Run: 2026-07-01-01KWE8ZBB5ZTZ3YY4BXCB76DJC

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36.0s
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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Quinn ducked under the police tape strung across the mouth of the old service tunnel, the beam of her torch catching motes of dust that hung motionless in the dead air. Camden Town station rattled somewhere above her, muffled through forty feet of London clay, but down here the silence had a texture to it, thick and expectant. "Careful of the third step," Sergeant Devlin called from below. "Someone's already gone arse over tit on it tonight." She took the stairs two at a time anyway, boots striking concrete slick with condensation. The disused platform opened up ahead, lit by a ring of portable floodlights that threw everything into a flat, clinical white. A body lay near the platform edge, half in shadow where the light couldn't quite reach. "Talk to me," Quinn said, crouching a few feet back from the corpse, close enough to read the scene, far enough not to disturb it. Devlin flipped open his notebook, though she suspected he'd already memorised whatever he'd written. "Male, mid-thirties. Found by a transport worker doing a structural check before the demolition crew moves in next month. No ID on him. No wallet, no phone, nothing." "Cause of death?" "That's the fun part." Devlin crouched beside her, close enough that she caught the mint on his breath, the kind coppers chewed to cover the smell of last night's pint. "Pathologist's initial read is exposure. Hypothermia, maybe. Dehydration." Quinn looked at him. "Down here," she said. "In June." "People do strange things when they're off their heads, Quinn. Squatters, junkies. He could've wandered down, got lost, panicked. Cold as a morgue in these old tunnels even in summer, you know that." She did know that. She also knew hypothermia didn't leave a man's skin the colour of old parchment, didn't shrink the flesh back from his fingernails like something had drawn the moisture out of him from the inside. She leaned closer, careful not to touch, and studied the dead man's face. His eyes were open, fixed on the curved ceiling above, and there was no fear in them. Just a kind of exhausted wonder, like he'd seen something worth the price of looking. "He's been dead less than six hours," she said. "Skin hasn't degraded enough for longer. But look at his hands." Devlin leaned in, obliging but unconvinced. "What am I looking at?" "The nails. Brittle, cracked, yellowed at the base. That takes months to develop, not hours. Same with the hair — see how dry it is, how it's thinning at the temples? That's not a man who wandered down here yesterday. That's a man who's been ageing for years, compressed into an afternoon." "Could be a pre-existing condition." "Could be." She didn't believe it, and she suspected Devlin didn't either, not really — she'd seen him hesitate before he offered his tidy little theory, seen the way his eyes kept sliding to the far end of the platform where the floodlights gave out and the tunnel curved into proper dark. "What's down there?" "Nothing. Dead end. Bricked up, according to the transport authority's schematics." "Then why do you keep looking at it?" Devlin didn't answer straight away. He rubbed the back of his neck, a habit she recognised from three years of working murders with him, the same tell he had whenever a scene didn't sit right and he wanted it to be simple anyway. "There's a draught coming from that direction," he said finally. "Cold air. Shouldn't be, if it's bricked up solid." Quinn stood, joints protesting the crouch, and walked the platform's edge with her torch angled low, sweeping the ground rather than the walls. Fifteen feet from the body, the dust told its own story — scuffed in a wide, dragging arc, as if something heavy had been pulled, not carried. No footprints leading to it. No footprints leading away, save the dead man's own, which stopped abruptly six feet from where he lay, like he'd simply stood still and let whatever happened, happen. "No forced entry," she said. "No sign of a struggle. He didn't fight anyone off, and nobody dragged him down here against his will. He came on his own two feet and stayed put." "Meeting someone?" "Or waiting for someone." She crouched again at the edge of the scuff marks, careful to keep her shadow off them. A faint smell rose from the concrete here, sweetish and metallic, not blood, not anything she'd catalogued in eighteen years of crime scenes. "You smell that?" Devlin sniffed, wrinkled his nose. "Sewage, probably. This close to the old drainage line." It wasn't sewage. Quinn had smelled sewage more times than she cared to count, and this was something else entirely — cold and clean underneath the sweetness, like frost on metal. She'd smelled it once before, three years ago, in a stairwell in Whitechapel, the night she'd lost Morris and gained a scar along her ribs she'd never adequately explained in any incident report. She didn't say any of that to Devlin. She stood instead, brushing grit from her knees, and looked again at the bricked-up end of the tunnel, at the draught that shouldn't exist and the dust that told a story with no beginning. "I want SOCO to check behind that brickwork," she said. "Properly. Not a knock-and-listen, an actual structural survey." "That'll take days. The demolition crew's not going to wait on a hunch, Quinn." "It's not a hunch." She crouched one final time by the body, studying the set of his jaw, the strange, hollowed wonder in his open eyes. "A man doesn't walk into a dead-end tunnel and stand still while his body ages thirty years in an afternoon. Something met him down here. Something came through that wall and left the way it came, and I want to know what." Devlin closed his notebook, slower now, some of the mint-fresh confidence gone out of his voice. "And if there's nothing behind that wall?" Quinn looked at the draught stirring the dust at her feet, cold air breathing out of solid brick, and didn't answer him at all.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
78.79% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he said finally [finally]"
1"She crouched again [again]"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.121
95.08% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1017
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
95.08% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1017
totalAiIsms1
found
0
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences39
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences39
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences61
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen51
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1021
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
82.94% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount671
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.34
worstName"Devlin"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Devlin"
discoveredNames
Quinn6
Town1
London1
Devlin9
Whitechapel1
Morris1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Devlin"
2"Morris"
places
0"Town"
1"London"
2"Whitechapel"
globalScore0.829
windowScore0.833
57.41% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences27
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite reach"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1021
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean30.94
std23.25
cv0.751
sampleLengths
059
119
252
325
442
53
638
74
86
933
1083
1120
1211
1352
145
1555
1611
178
1843
1919
2083
2134
222
2347
2414
2564
2642
2718
2814
2968
3016
317
3224
96.27% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences39
matches
0"been pulled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs120
matches(empty)
2.34% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences61
ratio0.049
matches
0"\"Could be.\" She didn't believe it, and she suspected Devlin didn't either, not really — she'd seen him hesitate before he offered his tidy little theory, seen the way his eyes kept sliding to the far end of the platform where the floodlights gave out and the tunnel curved into proper dark."
1"Fifteen feet from the body, the dust told its own story — scuffed in a wide, dragging arc, as if something heavy had been pulled, not carried."
2"Quinn had smelled sewage more times than she cared to count, and this was something else entirely — cold and clean underneath the sweetness, like frost on metal."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount670
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.03880597014925373
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.008955223880597015
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences61
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences61
mean16.74
std12.59
cv0.752
sampleLengths
032
127
210
39
415
521
616
725
814
928
103
1130
128
134
144
152
1633
174
1834
1913
2017
2115
229
2311
246
255
2652
275
2852
293
3011
318
325
3338
3410
359
3623
3727
385
3928
405
4129
422
4321
4423
453
465
479
483
4928
86.89% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.6065573770491803
totalSentences61
uniqueOpeners37
95.24% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences35
matches
0"Just a kind of exhausted"
ratio0.029
60.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences35
matches
0"She took the stairs two"
1"She did know that."
2"She also knew hypothermia didn't"
3"She leaned closer, careful not"
4"His eyes were open, fixed"
5"She didn't believe it, and"
6"He rubbed the back of"
7"he said finally"
8"She crouched again at the"
9"It wasn't sewage."
10"She'd smelled it once before,"
11"She didn't say any of"
12"She stood instead, brushing grit"
13"She crouched one final time"
ratio0.4
17.14% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount31
totalSentences35
matches
0"Detective Quinn ducked under the"
1"Camden Town station rattled somewhere"
2"Sergeant Devlin called from below"
3"She took the stairs two"
4"The disused platform opened up"
5"A body lay near the"
6"Quinn said, crouching a few"
7"Devlin flipped open his notebook,"
8"Devlin crouched beside her, close"
9"Quinn looked at him."
10"She did know that."
11"She also knew hypothermia didn't"
12"She leaned closer, careful not"
13"His eyes were open, fixed"
14"Devlin leaned in, obliging but"
15"She didn't believe it, and"
16"Devlin didn't answer straight away."
17"He rubbed the back of"
18"he said finally"
19"Quinn stood, joints protesting the"
ratio0.886
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences35
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences20
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Detective Quinn ducked under the police tape strung across the mouth of the old service tunnel, the beam of her torch catching motes of dust that hung motionles…"
1"The disused platform opened up ahead, lit by a ring of portable floodlights that threw everything into a flat, clinical white."
2"Fifteen feet from the body, the dust told its own story — scuffed in a wide, dragging arc, as if something heavy had been pulled, not carried."
3"She stood instead, brushing grit from her knees, and looked again at the bricked-up end of the tunnel, at the draught that shouldn't exist and the dust that tol…"
79.55% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She crouched again, careful to keep her shadow off them"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.212
leniency0.424
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.5573%