Run: 2026-07-01-01KWE9PESBB3NG3FZEJJXKGG62

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The three deadbolts took Rory longer than usual to work through, her fingers clumsy with sleep, and when she finally hauled the door open the words she'd been rehearsing for the takeaway delivery she'd assumed was late died somewhere behind her teeth. Lucien Moreau stood on Eva's landing in a charcoal suit that looked absurdly, deliberately out of place against the peeling wallpaper and the smell of curry drifting up from below. His cane was hooked over one forearm. His amber eye caught the hallway light; the black one gave nothing back at all. "You look terrible," he said, which was such a Lucien thing to say that for a moment she almost laughed. "It's two in the morning." "Is it." He glanced past her into the flat, at the towers of books leaning against Eva's bookshelves like drunks propping each other up, at Ptolemy the cat glaring at him from the arm of the sofa with the ancient contempt cats reserve for people they've decided are trouble. "I did knock. Gently. I thought that was rather considerate of me." "You didn't knock. You never knock." Rory pulled her cardigan tighter across her chest, suddenly aware of how thin the fabric was, how her hair was doing whatever it wanted after six hours of sleep. She hated that some old instinct in her still cared what he thought of how she looked. "What are you doing here, Lucien?" "May I come in?" "That's not an answer." "No," he agreed, "it isn't." She should have said no. She'd promised herself, the last time — six weeks ago now, in the back room of his club with his hand still warm against her jaw and his voice low and careful as he told her it would be easier, safer, better, if they simply didn't — that she wouldn't let him talk his way back into a room with her. It had taken her three days to stop crying over it. It had taken her three weeks to stop being angry. She wasn't sure which had been worse. But he looked wrong, standing there. Not his clothes — his clothes were always immaculate, a small tyranny he inflicted on the world — but something underneath them. A tightness around his mouth. The way his good hand kept finding the ivory head of his cane and gripping it like it was the only solid thing left in the world. "You're hurt," she said, and stepped back from the door before she'd decided to. "I'm fine." "You're lying, and you're bad at it, which frankly I've always found endearing." She flicked the hall light on properly and got a better look at him: a thin dark line at his collar that might have been blood, the faint unsteadiness in how he set his weight. "Sit down before you fall down. Honestly." He sat, because apparently even half-demon fixers who ran London's underworld information trade knew better than to argue with a woman holding a kettle like a weapon. Ptolemy abandoned the sofa arm in a show of aristocratic disgust and vanished into Eva's bedroom. "Talk," Rory said, filling the kettle at the sink because her hands needed something to do besides shake. "There's very little to say." "There's an enormous amount to say, Lucien, we just haven't said any of it, which is different." She set the kettle down harder than she meant to. "Six weeks. You don't call, you don't send one of your little errand boys, and then you turn up at gone two in the morning bleeding on my best friend's sofa like this is completely normal." "I didn't know where else to go." It came out quieter than anything she'd heard from him before, stripped of the usual polish, the practiced charm he wore the way other men wore cologne. "That's — that's the truth, Rory. I have safehouses. I have people who owe me favors going back a decade. And I stood outside three of them tonight and I couldn't make myself go in, and I ended up here instead, which should tell you something, though God knows what." She turned around slowly. In the lamplight his face looked younger, unguarded in a way she'd only seen once or twice before — the night in Marseille when he'd talked about his mother, the morning after, when he thought she was still asleep and had looked at her like she was something he couldn't quite believe was real. "It tells me you're an idiot who doesn't take care of himself," she said, but there wasn't much heat in it. "That's certainly part of it." "What happened?" "A disagreement. With people who did not appreciate my particular talents for negotiation." His mouth twitched, not quite a smile. "I'll live. Probably. I would appreciate not bleeding on the upholstery in the meantime, if you have anything resembling a first aid kit in this glorified library." She found the kit under the bathroom sink, and when she came back he'd shrugged out of his jacket, and the shirt beneath was worse than she'd let herself imagine — a long, ugly gash along his ribs, already stiffening at the edges. Her stomach dropped. "Lucien —" "It looks worse than it is." "It looks like you should be in a hospital." "Hospitals ask questions I can't answer." He watched her kneel in front of him, watched her hands go careful and quick as she cleaned the wound, and something in his face cracked open, just slightly, just enough. "You're angry with me." "I'm furious with you." "I know." "You left. You told me it would be easier and then you just — left, and I spent three weeks trying to convince myself I didn't care, and I still don't know if I managed it." Her voice wavered and she hated that too, hated how easily he still found the soft places in her. "And now you're bleeding on my sofa and I'm still the one you came to." "You were always the one I came to," he said. "That was rather the problem." She didn't have an answer for that. She pressed the gauze to his side instead, harder than necessary, and he winced, and neither of them looked away.
created_at"2026-07-01T07:36:03.128Z" 7/1/2026, 7:36:03 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
66.22% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1036
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"deliberately"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
4
adverb"completely"
count1
5
adverb"slowly"
count1
6
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"deliberately"
1"gently"
2"suddenly"
3"very"
4"completely"
5"slowly"
6"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
75.87% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1036
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"flicked"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"charm"
count1
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"wavered"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"weight"
2"charm"
3"stomach"
4"wavered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences36
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences36
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences57
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen60
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1044
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount703
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.43
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory3
Moreau1
Eva3
Lucien2
Ptolemy2
London1
Marseille1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
3"Lucien"
places
0"London"
1"Marseille"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences30
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"e sat, because apparently even half-demon fix"
1"quite believe was real"
2"not quite a smile"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1044
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences57
matches
0"hated that some"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean30.71
std26.95
cv0.878
sampleLengths
042
152
220
35
461
558
64
74
85
994
1060
1114
122
1355
1443
1518
165
1763
1884
1958
2021
215
222
2347
2446
252
266
279
2841
294
302
3170
3215
3327
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences36
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs117
matches
0"was doing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences57
ratio0.088
matches
0"His amber eye caught the hallway light; the black one gave nothing back at all."
1"She'd promised herself, the last time — six weeks ago now, in the back room of his club with his hand still warm against her jaw and his voice low and careful as he told her it would be easier, safer, better, if they simply didn't — that she wouldn't let him talk his way back into a room with her."
2"Not his clothes — his clothes were always immaculate, a small tyranny he inflicted on the world — but something underneath them."
3"In the lamplight his face looked younger, unguarded in a way she'd only seen once or twice before — the night in Marseille when he'd talked about his mother, the morning after, when he thought she was still asleep and had looked at her like she was something he couldn't quite believe was real."
4"She found the kit under the bathroom sink, and when she came back he'd shrugged out of his jacket, and the shirt beneath was worse than she'd let herself imagine — a long, ugly gash along his ribs, already stiffening at the edges."
97.12% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount693
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.04329004329004329
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.015873015873015872
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences57
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences57
mean18.32
std16.22
cv0.885
sampleLengths
042
130
27
315
420
55
649
712
835
917
106
114
124
135
145
1561
1611
1710
187
196
2022
215
2227
2314
242
2548
267
2727
2816
2918
305
3127
3236
3334
3450
354
3654
3721
385
392
4020
4127
4243
433
442
456
469
4737
484
494
60.82% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.43859649122807015
totalSentences57
uniqueOpeners25
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences34
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences34
matches
0"His cane was hooked over"
1"His amber eye caught the"
2"he said, which was such"
3"He glanced past her into"
4"She hated that some old"
5"She should have said no."
6"She'd promised herself, the last"
7"It had taken her three"
8"It had taken her three"
9"She wasn't sure which had"
10"she said, and stepped back"
11"She flicked the hall light"
12"He sat, because apparently even"
13"She set the kettle down"
14"It came out quieter than"
15"She turned around slowly."
16"she said, but there wasn't"
17"His mouth twitched, not quite"
18"She found the kit under"
19"Her stomach dropped."
ratio0.706
4.12% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount31
totalSentences34
matches
0"The three deadbolts took Rory"
1"Lucien Moreau stood on Eva's"
2"His cane was hooked over"
3"His amber eye caught the"
4"he said, which was such"
5"He glanced past her into"
6"Rory pulled her cardigan tighter"
7"She hated that some old"
8"She should have said no."
9"She'd promised herself, the last"
10"It had taken her three"
11"It had taken her three"
12"She wasn't sure which had"
13"A tightness around his mouth."
14"The way his good hand"
15"she said, and stepped back"
16"She flicked the hall light"
17"He sat, because apparently even"
18"Ptolemy abandoned the sofa arm"
19"Rory said, filling the kettle"
ratio0.912
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences34
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences14
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Lucien Moreau stood on Eva's landing in a charcoal suit that looked absurdly, deliberately out of place against the peeling wallpaper and the smell of curry dri…"
1"He sat, because apparently even half-demon fixers who ran London's underworld information trade knew better than to argue with a woman holding a kettle like a w…"
89.29% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"His mouth twitched, not quite a smile"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.171
leniency0.343
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.057
74.4748%