Run: 2026-07-01-01KWE90G9V66DMZAKGGJMKVMRR

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Duration:
36.0s
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$0.025230
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Amazon Bedrock

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain came down in sheets over Camden, turning the cordon tape into a sagging silver ribbon strung between a lamppost and a boarded-up shopfront. Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under it without breaking stride, her boots splashing through a puddle gone black with oil and ash. The old Tube entrance yawned below street level, a set of stairs nobody had used in thirty years, chained shut and forgotten until tonight. Someone had cut through the padlock. The chain lay coiled at the bottom step like a dead snake. "Detective Quinn." PC Address, young, wet through, held a torch that trembled slightly in his grip. "Scene's down there. DS Whitfield's already inside." "Cause of death?" "That's the thing, ma'am. There isn't one. Not one we can find." Quinn went down the stairs two at a time, her torch beam slicing through dust motes and the smell of old brick and something else underneath it, something sweetish and wrong, like flowers left too long in stagnant water. The platform opened up beneath the city, tiled in faded green and cream, the old station name barely legible beneath decades of grime. Emergency lighting had been rigged, throwing everything into harsh white relief. And in the middle of the platform, sprawled on his back with his arms flung wide, lay a man Quinn recognised from the missing persons board three days back. Thomas Reyes, forty-four, reported missing by his sister after he failed to show for a family dinner. His eyes were open. His skin had a grey cast to it that had nothing to do with the lighting. DS Marcus Whitfield crouched near the body, gloved hands hovering over the dead man's chest without touching. He looked up when Quinn's shadow fell across him. "Heart attack," he said. "Has to be. No marks on him, no blood, no sign of struggle. Man wanders into a disused station, maybe meeting someone dodgy, has a coronary from the stress of it." "He's got dust in his lungs he'd have coughed up the second breathing got difficult." Quinn knelt on the opposite side, careful of her coat hem. "Look at his hands." Whitfield's jaw tightened, that particular tightening she'd come to recognise over four months of partnership, the one that meant he thought she was reaching again. "What about them?" "Fingertips. All ten." She lifted one gently with a gloved finger, angling it toward the light. "Burned. Not scorched, not blistered like fire. Look at the pattern — spirals, almost. Like frost forming on a window, except it's gone the other way, gone black." "Could be decomposition. Could be the cold down here did something to the circulation before—" "He's been dead six hours, Marcus, maybe eight. Cold doesn't work that fast, and it doesn't work in patterns." She let the hand rest back against the tile, straightened up, turned in a slow circle to take in the platform. Old advertising hoardings, water damage staining the ceiling brown, and near the far wall, almost swallowed by shadow, a series of marks scratched into the tile. She crossed to them. Whitfield followed, reluctant, his torch beam bouncing. "Graffiti," he said. "Kids get down here sometimes, urban explorers, that sort." "Kids don't carve in a language that doesn't exist yet as far as the British Library's concerned." She'd seen symbols like these before, in a photograph Eva had shown her once, quickly, before changing the subject with the particular brightness she used when she didn't want to explain herself. Quinn hadn't pushed. She'd filed it away instead, the way she filed away everything that didn't fit the shape of an ordinary case. "There's soot here too. Not from a fire. It's arranged, Marcus. Deliberate. Like a diagram." "You're profiling a ritual killing off scratch marks and dust patterns." "I'm profiling a scene that doesn't match the story you're telling yourself because the story you're telling yourself is easier." She said it without heat, the way she'd say the sky was grey, and crouched again beside the symbols, close enough to see the fine work in them, no tremor in the lines, no hesitation. Whoever made these had done it before. "Where's his wallet? Phone?" "Nothing on him. Which fits a mugging that went wrong, someone panics after the guy drops dead—" "A mugger doesn't chain a Tube station shut behind him on the way out. A mugger doesn't leave a corpse arranged like this." She gestured, and Whitfield's torch followed her hand: Reyes's body wasn't merely fallen. His legs were together, his arms out at precise angles, his head tipped back to face the ceiling as if he'd been positioned for something to look down on him. "This wasn't a robbery. This was — I don't know what this was yet. But it wasn't that." Whitfield exhaled through his nose, a long-suffering sound she'd heard from him roughly four hundred times since January. "So what's your theory, then? Because from where I'm standing, we've got a dead man in a Tube station and two detectives freezing their arses off arguing about frost patterns." Quinn didn't answer right away. She was looking past him, at a faint discolouration in the tile dust near the platform edge — a scuff, circular, about the width of a large coin, and beside it another, and another, spaced with the same unnerving regularity as the symbols on the wall. A trail. Something had stood here, shifted its weight, stood somewhere else. Not human footprints. Nothing with a heel or a toe. Just those strange round marks, evenly spaced, leading toward the mouth of the old tunnel where the tracks vanished into darkness. "I think," she said slowly, "that whatever happened to Thomas Reyes didn't happen because he wandered somewhere he shouldn't have gone alone." "Meaning?" "Meaning he wasn't alone." She stood, joints protesting from the cold stone, and looked toward that black tunnel mouth, where her torch beam gave out and swallowed itself in nothing. "Get forensics to bag the soot separately, not with the general debris. And Marcus — don't let anyone touch those hands until I've had someone look at the burns properly." "Someone like who?" Quinn didn't answer that either. She was already thinking of a name, a friend of a friend with a battered satchel and a habit of tucking red curls behind her ear when she was about to say something she didn't want to say. Someone who worked in a restricted archive and knew things that weren't taught in any forensics course Quinn had ever sat through. She just wasn't ready to say that name out loud. Not yet.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said slowly [slowly]"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.345
leniency0.69
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.069
81.77% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1097
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"gently"
2"quickly"
3"slowly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
90.88% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1097
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"trembled"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"trembled"
1"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences46
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences46
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences64
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1101
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
88.78% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount735
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.22
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Harlow1
Quinn9
Tube1
Address1
Reyes2
Marcus1
Whitfield5
Old1
Eva1
January1
persons
0"Camden"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Reyes"
4"Marcus"
5"Whitfield"
6"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0.888
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences35
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1101
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences64
matches
0"say that name"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean36.7
std26.92
cv0.734
sampleLengths
045
142
223
33
412
539
680
720
826
935
1030
1128
1244
1315
1466
1511
1612
1787
1811
1966
2017
2184
2248
2394
2422
251
2660
273
2865
2912
90.01% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences46
matches
0"been rigged"
1"been positioned"
94.18% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs126
matches
0"was looking"
1"was already thinking"
98.21% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences64
ratio0.016
matches
0"She was looking past him, at a faint discolouration in the tile dust near the platform edge — a scuff, circular, about the width of a large coin, and beside it another, and another, spaced with the same unnerving regularity as the symbols on the wall."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount737
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.033921302578018994
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.012211668928086838
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences64
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences64
mean17.2
std12.87
cv0.748
sampleLengths
024
121
224
36
412
516
67
73
812
939
1023
1111
1229
1317
144
1516
1617
179
184
1931
2026
214
2225
233
2416
2528
2615
2740
2826
294
307
313
329
3349
343
3520
3615
3711
3855
397
404
4117
4236
4330
4418
4518
4630
475
4846
492
95.31% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.625
totalSentences64
uniqueOpeners40
79.37% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences42
matches
0"Just those strange round marks,"
ratio0.024
67.62% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences42
matches
0"His eyes were open."
1"His skin had a grey"
2"He looked up when Quinn's"
3"She lifted one gently with"
4"She let the hand rest"
5"She crossed to them."
6"She'd seen symbols like these"
7"She'd filed it away instead,"
8"She said it without heat,"
9"She gestured, and Whitfield's torch"
10"His legs were together, his"
11"She was looking past him,"
12"she said slowly"
13"She stood, joints protesting from"
14"She was already thinking of"
15"She just wasn't ready to"
ratio0.381
19.52% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount37
totalSentences42
matches
0"Rain came down in sheets"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under"
2"The old Tube entrance yawned"
3"Someone had cut through the"
4"The chain lay coiled at"
5"PC Address, young, wet through,"
6"Quinn went down the stairs"
7"The platform opened up beneath"
8"Emergency lighting had been rigged,"
9"Thomas Reyes, forty-four, reported missing"
10"His eyes were open."
11"His skin had a grey"
12"DS Marcus Whitfield crouched near"
13"He looked up when Quinn's"
14"Quinn knelt on the opposite"
15"Whitfield's jaw tightened, that particular"
16"She lifted one gently with"
17"She let the hand rest"
18"She crossed to them."
19"Whitfield followed, reluctant, his torch"
ratio0.881
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences42
matches
0"Whoever made these had done"
ratio0.024
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under it without breaking stride, her boots splashing through a puddle gone black with oil and ash."
1"His legs were together, his arms out at precise angles, his head tipped back to face the ceiling as if he'd been positioned for something to look down on him."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.138
leniency0.276
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.1191%