Run: 2026-07-01-01KWE9076RK4VKJSFMV3MHTJG1

Run Details

Duration:
35.2s
Cost:
$0.025574
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The three deadbolts took Aurora longer to work through than she wanted to admit, mostly because her hands weren't steady after hearing that particular knock — two short, one long, a pause, then one more. Nobody knocked like that except Lucien. She opened the door and there he was, cane hooked over one forearm, platinum hair catching the hallway light, looking like he'd stepped out of a photograph from a decade she'd never lived in. "You changed the locks," he said, glancing at the deadbolts. "All three of them." "Eva changed the locks. I just live here." "Semantics." His amber eye moved over her face, lingered a beat too long on her mouth before flicking to the black one, unreadable as always. "Are you going to invite me in, or should I stand here and let the curry house downstairs perfume my suit for another hour?" Ptolemy chose that moment to slink between her ankles and out into the hallway, sniffing at Lucien's shoes with the mild interest of a creature who'd met him before and found him acceptable. Traitor. "How did you even find this address?" "Rory." He said her name like it cost him something to keep it gentle. "I'm an information broker. Finding addresses is rather the point of me." She stepped back from the door because the alternative was closing it in his face, and some stubborn, stupid part of her still didn't want to do that, three months on. He walked in like he owned the place, the way he walked into everything, and she watched him take in the scrolls stacked on every surface, the notes pinned crookedly to the wall behind Eva's desk, a teacup gone cold and forgotten on top of a leather-bound book that looked older than the building itself. "Charming," he said. "Very lived-in." "It's Eva's. Not mine." "I didn't ask whose it was." He set his cane against the arm of the sofa, unhurried, like he had all evening and nowhere better to be. "I asked how you were. Which you haven't answered, incidentally, in three months." "You didn't ask either." "I sent word." "You sent Marcus. With a message about a shipment of cursed silver, which you signed off with 'regards.' That's not asking how I am, Lucien, that's a business memo with your name attached." His jaw tightened, just slightly, the only tell he ever gave when something landed. "What did you want me to say?" "I don't know." She crossed her arms, aware of how close he was standing, aware of the particular way the air changed around him, always had, since the first night she'd seen him lean against a bar with that ivory-handled cane like he was daring someone to ask what it hid. "Something that wasn't about work. Something that admitted you left without a word after—" "After what, Aurora?" He said it quietly, and that quiet was worse than if he'd shouted, because it meant he remembered exactly what came after just as well as she did. The bar closed, Silas long gone up to his own rooms, and the two of them left in the dark with a bottle between them and eleven years of restraint that hadn't survived the night. "You know after what." "I do." He didn't look away. "I remember every detail of it, if you're curious. The scar on your wrist. The sound you made when—" "Don't." "You brought it up." "I brought up you leaving. Not a — a recap." He almost smiled, the corner of his mouth twitching in that infuriating way that used to make her forgive him things she shouldn't have. Then it faded, and something more honest surfaced underneath, something she hadn't seen on him before, not even that night. "I left because staying would have meant telling you things about what I am that you weren't ready to hear," he said. "My father's realm doesn't let go of debts easily, Rory, and I have debts. Old ones. I didn't want you anywhere near the collection of them." "That's not your decision to make for me." "No," he agreed. "It wasn't. I made it anyway, because I am, on occasion, a coward when it comes to things that matter, and you—" he stopped, exhaled through his nose, started again. "You matter." The flat was too quiet after that, just the faint clatter of pans from the curry house below drifting up through the floorboards, and Ptolemy padding back in to curl on a stack of scrolls like he hadn't a care for either of them. "You can't just say that and expect—" "I don't expect anything." He picked his cane back up, turned it once in his hand, a habit she recognised as him needing something to do with his fingers when his mouth had said more than he'd planned. "I came because there's a matter involving the Empress restaurant's supplier and a debt collector from Avaros sniffing round Brick Lane, and you deserved to hear it from me before you heard it from someone with worse manners. That's the excuse I told myself on the way over." "And the real reason?" He looked at her for a long moment, heterochromatic eyes doing that thing where the amber seemed warmer than it had any right to be and the black seemed less like an absence and more like a door. "The real reason is I wanted to see your face when you opened that door," he said. "I wanted to know if it would still do that thing to me. It did." Aurora felt the old pull of it, the same gravity that had dragged her toward him a hundred times before common sense could intervene, and hated herself a little for how easily her arms uncrossed, how her weight shifted half a step closer without her permission. "That's not fair, Lucien." "No," he said. "But I never claimed to fight fair. Ask anyone in this city."
created_at"2026-07-01T07:23:54.466Z" 7/1/2026, 7:23:54 AM
model"anthropic/claude-sonnet-5-20260630"
app_id182717
external_user(null)
streamedtrue
cancelledfalse
latency5316
moderation_latency(null)
generation_time35214
tokens_prompt1034
tokens_completion1559
native_tokens_prompt1467
native_tokens_completion2264
native_tokens_completion_images(null)
native_tokens_reasoning115
native_tokens_cached0
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
num_fetches(null)
web_search_engine(null)
origin"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"end_turn"
service_tier"default"
usage0.025574
router(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id"37b16f45-eeae-45f3-9b85-2137f7c6d61b"
id"msg_01MtKD8auecq4SifdBJA5gxu"
is_byokfalse
latency2625
model_permaslug"anthropic/claude-sonnet-5-20260630"
provider_name"Amazon Bedrock"
status200
user_agent"langchainjs-openai/1.0.0 ((node/v24.17.0; linux; x64))"
http_referer(null)
request_id"req-1782890634-foHgaSkpjxfN6G4rxMxF"
session_id(null)
preset_id(null)
api_type"completions"
id"gen-1782890634-1bxZKLgnumzp12YFrkmz"
upstream_id"msg_01MtKD8auecq4SifdBJA5gxu"
total_cost0.025574
cache_discount(null)
upstream_inference_cost0
provider_name"Amazon Bedrock"
response_cache_source_id(null)
data_region"global"

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.317
leniency0.634
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.93% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount993
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slightly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
89.93% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount993
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"unreadable"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"unreadable"
1"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences28
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences28
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences56
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen56
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords995
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions8
wordCount612
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.33
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Aurora2
Lucien2
Ptolemy2
Eva1
Silas1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Lucien"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Eva"
4"Silas"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
30.95% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences21
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed warmer than it had any right to be and the black seemed less like an absence and more like a door"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount995
matches(empty)
47.62% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences56
matches
0"chose that moment"
1"doing that thing"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean25.51
std21.3
cv0.835
sampleLengths
041
134
214
38
449
534
67
726
831
955
105
114
1240
134
143
1533
1614
177
1865
193
2063
214
2225
231
244
2510
2644
2748
288
2935
3044
317
3286
334
3438
3532
3646
374
3815
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences28
matches(empty)
78.79% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs110
matches
0"was closing"
1"was standing"
91.84% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences56
ratio0.018
matches
0"The three deadbolts took Aurora longer to work through than she wanted to admit, mostly because her hands weren't steady after hearing that particular knock — two short, one long, a pause, then one more."
83.61% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount613
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.05872756933115824
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.011419249592169658
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences56
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences56
mean17.77
std14.83
cv0.835
sampleLengths
035
16
234
310
44
58
625
724
833
91
107
1114
1212
1331
1455
153
162
174
1827
1913
204
213
2233
2314
247
2551
2614
273
2828
2935
304
316
3219
331
344
3510
3624
3720
3822
3926
408
413
4230
432
4444
457
4638
4748
484
4938
80.95% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.5178571428571429
totalSentences56
uniqueOpeners29
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences22
matches
0"Then it faded, and something"
ratio0.045
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences22
matches
0"She opened the door and"
1"he said, glancing at the"
2"His amber eye moved over"
3"He said her name like"
4"She stepped back from the"
5"He walked in like he"
6"He set his cane against"
7"His jaw tightened, just slightly,"
8"She crossed her arms, aware"
9"He said it quietly, and"
10"He didn't look away"
11"He almost smiled, the corner"
12"he stopped, exhaled through his"
13"He picked his cane back"
14"He looked at her for"
ratio0.682
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount21
totalSentences22
matches
0"The three deadbolts took Aurora"
1"Nobody knocked like that except"
2"She opened the door and"
3"he said, glancing at the"
4"His amber eye moved over"
5"Ptolemy chose that moment to"
6"He said her name like"
7"She stepped back from the"
8"He walked in like he"
9"He set his cane against"
10"His jaw tightened, just slightly,"
11"She crossed her arms, aware"
12"He said it quietly, and"
13"The bar closed, Silas long"
14"He didn't look away"
15"He almost smiled, the corner"
16"he stopped, exhaled through his"
17"The flat was too quiet"
18"He picked his cane back"
19"He looked at her for"
ratio0.955
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences22
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences13
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Ptolemy chose that moment to slink between her ankles and out into the hallway, sniffing at Lucien's shoes with the mild interest of a creature who'd met him be…"
1"He walked in like he owned the place, the way he walked into everything, and she watched him take in the scrolls stacked on every surface, the notes pinned croo…"
2"He almost smiled, the corner of his mouth twitching in that infuriating way that used to make her forgive him things she shouldn't have."
3"Aurora felt the old pull of it, the same gravity that had dragged her toward him a hundred times before common sense could intervene, and hated herself a little…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.171
leniency0.341
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.049
79.1207%