| 12.50% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he said quietly [quietly]" | | 1 | "he said finally [finally]" | | 2 | "me stand somewhere [somewhere]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.533 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.188 | | effectiveRatio | 0.188 | |
| 82.24% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1126 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "truly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "carefully" | | 3 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 82.24% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1126 | | totalAiIsms | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sentinel" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "flicked" | | 3 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 49 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 49 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 62 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1137 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 18 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 13 | | wordCount | 890 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.45 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 3 | | Moreau | 1 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Ptolemy | 2 | | Lucien | 4 | | Marseille | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Ptolemy" | | 3 | "Lucien" |
| | places | | 0 | "Brick" | | 1 | "Lane" | | 2 | "Marseille" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like it belonged to someone else" | | 1 | "not quite an invitation, but not quite a refusal either" | | 2 | "not quite a refusal either" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.88 | | wordCount | 1137 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite an invitation, but not quite a refusal either" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 34.45 | | std | 28.01 | | cv | 0.813 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 40 | | 1 | 67 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 62 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 91 | | 6 | 33 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 50 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 37 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 68 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 40 | | 19 | 76 | | 20 | 33 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 82 | | 23 | 66 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 90 | | 28 | 58 | | 29 | 51 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 36 | | 32 | 30 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 49 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 147 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 63 | | ratio | 0.095 | | matches | | 0 | "Eva was out — some late thing with a client who paid in cash and secrets — and the flat was Rory's alone tonight, books and scrolls spread across the coffee table like she'd been trying to drown herself in someone else's handwriting." | | 1 | "Lucien Moreau stood in the hallway looking like he'd stepped out of a photograph from a decade she hadn't lived through — charcoal suit immaculate despite the hour, platinum hair combed back without a single strand out of place, the ivory head of his cane catching the weak light from the bare bulb overhead." | | 2 | "His black eye found her first, then the amber one, and something in his face — that careful, practiced stillness he wore like armor — cracked for just a second before he smoothed it back into place." | | 3 | "The Lucien she'd known — the one who could talk his way through locked doors and locked hearts with equal ease, who traded in secrets the way other men traded in currency — did not hesitate." | | 4 | "He almost smiled at that — the ghost of it, there and gone, and it undid something in her more thoroughly than any confession could have." | | 5 | "Rory looked at him a long moment — the tired lines at the corners of his mismatched eyes, the too-careful set of his shoulders, all the things four months apart hadn't managed to erase — and stepped back from the door, not quite an invitation, but not quite a refusal either." |
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| 81.87% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 774 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 47 | | adverbRatio | 0.060723514211886306 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01937984496124031 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 63 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 63 | | mean | 18.05 | | std | 15.99 | | cv | 0.886 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 43 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 27 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 54 | | 14 | 37 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 35 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 29 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 62 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 23 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 36 | | 40 | 35 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 46 | | 47 | 36 | | 48 | 34 | | 49 | 32 |
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| 67.72% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.4444444444444444 | | totalSentences | 63 | | uniqueOpeners | 28 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 43 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 43 | | matches | | 0 | "She almost didn't answer." | | 1 | "She'd been doing that a" | | 2 | "She undid the first deadbolt," | | 3 | "She hadn't smelled it in" | | 4 | "Her body remembered it anyway." | | 5 | "She opened the door." | | 6 | "His black eye found her" | | 7 | "he said, and her name" | | 8 | "He inclined his head, a" | | 9 | "She crossed her arms, blocking" | | 10 | "His jaw tightened." | | 11 | "She laughed, short and humorless" | | 12 | "She stopped herself, hating how" | | 13 | "he said quietly" | | 14 | "She pressed her fingers to" | | 15 | "he said finally" | | 16 | "He stopped, exhaled" | | 17 | "His amber eye caught the" | | 18 | "She stood there, hand still" | | 19 | "It was, she thought bitterly," |
| | ratio | 0.581 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 40 | | totalSentences | 43 | | matches | | 0 | "The knock came at half" | | 1 | "Ptolemy lifted his head from" | | 2 | "Some sentinel he was." | | 3 | "She almost didn't answer." | | 4 | "Eva was out — some" | | 5 | "She'd been doing that a" | | 6 | "Anything to keep her mind" | | 7 | "The knock came again, softer" | | 8 | "She undid the first deadbolt," | | 9 | "The scent that curled under" | | 10 | "She hadn't smelled it in" | | 11 | "Her body remembered it anyway." | | 12 | "She opened the door." | | 13 | "Lucien Moreau stood in the" | | 14 | "His black eye found her" | | 15 | "he said, and her name" | | 16 | "Someone who hadn't watched him" | | 17 | "He inclined his head, a" | | 18 | "The curry house below had" | | 19 | "She crossed her arms, blocking" |
| | ratio | 0.93 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 43 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 21 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Eva was out — some late thing with a client who paid in cash and secrets — and the flat was Rory's alone tonight, books and scrolls spread across the coffee tab…" | | 1 | "The scent that curled under the door was cedar and something darker beneath it, something that didn't belong to any candle or cologne counter in the world." | | 2 | "Lucien Moreau stood in the hallway looking like he'd stepped out of a photograph from a decade she hadn't lived through — charcoal suit immaculate despite the h…" | | 3 | "The curry house below had gone quiet hours ago, its smells settling into the walls, and the only sound was the distant hum of Brick Lane traffic and Ptolemy's s…" | | 4 | "The Lucien she'd known — the one who could talk his way through locked doors and locked hearts with equal ease, who traded in secrets the way other men traded i…" | | 5 | "But he did now, his gloved hand tightening slightly on the cane, his gaze dropping to the threshold between them as though it were a border he wasn't certain he…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "She laughed (laugh)" | | 1 | "She pressed (press)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.133 | |