| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.344 | | leniency | 0.688 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.90% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 901 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 44.51% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 901 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "footsteps" | | 4 | "echo" | | 5 | "comforting" | | 6 | "silk" | | 7 | "unreadable" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 38 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 67.67% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 38 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 49 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 905 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 69.47% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 29 | | wordCount | 683 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.61 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Nyx | 9 | | Rory | 11 | | English | 1 | | October | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Isolde | 2 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "English" | | 3 | "Fae-forged" |
| | globalScore | 0.695 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 31 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "quite match the shadows the afternoon sun should have thrown" | | 1 | "glow that seemed to come from the wildflowers themselves, thousands of them, blooming in colours that had no business existing in an English October" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 905 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 23.82 | | std | 20.11 | | cv | 0.844 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 45 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 41 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 58 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 49 | | 10 | 50 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 48 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 42 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 81 | | 18 | 29 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 56 | | 24 | 49 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 30 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 49 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 26 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 27 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 38 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 108 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 59 | | ratio | 0.051 | | matches | | 0 | "Not darker — brighter, somehow, though there was no sun that Rory could find, only a diffuse gold glow that seemed to come from the wildflowers themselves, thousands of them, blooming in colours that had no business existing in an English October." | | 1 | "The air smelled of wet earth and crushed thyme, and underneath that, something metallic — like a coin held too long in a closed fist." | | 2 | "The path — if it could be called that, a bare thread of packed earth winding between roots that arched up out of the ground like the ribs of something buried — began to slope downward." |
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| 88.88% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 683 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 36 | | adverbRatio | 0.0527086383601757 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.016105417276720352 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 59 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 59 | | mean | 15.34 | | std | 11.29 | | cv | 0.736 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 42 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 26 | | 18 | 25 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 46 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 31 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 36 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 29 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 25 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 25 | | 40 | 31 | | 41 | 49 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 89.83% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.559322033898305 | | totalSentences | 59 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 33 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 33 | | matches | | 0 | "They paused just beyond the" | | 1 | "She kept walking, the Heartstone" | | 2 | "She wrapped her fingers around" | | 3 | "Her own footsteps came back" | | 4 | "She looked down to find" | | 5 | "They came, at last, to" |
| | ratio | 0.182 | |
| 5.45% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 30 | | totalSentences | 33 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones marked the" | | 1 | "Rory stopped between them, one" | | 2 | "Nyx moved past her without" | | 3 | "They paused just beyond the" | | 4 | "Nyx said, the whisper of" | | 5 | "Blues too deep, pinks that" | | 6 | "Nyx said, when Rory's boot" | | 7 | "She kept walking, the Heartstone" | | 8 | "She wrapped her fingers around" | | 9 | "The air smelled of wet" | | 10 | "Sound behaved strangely too." | | 11 | "Her own footsteps came back" | | 12 | "Nyx called, and the name" | | 13 | "Rory pressed on, past a" | | 14 | "Nyx's voice had gone quieter," | | 15 | "The path — if it" | | 16 | "The gold light dimmed to" | | 17 | "Rory found herself walking with" | | 18 | "Something brushed her ankle." | | 19 | "She looked down to find" |
| | ratio | 0.909 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 33 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 23 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Not darker — brighter, somehow, though there was no sun that Rory could find, only a diffuse gold glow that seemed to come from the wildflowers themselves, thou…" | | 1 | "Her own footsteps came back to her a half-second late, as though the grove were considering her words before returning them." | | 2 | "She looked down to find a thin vine, no thicker than string, curling loosely around her boot, its tiny leaves unfurling as if in greeting." | | 3 | "The vine released her a moment later, retreating back into the undergrowth with the unhurried air of something that had simply wanted a closer look." | | 4 | "Between two birch trees that hadn't been there a moment before stood a figure barefoot on the moss, leaving no print behind her, silver hair pooling to her wais…" |
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| 79.55% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx said, the whisper of it catching on the leaves" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |