Run: 2026-07-01-01KWE9Q0Z00RV2EX632WNXJT5K

Run Details

Duration:
34.6s
Cost:
$0.025534
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The three deadbolts took Rory longer than they should have, her fingers fumbling over the last one when she heard the knock again—soft, unhurried, like whoever stood there had all the time in the world. She yanked the door open with a curse already forming. Lucien stood in the hallway, rain darkening the shoulders of his charcoal suit, cane resting against his leg like an afterthought. "You didn't return my calls," he said. "I didn't return your calls because I don't have your number anymore. I deleted it. Along with several photos, a scarf you left, and about a month of dignity." "Charming as ever." "What do you want, Lucien?" He looked past her into the flat, at Ptolemy stretched across a pile of Eva's research notes, at the chaos of scrolls and half-empty mugs. "Is Eva home?" "No. She's out. Which means you can say whatever you came to say and then leave." "May I come in? The hallway smells like someone's frying fish, and I find it distracting." Rory held the door another second, weighing the satisfaction of shutting it in his face against the practical matter of Eva's neighbours already gossiping about strange visitors. She stepped back and let him pass, close enough that his shoulder brushed hers, close enough that she caught the scent of him—cedar and something underneath it she'd never been able to name, something not quite human. "You look well," he said, setting the cane against the wall. "You look like you're stalling." "I am stalling. Old habits." She crossed her arms, put the width of the coffee table between them like it might do something useful. "Three months, Lucien. Three months and not a word, and now you're standing in Eva's flat commenting on fish smells." "I was working. There was a situation in Southwark that required my full attention." "There's always a situation." "That's rather the nature of my work, yes." "That's not what I meant." She sat on the arm of the sofa, not quite sitting, not quite standing, poised like she might still throw him out. "I meant you always have a situation when it's convenient. When things get complicated between us, suddenly Southwark needs you. Suddenly there's a client. Suddenly you're four languages deep in someone else's problem and I'm the one left standing in your flat wondering if I imagined the whole thing." "You didn't imagine it." "Then what was it?" He didn't answer right away. He walked to the window instead, looked down at the wet street, at the curry house sign blinking red through the drizzle. Ptolemy uncurled and padded over to investigate his shoes. "I panicked," he said finally. "There. Is that satisfying?" "Not particularly." "I've spent thirty-two years being very good at reading people, Aurora. Knowing exactly what they want, what they're hiding, what they'll do next. And then you—" He stopped, exhaled through his nose. "You I couldn't read. I still can't. It's unsettling for a man who makes his living on certainty." "So you left." "I retreated. There's a difference." "There isn't, actually. Not from where I was standing." He turned from the window. In the grey light his eyes looked stranger than usual, the amber gone dull, the black one darker still. "I came here to apologise. I realise it's overdue." "You came here because Eva's not answering her phone either and you need information, don't you? Something's happened." The pause told her everything. "Unbelievable." She stood, the sofa arm creaking under released weight. "You couldn't even manage a clean apology. There's always an angle with you." "There is a situation," he admitted. "A client of mine has gone missing. Eva has research I need. But that isn't why I knocked on this door instead of ringing the bell downstairs and asking the barman to fetch her." "Then why?" "Because I wanted to see you. And I told myself I could manage seeing you without saying anything I'd regret, and I have already failed at that within five minutes of you opening the door." Rory studied him, arms still crossed, though something in her shoulders had loosened. "You're doing the thing where you talk in circles until I feel sorry for you." "Is it working?" "No." "Pity." She almost laughed—caught it before it fully surfaced, turned it into something closer to a scowl. "You hurt me, Lucien. Not the leaving. The way you left. Like I was a problem you'd solved and moved past." "You were never a problem." His voice lost its polish for a moment, something rawer underneath. "You were the one thing I couldn't solve. I didn't know what to do with that, so I did what I've always done. I disappeared before anyone could see me fail at something that mattered." The rain picked up outside, drumming against the window glass. Ptolemy gave up on Lucien's shoes and jumped onto the sofa, unbothered by the tension thickening the room. "That's the most honest thing you've said to me in a year," Rory said. "I'm aware. It's costing me considerably." "Good. You should feel it cost something." "I do." He took a step closer, stopped himself, hand tightening on the cane he hadn't picked back up. "For what it's worth, Aurora—and I understand it may not be worth much—I've regretted it since the door closed behind me. I simply didn't have the nerve to say so until a missing client gave me an excuse to knock." "That's a pathetic excuse for an excuse." "I never claimed otherwise." She looked at him a long moment, at the rain-damp hair falling slightly out of its slick, at the tightness around his mouth that hadn't been there three months ago. Whatever she'd built in his absence—the careful walls, the deleted number, the practiced indifference—none of it collapsed, not entirely, but something in the mortar gave. "Eva keeps her research in the second bedroom," she said. "I'll get the file for you. But this doesn't fix anything, Lucien. Don't mistake me helping you for forgiveness." "I wouldn't dare." "You'd dare. You'd absolutely dare." She moved past him toward the hallway, close enough again that neither of them quite breathed normally. "But not tonight."
created_at"2026-07-01T07:36:21.741Z" 7/1/2026, 7:36:21 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.226
leniency0.453
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.038
75.94% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1039
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count3
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"very"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
85.56% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1039
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"tension"
count1
2
word"absolutely"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"tension"
2"absolutely"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences31
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences31
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences72
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen49
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1032
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions11
wordCount452
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity0.88
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory4
Ptolemy3
Eva2
Lucien2
persons
0"Rory"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Eva"
3"Lucien"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences23
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"not quite human"
1"not quite sitting, not quite standing, poised like she might still throw him out"
2"not quite standing, poised like she might still throw him out"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.969
wordCount1032
matches
0"not entirely, but something in the mortar gave"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean20.24
std18.96
cv0.937
sampleLengths
045
121
27
329
43
55
628
716
816
964
1011
115
125
1339
1414
154
168
1776
184
194
2036
219
222
2350
243
255
269
2733
2818
295
3023
3140
322
3335
3428
353
361
371
3837
3951
4028
4114
426
437
4459
457
464
4755
4829
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences31
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs83
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences72
ratio0.056
matches
0"The three deadbolts took Rory longer than they should have, her fingers fumbling over the last one when she heard the knock again—soft, unhurried, like whoever stood there had all the time in the world."
1"She stepped back and let him pass, close enough that his shoulder brushed hers, close enough that she caught the scent of him—cedar and something underneath it she'd never been able to name, something not quite human."
2"She almost laughed—caught it before it fully surfaced, turned it into something closer to a scowl."
3"Whatever she'd built in his absence—the careful walls, the deleted number, the practiced indifference—none of it collapsed, not entirely, but something in the mortar gave."
87.34% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount459
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.054466230936819175
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.010893246187363835
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences72
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences72
mean14.33
std11.13
cv0.776
sampleLengths
035
110
221
37
429
53
65
725
83
916
1016
1127
1237
1311
145
155
1619
1720
1814
194
208
2127
2249
234
244
255
2622
279
285
294
302
3132
3218
333
345
359
365
3719
389
3918
405
4110
4213
436
4434
452
4635
4713
4815
493
58.80% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.4027777777777778
totalSentences72
uniqueOpeners29
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences27
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences27
matches
0"She yanked the door open"
1"He looked past her into"
2"She stepped back and let"
3"he said, setting the cane"
4"She crossed her arms, put"
5"She sat on the arm"
6"He didn't answer right away."
7"He walked to the window"
8"he said finally"
9"He stopped, exhaled through his"
10"He turned from the window."
11"She stood, the sofa arm"
12"She almost laughed—caught it before"
13"His voice lost its polish"
14"He took a step closer,"
15"She looked at him a"
16"She moved past him toward"
ratio0.63
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount26
totalSentences27
matches
0"The three deadbolts took Rory"
1"She yanked the door open"
2"Lucien stood in the hallway,"
3"He looked past her into"
4"Rory held the door another"
5"She stepped back and let"
6"he said, setting the cane"
7"She crossed her arms, put"
8"She sat on the arm"
9"He didn't answer right away."
10"He walked to the window"
11"Ptolemy uncurled and padded over"
12"he said finally"
13"He stopped, exhaled through his"
14"He turned from the window."
15"The pause told her everything."
16"She stood, the sofa arm"
17"Rory studied him, arms still"
18"She almost laughed—caught it before"
19"His voice lost its polish"
ratio0.963
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences27
matches(empty)
ratio0
95.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences15
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She looked at him a long moment, at the rain-damp hair falling slightly out of its slick, at the tightness around his mouth that hadn't been there three months …"
83.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She stood, the sofa arm creaking under released weight"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.113
leniency0.226
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.038
76.2070%