Run: 2026-07-01-01KWE90D9ARHJG6N3SDRK2810W

Run Details

Duration:
35.6s
Cost:
$0.024700
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain came down in sheets over Camden, turning the cordon tape into a limp ribbon that slapped against the police car. Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under it without breaking stride, her boots finding the exact centre of each paving stone as if she'd walked this street a thousand times, though she hadn't. Nobody had, not to this particular stretch of wall behind the old Tube maintenance shed, not until an hour ago when a night-shift cleaner had found what was left of Marcus Webb. "Detective." DC Priya Sharma stood near the body, clipboard tucked against her chest, plastic sheeting overhead doing little against the wind. "Thought you'd want the first look before forensics trample it." "Where's the blood?" "That's the thing." Sharma pointed her pen toward the wall, toward the man slumped against it. "There isn't any. Not really. Just that." Quinn crouched. Webb's throat had been opened, a clean line from ear to ear, the kind of wound that should have painted the brickwork red. Instead there was a scorch mark, black and radiating outward like a photograph of a starburst, the edges curling as though the stone itself had tried to flinch away. "Cauterised," Quinn said. "That's my read. Some kind of blade, heated. Except—" Sharma crouched beside her, close enough that Quinn could smell the coffee on her breath, "—except there's no accelerant residue. No burn pattern consistent with heat application. I had Ferris run a preliminary scan. Nothing." "Then it's not cauterised." "Looks cauterised." "Looks like a lot of things." Quinn reached into her coat pocket, gloved fingers finding the small tin of witch hazel salve she carried for her knuckles, an old habit from her boxing days, and set it aside on the tarmac while she pulled out a penlight instead. She angled the beam across Webb's throat. The wound wasn't a wound so much as an absence — like something had been drawn out through the incision rather than cut into it. "Sharma, look at the pallor round his eyes." "Frostbite pattern. I noticed. Building's not cold enough for that, and it's June." "June and pouring rain, which means half of London's frozen tonight anyway." Quinn didn't smile. Eighteen years had burned most of the humour out of her, left something leaner behind, something that noticed. "But not like this. This is localized. Like the cold came from inside him." Sharma flipped a page on her clipboard, the paper gone soft and translucent with damp. "I've got a working theory, if you want it." "Go on." "Gang related. Webb owed money to some unpleasant people in Kentish Town, we know that much already from the financials. This has the feel of a message killing. Something exotic to scare off anyone thinking about skimming from the till. Blowtorch job, maybe liquid nitrogen for effect, theatre for the other members. It's ugly but it's human." "Then where's the tank?" "Sorry?" "Liquid nitrogen doesn't travel light, Sharma. You need a dewar flask, insulated, and you don't carry one of those under a coat without someone noticing. Alleyway's what, four feet wide? No drag marks, no wheel tracks, nothing knocked from the shelves in that shed even though the door was ajar. Whoever did this walked in clean and walked out clean." Quinn straightened, joints protesting the way they always did on wet nights now, some old injury keeping its own weather. "And gang killings don't usually strip a man's shoes." Sharma glanced down. Webb's feet were bare, soles pink and unweathered, no calluses, as though he'd never walked on them in his life. "Maybe they took them. Trophy." "Maybe." Quinn didn't believe it. She'd seen trophy-taking before, the amateur savagery of it, jewellery torn free with force, fingers broken to get at rings. This was surgical. Precise in a way that had nothing to do with cruelty and everything to do with purpose, like someone removing a component from a machine rather than harming a person. She crouched again, studied the placement of the hands, folded neatly over the chest, fingers interlaced. Nobody died like that. Nobody fell into that position by accident, and rigor didn't set in fast enough to explain it either. "He was arranged." "By the killer?" "By someone who wanted him found a particular way." Quinn's eyes tracked along the brick behind Webb's head, past the scorch mark, up to a symbol scratched faintly into the mortar, easy to miss unless the light caught it right. Concentric circles, a break in the innermost ring, like a door left open on a drawing of a door. She'd seen that shape before. Three years before. On the wall of the warehouse where she'd lost Morris, where the case notes still sat sealed in a box she couldn't bring herself to open, marked with a redaction stamp that made no sense for a supposed accident. "Detective?" "Photograph that marking. Close up, before the rain gets to it." Sharma followed her gaze, frowned at the wall like she expected to find nothing there, which, Quinn realised with a small cold drop in her stomach, might well be exactly what Sharma did find. "What marking?" "The circles. Just there, above his head." Sharma stepped closer, angled her torch, shook her head slow. "I'm not seeing it, boss. Just cracks in the mortar." Quinn said nothing. She looked again, and the symbol was still there, sharp-edged, deliberate, catching the light in a way ordinary cracks never did. She thought of Morris's laugh, easy and constant, gone quiet three years running, and thought too of the compass sitting in her desk drawer at the station — evidence bagged and never logged, taken off a suspect who'd vanished from a locked interview room before she could ask him a single question. She hadn't told anyone about the compass. She hadn't told anyone the needle spun instead of settled whenever she carried it near this part of the city. "Get the shoes bagged," she said instead. "And I want everyone who works this shed brought in for questioning. Tonight, not tomorrow." "You think it's someone from the transport authority?" "I think," Quinn said, gathering her tin of salve, tucking it back into her pocket with hands that had gone unsteady in a way she didn't examine too closely, "that whoever did this knew exactly what that mark means. And I think we're the only two people standing here who can even see it."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said instead [instead]"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.314
leniency0.629
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.057
95.33% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1070
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
95.33% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1070
totalAiIsms1
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences40
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences40
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences64
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen80
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1071
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount729
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.65
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Harlow1
Quinn12
Tube1
Marcus1
Webb5
Priya1
Sharma8
Ferris1
Eighteen1
Concentric1
Morris2
persons
0"Camden"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Marcus"
4"Webb"
5"Priya"
6"Sharma"
7"Ferris"
8"Concentric"
9"Morris"
places(empty)
globalScore0.677
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences29
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1071
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences64
matches
0"seen that shape"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean32.45
std33.72
cv1.039
sampleLengths
084
131
23
323
454
53
644
74
82
988
1013
1147
1224
132
1457
154
161
1789
1823
195
2096
213
223
23106
241
2511
2636
277
2820
29103
3022
318
3254
87.72% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences40
matches
0"been opened"
1"been drawn"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs128
matches(empty)
8.93% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences64
ratio0.047
matches
0"\"That's my read. Some kind of blade, heated. Except—\" Sharma crouched beside her, close enough that Quinn could smell the coffee on her breath, \"—except there's no accelerant residue. No burn pattern consistent with heat application. I had Ferris run a preliminary scan. Nothing.\""
1"The wound wasn't a wound so much as an absence — like something had been drawn out through the incision rather than cut into it."
2"She thought of Morris's laugh, easy and constant, gone quiet three years running, and thought too of the compass sitting in her desk drawer at the station — evidence bagged and never logged, taken off a suspect who'd vanished from a locked interview room before she could ask him a single question."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount461
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.03253796095444685
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.008676789587852495
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences64
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences64
mean16.73
std16.3
cv0.974
sampleLengths
021
131
232
321
410
53
616
77
82
923
1029
113
1244
134
142
1548
167
1725
188
1913
2015
2118
2214
2315
249
252
2657
274
281
2980
309
313
3220
335
345
3520
363
3730
3816
394
4018
413
423
4340
4419
455
463
4739
481
4911
88.02% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.59375
totalSentences64
uniqueOpeners38
87.72% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences38
matches
0"Instead there was a scorch"
ratio0.026
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount9
totalSentences38
matches
0"She angled the beam across"
1"She'd seen trophy-taking before, the"
2"She crouched again, studied the"
3"She'd seen that shape before."
4"She looked again, and the"
5"She thought of Morris's laugh,"
6"She hadn't told anyone about"
7"She hadn't told anyone the"
8"she said instead"
ratio0.237
38.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount32
totalSentences38
matches
0"Rain came down in sheets"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under"
2"Nobody had, not to this"
3"DC Priya Sharma stood near"
4"Sharma pointed her pen toward"
5"Webb's throat had been opened,"
6"Sharma crouched beside her, close"
7"Quinn reached into her coat"
8"She angled the beam across"
9"The wound wasn't a wound"
10"Quinn didn't smile"
11"Sharma flipped a page on"
12"Quinn straightened, joints protesting the"
13"Sharma glanced down."
14"Webb's feet were bare, soles"
15"Quinn didn't believe it"
16"She'd seen trophy-taking before, the"
17"This was surgical."
18"She crouched again, studied the"
19"Nobody died like that."
ratio0.842
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences38
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences20
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Rain came down in sheets over Camden, turning the cordon tape into a limp ribbon that slapped against the police car."
1"Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under it without breaking stride, her boots finding the exact centre of each paving stone as if she'd walked this street a thousan…"
2"Instead there was a scorch mark, black and radiating outward like a photograph of a starburst, the edges curling as though the stone itself had tried to flinch …"
3"Eighteen years had burned most of the humour out of her, left something leaner behind, something that noticed."
4"Webb's feet were bare, soles pink and unweathered, no calluses, as though he'd never walked on them in his life."
5"Precise in a way that had nothing to do with cruelty and everything to do with purpose, like someone removing a component from a machine rather than harming a p…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.086
leniency0.171
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.9552%