Run: 2026-07-01-01KWE8YN934H8F8YYA0QEJ8KXQ

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Duration:
32.1s
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$0.023196
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Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest smelled the same as it always had—whisky and old paper, with something underneath that Rory could never place. She sat at the far end of the bar, nursing a gin she wasn't really drinking, watching Silas polish glasses that were already clean out of habit rather than necessity. The door opened, letting in a wedge of grey London evening and a man Rory almost didn't recognise. "Danny?" He turned at the sound of his name, and for a second his face did the thing faces do when they're trying to place a voice against a memory that doesn't match. Then it clicked, and something in his shoulders dropped. "Rory. Christ. Rory Carter." "It's just Carter these days," she said, though she wasn't sure why she bothered correcting him. "Or Rory. Whichever." He sat down two stools away, like he wasn't sure he'd earned the closer one. Up close, the changes were worse. The Danny she remembered had a rugby player's build, cheeks that coloured easily, a laugh that came from his stomach. This Danny was thin in a way that looked recent, like weight had been stripped off him rather than lost gradually. Grey came in early at his temples. His hands, when he reached for the drink Silas set down without being asked, shook slightly. "You look well," he said. "I look tired. Don't lie to me, we've known each other since we were eleven." "Fine." He almost smiled. "You look tired. Better than me, though." "You look like you've been through something." "Several somethings." He took a drink. "How's your mum? Your dad still doing the barrister thing, terrifying juries?" "Still terrifying juries. Mum's teaching sixth form now, hates the paperwork more than the kids." Rory turned her glass on the bar top, watching the condensation ring smear. "What happened to you, Danny? Last I heard you were in Manchester, doing something with finance." "I was." He said it like the words belonged to someone else. "Lost the job in the crash. Then lost the flat. Then lost—" He stopped, rubbed at his jaw. "You don't want the whole list." "I might." "Sarah left. Took Millie with her, obviously, she should've. I wasn't—" His hand tightened around the glass. "I wasn't someone a kid should've been around, for a while there." Rory didn't say anything. She'd learned, working under Silas, that silence pulled more truth out of people than questions ever did. "Drinking," Danny said finally. "Then worse than drinking. I'm four months clean now, if that means anything to you." "It means everything, actually." "Does it?" His eyes came up, sharp for a second in a way that startled her. "Because you look at me like you're doing maths. Like you're trying to work out how the bloke who used to nick his dad's car and drive us to the seaside at 2 a.m. turned into this." "I'm not doing maths." "You always did that. Even at sixteen. Working people out before they'd worked themselves out." He managed something closer to a real smile. "It used to drive me mad." "It still drives people mad." She glanced toward Silas, who was very deliberately rearranging bottles at the other end of the bar, giving them room. "So what are you doing in London?" "New start. Or trying to be. Got a mate who says there's work on a building site in Croydon." He laughed, short and humourless. "Bit different to spreadsheets." "Better than spreadsheets, maybe." "Maybe." He turned the glass slowly. "What about you? Last I heard you were doing Pre-Law, going to be the second Carter to terrify juries." "I left that behind in Cardiff. Along with some other things." "Evan?" The name landed harder than she expected, even now. "You remember him." "I remember you stopped answering your phone for about a year. I remember Eva ringing me once, asking if I'd heard from you, because she was frightened you'd—" He didn't finish it. "I'm glad you're not doing maths on your own life the way you're doing it on mine." "I got out. That's the whole story. Not much more to it." "There's always more to it." He said it gently, no accusation in it, just recognition. Two people who used to tell each other everything, circling the fact that they hadn't, for years, told each other anything at all. "I work for Yu-Fei Cheung now. Delivery, mostly. And I live upstairs." She nodded toward the ceiling, toward Silas without quite gesturing at him. "He's been good to me." "The bar owner?" "Silas. Yeah." Danny looked over at him properly for the first time, taking in the grey-streaked hair, the quiet way he moved despite the limp. "He looks like he's got stories." "He's got stories," Rory agreed. "Doesn't tell most of them." "Sounds like someone I used to know." Danny's mouth twisted, wry. "You used to tell me everything, Rory. Every single thing. I used to think you couldn't keep a secret if your life depended on it." "People change." "They do." He looked down at his glass, at the four months of sobriety sitting inside it in the form of tonic water and lime, no gin at all. "I think about the seaside sometimes. That night with your dad's car. Feels like it happened to two completely different people." "It did, sort of." "Do you ever miss them? The people we were?" Rory thought about Cardiff, about the version of herself who thought Pre-Law was a life sentence rather than an escape route she hadn't taken yet, about Evan's hands and the year she stopped picking up the phone. She thought about crescent scars and childhood accidents, about all the small violences that shaped a person without anyone noticing until much later. "Some days," she said. "Not most days." "Yeah." Danny finished his tonic water, set the glass down with a soft, final click. "Me neither, if I'm honest. Just—some days." They sat with that for a moment, the bar humming quietly around them, Silas still pretending not to listen from the far end, the green neon sign outside bleeding faintly through the window into the dim gold light of the room.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"His hand tightened around [around]"
1"Danny said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.356
leniency0.712
rawRatio0.095
effectiveRatio0.068
66.15% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1034
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
3
adverb"deliberately"
count1
4
adverb"slowly"
count1
5
adverb"gently"
count1
6
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"slightly"
2"very"
3"deliberately"
4"slowly"
5"gently"
6"completely"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Sarah"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
85.49% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1034
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"weight"
2"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences41
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences41
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences78
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1032
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
96.14% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount557
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.08
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Rory6
Silas6
London1
Danny6
Two1
Cardiff1
Pre-Law1
Evan1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
4"Danny"
5"Evan"
places
0"London"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore0.961
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences30
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1032
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean22.43
std18.98
cv0.846
sampleLengths
051
118
21
341
44
519
685
75
815
911
107
1118
1244
1336
142
1529
1621
1719
184
1953
204
2129
2232
2328
244
2525
2611
271
2812
2949
3012
3138
3229
333
342
3529
3610
3736
382
3950
404
419
4260
437
4422
4541
88.15% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences41
matches
0"been stripped"
1"being asked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs95
matches
0"wasn't really drinking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences78
ratio0.013
matches
0"The Raven's Nest smelled the same as it always had—whisky and old paper, with something underneath that Rory could never place."
90.06% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount560
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.05
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.02142857142857143
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences78
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences78
mean13.23
std9.76
cv0.738
sampleLengths
021
130
218
31
432
59
64
716
83
915
106
1120
1221
137
1416
155
1615
174
187
197
206
2112
2228
2316
2412
2518
266
272
2817
2912
304
3117
324
3315
344
3516
3637
374
3823
396
4025
417
4224
434
444
456
4619
4711
481
499
83.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.5384615384615384
totalSentences78
uniqueOpeners42
87.72% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences38
matches
0"Then it clicked, and something"
ratio0.026
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences38
matches
0"She sat at the far"
1"He turned at the sound"
2"she said, though she wasn't"
3"He sat down two stools"
4"His hands, when he reached"
5"He almost smiled"
6"He took a drink"
7"He said it like the"
8"He stopped, rubbed at his"
9"His hand tightened around the"
10"She'd learned, working under Silas,"
11"His eyes came up, sharp"
12"He managed something closer to"
13"She glanced toward Silas, who"
14"He laughed, short and humourless"
15"He turned the glass slowly"
16"He didn't finish it"
17"He said it gently, no"
18"She nodded toward the ceiling,"
19"He looked down at his"
ratio0.579
12.63% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount34
totalSentences38
matches
0"The Raven's Nest smelled the"
1"She sat at the far"
2"The door opened, letting in"
3"He turned at the sound"
4"she said, though she wasn't"
5"He sat down two stools"
6"The Danny she remembered had"
7"This Danny was thin in"
8"His hands, when he reached"
9"He almost smiled"
10"He took a drink"
11"Rory turned her glass on"
12"He said it like the"
13"He stopped, rubbed at his"
14"His hand tightened around the"
15"Rory didn't say anything."
16"She'd learned, working under Silas,"
17"Danny said finally"
18"His eyes came up, sharp"
19"He managed something closer to"
ratio0.895
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences38
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences14
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"She sat at the far end of the bar, nursing a gin she wasn't really drinking, watching Silas polish glasses that were already clean out of habit rather than nece…"
1"The Danny she remembered had a rugby player's build, cheeks that coloured easily, a laugh that came from his stomach."
2"Two people who used to tell each other everything, circling the fact that they hadn't, for years, told each other anything at all."
3"Rory thought about Cardiff, about the version of herself who thought Pre-Law was a life sentence rather than an escape route she hadn't taken yet, about Evan's …"
4"She thought about crescent scars and childhood accidents, about all the small violences that shaped a person without anyone noticing until much later."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Danny's mouth twisted, wry"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"He laughed (laugh)"
1"Rory agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.136
leniency0.271
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.068
82.9892%