Run: 2026-07-01-01KWE8R8GRXQ83M5GGFSV201NS

Run Details

Duration:
34.7s
Cost:
$0.025434
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came three times, sharp and deliberate, cutting through the bassline thumping up from Silas' bar below. Rory set down her mug of tea, glanced at the clock — half eleven, too late for deliveries, too early for trouble that announced itself politely. She pulled the door open expecting a drunk patron who'd wandered up the wrong stairs. Lucien stood in the hallway, ivory cane resting against his shoulder, platinum hair catching the weak light from the bare bulb overhead. He hadn't changed the suit. Charcoal, always charcoal, like he owned the colour outright. "You look surprised," he said. "I did knock." "You could've called first." "I did. Four times, actually. You never pick up when it's me." Rory crossed her arms, blocking the doorway with her body rather than actually stopping him, because they both knew a closed door had never meant much to Lucien Moreau. "Funny how that works out." "May I come in, or would you rather conduct this conversation for the benefit of your neighbours?" She stepped back, more out of habit than invitation, and he took it as one anyway, sweeping past her with that particular economy of movement that made everything look choreographed. He set the cane against her bookshelf like he'd done it a hundred times before, which — he had. "Tea's gone cold," she said, nodding at the mug. "I'm not making more." "I didn't come for tea." "Right. What did you come for, then? Because it's not for the pleasure of my company, not after last time." His jaw tightened, just barely, the amber eye catching light while the black one stayed flat and unreadable. "Last time you told me to get out and never come back. I'm noting the irony." "I meant it." "I know you did. I still came." Rory sat on the arm of her sofa, arms still crossed, putting furniture between them because her body remembered things her mind was trying very hard to forget — the weight of his hand at the small of her back, the low murmur of French against her ear in a alley off Brick Lane while they hid from something with too many teeth. That had been three months ago. She'd left him standing on this exact landing after that, told him whatever this was between them wasn't worth the trouble he brought with him. "You could've sent someone," she said. "Isn't that the whole point of you? Information broker, fixer, middleman for every unsavoury thing in this city. Send a runner." "This isn't business." "Then what is it?" He didn't answer straightaway. Instead he looked around her flat like he was cataloguing what had changed — the new stack of books by the window, the mug with the chip in the handle, the coat thrown over the chair that wasn't hers, one of Eva's, probably. Lucien noticed everything. It was what made him good at his job and unbearable as a person to try and keep secrets from. "Yu-Fei's restaurant," he said finally. "Someone's been asking after you. Specific questions. Where you live, who you associate with, whether you still work deliveries on Tuesdays." Rory's arms loosened slightly. "Who?" "I don't know yet. That's rather the problem." He moved closer, not touching, just closing the distance enough that she had to tilt her head back to keep looking at him. "I wanted to tell you myself. Not send a runner, as you put it." "You could've led with that instead of standing there being smug." "I wasn't being smug." "You're always being smug, Luc, it's practically your resting state." The corner of his mouth twitched, the closest he came to a real smile these days, and for a second the three months evaporated and they were just two people who used to laugh at each other's jokes in the dark. Then he seemed to remember himself, straightened, put the distance back. "I should've told you sooner. About the questions. I've known for a week." "A week?" She stood up now, temper flaring easy, the way it always did with him because he made her feel too much too fast. "A week, and you're only telling me now because what, you needed an excuse to show up?" "I don't need excuses to worry about you." "You made it very clear what you needed and didn't need, last time you were here." "I said I couldn't promise you safety. That's not the same thing." "Feels the same from where I was standing." Lucien exhaled, and for once there was nothing performed in it, nothing calculated — just tired. "I've spent three months telling myself you were better off. That I do this—" he gestured vaguely, meaning the underworld, the deals, the things he traded in that left blood on his hands even when it wasn't his own "—and you don't need it following you home. And then someone starts sniffing round Golden Empress asking about you, and I find I can't quite manage to stay away after all." "That's not fair." "No. It's not." He picked the cane back up, turned it once in his hand like he needed something to do with his fingers. "I'm not asking you to forgive how I left things. I'm telling you because you deserve to know, and because whatever's between us, I'd rather you angry and alive than not know I tried." Rory looked at him — really looked, past the suit and the cane and the careful blankness he wore like armour — and saw the same thing she'd seen the night she'd told him to leave. Someone who wanted to stay and didn't trust himself to be good for her if he did. "Tuesdays," she said. "How do they know I work Tuesdays?" "That's what worries me." She sat back down, slower this time, the anger draining into something colder and more useful. "Tell me everything. Then we'll talk about the rest of it." "There's a rest of it to discuss?" "There's always a rest of it with you, Luc. Sit down. You're making the room stuffy just standing there being tragic."
created_at"2026-07-01T07:19:33.874Z" 7/1/2026, 7:19:33 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he said finally [finally]"
1"he gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.238
leniency0.476
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.095
80.28% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1014
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slightly"
2"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
85.21% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1014
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"unreadable"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"calculated"
count1
highlights
0"unreadable"
1"weight"
2"calculated"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences33
matches(empty)
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences33
filterMatches
0"look"
1"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"manage to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences66
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen71
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1020
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount630
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.79
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory5
Lucien4
Moreau1
French1
Brick1
Lane1
Eva1
Golden1
Empress1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Eva"
4"Empress"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
50.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences25
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite manage to stay away after"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1020
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean24.29
std22.94
cv0.944
sampleLengths
044
115
236
38
44
512
634
717
849
913
105
1120
1234
133
147
1594
1627
173
184
1970
2026
215
2245
2311
244
2510
2652
2713
2842
298
3016
3112
328
3386
343
3558
3653
3710
384
3927
407
4121
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences33
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs114
matches
0"was cataloguing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences66
ratio0.106
matches
0"Rory set down her mug of tea, glanced at the clock — half eleven, too late for deliveries, too early for trouble that announced itself politely."
1"He set the cane against her bookshelf like he'd done it a hundred times before, which — he had."
2"Rory sat on the arm of her sofa, arms still crossed, putting furniture between them because her body remembered things her mind was trying very hard to forget — the weight of his hand at the small of her back, the low murmur of French against her ear in a alley off Brick Lane while they hid from something with too many teeth."
3"Instead he looked around her flat like he was cataloguing what had changed — the new stack of books by the window, the mug with the chip in the handle, the coat thrown over the chair that wasn't hers, one of Eva's, probably."
4"Lucien exhaled, and for once there was nothing performed in it, nothing calculated — just tired."
5"\"I've spent three months telling myself you were better off. That I do this—\" he gestured vaguely, meaning the underworld, the deals, the things he traded in that left blood on his hands even when it wasn't his own \"—and you don't need it following you home. And then someone starts sniffing round Golden Empress asking about you, and I find I can't quite manage to stay away after all.\""
6"Rory looked at him — really looked, past the suit and the cane and the careful blankness he wore like armour — and saw the same thing she'd seen the night she'd told him to leave."
98.54% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount336
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.041666666666666664
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.011904761904761904
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences66
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences66
mean15.45
std13.45
cv0.87
sampleLengths
018
126
215
322
45
59
65
73
84
912
1029
115
1217
1330
1419
159
164
175
1820
1918
2016
213
227
2363
246
2525
266
2721
283
294
304
3143
323
3320
345
3521
364
371
3831
3914
4011
414
4210
4341
4411
4513
4625
4717
488
4916
68.18% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.45454545454545453
totalSentences66
uniqueOpeners30
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences30
matches
0"Instead he looked around her"
1"Then he seemed to remember"
ratio0.067
20.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences30
matches
0"She pulled the door open"
1"He hadn't changed the suit."
2"She stepped back, more out"
3"He set the cane against"
4"she said, nodding at the"
5"His jaw tightened, just barely,"
6"She'd left him standing on"
7"He didn't answer straightaway."
8"It was what made him"
9"he said finally"
10"He moved closer, not touching,"
11"She stood up now, temper"
12"he gestured vaguely, meaning the"
13"He picked the cane back"
14"She sat back down, slower"
ratio0.5
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount28
totalSentences30
matches
0"The knock came three times,"
1"Rory set down her mug"
2"She pulled the door open"
3"Lucien stood in the hallway,"
4"He hadn't changed the suit."
5"Charcoal, always charcoal, like he"
6"Rory crossed her arms, blocking"
7"She stepped back, more out"
8"He set the cane against"
9"she said, nodding at the"
10"His jaw tightened, just barely,"
11"Rory sat on the arm"
12"That had been three months"
13"She'd left him standing on"
14"He didn't answer straightaway."
15"Lucien noticed everything."
16"It was what made him"
17"he said finally"
18"Rory's arms loosened slightly."
19"He moved closer, not touching,"
ratio0.933
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences30
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences17
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Rory set down her mug of tea, glanced at the clock — half eleven, too late for deliveries, too early for trouble that announced itself politely."
1"She pulled the door open expecting a drunk patron who'd wandered up the wrong stairs."
2"Rory crossed her arms, blocking the doorway with her body rather than actually stopping him, because they both knew a closed door had never meant much to Lucien…"
3"She stepped back, more out of habit than invitation, and he took it as one anyway, sweeping past her with that particular economy of movement that made everythi…"
4"Instead he looked around her flat like he was cataloguing what had changed — the new stack of books by the window, the mug with the chip in the handle, the coat…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.119
leniency0.238
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
76.7402%