Run: 2026-07-01-01KWE8ZX8YZK1TDJDP86W1G3KR

Run Details

Duration:
35.1s
Cost:
$0.025156
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest smelled the same as it always had—wood polish and old paper, a hint of cigarette smoke that never quite left the curtains even after Silas banned smoking indoors a decade back. Rory sat at the far end of the bar, nursing a whiskey she wasn't in the mood to finish, when the door opened and let in a gust of October air and a man she hadn't seen in six years. She recognized him before he recognized her. It was something in the set of his shoulders, the way he still checked the room twice before deciding it was safe to walk into it. Marcus. Marcus Webb, who used to sneak into the campus library after hours with her to read case files nobody else cared about, who once drove four hours in the rain to bring her a decongestant because he didn't trust the corner shop's brand. He'd put on weight, and lost hair, and there was something grey around his eyes that had nothing to do with colour. "Rory?" "Marcus." He crossed the room like he wasn't sure his legs would hold the decision. When he got close enough, she saw the tremor in his hand as he pulled out the stool next to hers. "Christ. Rory Carter. In a bar in Soho." He laughed, but it came out thin, like he'd forgotten how the sound was supposed to work. "What are the odds." "Small city, big coincidences." She turned her glass a quarter turn on the bar top. "You look—" "Don't." He held up a hand. "Whatever you were about to say, don't." "I was going to say tired." "That works." He signalled to Silas, who was polishing a glass at the other end and watching them both with the particular stillness of a man who noticed everything and revealed nothing. "Whatever she's having." Silas poured without comment, set the glass down, and drifted off toward the far end of the bar to give them room. Rory caught his eye for half a second. He gave her nothing, which was its own kind of answer. "So," Marcus said, wrapping both hands around his glass like it might run off if he let go. "Pre-Law. Did you ever finish?" "No." "No?" He turned to look at her properly now, the old curiosity flickering somewhere under all that tired. "You were going to be a barrister. You had it all mapped out. Chambers by twenty-eight, judge by fifty, terrifying everyone in between." "Things changed." "Things changed," he repeated, like the words tasted strange. "Yeah. I remember things changing." There was a weight in that sentence that hadn't been there a moment before. Rory watched him take a drink, watched his throat work, and thought about the last time she'd seen him—a wedding, not his, some mutual friend's do in a marquee that leaked when it rained, and Marcus had been laughing then, really laughing, with a girl called Priya on his arm. "How's Priya?" she asked, because someone had to say it eventually. "We split up. Three years now." He said it flat, like a fact he'd worn smooth from handling. "You?" "There was someone. Evan." She didn't elaborate, and something in her face must have told him not to ask, because he didn't. "I'm in London now. Have been for a while." "Doing what?" "Delivery driving. Restaurant called the Golden Empress." Marcus blinked at her like she'd spoken in another language. "You were going to argue cases in front of judges." "And you were going to write novels. Real ones. Not the copy you told me you were doing to pay rent until you finished the first draft." That landed somewhere soft. He looked down at his glass, and for a second the tired around his eyes seemed to spread, taking over the rest of his face. "I still write," he said. "Sometimes. Nothing anyone would want to read." "I'd want to read it." "You say that." "I mean it." "You always meant things." He looked up at her, and there was an old ache in it, something from years back that had never quite finished healing. "That was the trouble with you, Rory. You never said anything you didn't mean. Made the rest of us feel like liars." "That's not—" "I'm not blaming you. I'm just saying." He drank again, longer this time. "I used to think about you. After. Wondered if you'd made it to chambers. Wondered if you were terrifying someone in a wig right now." "I'm sorry I didn't call." "You didn't owe me a call." But the way he said it, quick and clipped, suggested he'd rehearsed a different answer once, a long time ago, and this was the version that had survived. "We were kids. Kids drift." "We weren't kids. We were twenty-three." "Same thing, looking back." He turned the glass again, watching the whiskey catch the low light from the bar's green neon sign, filtered in from outside. "You know what the worst part is? I don't even remember why we stopped talking. There wasn't a fight. There wasn't anything. We just—stopped." "I remember why," Rory said. He looked at her. "You got the job in Manchester. I was already halfway out of Cardiff by then. It wasn't dramatic. It was just distance, and then it was more distance, and then it was six years." "That's a very tidy way of saying we let it happen." "Maybe that's worse." "Maybe it is." He finished the drink in one motion and set the glass down harder than he meant to, judging by the small wince that followed. "Can I tell you something? And you have to not make it weird." "I make everything weird. You know this." That got a real laugh out of him, short but real, the first sound all night that sounded like the Marcus she used to know. "I looked you up. Years ago. Couldn't find anything. No socials, nothing. I thought maybe you'd changed your name. Witness protection. Something dramatic, because that's the kind of thing that would happen to you." Rory kept her face still, the old training from another life kicking in before she'd even decided to use it. "Boring reasons," she said. "I just don't do social media." "See, even that's suspicious. Everyone does social media." He was watching her now, really watching, the way he used to when they'd argue theory until two in the morning and he was trying to find the hole in her logic. "You've got a look about you. Like you're somewhere else half the time. You didn't used to have that." "Everyone's somewhere else half the time. It's called being an adult." "No," he said slowly. "It's something else. I don't know what. But you're not just tired, Rory. You're careful. You never used to be careful." Silas appeared at the end of the bar again, unhurried, polishing a glass that was already clean, and Rory felt rather than saw him listening. "It's good to see you, Marcus," she said, and meant it, and let that be the answer to everything else he hadn't quite asked.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He drank again [again]"
1"he said slowly [slowly]"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.35
leniency0.7
rawRatio0.095
effectiveRatio0.067
83.25% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1194
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"really"
count2
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"very"
2"slowly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
91.62% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1194
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"weight"
count2
highlights
0"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences42
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences42
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences81
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen51
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1191
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions29
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount731
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.82
worstName"Marcus"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Marcus"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Silas4
October1
Webb1
Marcus6
Priya1
Rory6
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Webb"
4"Marcus"
5"Rory"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
2.94% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences34
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"sounded like the Marcus she used to know"
1"quite asked"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1191
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"let that be"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean22.47
std19.12
cv0.851
sampleLengths
074
177
222
31
41
535
629
717
813
96
1035
1141
1223
131
1441
152
1614
1764
1811
1919
2031
212
227
2320
2427
2529
2612
275
283
293
3049
312
3238
335
3439
356
3650
375
384
3934
4011
413
4240
437
4425
4534
4620
4710
4859
4911
96.91% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences42
matches
0"was supposed"
57.14% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs140
matches
0"was polishing"
1"was watching"
2"was trying"
72.31% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences81
ratio0.025
matches
0"The Raven's Nest smelled the same as it always had—wood polish and old paper, a hint of cigarette smoke that never quite left the curtains even after Silas banned smoking indoors a decade back."
1"Rory watched him take a drink, watched his throat work, and thought about the last time she'd seen him—a wedding, not his, some mutual friend's do in a marquee that leaked when it rained, and Marcus had been laughing then, really laughing, with a girl called Priya on his arm."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount733
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.036834924965893585
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.0068212824010914054
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences81
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences81
mean14.7
std11.73
cv0.798
sampleLengths
034
140
27
326
41
543
622
71
81
914
1021
1125
124
1315
142
156
167
176
1832
193
2022
218
2211
2318
245
251
2618
2723
282
299
305
3114
3250
3311
3418
351
3622
379
382
397
4010
4110
4227
434
4425
455
467
475
483
493
60.08% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.41975308641975306
totalSentences81
uniqueOpeners34
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences38
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences38
matches
0"She recognized him before he"
1"It was something in the"
2"He'd put on weight, and"
3"He crossed the room like"
4"He laughed, but it came"
5"She turned her glass a"
6"He held up a hand"
7"He signalled to Silas, who"
8"He gave her nothing, which"
9"He turned to look at"
10"he repeated, like the words"
11"she asked, because someone had"
12"He said it flat, like"
13"She didn't elaborate, and something"
14"He looked down at his"
15"He looked up at her,"
16"He drank again, longer this"
17"He turned the glass again,"
18"He looked at her."
19"He finished the drink in"
ratio0.605
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount35
totalSentences38
matches
0"The Raven's Nest smelled the"
1"Rory sat at the far"
2"She recognized him before he"
3"It was something in the"
4"Marcus Webb, who used to"
5"He'd put on weight, and"
6"He crossed the room like"
7"He laughed, but it came"
8"She turned her glass a"
9"He held up a hand"
10"He signalled to Silas, who"
11"Silas poured without comment, set"
12"Rory caught his eye for"
13"He gave her nothing, which"
14"Marcus said, wrapping both hands"
15"He turned to look at"
16"he repeated, like the words"
17"Rory watched him take a"
18"she asked, because someone had"
19"He said it flat, like"
ratio0.921
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences38
matches(empty)
ratio0
8.93% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences16
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"He gave her nothing, which was its own kind of answer."
1"Rory watched him take a drink, watched his throat work, and thought about the last time she'd seen him—a wedding, not his, some mutual friend's do in a marquee …"
2"Silas appeared at the end of the bar again, unhurried, polishing a glass that was already clean, and Rory felt rather than saw him listening."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He turned, the old curiosity flickering somewhere under all that tired"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"He laughed (laugh)"
1"he repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.183
leniency0.367
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.067
75.1063%