| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.571 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.04% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1008 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 45.44% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1008 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "throbbed" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "stomach" | | 6 | "quickened" | | 7 | "footsteps" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 65 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 65 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 64 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 9 | | totalWords | 1017 | | ratio | 0.009 | | matches | | 0 | "Time moves differently here." | | 1 | "Come on, Rory. Cool-headed. Think." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 18 | | wordCount | 993 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.4 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Isabella | 1 | | Plantation | 1 | | October | 2 | | London | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Isolde | 3 | | Rory | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Isabella" | | 3 | "Plantation" | | 4 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 93.18% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite running, breath tight in her throat, and the pendant blazed against her palm like a coal" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.983 | | wordCount | 1017 | | matches | | 0 | "not the green wet smell of a London park but something sweeter, riper, the smell of fruit left a day too" |
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| 19.61% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "meant, that Richmond" | | 1 | "remembered — that the" | | 2 | "was, that the" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 29 | | mean | 35.07 | | std | 27.65 | | cv | 0.788 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 78 | | 1 | 47 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 56 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 64 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 100 | | 10 | 1 | | 11 | 50 | | 12 | 66 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 48 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 44 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 74 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 36 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 66 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 37 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 36 | | 28 | 72 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 39.36% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 166 | | matches | | 0 | "were listening" | | 1 | "was reacting" | | 2 | "was keeping" | | 3 | "was only guessing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 68 | | ratio | 0.088 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the silence — Richmond Park at night was full of silences, the kind that pressed on your ears until you heard your own blood moving." | | 1 | "Wildflowers she remembered from her last visit — poppies, foxglove, things that had no business blooming in October — stood pale and closed in the moonlight, heads bowed like they were listening for something." | | 2 | "Not an animal's movement — too slow, too considered, the kind of shift a shadow makes when the light source itself has shifted rather than the shadow." | | 3 | "The flowers here had started opening as she passed, she noticed — poppies unfurling one petal at a time though there was no wind, no sun, nothing to prompt it." | | 4 | "She fixed her eyes on a gap in the trees ahead where the ground rose slightly, remembering — or thinking she remembered — that the standing stones sat on a low mound." | | 5 | "She turned on her heel, orienting on the one direction the footsteps hadn't come from, and walked — fast, faster, not running, not yet, some scrap of pride insisting she hadn't earned the right to panic — back the way she'd come, praying to whoever might be listening in this stretched, sour, purple-lit dark that the stones would find her before whatever paced her did." |
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| 89.31% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 992 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 45 | | adverbRatio | 0.04536290322580645 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009072580645161291 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 68 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 68 | | mean | 14.96 | | std | 14.05 | | cv | 0.939 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 48 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 43 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 26 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 34 | | 14 | 30 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 41 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 39 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 24 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 27 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 30 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 36 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 1 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 67.16% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.45588235294117646 | | totalSentences | 68 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "Just white bark and black" | | 1 | "Somewhere to her right a" | | 2 | "Instead she quickened her pace," |
| | ratio | 0.053 | |
| 93.68% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "She hadn't meant to come" | | 1 | "She'd told herself a dozen" | | 2 | "It had gone from a" | | 3 | "she said, mostly to hear" | | 4 | "She stepped between two of" | | 5 | "She'd come because the pendant" | | 6 | "She glanced up." | | 7 | "She'd walked it twice before." | | 8 | "Her stomach dropped." | | 9 | "She hadn't thought about what" | | 10 | "she said, and hated how" | | 11 | "She kept walking." | | 12 | "She didn't stop to watch." | | 13 | "She fixed her eyes on" | | 14 | "She angled toward it." | | 15 | "She didn't turn this time." | | 16 | "she said, too loud, too" | | 17 | "She turned on her heel," |
| | ratio | 0.316 | |
| 56.49% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 46 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory pushed through the last" | | 1 | "She hadn't meant to come" | | 2 | "She'd told herself a dozen" | | 3 | "The Heartstone said otherwise." | | 4 | "It had gone from a" | | 5 | "she said, mostly to hear" | | 6 | "The grove swallowed the sound." | | 7 | "That was the first wrong" | | 8 | "This was different." | | 9 | "This ate the words before" | | 10 | "She stepped between two of" | | 11 | "Wildflowers she remembered from her" | | 12 | "The air smelled wrong too," | | 13 | "Nothing answered, which was almost" | | 14 | "She'd come because the pendant" | | 15 | "A Hel portal, she'd guessed," | | 16 | "Isolde would know." | | 17 | "Isolde always knew, sharp-eyed and" | | 18 | "The grove had a way" | | 19 | "A branch above her creaked" |
| | ratio | 0.807 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 71.43% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 30 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers she remembered from her last visit — poppies, foxglove, things that had no business blooming in October — stood pale and closed in the moonlight, he…" | | 1 | "The grove answered with silence, and then, from somewhere behind the veil of white trunks, something that might have been laughter if laughter had never once he…" | | 2 | "She turned on her heel, orienting on the one direction the footsteps hadn't come from, and walked — fast, faster, not running, not yet, some scrap of pride insi…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.429 | | leniency | 0.857 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |