Run: 2026-07-01-01KWE9EZW0Q0XWDR132F49J2S2

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41.9s
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$0.030340
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Amazon Bedrock

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The tape came down easier than Quinn expected, the constable at the door barely glancing up before he lifted it for her. Warehouse on the canal side of Camden Lock, brick gone soft and black with a century of soot, windows boarded except for one that gaped like a missing tooth. She ducked under the frame and the cold hit her first — a wrongness of temperature that made the hair on her arms rise before her eyes adjusted to the dark. "Detective Quinn." DS Priya Nair straightened from where she crouched near the body, her torch beam cutting sideways through drifting motes of dust. "Wasn't expecting SIO on this one." "Wasn't expecting to be called in on a squat death," Quinn said, stepping around a collapsed shelving unit. "Tell me why I'm here and not tucked up with paperwork." "Victim's a Michael Torrance, thirty-four, known to us for petty theft. Neighbours called it in this morning — smell." Nair wrinkled her nose. "Except there isn't one. Not really. Given how long the pathologist reckons he's been down." Quinn crouched beside the body. Torrance lay on his back, arms flung wide, mouth open in a rictus that had nothing gentle about it. His skin held a blue-white pallor, and where his shirt had ridden up she could see frost — actual frost, crystalline and glittering under the torchlight — clinging to his exposed stomach. "July," Quinn said. "It's July, Nair." "I know how the calendar works." Nair's tone stayed light, but her eyes flicked toward the frost and away again, quick, like she didn't want to look too long. "Building's derelict. No heating, obviously. Could be some kind of localized cold spot, damp coming up off the canal—" "Damp doesn't frost skin." Quinn reached into her coat for a pen, used it to lift the hem of Torrance's shirt higher. The frost didn't melt under the torch's heat. It sat there, stubborn, patterned in whorls that looked almost deliberate, like something had been drawn and then erased. "How long's he been dead?" "Pathologist's initial guess, three days. But—" Nair hesitated. "But what?" "But there's no decomp. None. Three days in July in a place like this, we should be swimming in it." Nair straightened, wiped her palms on her trousers though she hadn't touched anything. "My money's on some sort of chemical exposure. Squatters cook things down here sometimes. Could be preserving him somehow, some industrial compound." Quinn didn't answer. She'd heard theories like that before — DS Morris used to reach for them too, in the last weeks, grasping at anything that let the world stay ordinary. She looked past the body instead, let her eyes travel the room the way she'd trained herself to, corner to corner, floor to ceiling. The floorboards near the far wall had been swept clean, an oval patch scoured bare of the dust that coated everything else. She walked to it, crouched. "Nair. Come look at this." Nair's boots scraped over as she joined her. Scored into the wood, faint but unmistakable, was a series of interlocking lines, a pattern that curved back on itself like a knot with no beginning. "Kids," Nair said. "Vandalism. Probably been here for years, this place has been derelict since—" "The dust settled everywhere else." Quinn ran her finger along one groove, not touching, just tracing the air above it. "But not here. Somebody kept this clear. Recently." She stood, turned in a slow circle, and caught the glint she'd almost missed — a scatter of fine green flakes near the skirting board, like verdigris scraped off old copper. She crouched again, careful, and used a evidence bag to gather a pinch of it onto her glove. "What is that?" Nair asked. "I don't know yet." Quinn held the bag up to the torchlight. The flakes had a strange sheen, almost metallic, almost alive under the beam. She'd seen something like it once before — three years ago, on Morris's coat, the night before he vanished from a locked room with no explanation the department ever accepted. She'd told herself it was rust. She'd told herself a lot of things. "Could be from the pipes," Nair offered. "Old building, old plumbing—" "Pipes don't drop residue in a perfect circle six feet from a scoured patch on the floor." Quinn stood, joints protesting, and looked back at Torrance's body, at the frost that refused to melt, at the open mouth frozen in something that wasn't quite a scream and wasn't quite anything she had a name for. "Whatever did this, it wasn't cold water damage and it wasn't kids with a chisel." "So what's your theory, then?" Nair's arms crossed, more defensive than curious now. "Because if you're about to say what I think you're about to say—" "I haven't said anything." Quinn sealed the evidence bag and slid it into her coat. "I'm saying the evidence doesn't fit the easy read. That's all I'm saying right now." Nair exhaled through her nose, some private frustration she didn't voice. "The Super's going to want cause of death by tomorrow. Hypothermia doesn't happen in a heatwave, and there's no ligature, no wound, nothing." "I know." Quinn crouched one more time by Torrance's outstretched hand, noticed for the first time how his fingers had curled, not in the loose way of the dead but tight, clawed, as if he'd been reaching for something and missed it. She followed the angle of that reach across the floor, past the scoured patch, to the boarded window where a single shaft of daylight cut through a gap in the wood. Or where daylight should have been. Instead the gap showed only more darkness, a black deeper than the shadow around it, like a hole cut into the world rather than the wall. She didn't point it out to Nair. Not yet. She filed it the way she'd learned to file all the things that didn't fit — carefully, quietly, in the growing ledger of things that had started three years ago with Morris and hadn't stopped since. "Get the pathologist to run a full tox screen," she said, straightening. "And I want photographs of that pattern on the floor before anyone else walks through here." "You think it's relevant?" "I think," Quinn said, already moving toward the gap in the boards, toward that wrong, swallowing dark, "we've barely started looking."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Nair's arms crossed more [more]"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.514
leniency1
rawRatio0.053
effectiveRatio0.053
90.56% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1059
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
66.95% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1059
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"crystalline"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"tracing"
count1
4
word"glint"
count1
5
word"almost alive"
count1
6
word"perfect"
count1
highlights
0"crystalline"
1"stomach"
2"flicked"
3"tracing"
4"glint"
5"almost alive"
6"perfect"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences47
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences47
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences65
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1067
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
68.92% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount740
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.62
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Quinn12
Camden1
Lock1
Priya1
Nair12
Torrance4
Morris3
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Nair"
2"Torrance"
3"Morris"
places(empty)
globalScore0.689
windowScore0.833
11.11% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences36
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"something like it once before — three years"
1"quite a scream and wasn't quite anything she had a name for"
2"quite anything she had a name for"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.937
wordCount1067
matches
0"not in the loose way of the dead but tight, clawed, as if he'd been reaching for something"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean34.42
std21.98
cv0.639
sampleLengths
082
129
229
338
456
56
648
754
88
92
1055
1155
1227
135
1434
1515
1628
1749
185
1968
2011
2170
2226
2330
2434
2573
2632
2745
2828
294
3021
90.33% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences47
matches
0"been drawn"
1"been swept"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs132
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences65
ratio0.092
matches
0"She ducked under the frame and the cold hit her first — a wrongness of temperature that made the hair on her arms rise before her eyes adjusted to the dark."
1"His skin held a blue-white pallor, and where his shirt had ridden up she could see frost — actual frost, crystalline and glittering under the torchlight — clinging to his exposed stomach."
2"She'd heard theories like that before — DS Morris used to reach for them too, in the last weeks, grasping at anything that let the world stay ordinary."
3"She stood, turned in a slow circle, and caught the glint she'd almost missed — a scatter of fine green flakes near the skirting board, like verdigris scraped off old copper."
4"She'd seen something like it once before — three years ago, on Morris's coat, the night before he vanished from a locked room with no explanation the department ever accepted."
5"She filed it the way she'd learned to file all the things that didn't fit — carefully, quietly, in the growing ledger of things that had started three years ago with Morris and hadn't stopped since."
98.04% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount734
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.04223433242506812
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.005449591280653951
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences65
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences65
mean16.42
std11.1
cv0.676
sampleLengths
022
129
231
323
46
518
611
723
815
95
1019
1132
123
133
1429
1519
1622
178
1819
195
208
212
2233
2322
243
2528
2624
2722
285
295
308
3126
323
3312
3420
358
3631
3718
385
3912
4013
4130
426
437
447
454
4655
4715
4813
4913
82.56% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.5692307692307692
totalSentences65
uniqueOpeners37
81.30% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences41
matches
0"Instead the gap showed only"
ratio0.024
73.66% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences41
matches
0"She ducked under the frame"
1"His skin held a blue-white"
2"It sat there, stubborn, patterned"
3"She'd heard theories like that"
4"She looked past the body"
5"She walked to it, crouched."
6"She stood, turned in a"
7"She crouched again, careful, and"
8"She'd seen something like it"
9"She'd told herself it was"
10"She'd told herself a lot"
11"She followed the angle of"
12"She didn't point it out"
13"She filed it the way"
14"she said, straightening"
ratio0.366
8.78% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount37
totalSentences41
matches
0"The tape came down easier"
1"She ducked under the frame"
2"DS Priya Nair straightened from"
3"Quinn said, stepping around a"
4"Nair wrinkled her nose"
5"Quinn crouched beside the body."
6"Torrance lay on his back,"
7"His skin held a blue-white"
8"Nair's tone stayed light, but"
9"Quinn reached into her coat"
10"The frost didn't melt under"
11"It sat there, stubborn, patterned"
12"Nair straightened, wiped her palms"
13"Quinn didn't answer."
14"She'd heard theories like that"
15"She looked past the body"
16"The floorboards near the far"
17"She walked to it, crouched."
18"Nair's boots scraped over as"
19"Quinn ran her finger along"
ratio0.902
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences41
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences18
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"She ducked under the frame and the cold hit her first — a wrongness of temperature that made the hair on her arms rise before her eyes adjusted to the dark."
1"Torrance lay on his back, arms flung wide, mouth open in a rictus that had nothing gentle about it."
2"It sat there, stubborn, patterned in whorls that looked almost deliberate, like something had been drawn and then erased."
3"The floorboards near the far wall had been swept clean, an oval patch scoured bare of the dust that coated everything else."
4"Scored into the wood, faint but unmistakable, was a series of interlocking lines, a pattern that curved back on itself like a knot with no beginning."
46.05% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"DS Priya Nair straightened, her torch beam cutting sideways through drifting motes of dust"
1"Nair's tone stayed, but her eyes flicked toward the frost and away again, quick, like she didn't want to look too long"
2"Quinn ran, not touching, just tracing the air above it"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.162
leniency0.324
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.2757%