| 33.33% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said instead [instead]" | | 1 | "he said finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.167 | |
| 82.13% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1119 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "really" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "utterly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 55.32% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1119 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "electric" | | 1 | "stomach" | | 2 | "comfortable" | | 3 | "intensity" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "flicked" | | 6 | "unreadable" | | 7 | "familiar" | | 8 | "pulse" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 50 | | matches | | |
| 57.14% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 50 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 66 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1125 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 886 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.9 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 6 | | Eva | 5 | | Enochian | 1 | | Manchester | 1 | | Moreau | 2 | | Marylebone | 1 | | Lucien | 8 | | Ptolemy | 3 | | Aurora | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Moreau" | | 3 | "Lucien" | | 4 | "Ptolemy" |
| | places | | 0 | "Manchester" | | 1 | "Marylebone" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 11.11% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "quite a growl" | | 1 | "not quite a smile" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1125 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 57.38% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "promised, that the" | | 1 | "give that sentence" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 29 | | mean | 38.79 | | std | 22.71 | | cv | 0.585 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 86 | | 1 | 48 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 86 | | 4 | 61 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 41 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 33 | | 9 | 74 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 73 | | 14 | 37 | | 15 | 42 | | 16 | 32 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 51 | | 20 | 52 | | 21 | 48 | | 22 | 48 | | 23 | 28 | | 24 | 40 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 25 | | 27 | 32 | | 28 | 58 |
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| 91.23% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | | 0 | "been curled" | | 1 | "been paid" | | 2 | "was, abandoned" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 151 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't looking" | | 1 | "was looking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 61 | | ratio | 0.066 | | matches | | 0 | "She undid the last bolt and opened the door only as far as the chain allowed, so that she could look at him properly through the gap — the sharp line of his cheekbones, the two-colored eyes, one amber and warm as whisky, the other black and bottomless, both fixed on her now with an intensity that made her feel sixteen again instead of twenty-five." | | 1 | "She hesitated another breath before she slid the chain free and stepped back to let him in, because whatever else lived between them — the hurt, the silence, the words she'd left unsaid on his doorstep because she hadn't trusted herself to say them without breaking — she had never once, in three months, stopped wanting to know what he needed from her." | | 2 | "This was the thing about Lucien — he never apologized in the moment, when it might have cost him nothing." | | 3 | "She looked at him — really looked, the way she hadn't let herself in three months — and found she had no answer that wasn't either a lie or a confession, and she wasn't sure which one frightened her more." |
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| 98.29% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 882 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 37 | | adverbRatio | 0.04195011337868481 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011337868480725623 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 61 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 61 | | mean | 18.44 | | std | 15.73 | | cv | 0.853 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 39 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 29 | | 6 | 31 | | 7 | 32 | | 8 | 29 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 46 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 27 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 28 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 65 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 63 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 37 | | 35 | 27 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 28 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 35 | | 44 | 52 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 23 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 35 |
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| 62.30% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.4426229508196721 | | totalSentences | 61 | | uniqueOpeners | 27 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 43 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the second." | | 1 | "Of course it wasn't." |
| | ratio | 0.047 | |
| 6.05% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 43 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd been curled on Eva's" | | 1 | "She set the scroll aside," | | 2 | "She checked all three deadbolts" | | 3 | "He wore the charcoal suit" | | 4 | "He wasn't looking at the" | | 5 | "He was looking at the" | | 6 | "She unlatched the first bolt." | | 7 | "Her fingers slowed on the" | | 8 | "It never was, with him." | | 9 | "She undid the last bolt" | | 10 | "She hesitated another breath before" | | 11 | "He made himself necessary." | | 12 | "He came in smelling of" | | 13 | "His gaze flicked to her," | | 14 | "He set the cane against" | | 15 | "He waited until the wound" | | 16 | "She stopped herself, because she" | | 17 | "His voice had dropped, quieter" | | 18 | "He never called her Aurora" | | 19 | "She looked at him —" |
| | ratio | 0.535 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 40 | | totalSentences | 43 | | matches | | 0 | "The knock came at half" | | 1 | "She'd been curled on Eva's" | | 2 | "Ptolemy lifted his head from" | | 3 | "Rory murmured, though she didn't" | | 4 | "The curry house closed at" | | 5 | "She set the scroll aside," | | 6 | "She checked all three deadbolts" | | 7 | "Lucien Moreau stood in the" | | 8 | "He wore the charcoal suit" | | 9 | "He wasn't looking at the" | | 10 | "He was looking at the" | | 11 | "Rory's hand hovered over the" | | 12 | "A woman who had moved" | | 13 | "She unlatched the first bolt." | | 14 | "Her fingers slowed on the" | | 15 | "Lucien said through the door," | | 16 | "It never was, with him." | | 17 | "She undid the last bolt" | | 18 | "The corner of his mouth" | | 19 | "She hesitated another breath before" |
| | ratio | 0.93 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 43 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 74.83% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 21 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "She undid the last bolt and opened the door only as far as the chain allowed, so that she could look at him properly through the gap — the sharp line of his che…" | | 1 | "Ptolemy jumped onto the sofa between them and curled into a knot of orange fur, utterly indifferent to the sudden cold in the air, and Rory sat down across from…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0.125 | | effectiveRatio | 0.083 | |