Run: 2026-07-01-01KWE9EN7Z9PXRDNN97PYSAFPK

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Duration:
32.5s
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$0.023648
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hit the pavement hard enough to bounce, and Quinn's boots slapped through puddles as she rounded the corner onto Camden High Street. Twenty yards ahead, the man in the grey coat cut left into an alley, shoulder clipping a bin bag that split and spilled onto the wet cobbles. "Police! Stop!" He didn't stop. Nobody ever stopped. Quinn's lungs burned, eighteen years of decorated service and her knees still weren't built for this. She keyed her radio anyway, breath ragged against the plastic. "Control, this is DI Quinn, in pursuit on foot, suspect heading south off the High Street, request—" Static answered her. Then nothing. She glanced at the handset — full bars, full battery — and shoved it back in her coat, cursing under her breath. The alley narrowed and dropped, an old service stair slick with algae and rain runoff, and the man's grey coat flashed at the bottom of it before vanishing round a pillar. Quinn followed, one hand on the clammy brick wall, the other reaching automatically for the baton she never seemed to need until she needed it badly. Her torch beam caught the boarded entrance of what used to be a Tube station, the kind decommissioned decades back and left to rot behind corrugated iron. Except the iron sheet nearest the tunnel mouth hung loose on one hinge, swinging gently though there was no wind down here to move it. She hesitated at the threshold, heart hammering. Morris had hesitated too, once. In a warehouse in Deptford, three years back, and he never came out the far side of that hesitation. She still didn't know what had taken him — the report said gas leak, structural collapse, case closed — but she'd seen the marks on the walls afterward, wide gouges too deliberate to be rubble, and she'd never stopped hearing his voice on the radio, cutting out mid-sentence. She ducked through the gap in the iron sheet anyway. The tunnel swallowed the last of the streetlight after ten paces, and her torch became the only thing between her and total dark, its beam skating over cracked tile, a rusted sign reading **CAMDEN TOWN** with half its letters missing. Water dripped somewhere ahead in a steady rhythm, and beneath it, fainter, she caught music. Not busker music. Something older, strings and a low drum, drifting up from further down where the tracks should have ended in a dead wall. They didn't end in a wall. Quinn stopped at the lip of the old platform, torch beam falling on descending stairs that had no business existing in any Transport for London blueprint she'd ever pulled. Lanterns hung along the passage below, real flame behind cracked glass, and the light caught on stalls, dozens of them, canvas and driftwood and hung with things she didn't have names for. Jars of something that moved on its own. Cloaks that seemed to drink the lantern light rather than reflect it. A woman with silver eyes weighing out powder on a scale made of bone. Her suspect — grey coat, blood on his collar from a fight she hadn't witnessed — was forty feet ahead, showing a token to a hooded figure at a rope barrier. The figure waved him through without a word. Quinn's hand found her phone. No signal, obviously. She hadn't expected one. "Detective." The voice came from behind her, low and amused, and she spun with her torch raised like a weapon. Nobody there. Just the tunnel, the dripping water, her own pulse loud in her ears. She turned back to the market below. Whatever this place was, it wasn't going to wait for backup that couldn't hear her radio call in the first place. Whatever her suspect had done — and she'd chased him three blocks after a warehouse fire that left two bodies without a mark of flame on them — the answer was down there, walking away from her with every second she stood frozen on the stairs. She thought of Morris. Of the case file stamped closed. Of eighteen years spent believing that any door could be opened if you had the right warrant, the right leverage, the right patience. None of that would help her here. She went down anyway. The stairs were older than the station above, worn smooth in the centre where feet had crossed for longer than the Underground had existed. The music grew louder, the drum matching her pulse, and the air changed too, tasting of copper and candle smoke and something green and growing that had no right to be underground. At the rope barrier the hooded figure turned toward her before she'd taken three steps onto the platform proper. It had no face she could make out under the hood, just a suggestion of eyes like wet stones. "Token," it said. "I don't have one." "Then you don't come further." Quinn glanced past the figure's shoulder. Grey coat had already dissolved into the crowd between the stalls, and for one furious second she considered pushing past, badge raised, the way she'd push past a bouncer outside some Shoreditch club. But the figure hadn't moved, and something about its stillness told her that pushing wouldn't work the way it worked up on the street. "I'm a police officer. I need to speak to the man who just went through." "Lots of men go through." The voice carried no threat, which somehow made it worse. "None of them are your business once they're past the rope. Not down here." Quinn's torch beam flickered, batteries fine ten minutes ago, and she felt the first cold thread of real fear since Deptford. She thought about Morris again, the gouges in the warehouse wall, the case closed on a lie because the truth didn't fit inside a report. "I'll come back," she said, "with a token." "Maybe you will." She backed up the stairs slowly, torch never leaving the hooded shape until the curve of the tunnel took it from view, and only then did she turn and climb two steps at a time, bursting out through the loose iron sheet into rain that felt, for the first time in her life, like the safer option. She stood on the wet cobbles a long moment, chest heaving, and pulled her radio back out. Full bars. She pressed the button. "Control, this is DI Quinn. Suspect lost. Requesting a meeting with DCI Bell first thing tomorrow. Tell him it's about Deptford."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.69% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1074
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
86.03% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1074
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"pulse"
count2
1
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences60
matches(empty)
95.24% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences60
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences69
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen57
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords2
totalWords1082
ratio0.002
matches
0"CAMDEN TOWN"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount988
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.71
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Quinn7
Camden1
High1
Street1
Tube1
Deptford2
Transport1
London1
Morris3
Underground1
Shoreditch1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Morris"
2"Underground"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
3"Deptford"
4"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
93.18% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences44
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"Cloaks that seemed to drink the lantern light rather than reflect it"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1082
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences69
matches
0"believing that any"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean30.06
std25.81
cv0.859
sampleLengths
050
12
26
326
417
527
657
752
87
972
1010
1180
126
1395
1439
1512
161
1734
1874
1933
207
214
2256
2338
243
254
265
2763
2815
2929
3046
318
323
3357
3423
3521
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs152
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences69
ratio0.058
matches
0"She glanced at the handset — full bars, full battery — and shoved it back in her coat, cursing under her breath."
1"She still didn't know what had taken him — the report said gas leak, structural collapse, case closed — but she'd seen the marks on the walls afterward, wide gouges too deliberate to be rubble, and she'd never stopped hearing his voice on the radio, cutting out mid-sentence."
2"Her suspect — grey coat, blood on his collar from a fight she hadn't witnessed — was forty feet ahead, showing a token to a hooded figure at a rope barrier."
3"Whatever her suspect had done — and she'd chased him three blocks after a warehouse fire that left two bodies without a mark of flame on them — the answer was down there, walking away from her with every second she stood frozen on the stairs."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount981
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.0326197757390418
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.007135575942915392
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences69
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences69
mean15.68
std12.41
cv0.791
sampleLengths
023
127
22
33
43
516
610
717
83
92
1022
1131
1226
1327
1425
157
165
1719
1848
1910
2040
2115
223
2322
246
2529
2632
278
2812
2914
3031
318
325
333
344
351
3619
372
3813
397
4021
4146
424
436
4423
457
464
4724
4832
4919
84.54% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.5507246376811594
totalSentences69
uniqueOpeners38
60.61% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences55
matches
0"Just the tunnel, the dripping"
ratio0.018
89.09% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences55
matches
0"He didn't stop."
1"She keyed her radio anyway,"
2"She glanced at the handset"
3"Her torch beam caught the"
4"She hesitated at the threshold,"
5"She still didn't know what"
6"She ducked through the gap"
7"They didn't end in a"
8"Her suspect — grey coat,"
9"She hadn't expected one."
10"She turned back to the"
11"She thought of Morris."
12"She went down anyway."
13"It had no face she"
14"She thought about Morris again,"
15"She backed up the stairs"
16"She stood on the wet"
17"She pressed the button."
ratio0.327
69.09% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount43
totalSentences55
matches
0"He didn't stop."
1"Nobody ever stopped."
2"Quinn's lungs burned, eighteen years"
3"She keyed her radio anyway,"
4"Static answered her."
5"She glanced at the handset"
6"The alley narrowed and dropped,"
7"Quinn followed, one hand on"
8"Her torch beam caught the"
9"She hesitated at the threshold,"
10"Morris had hesitated too, once."
11"She still didn't know what"
12"She ducked through the gap"
13"The tunnel swallowed the last"
14"Water dripped somewhere ahead in"
15"Something older, strings and a"
16"They didn't end in a"
17"Quinn stopped at the lip"
18"Lanterns hung along the passage"
19"Jars of something that moved"
ratio0.782
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Quinn stopped at the lip of the old platform, torch beam falling on descending stairs that had no business existing in any Transport for London blueprint she'd …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.9490%