Run: 2026-07-01-01KWE8S0RDM17DZFNC6BM8NJ2Z

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Duration:
38.7s
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$0.028430
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Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Quinn ducked under the police tape strung across the mouth of the old grain silo, boots crunching over gravel that shouldn't have been frosted in September. The forensics lamps threw long shadows up the corrugated walls, and somewhere above her a pigeon shifted in the rafters, unsettled by something she couldn't yet name. "Victim's over here." DC Wallace waved her toward the centre of the space, notebook already open. "Male, mid-thirties, no ID on him. Wallace clocked the wound pattern—looks like a turf thing. Rival crew, maybe. There's a lockup two streets over got done last month, same MO." Quinn crouched beside the body without answering. The man's chest had been opened in a clean line, sternum to navel, but there was no blood pooling beneath him. None on the gravel, none on his shirt beyond the immediate wound. She'd worked homicide long enough to know what a body was supposed to look like after that kind of injury, and this wasn't it. "MO doesn't fit," she said. "Where's the blood, Wallace?" "Could've drained off. Silo's got a slope to it, there's a grate—" "The grate's four metres that way." Quinn nodded toward it without looking up. "Blood doesn't defy gravity to get there." Wallace didn't answer straight away. She heard him shift his weight, the scratch of his pen stopping. "Rats, maybe," he said. "Something's been at it before we got the call." Quinn touched two fingers to the frost rimming the wound edges. It didn't melt against her skin the way frost should. It felt like salt, faintly gritty, and when she rubbed it between her fingers, it left a green tinge on her glove. Verdigris. She'd seen that colour before, three years back, on the underside of a bridge in Deptford, the night she'd lost Morris. She hadn't told anyone what she'd found that night. She hadn't known what to call it. "Get me a sample bag," she said. Wallace crouched down beside her, closer now, and for the first time actually looked at the wound instead of the notebook. "You think this is chemical? Some kind of agent?" "I think somebody wants us thinking gang violence." Quinn straightened, scanning the silo's curved walls. Near the base, faint scratches marred the corrugated iron, too deliberate to be rust damage. She walked the perimeter, torch raised, and found more of them spaced at intervals—circles within circles, a jagged line bisecting each one. "Wallace. Come look at this." He came, reluctant, boots dragging through the frost. "Graffiti," he said. "Kids get in here all the time, this place has been derelict since—" "Since when?" He paused. "Dunno. Ages." "Then why hasn't anyone tagged over these? Kids don't respect other people's graffiti, Wallace, you know that as well as I do. These are untouched. No overlap, no fading from weather, and this building's had its roof half off for years." She crouched to examine the nearest marking. The metal beneath it looked scorched, not scratched, the edges of each line raised like a burn rather than a groove. "Somebody made these recently, and carefully. This isn't vandalism, this is *placement.*" "Placement of what?" Quinn didn't answer immediately. She was thinking of the compass she still hadn't handed in for evidence three years ago, the small verdigris-crusted thing she kept locked in her desk drawer at home, the needle that never behaved the way a compass should. She hadn't understood it then. She still didn't fully understand it now, but she recognised its language when she saw it scratched into iron. "You said no ID on him," she said instead. "Check his hands." Wallace crouched, lifted the man's right hand with gloved fingers. The palm was unmarked, but the fingertips were stained the same faint green as the frost, deep into the whorls of the skin, like he'd been pressing them against something for a long time before he died. "Chemical burn?" Wallace offered, but his voice had lost its earlier certainty. "He was touching the walls," Quinn said. "Maybe trying to get out. Maybe trying to close something." She stood and looked up at the domed roof, the gaps where daylight bled through in thin, cold shafts despite the lamps below fighting to hold their ground. The air in the centre of the silo felt different from the air near the entrance—denser, colder, pressing against her ears the way altitude did on a plane. "Detective, this is looking less like turf war by the minute and I don't love where that leaves us on the paperwork." "Then don't write it up as turf war." Quinn moved to stand exactly where the man had died, at the centre point equidistant from each of the scorched sigils. Directly above her, the light fell strangely, refracting at an angle that didn't match the gap in the roof. She held her hand up into it and watched her shadow split in two directions at once on the gravel below. Wallace saw it too. His face went the colour of the frost. "That en't right," he said, voice quieter now, all procedure drained out of it. "No," Quinn agreed. "It isn't." She crouched again beside the body, this time examining the wound not as an injury but as a doorway—clean-edged, precise, opened rather than torn. Whoever, or whatever, had done this hadn't been interested in killing quickly. They'd been looking for something inside him, or trying to put something in. "I want forensics to test for foreign contaminants in the chest cavity," she said. "And I want photographs of every one of these markings before SOCO packs up. All of them, exact positions, exact spacing." "You think it means something? Like a ritual?" Quinn didn't answer that directly. She thought of Morris, of the bridge in Deptford, of eighteen years of decorated service that had taught her to read blood spatter and knife angles and never once prepared her for a crime scene that behaved like a held breath. "I think somebody's been here before us," she said, "and I think they'll be back."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said instead [instead]"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.059
90.14% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1014
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
80.28% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1014
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"unsettled"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"tinge"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count1
highlights
0"unsettled"
1"weight"
2"tinge"
3"scanning"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences54
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences54
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences71
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1009
ratio0.001
matches
0"placement."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
80.17% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount716
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.4
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
September1
Wallace6
Quinn10
Deptford2
Morris2
Directly1
persons
0"Wallace"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
places
0"September"
1"Deptford"
globalScore0.802
windowScore1
84.21% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences38
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like salt, faintly gritty, and whe"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.991
wordCount1009
matches
0"not as an injury but as a doorway"
72.77% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences71
matches
0"seen that colour"
1"found that night"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean30.58
std24.99
cv0.817
sampleLengths
053
146
264
39
412
520
617
713
881
97
1030
1152
125
1324
142
154
1681
173
1867
1912
2047
2112
2273
2322
2469
2512
2614
275
2849
2935
308
3146
3215
72.77% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences54
matches
0"been frosted"
1"been opened"
2"was supposed"
3"were stained"
4"been interested"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs130
matches(empty)
22.13% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences71
ratio0.042
matches
0"She walked the perimeter, torch raised, and found more of them spaced at intervals—circles within circles, a jagged line bisecting each one."
1"The air in the centre of the silo felt different from the air near the entrance—denser, colder, pressing against her ears the way altitude did on a plane."
2"She crouched again beside the body, this time examining the wound not as an injury but as a doorway—clean-edged, precise, opened rather than torn."
86.59% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount721
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small verdigris-crusted thing"
1"denser, colder, pressing against her"
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.04160887656033287
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.012482662968099861
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences71
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences71
mean14.21
std10.55
cv0.742
sampleLengths
026
127
216
330
47
521
612
724
85
94
1012
1113
127
135
1412
154
169
1711
1810
1922
201
2121
229
237
247
2521
269
2715
2815
2922
305
318
323
3313
342
352
362
3748
3821
3912
403
414
4239
435
4419
459
463
4710
4837
4912
82.16% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.5352112676056338
totalSentences71
uniqueOpeners38
75.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences44
matches
0"Directly above her, the light"
ratio0.023
29.09% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences44
matches
0"She'd worked homicide long enough"
1"She heard him shift his"
2"It didn't melt against her"
3"It felt like salt, faintly"
4"She'd seen that colour before,"
5"She hadn't told anyone what"
6"She hadn't known what to"
7"She walked the perimeter, torch"
8"He came, reluctant, boots dragging"
9"She crouched to examine the"
10"She was thinking of the"
11"She hadn't understood it then."
12"She still didn't fully understand"
13"she said instead"
14"She stood and looked up"
15"She held her hand up"
16"His face went the colour"
17"he said, voice quieter now,"
18"She crouched again beside the"
19"They'd been looking for something"
ratio0.477
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount41
totalSentences44
matches
0"Quinn ducked under the police"
1"The forensics lamps threw long"
2"DC Wallace waved her toward"
3"Quinn crouched beside the body"
4"The man's chest had been"
5"None on the gravel, none"
6"She'd worked homicide long enough"
7"Quinn nodded toward it without"
8"Wallace didn't answer straight away."
9"She heard him shift his"
10"Quinn touched two fingers to"
11"It didn't melt against her"
12"It felt like salt, faintly"
13"She'd seen that colour before,"
14"She hadn't told anyone what"
15"She hadn't known what to"
16"Wallace crouched down beside her,"
17"Quinn straightened, scanning the silo's"
18"She walked the perimeter, torch"
19"He came, reluctant, boots dragging"
ratio0.932
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences44
matches
0"Whoever, or whatever, had done"
ratio0.023
85.71% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Quinn ducked under the police tape strung across the mouth of the old grain silo, boots crunching over gravel that shouldn't have been frosted in September."
1"Directly above her, the light fell strangely, refracting at an angle that didn't match the gap in the roof."
66.18% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Wallace offered, but his voice had lost its earlier certainty"
1"he said, voice quieter now, all procedure drained out of it"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Quinn agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.294
leniency0.588
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.059
84.2654%