| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.6 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.04% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1009 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 80.18% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1009 | | totalAiIsms | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "footsteps" | | 1 | "electric" | | 2 | "stomach" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 95.24% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 60 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "happened to" | | 1 | "seemed to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 57 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1002 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 24 | | wordCount | 933 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.75 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Three" | | discoveredNames | | Camden | 2 | | Quinn | 7 | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Met | 1 | | High | 1 | | Street | 1 | | Tube | 2 | | Morris | 2 | | Three | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Quinn" | | 1 | "Silas" | | 2 | "Morris" |
| | places | | 0 | "Camden" | | 1 | "Raven" | | 2 | "High" | | 3 | "Street" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.40% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.996 | | wordCount | 1002 | | matches | | 0 | "not electric, not torch, but a low amber glow like something from before electricity exis" | | 1 | "not torch, but a low amber glow like something from before electricity exis" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 31.31 | | std | 24.94 | | cv | 0.797 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 63 | | 1 | 5 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 51 | | 4 | 66 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 75 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 52 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 66 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 76 | | 15 | 40 | | 16 | 56 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 56 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 62 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 55 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 31 | | 29 | 57 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 6 |
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| 99.42% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 166 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 64 | | ratio | 0.078 | | matches | | 0 | "The suspect—she still didn't have a name, just a build, six-foot, dark coat, moved like he'd never once tripped in his life—cut left through an alley stacked with bin bags gone soft with damp." | | 1 | "Three weeks of surveillance photos and half-burned notebooks pulled from a bin outside the Raven's Nest, of a name—Silas—that people said like it might summon something if spoken too loud." | | 2 | "Not fell—went down, ducking into the mouth of a disused Tube entrance, one of the ones bricked up years back according to every map she'd ever seen, chain-link fence with a padlock that should have stopped him and didn't." | | 3 | "At the bottom, a passage opened up, tiled the way old Tube platforms were tiled, cream and maroon, and there was light down there—not electric, not torch, but a low amber glow like something from before electricity existed at all." | | 4 | "Ahead, at the edge of where her phone's light gave up, the suspect stood in a doorway that shouldn't have existed in a bricked-up station—stood there, watching her, patient as a man waiting for a bus." |
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| 84.19% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 947 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "half-visible beneath decades" | | 1 | "white, worn smooth like" |
| | adverbCount | 42 | | adverbRatio | 0.044350580781414996 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006335797254487857 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 64 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 64 | | mean | 15.66 | | std | 13.69 | | cv | 0.874 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 29 | | 1 | 34 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 30 | | 11 | 30 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 40 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 28 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 39 | | 25 | 27 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 30 | | 31 | 24 | | 32 | 22 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 35 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 52 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 40 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 36 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 72.92% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.484375 | | totalSentences | 64 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "Of course he didn't stop." | | 1 | "Too pale under the streetlight," | | 2 | "Then he was moving again," | | 3 | "Then she went through the" |
| | ratio | 0.074 | |
| 49.63% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "He didn't stop." | | 1 | "Her radio crackled against her" | | 2 | "She kept her eyes on" | | 3 | "He looked back now." | | 4 | "His face, when he turned," | | 5 | "She'd had thoughts like that" | | 6 | "She'd learned to bury them" | | 7 | "It swerved, horn blaring, and" | | 8 | "she said under her breath," | | 9 | "He went down." | | 10 | "He went through a gap" | | 11 | "she said, and went through" | | 12 | "She should call it in." | | 13 | "She thought of Morris." | | 14 | "She'd promised herself she wouldn't" | | 15 | "Her thumb hovered over the" | | 16 | "He held something up between" | | 17 | "His voice was ordinary." | | 18 | "He tilted his head toward" | | 19 | "Her stomach dropped." |
| | ratio | 0.426 | |
| 98.89% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "Rain came down in sheets" | | 1 | "The suspect—she still didn't have" | | 2 | "He didn't stop." | | 3 | "Her radio crackled against her" | | 4 | "She kept her eyes on" | | 5 | "Quinn followed, felt the impact" | | 6 | "He looked back now." | | 7 | "His face, when he turned," | | 8 | "She'd had thoughts like that" | | 9 | "She'd learned to bury them" | | 10 | "The alley spat them out" | | 11 | "It swerved, horn blaring, and" | | 12 | "she said under her breath," | | 13 | "He went down." | | 14 | "He went through a gap" | | 15 | "The padlock hung open." | | 16 | "she said, and went through" | | 17 | "The stairwell down was black," | | 18 | "The beam caught old tile," | | 19 | "Water dripped somewhere close, steady" |
| | ratio | 0.722 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 26 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Three weeks of surveillance photos and half-burned notebooks pulled from a bin outside the Raven's Nest, of a name—Silas—that people said like it might summon s…" | | 1 | "Not fell—went down, ducking into the mouth of a disused Tube entrance, one of the ones bricked up years back according to every map she'd ever seen, chain-link …" | | 2 | "The beam caught old tile, cracked and stained, a mural half-visible beneath decades of grime advertising some company that hadn't existed since the war." | | 3 | "Every instinct that had kept her alive eighteen years said call it in, get backup, don't go into an unmapped space alone chasing a man whose face did something …" | | 4 | "Three years gone, and she still didn't have an answer for what had actually happened to him, just a report she'd signed because there was nothing else to put on…" | | 5 | "Ahead, at the edge of where her phone's light gave up, the suspect stood in a doorway that shouldn't have existed in a bricked-up station—stood there, watching …" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |