| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Lucien said finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.444 | | leniency | 0.889 | | rawRatio | 0.063 | | effectiveRatio | 0.056 | |
| 76.94% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1084 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "quickly" | | 3 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 63.10% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1084 | | totalAiIsms | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "electric" | | 1 | "flickered" | | 2 | "unreadable" | | 3 | "charm" | | 4 | "unravel" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "tension" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 35 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 35 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 76 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 6 | | totalWords | 1075 | | ratio | 0.006 | | matches | | 0 | "I'm alive. I'm sorry. I'll explain." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 18 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 22 | | wordCount | 727 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.69 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 3 | | Eva | 4 | | Moreau | 1 | | Ptolemy | 3 | | Lucien | 5 | | Enochian | 1 | | Berwick | 1 | | Street | 1 | | London | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Evan | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Moreau" | | 3 | "Ptolemy" | | 4 | "Lucien" | | 5 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Berwick" | | 1 | "Street" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 30 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1075 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 38.39 | | std | 21.04 | | cv | 0.548 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 46 | | 1 | 44 | | 2 | 38 | | 3 | 32 | | 4 | 48 | | 5 | 63 | | 6 | 60 | | 7 | 29 | | 8 | 54 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 49 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 62 | | 13 | 36 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 89 | | 16 | 36 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 56 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 42 | | 21 | 34 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 62 | | 25 | 62 | | 26 | 32 | | 27 | 9 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 35 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 116 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 54 | | ratio | 0.13 | | matches | | 0 | "The three deadbolts took Rory longer to work than usual, her fingers clumsy with the last dregs of sleep, and when she finally hauled the door open the words she'd been rehearsing—some clever, cutting thing to say to Eva about buying more milk—died in her throat." | | 1 | "\"Because there's nothing you have to say that I want to hear at—\" she glanced past him, as if the time might be written on the wall, \"—whatever unholy hour this is.\"" | | 2 | "But her body betrayed her the way it always did with Lucien—she stepped back, and he came in like smoke finding a gap under a door." | | 3 | "\"I'm not looking for information.\" Lucien's gaze drifted over the research notes on the table—her handwriting, she realized, not Eva's, pages of translated Enochian she'd been chewing on for a week—and something in his expression flickered, softened, before he caught it and smoothed it back into that maddening, unreadable calm." | | 4 | "Something crossed his face—hurt, real and unguarded, gone as quickly as it came." | | 5 | "She didn't answer, because the honest answer was she didn't know, and some truths were too dangerous to say aloud in a kitchen at midnight with a half-demon who still made her pulse do something traitorous every time he looked at her like that—like she was the only unsolved thing in a city full of secrets he already knew the answers to." | | 6 | "Rory looked at him a long moment—at the rain still beaded on his lapels, at the careful stillness he wore like armor, at the space between them that felt, suddenly, very small." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 391 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 12 | | adverbRatio | 0.030690537084398978 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017902813299232736 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 54 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 54 | | mean | 19.91 | | std | 16.14 | | cv | 0.811 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 46 | | 1 | 35 | | 2 | 3 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 32 | | 8 | 26 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 32 | | 12 | 26 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 27 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 50 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 45 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 47 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 75 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 34 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 37 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 29 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 62 | | 49 | 30 |
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| 91.36% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.5925925925925926 | | totalSentences | 54 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 98.04% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 34 | | matches | | 0 | "Just her name, low, the" |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 31.76% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 34 | | matches | | 0 | "He didn't, usually." | | 1 | "His mismatched eyes moved over" | | 2 | "she glanced past him, as" | | 3 | "She should have said no." | | 4 | "She'd practiced saying no to" | | 5 | "She didn't move" | | 6 | "She felt the ripples of" | | 7 | "His voice hardened at the" | | 8 | "Her laugh came out thin," | | 9 | "She heard her own voice" | | 10 | "She stopped herself" | | 11 | "He took a step closer," | | 12 | "He said it for her," | | 13 | "she said, quieter now, some" | | 14 | "She didn't answer, because the" | | 15 | "she said, and pulled out" |
| | ratio | 0.471 | |
| 4.12% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 31 | | totalSentences | 34 | | matches | | 0 | "The three deadbolts took Rory" | | 1 | "Lucien Moreau stood in the" | | 2 | "He didn't, usually." | | 3 | "That was the first wrong" | | 4 | "His mismatched eyes moved over" | | 5 | "she glanced past him, as" | | 6 | "A faint smile, the kind" | | 7 | "She should have said no." | | 8 | "She'd practiced saying no to" | | 9 | "The flat swallowed him whole," | | 10 | "Books stacked in crooked towers" | | 11 | "Ptolemy uncoiled himself from the" | | 12 | "Rory said, arms folding across" | | 13 | "Lucien's gaze drifted over the" | | 14 | "She didn't move" | | 15 | "The name landed like a" | | 16 | "She felt the ripples of" | | 17 | "His voice hardened at the" | | 18 | "Her laugh came out thin," | | 19 | "She heard her own voice" |
| | ratio | 0.912 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 34 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 95.24% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 15 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory looked at him a long moment—at the rain still beaded on his lapels, at the careful stillness he wore like armor, at the space between them that felt, sudde…" |
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| 31.25% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "she glanced, as if the time might be written on the wall," | | 1 | "Her laugh came out, humorless" | | 2 | "Lucien said finally, and the cane found its place against his leg again, some of the tension going out of his shoulders" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Lucien's gaze drifted (drift)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.194 | | leniency | 0.389 | | rawRatio | 0.143 | | effectiveRatio | 0.056 | |