| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.6 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.21% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1043 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 66.44% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1043 | | totalAiIsms | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "stomach" | | 3 | "footsteps" | | 4 | "perfect" | | 5 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 75.89% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 11 | | totalWords | 1052 | | ratio | 0.01 | | matches | | 0 | "Richmond Park, past the old oaks, you can't miss it" | | 1 | "made" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 12 | | wordCount | 1034 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.19 | | worstName | "Yu-Fei" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 0.5 | | worstWindowName | "Yu-Fei" | | discoveredNames | | Yu-Fei | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Tube | 1 | | November | 1 | | September | 1 | | London | 1 | | Richmond | 2 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Park" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Richmond" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "quite believed it until her boots crushed a poppy that had no business existing past September" | | 1 | "dark that seemed to lean in rather than simply exist" | | 2 | "felt like a coal pressed flat against h" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.951 | | wordCount | 1052 | | matches | | 0 | "not really, but some old animal part of her brain had hoped for it anyway, h" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 24 | | mean | 43.83 | | std | 25.3 | | cv | 0.577 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 91 | | 1 | 59 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 58 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 72 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 77 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 35 | | 10 | 41 | | 11 | 71 | | 12 | 63 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 69 | | 15 | 37 | | 16 | 57 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 49 | | 19 | 64 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 44 | | 22 | 64 | | 23 | 16 |
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| 88.82% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "been told" | | 1 | "been *made" | | 2 | "meant" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 180 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 66 | | ratio | 0.091 | | matches | | 0 | "What he hadn't said was how the air changed the moment she crossed the ring of stones — thicker, somehow, like breathing through a wet cloth." | | 1 | "The standing stones behind her had already gone strange with distance — she glanced back and could no longer tell how far she'd come, whether it had been twenty paces or two hundred." | | 2 | "Yu-Fei's cousin had said there'd be a hollow tree, an old ash split down the middle by lightning, and that whatever he'd lost — he'd been infuriatingly vague about what — would be tucked into the roots." | | 3 | "She froze, hand still outstretched, and became aware — all at once, the way you become aware of a held breath — that the clearing had gone silent." | | 4 | "Not ran — some instinct older than sense told her that running would change something, would turn a waiting thing into a chasing one." | | 5 | "All of it — the footsteps, the too-perfect silence, the wrongness of the light — cut off like a held note finally released." |
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| 86.53% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1029 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 57 | | adverbRatio | 0.05539358600583091 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013605442176870748 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 66 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 66 | | mean | 15.94 | | std | 11.9 | | cv | 0.746 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 33 | | 1 | 32 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 27 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 33 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 25 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 35 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 37 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 24 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 27 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 28 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 31 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 26 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 41 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 63.64% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.45454545454545453 | | totalSentences | 66 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere off to her left," | | 1 | "Just the black shapes of" | | 2 | "Of course there wasn't." | | 3 | "Too symmetrical, maybe, the split" | | 4 | "Only then did she turn." | | 5 | "Just the trees, the flowers," |
| | ratio | 0.109 | |
| 38.18% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 1 | "It had gone warm an" | | 2 | "It wasn't body heat now." | | 3 | "It pulsed, slow and insistent," | | 4 | "she said, mostly to hear" | | 5 | "She'd been told the grove" | | 6 | "She hadn't quite believed it" | | 7 | "She turned, quick, the beam" | | 8 | "She held still and listened." | | 9 | "She told herself it was" | | 10 | "She kept walking, the pendant's" | | 11 | "Her voice didn't carry the" | | 12 | "It came out flat, swallowed" | | 13 | "She hadn't expected one, not" | | 14 | "She made herself keep walking." | | 15 | "She crouched at the roots" | | 16 | "She froze, hand still outstretched," | | 17 | "She heard her own heartbeat" | | 18 | "She didn't turn around straight" | | 19 | "She made herself close her" |
| | ratio | 0.455 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory pushed through the last" | | 1 | "The map Yu-Fei's cousin had" | | 2 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 3 | "It had gone warm an" | | 4 | "It wasn't body heat now." | | 5 | "It pulsed, slow and insistent," | | 6 | "she said, mostly to hear" | | 7 | "The wildflowers underfoot didn't belong" | | 8 | "Foxgloves and campanula, blooming fat" | | 9 | "She'd been told the grove" | | 10 | "She hadn't quite believed it" | | 11 | "She turned, quick, the beam" | | 12 | "She held still and listened." | | 13 | "She told herself it was" | | 14 | "She kept walking, the pendant's" | | 15 | "The standing stones behind her" | | 16 | "The moon sat directly overhead," | | 17 | "Something rustled to her right" | | 18 | "Her voice didn't carry the" | | 19 | "It came out flat, swallowed" |
| | ratio | 0.709 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 23.81% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Foxgloves and campanula, blooming fat and violet in the dark, releasing a scent too sweet for the cold that wrapped around her ankles." | | 1 | "Just the black shapes of trees pressed close together, the kind of dark that seemed to lean in rather than simply exist." | | 2 | "It came out flat, swallowed immediately by the trees, as though the grove had no interest in letting sound travel further than it had to." | | 3 | "She heard her own heartbeat too clearly, the small tick of her wristwatch, and beneath that, right at the edge of hearing, something that might have been breath…" | | 4 | "And yet the space between two of the nearer oaks looked darker than it should, a wrongness of shadow that didn't match the angle of the moonlight, as if somethi…" | | 5 | "She stood in the ordinary dark of Richmond Park, ordinary trees rustling in an ordinary wind, her breath fogging in front of her, and only then let herself look…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |