Run: 2026-07-01-01KWE9N1YPVGVNE7FK5579JGHT

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Duration:
31.3s
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$0.023666
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Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest smelled the same as always—old whisky and older paper, the maps on the walls gone amber under decades of pipe smoke that had stopped rising years before Rory ever set foot inside. She wiped down the bar top for the third time, more out of habit than need, when the door swung open and a gust of October air brought someone she hadn't seen in six years. Eva stood in the doorway like she was deciding whether to stay. "Rory Carter," she said, "still slumming it in bars." Rory set the rag down slow, taking her in. The Eva she remembered from Cardiff had chewed her nails and worn charity shop jumpers three sizes too big, hair always scraped back in a bun that was falling apart by noon. This Eva wore a coat that probably cost more than Rory made in a month, hair sleek and blonde-streaked, a watch on her wrist that caught the low light. "I work here," Rory said. "Not the same as slumming." "Didn't mean it like that." Eva came to the bar, perched on a stool, looked around at the black-and-white photographs like she was cataloguing them. "God, this place. Silas still own it?" "Silas still owns everything round here, one way or another." "Get me a gin and tonic, then. For old times." Rory made the drink without being asked twice, hands moving through the motions while she watched Eva's face in the mirror behind the bottles. Something had hardened there, around the eyes. The Eva who used to ring her at midnight crying about coursework didn't sit like this, spine straight, chin up, like she was performing being fine. "Last I heard you were in London for real work," Rory said, sliding the glass over. "Journalism, wasn't it?" "Was." Eva turned the glass a quarter turn, not drinking yet. "Freelanced for a couple of years. Wasn't paying rent, so." "So?" "So I found something that paid rent." Eva's smile didn't reach past her mouth. "PR now. Corporate stuff. Boring, but boring's underrated when you've been broke." "You hated corporate stuff. You used to say people who worked in PR should have their souls audited." "Did I say that?" Eva laughed, short and dry. "God, I was insufferable." "You were funny." "Same thing, back then." Rory poured herself a small glass of the good whisky, the one Silas kept for himself and pretended not to notice when she took from. She needed something to do with her hands that wasn't reaching across the bar toward the girl who used to sneak her out of her parents' house through the kitchen window, the girl who'd told her to run to London when Evan's hand had left marks on her wrist that took weeks to fade. "You're the reason I'm here, you know," Rory said. "This city. This life." "I remember." Eva's fingers tightened slightly on the glass. "You alright now? After everything?" "Better. Cheung pays me under the table for deliveries, I've got the flat upstairs, Silas looks out for me in his own strange way." Rory shrugged. "It's not what I thought I'd be doing at twenty-five, but it's mine." "That sounds nice," Eva said, and there was something underneath it, something that sounded almost like envy, which made no sense coming from a woman in a coat that cost more than Rory's rent. "Does it?" "I don't know what I'm doing anymore, Rory." Eva said it fast, like she needed to get it out before she thought better of it. "I sit in meetings all day telling companies how to apologise for things they're not sorry for. I go home to a flat I never redecorated because I'm never there long enough to care. I haven't written anything that wasn't a press release in four years." "You could still—" "Could I?" Eva looked at her properly then, and Rory saw it, the tiredness under the good haircut and the expensive coat. "You left everything behind and built something real. I stayed and built nothing at all." "That's not fair to yourself." "Isn't it?" Eva took a drink finally, longer than the first sip warranted. "You used to tell me I was going to change the world. Front page stuff, you said. Investigations. I used to believe you." "You still could." "Maybe." The word came out flat, unconvinced, and it struck something in Rory, a familiar ache, because she'd used that same tone once, in this exact bar, telling Silas she'd think about staying in London permanently when she'd already decided to stay the moment she walked through his door. "When did you stop believing it?" Rory asked. Eva was quiet a moment, turning the glass again, watching the ice shift. "Somewhere between the second redundancy and the flat I couldn't afford without a flatmate," she said. "It's not one moment. It's just—time. It gets away from you. You blink and you're thirty-one and you're good at something you never wanted to be good at, and you don't remember exactly when you traded the thing you wanted for the thing that paid." Rory thought of Evan's hand around her wrist, of the crescent scar underneath it from years before that, two different kinds of damage layered over the same skin. She thought about how easy it would have been to stay in Cardiff, to keep being someone's afterthought, if Eva hadn't rung her that one night and told her to get out, to run, to become someone else entirely. "You saved my life once," Rory said. "You know that." "I made a phone call." "You made a phone call at two in the morning and then you didn't stop calling until I actually left. That's not nothing, Eva." Eva's eyes were wet, though she blinked it back fast, the way people did who'd trained themselves out of crying in public. "I'm glad it worked for you," she said. "One of us, at least." "It's not too late for you to want something again." "Isn't it, though?" Eva finished the gin in one motion, set the glass down harder than necessary. "You always did believe in second chances more than I did." "Someone believed in mine." Eva looked at her for a long moment, something passing behind her eyes that Rory couldn't quite name—grief, maybe, or the particular exhaustion of watching someone else's life turn out better than yours. "Another?" Rory asked, nodding at the empty glass. "Go on, then," Eva said. "For old times."
created_at"2026-07-01T07:35:17.216Z" 7/1/2026, 7:35:17 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Eva's fingers tightened slightly [slightly]"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.434
leniency0.868
rawRatio0.043
effectiveRatio0.038
95.40% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1087
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
95.40% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1087
totalAiIsms1
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences38
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences38
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences69
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1084
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount615
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity3.25
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Rory17
October1
Eva20
Cardiff2
Silas2
London1
Evan1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
4"Silas"
5"Evan"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
globalScore0
windowScore0
60.71% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences28
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite name—grief, maybe, or the particular exhaustion of watching someone else's life turn out better than yours"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.923
wordCount1084
matches
0"not what I thought I'd be doing at twenty-five, but it's mine"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean24.09
std22.03
cv0.914
sampleLengths
070
112
29
370
410
532
610
710
857
919
1021
111
1226
1318
1413
153
164
1779
1813
1914
2039
2134
222
2371
243
2537
265
2736
283
2949
308
3113
3261
3367
3410
355
3624
3722
3813
3910
4028
414
4233
438
448
96.03% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences38
matches
0"being asked"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs113
matches
0"was deciding"
1"was falling"
2"was cataloguing"
3"was performing"
60.04% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences69
ratio0.029
matches
0"The Raven's Nest smelled the same as always—old whisky and older paper, the maps on the walls gone amber under decades of pipe smoke that had stopped rising years before Rory ever set foot inside."
1"Eva looked at her for a long moment, something passing behind her eyes that Rory couldn't quite name—grief, maybe, or the particular exhaustion of watching someone else's life turn out better than yours."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount568
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.035211267605633804
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.00528169014084507
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences69
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences69
mean15.71
std12.74
cv0.811
sampleLengths
035
135
212
39
49
532
629
75
85
925
107
1110
1210
1324
147
1526
1616
173
1811
1910
201
2114
2212
2318
249
254
263
274
2825
2954
309
314
329
335
3426
3513
3634
372
3825
3946
403
4122
4215
435
4413
4523
463
4749
488
4913
77.29% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.5072463768115942
totalSentences69
uniqueOpeners35
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences29
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount3
totalSentences29
matches
0"She wiped down the bar"
1"She needed something to do"
2"She thought about how easy"
ratio0.103
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount29
totalSentences29
matches
0"The Raven's Nest smelled the"
1"She wiped down the bar"
2"Eva stood in the doorway"
3"Rory set the rag down"
4"The Eva she remembered from"
5"This Eva wore a coat"
6"Eva came to the bar,"
7"Rory made the drink without"
8"Something had hardened there, around"
9"The Eva who used to"
10"Rory said, sliding the glass"
11"Eva turned the glass a"
12"Eva's smile didn't reach past"
13"Eva laughed, short and dry"
14"Rory poured herself a small"
15"She needed something to do"
16"Eva's fingers tightened slightly on"
17"Eva said, and there was"
18"Eva said it fast, like"
19"Eva looked at her properly"
ratio1
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences29
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences13
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The Raven's Nest smelled the same as always—old whisky and older paper, the maps on the walls gone amber under decades of pipe smoke that had stopped rising yea…"
1"This Eva wore a coat that probably cost more than Rory made in a month, hair sleek and blonde-streaked, a watch on her wrist that caught the low light."
2"The Eva who used to ring her at midnight crying about coursework didn't sit like this, spine straight, chin up, like she was performing being fine."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Eva turned, not drinking yet"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Eva laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.245
leniency0.491
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.038
76.1627%