Run: 2026-07-01-01KWE9KD1TZYWT1VDKPXFHP3VC

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36.3s
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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The neon sign buzzed green through the window, throwing a sickly glow across the row of bottles behind the bar. Rory wiped down the counter for the third time, more out of habit than need, when the door opened and let in a gust of cold October air and a woman she hadn't seen in six years. "Rory Carter." The woman stopped just inside the doorway, coat still buttoned, eyes doing that thing people's eyes did when they were recalculating everything they thought they knew. "As I live and breathe." Rory's hand stilled on the bar towel. Meg Prosser. Older now, obviously, but it was the stillness that threw her—Meg had never been still in her life. She'd been the girl who talked with her whole body, who filled a lecture hall with laughter just by walking in. "Meg." Rory came around the bar, unsure whether a hug was owed or wanted. "What the hell are you doing in Soho?" "Conference. Boring corporate law thing." Meg unbuttoned her coat slowly, like she was buying time to look at Rory properly. "I didn't know you worked in a bar." "I don't, exactly. I live upstairs. Help out some nights." "Right." Meg took a stool, set her bag down with the precision of someone used to expensive things. "Last I heard you were finishing your law degree. Prosecution track, you said. You were going to eat barristers alive." Rory poured two whiskies without being asked, because some things you remembered even after six years—Meg always drank whisky, neat, like it was a personality trait rather than a preference. "Things changed." "Things change." Meg turned the glass without drinking. Her nails were done, Rory noticed, a pale shade that probably had a name like "quiet luxury." "You disappeared, Ror. One day you're posting about mooting competitions, next day nothing. No calls. I rang your mum, she said you'd moved to London, wouldn't say why." "There wasn't a reason worth explaining over the phone." "There's always a reason." Rory leaned against the bar, feeling the old defensiveness climb up her spine, the same one that used to flare when her mother asked too many questions. "How's the practice going? You made partner, I saw. Prosser and someone." "Prosser, Higham and Ling. Yeah." Meg said it flat, no pride in it, which surprised Rory more than the announcement itself. "Forty-one years old and I've got my name on a building in Canary Wharf. Feels like someone else's achievement half the time." "Must be nice, though. The money." "The money's nice." Meg finally drank, wincing slightly. "The rest of it—" She didn't finish the sentence, just gestured vaguely with the glass, as if the rest of it existed somewhere in the space between them. Rory studied her old friend's face, trying to find the girl who'd once climbed through her dorm window at 2am with a bottle of cheap cider because they'd had a row about nothing and Meg refused to let a fight sit overnight. That girl's eyes were still there, somewhere behind the fine lines and the expensive concealer, but she'd learned to keep them guarded. Lawyer's eyes now. Careful eyes. "You look tired," Rory said. "You look different." Meg's gaze swept over her, cataloguing. "Thinner. Your hair's shorter." "Life happened." "That's not an answer, that's a deflection. You used to be terrible at deflecting, you know. Straight A student, straight talker. What happened to you, Ror?" Rory picked up a glass that didn't need cleaning and cleaned it anyway. Behind her, one of the regulars laughed too loud at something on the telly mounted in the corner, and for a second she was grateful for the noise, the excuse not to answer immediately. "There was someone," she said finally. "Evan. It got bad. I left." Meg's face did something complicated—concern warring with the careful blankness she'd probably practiced in a hundred client meetings. "Bad how?" "Bad enough that I don't talk about it in bars." "Fair." Meg nodded slowly, accepting the boundary the way lawyers accepted objections, with a kind of professional grace that still managed to sting. "I'm sorry. I wish you'd called. I would have—" "Would have what? Flown in from wherever you were and sorted it out with a strongly worded letter?" It came out sharper than she meant. Meg's mouth twitched, not quite a smile. "Maybe. I don't know. Something. Anything would've been better than six years of silence and finding out by accident that you're pulling pints in Soho." "I'm not pulling pints. I deliver Chinese food for a living, mostly. This is just—" Rory gestured at the bar, at the maps on the walls, at the whole strange life she'd built out of the wreckage of the one she'd planned. "This is just where I ended up." "You had a five-year plan, Rory. I remember it. Bar exam by twenty-six, junior position by twenty-seven—" "People change their plans." "Some people get their plans taken from them." Meg said it quietly, and for a moment the careful lawyer's face slipped, and Rory saw something underneath it that looked almost like grief. "I think about that sometimes. How much of what we become is choice, and how much is just—damage. Rerouting." Rory didn't answer. Outside, a bus hissed past the window, and somewhere behind the bar Silas moved through the back room, his slight limp audible even through the wall, a familiar rhythm she'd learned to find comforting. "I'm not unhappy," she said eventually. "That's the thing people never believe, but it's true. I'm not who I was going to be. But I'm not unhappy." "I believe you." Meg finished her whisky, set the glass down with a small, definitive click. "I just wish I'd known. That's all. I wish I'd been someone you called." "I wish a lot of things, Meg." They sat with that for a moment, the space between them thick with all the years and phone calls that never happened, all the versions of themselves that had drifted apart without ceremony, without a single goodbye to mark it. "Another?" Rory asked, lifting the bottle. Meg glanced at her watch, then at the door, then back at Rory with something unreadable crossing her face. "Yeah," she said. "One more. For old times."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
29.79% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"The woman stopped just [just]"
1"she said finally [finally]"
2"Meg nodded slowly [slowly]"
3"she said eventually [eventually]"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.383
leniency0.766
rawRatio0.222
effectiveRatio0.17
85.71% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1050
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
80.95% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1050
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"comforting"
count1
3
word"unreadable"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"familiar"
2"comforting"
3"unreadable"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences40
matches
0"was grateful"
71.43% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences40
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"managed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences68
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1046
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
26.92% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount650
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity2.46
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Meg"
discoveredNames
October1
Rory16
Prosser1
Meg16
Silas1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Prosser"
2"Meg"
3"Silas"
places(empty)
globalScore0.269
windowScore0.333
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences30
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"Older now, obviously, but it was the sti"
1"not quite a smile"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1046
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences68
matches
0"doing that thing"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean25.51
std17.36
cv0.68
sampleLengths
057
133
248
322
428
510
638
730
82
953
109
114
1239
1343
146
1536
1669
175
1813
192
2026
2147
2212
2320
2410
2532
2618
2714
2825
2949
3017
314
3251
3337
3427
3530
367
3740
386
3919
408
87.72% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences40
matches
0"was owed"
1"being asked"
80.95% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs112
matches
0"were recalculating"
1"was buying"
16.81% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences68
ratio0.044
matches
0"Older now, obviously, but it was the stillness that threw her—Meg had never been still in her life."
1"Rory poured two whiskies without being asked, because some things you remembered even after six years—Meg always drank whisky, neat, like it was a personality trait rather than a preference."
2"Meg's face did something complicated—concern warring with the careful blankness she'd probably practiced in a hundred client meetings."
85.63% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount653
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.05359877488514548
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.022970903522205207
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences68
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences68
mean15.38
std11.41
cv0.742
sampleLengths
020
137
228
35
47
52
618
721
814
98
1020
118
1210
1318
1420
1530
162
178
1845
199
204
2127
2212
2321
2422
256
268
2728
2842
2922
303
312
325
339
344
352
3626
3713
3834
396
406
4118
422
4310
4423
459
4618
477
487
4925
82.35% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.5735294117647058
totalSentences68
uniqueOpeners39
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences36
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount7
totalSentences36
matches
0"She'd been the girl who"
1"Her nails were done, Rory"
2"She didn't finish the sentence,"
3"she said finally"
4"It came out sharper than"
5"she said eventually"
6"They sat with that for"
ratio0.194
1.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount33
totalSentences36
matches
0"The neon sign buzzed green"
1"Rory wiped down the counter"
2"The woman stopped just inside"
3"Rory's hand stilled on the"
4"She'd been the girl who"
5"Rory came around the bar,"
6"Meg unbuttoned her coat slowly,"
7"Meg took a stool, set"
8"Rory poured two whiskies without"
9"Meg turned the glass without"
10"Her nails were done, Rory"
11"Rory leaned against the bar,"
12"Meg said it flat, no"
13"Meg finally drank, wincing slightly"
14"She didn't finish the sentence,"
15"Rory studied her old friend's"
16"That girl's eyes were still"
17"Lawyer's eyes now."
18"Meg's gaze swept over her,"
19"Rory picked up a glass"
ratio0.917
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences36
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences14
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Older now, obviously, but it was the stillness that threw her—Meg had never been still in her life."
1"Rory studied her old friend's face, trying to find the girl who'd once climbed through her dorm window at 2am with a bottle of cheap cider because they'd had a …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.149
leniency0.298
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
73.0248%