Run: 2026-07-01-01KWE925HJ0G2SXQDXG1PNPCTA

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39.1s
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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt stuck the way it always did, and Rory swore under her breath as she wrenched it free, already annoyed before she even got the door open. It was gone eleven. Eva was at the shop till midnight restocking shelves that didn't need restocking, and Ptolemy had been yowling at the window for the better part of an hour like he'd scented something on the wind that Rory couldn't. She should have listened to the cat. Lucien Moreau stood in the narrow hallway with his ivory-handled cane resting against one shoulder, platinum hair combed back without a strand out of place, as if he hadn't just climbed three flights of stairs above a curry house that smelled permanently of cardamom and frying onions. His amber eye caught the hall light; the black one swallowed it whole. "Rory," he said, like her name was a password he'd been waiting months to use again. "No," she said, and started to close the door. He caught it with the cane before it latched, not forcing it, just holding it open the way he held everything — with the absolute confidence that force would never be necessary. "That's not very hospitable." "I'm not feeling hospitable. Funny, that." "May I come in?" "You're already halfway in, Lucien, so I don't see what asking accomplishes." But she stepped back anyway, because six months ago she would have slammed the door on his foot and meant it, and now she just stood there with her arms crossed over an old jumper of Eva's, feeling the particular exhaustion of wanting to hate someone and not quite managing it. He came in slowly, taking in the flat the way he took in everything — cataloguing it. Books stacked on the radiator, scrolls curling out of a biscuit tin on the windowsill, Ptolemy sitting fat and imperial on top of a pile of research notes about wardstones, glaring at the newcomer with the same suspicion Rory felt but wasn't allowed to show, apparently, because that would mean admitting it mattered. "Cosy," Lucien said. "It's Eva's." "I know whose it is." He set the cane against the sofa arm, unhurried, and unbuttoned his suit jacket like he intended to stay long enough to need to. "I also know you've been avoiding my calls for four months, which is impressive dedication, considering I only called eleven times." "Eleven?" "Twelve, if you count the one where I hung up before you answered." "That doesn't count." "It counts to me." He looked at her then, properly, and something in his expression cracked open for half a second before he smoothed it back into that unbothered, amused mask he wore like the suit — tailored, expensive, impenetrable. "You look well, Rory." "Don't." "I'm allowed to say you look well." "You're not allowed to show up at midnight and say it like nothing happened." "I didn't say nothing happened." His voice dropped, lost some of its polish. "I said you look well. Those are different sentences." She wanted to throw something at him. She wanted, more than that, and more shamefully, to close the space between them and put her head against his chest the way she used to when the world got too loud and he was — inexplicably, infuriatingly — the quiet in it. Neither urge was acceptable. She settled for staying exactly where she was, arms crossed, feet planted on Eva's threadbare rug like it was a line she'd drawn herself. "Why are you here, Lucien?" "Would you believe me if I said I missed you?" "No." "Good instinct." He picked up a scroll from the windowsill, unrolled an inch of it, found nothing of interest, and set it back precisely where he'd found it — a habit she remembered, that meticulous returning of things to their place, as if disorder physically pained him. "There's a man asking questions about a courier who works the East End. Black hair, blue eyes, rides a bike that's older than she is. Doesn't stop for anyone. Delivers noodles for a woman who's very particular about her ginger chicken." Her stomach dropped. "Who's asking?" "Someone who works for someone who works for someone I don't like the smell of." He looked up, and the flippancy was gone entirely now, scraped away to something that looked almost like fear, on a face that she'd never once seen afraid. "I came because you needed to know, and because I wasn't going to let you find out from anyone else." "You could have called." "You don't answer." "You could have left a message." "Some things," he said, "shouldn't be a voicemail." The flat was very quiet. Somewhere below, the curry house was closing up, chairs scraping tile, and Ptolemy had abandoned his glaring to curl into the notes on wardstones like they were a bed made specifically for him. Rory became aware, all at once, of how close Lucien was standing, close enough that she could smell the cedar and rain of him, close enough that four months of silence collapsed into the three feet of space between his shoes and hers. "You left," she said, quieter than she meant to. "In February. You just — left." "I had a reason." "You always have a reason. That's the problem. You have reasons for everything except the one thing I actually asked you." His jaw tightened. For a man who traded in other people's secrets for a living, he was remarkably bad at parting with his own. "I told you it wasn't safe. For you. To know certain things about me." "That wasn't your decision to make." "No," he agreed, and something in his voice cracked, just slightly, just enough. "It wasn't. I know that now. I knew it then, if I'm honest, and I did it anyway, because I am — occasionally — a coward, Rory, dressed very well." She laughed, once, without much humor in it, because it was such a Lucien thing to say, self-aware and self-lacerating and somehow still charming despite itself, and charm had always been the problem, hadn't it, charm was how he'd gotten past every wall she'd built. "You can't just come back," she said. "Not with a warning wrapped around it like a present. Not like that fixes anything." "I'm not trying to fix anything tonight." He picked up his cane again, and for one terrible moment she thought he meant to leave, and hated the way her chest seized at the thought. But he only turned it in his hand, amber eye steady on her. "Tonight I'm trying to keep you alive. The rest — the apology, the explanation, whatever you'll let me give you — I'll earn that. Slowly. If you'll let me." "And if I don't?" "Then I'll still tell you when men are asking questions they shouldn't be asking. Because that part was never conditional." He moved toward the door, close enough as he passed that his shoulder nearly brushed hers, close enough that she caught, again, cedar and rain and the particular ache of missing someone standing directly in front of her. At the threshold he paused, hand on the frame, and looked back. "Lock all three," he said. "Please." Then he was gone, down the stairs, past the shuttered curry house, out into a London night that suddenly felt considerably less safe than it had an hour ago — and Rory stood in the doorway a long moment before she slid the bolts home, one, two, three, and leaned her forehead against the cool wood, furious at herself for the thing her heart was doing, which was, unmistakably, hoping he'd knock again.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.313
leniency0.625
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
64.43% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1265
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"very"
count4
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
2
adverb"precisely"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slowly"
2"precisely"
3"slightly"
4"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
84.19% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1265
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"charm"
count2
highlights
0"stomach"
1"silence"
2"charm"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences39
matches(empty)
69.60% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences39
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
1"tended to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences72
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen72
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1277
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions24
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount876
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.57
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory5
Ptolemy3
Moreau1
Eva3
Lucien4
London1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Moreau"
3"Eva"
4"Lucien"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences30
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"not quite managing it"
1"lowed to show, apparently, because that would"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1277
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences72
matches
0"passed that his"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean27.17
std27.63
cv1.017
sampleLengths
071
17
260
316
49
536
66
74
812
951
1070
113
122
1350
141
1513
163
1744
181
197
2014
2122
2278
235
2410
251
2688
275
2863
294
303
316
328
3381
3415
354
3621
3738
386
3943
4045
4122
4276
434
4470
456
4673
78.27% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences39
matches
0"was gone"
1"was gone"
2"was gone"
37.40% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs164
matches
0"was closing"
1"was standing"
2"was doing"
3"was, unmistakably, hoping"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences72
ratio0.097
matches
0"His amber eye caught the hall light; the black one swallowed it whole."
1"He caught it with the cane before it latched, not forcing it, just holding it open the way he held everything — with the absolute confidence that force would never be necessary."
2"He came in slowly, taking in the flat the way he took in everything — cataloguing it."
3"\"It counts to me.\" He looked at her then, properly, and something in his expression cracked open for half a second before he smoothed it back into that unbothered, amused mask he wore like the suit — tailored, expensive, impenetrable."
4"She wanted, more than that, and more shamefully, to close the space between them and put her head against his chest the way she used to when the world got too loud and he was — inexplicably, infuriatingly — the quiet in it."
5"\"Good instinct.\" He picked up a scroll from the windowsill, unrolled an inch of it, found nothing of interest, and set it back precisely where he'd found it — a habit she remembered, that meticulous returning of things to their place, as if disorder physically pained him."
6"Then he was gone, down the stairs, past the shuttered curry house, out into a London night that suddenly felt considerably less safe than it had an hour ago — and Rory stood in the doorway a long moment before she slid the bolts home, one, two, three, and leaned her forehead against the cool wood, furious at herself for the thing her heart was doing, which was, unmistakably, hoping he'd knock again."
73.35% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount872
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount59
adverbRatio0.0676605504587156
lyAdverbCount20
lyAdverbRatio0.022935779816513763
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences72
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences72
mean17.74
std16.86
cv0.95
sampleLengths
029
14
238
37
447
513
616
79
832
94
106
114
1212
1351
1417
1553
163
172
1829
1921
201
2113
223
2340
244
251
267
2714
2813
299
307
3143
324
3324
345
3510
361
3747
3841
393
402
4143
4220
434
443
456
468
475
4833
4943
81.02% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.5277777777777778
totalSentences72
uniqueOpeners38
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences35
matches
0"Somewhere below, the curry house"
1"Then he was gone, down"
ratio0.057
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences35
matches
0"It was gone eleven."
1"She should have listened to"
2"His amber eye caught the"
3"he said, like her name"
4"she said, and started to"
5"He caught it with the"
6"He came in slowly, taking"
7"He set the cane against"
8"He looked at her then,"
9"His voice dropped, lost some"
10"She wanted to throw something"
11"She wanted, more than that,"
12"She settled for staying exactly"
13"He picked up a scroll"
14"Her stomach dropped."
15"He looked up, and the"
16"she said, quieter than she"
17"His jaw tightened."
18"he agreed, and something in"
19"She laughed, once, without much"
ratio0.629
45.71% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount29
totalSentences35
matches
0"The third deadbolt stuck the"
1"It was gone eleven."
2"Eva was at the shop"
3"She should have listened to"
4"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
5"His amber eye caught the"
6"he said, like her name"
7"she said, and started to"
8"He caught it with the"
9"He came in slowly, taking"
10"Books stacked on the radiator,"
11"He set the cane against"
12"He looked at her then,"
13"His voice dropped, lost some"
14"She wanted to throw something"
15"She wanted, more than that,"
16"Neither urge was acceptable."
17"She settled for staying exactly"
18"He picked up a scroll"
19"Her stomach dropped."
ratio0.829
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences35
matches(empty)
ratio0
16.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences17
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Eva was at the shop till midnight restocking shelves that didn't need restocking, and Ptolemy had been yowling at the window for the better part of an hour like…"
1"Lucien Moreau stood in the narrow hallway with his ivory-handled cane resting against one shoulder, platinum hair combed back without a strand out of place, as …"
2"For a man who traded in other people's secrets for a living, he was remarkably bad at parting with his own."
91.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He looked up, and the flippancy was gone entirely now, scraped away to something that looked almost like fear, on a face that she'd never once seen afraid"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.042
74.7480%