Run: 2026-07-01-01KWE8SWKGB78FYK06VRG7A5MF

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Duration:
30.9s
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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest smelled the same as it always had—stale hops and beeswax polish, the faint ghost of pipe smoke that never quite left the old maps pinned to the walls. Rory came down the back stairs from her flat with her hair still damp from the shower, meaning to grab a quick half-pint before her evening shift at the Golden Empress, and stopped dead at the bar. "Eva?" The woman on the stool turned, and for a second Rory thought she'd made a mistake. Eva Whitfield had been soft-edged once, round-cheeked, the kind of girl who laughed with her whole body. This woman was whittled down to something sharper. Her blonde hair, once a wild tangle, sat scraped back in a knot so tight it pulled at her temples. She wore a blazer that looked expensive and unforgiving. "Rory. God. Look at you." "Look at *you*," Rory said, and meant it differently than it sounded. They hugged, stiff, the kind of hug where shoulder blades touch and nothing else does. Rory pulled back and studied her friend's face, hunting for the version she remembered under the new architecture of cheekbone and jaw. "What are you doing in Soho? Last I heard you were still up in Manchester." "Work brought me down. I'm at a firm now—compliance, mostly, deadly boring." Eva's mouth twitched, not quite a smile. "I didn't know you were in London. Didn't know you were *anywhere*, actually. You stopped answering." "Yeah." Rory slid onto the stool beside her, waved at Silas behind the bar, who set two glasses down without being asked and retreated to the far end, wiping glasses that were already clean. "I had to leave things behind for a bit. Phone included." "Evan things?" The name landed like a dropped glass. Rory hadn't heard it spoken aloud in months, not by anyone who'd known her before, and it took her a second to find her voice again. "Evan things," she agreed. "I tried calling. For weeks. I thought—" Eva stopped, turned her glass in a slow circle on the bar, the ice clinking against itself. "I thought maybe you were dead in a ditch somewhere and he'd done it and nobody would ever tell me." "I'm not dead in a ditch." "No. You're apparently living above a bar in Soho serving takeaway." Eva said it lightly, but there was an edge underneath, something that had been sharpening itself in the years Rory hadn't been there to see. "That's not nothing, Rory. That's not the plan. You were going to be a barrister. Your dad's firm, the whole thing." "Plans change." "Clearly." Rory took a drink, let the whisky burn a path down before answering. "You used to say you hated the plan. All of it. The wig, the gown, sitting across from my dad at Christmas listening to him talk about torts." "I did hate it." Eva's laugh came out clipped, humorless. "Doesn't mean I don't wonder what happened to the version of you who was going to do something with all that brain of yours instead of running food to blokes in Shoreditch." "I got out of something that was killing me, Eva. That felt like doing something." The silence that followed had weight to it, the kind that presses on the sternum. Silas, three stools down, did not look up from his glasses, though Rory suspected he heard every word—he always did. "I'm sorry," Eva said finally. "That's not fair. I don't know what it was like. You never told me the whole of it." "Would it have changed anything if I had?" "I don't know. Maybe I'd have come and got you myself instead of just ringing your phone into a void." Rory looked at her then—really looked, past the blazer and the tight hair and the new hollows under her eyes—and saw something she recognized. Not the girl who used to sneak into her room through the window at seventeen, laughing about some boy, but someone tired in the specific way that came from swallowing too much for too long. "You look like you've had your own version of it," Rory said. "Whatever it is." Eva's jaw tightened. "Divorce. Eighteen months ago. Marcus, you never met him, thank God. It's fine. It's over. I'm fine." "You keep saying fine like it's a fact instead of a word." "Look who's talking." Eva turned the glass again. "You disappear for three years and turn up delivering Chinese food out of a flat above a Soho pub, and you're going to lecture me about being fine?" "Fair." They both laughed then, short and real, the first crack in the ice since Rory had come down the stairs. It didn't fix anything, but it loosened something. "Do you remember," Eva said, "that summer we said we'd move to London together and share a flat and you'd do your training and I'd do whatever it was I thought I'd do—journalism, God, imagine—and we'd have Sunday dinners and pretend we were adults?" "I remember." "We're both in London now. Neither of us doing what we said." "Maybe that's not the tragedy you think it is." Eva looked at her for a long moment, something working behind her eyes—old affection tangled up with something that might have been envy, or grief, or just the plain ache of time passed without witness. "I missed you," she said. "Actual sentence, not politeness. I missed you and I was angry at you and I didn't know which one to lead with, so I've just been sitting here for twenty minutes deciding." "You could've led with either. I'd have taken it." "Would you tell me now? The whole of it. Evan, all of it." Rory turned her glass, watched the light from the sign outside bend green through the whisky. Behind her, faintly, she felt Silas's stillness—the particular stillness of a man listening without seeming to. "Not tonight," she said. "But soon. I promise this time I'll actually answer the phone." Eva reached over and gripped her hand, quick, hard, the way she used to when they were girls making promises they didn't yet know how expensive keeping them would be. "You'd better."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Eva said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.302
leniency0.605
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.047
90.39% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1041
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"really"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
85.59% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1041
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"affection"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"weight"
2"affection"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences36
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences36
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences66
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1032
ratio0.002
matches
0"you"
1"anywhere"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount558
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.33
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Golden1
Empress1
Rory13
Whitfield1
Silas3
Eva11
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Whitfield"
4"Silas"
5"Eva"
places
0"Golden"
globalScore0.335
windowScore0.333
60.71% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences28
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite a smile"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1032
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean24.57
std20.4
cv0.83
sampleLengths
068
11
270
35
412
537
615
735
845
92
1033
114
1244
136
1457
152
161
1741
1842
1915
2035
2123
228
2320
2459
2515
2620
2712
2836
291
3028
3144
322
3312
349
3572
369
3713
3832
3915
4030
412
85.77% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences36
matches
0"was whittled"
1"being asked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs103
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences66
ratio0.076
matches
0"The Raven's Nest smelled the same as it always had—stale hops and beeswax polish, the faint ghost of pipe smoke that never quite left the old maps pinned to the walls."
1"Silas, three stools down, did not look up from his glasses, though Rory suspected he heard every word—he always did."
2"Rory looked at her then—really looked, past the blazer and the tight hair and the new hollows under her eyes—and saw something she recognized."
3"Eva looked at her for a long moment, something working behind her eyes—old affection tangled up with something that might have been envy, or grief, or just the plain ache of time passed without witness."
4"Behind her, faintly, she felt Silas's stillness—the particular stillness of a man listening without seeming to."
97.96% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount567
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.042328042328042326
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.008818342151675485
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences66
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences66
mean15.64
std10.64
cv0.68
sampleLengths
031
137
21
316
417
58
620
79
85
912
1015
1122
1215
1319
1416
1534
1611
172
187
1926
204
2124
2220
236
2436
2521
262
271
2813
2928
3010
3132
3215
3315
3420
355
3618
378
3820
3924
4035
4112
423
433
4417
4512
468
4728
481
4920
77.78% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.48484848484848486
totalSentences66
uniqueOpeners32
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences31
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount5
totalSentences31
matches
0"Her blonde hair, once a"
1"She wore a blazer that"
2"They hugged, stiff, the kind"
3"They both laughed then, short"
4"It didn't fix anything, but"
ratio0.161
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount29
totalSentences31
matches
0"The Raven's Nest smelled the"
1"Rory came down the back"
2"The woman on the stool"
3"Eva Whitfield had been soft-edged"
4"This woman was whittled down"
5"Her blonde hair, once a"
6"She wore a blazer that"
7"Rory said, and meant it"
8"They hugged, stiff, the kind"
9"Rory pulled back and studied"
10"Eva's mouth twitched, not quite"
11"Rory slid onto the stool"
12"The name landed like a"
13"Rory hadn't heard it spoken"
14"Eva stopped, turned her glass"
15"Eva said it lightly, but"
16"Rory took a drink, let"
17"Eva's laugh came out clipped,"
18"The silence that followed had"
19"Silas, three stools down, did"
ratio0.935
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences31
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences18
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Eva Whitfield had been soft-edged once, round-cheeked, the kind of girl who laughed with her whole body."
1"The silence that followed had weight to it, the kind that presses on the sternum."
2"Not the girl who used to sneak into her room through the window at seventeen, laughing about some boy, but someone tired in the specific way that came from swal…"
3"Eva looked at her for a long moment, something working behind her eyes—old affection tangled up with something that might have been envy, or grief, or just the …"
48.08% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Eva's mouth twitched, not quite a smile"
1"Eva's laugh came out, humorless"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.186
leniency0.372
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.047
75.3207%