptolemy's tail flicked from beneath"
19"He looked at her then,"
ratio0.958
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences24
matches(empty)
ratio0
23.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences18
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Behind her, the flat smelled of jasmine tea and old paper, and she was suddenly conscious of how she must look — hair scraped back, an oversized jumper that had…"
1"He took in the flat — the towers of books, the maps pinned to the wall with red string connecting locations she hadn't wanted to explain to him, the general cha…"
2"Rory sat on the arm of the chair across from him, careful to keep the coffee table between them, careful to keep some kind of distance that felt necessary even …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.213
leniency0.426
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.043
73.9229%