Run: 2026-07-01-01KWE9QFW1GW3TBM0X9SEEAN9Z

Run Details

Duration:
34.4s
Cost:
$0.025186
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain streaked the window of The Raven's Nest, turning the green neon sign outside into a smear of watercolour. Rory wiped down the bar top with the same rag she'd used for the last hour, more out of habit than necessity. Silas was in the back, doing whatever Silas did when he disappeared behind that bookshelf, and the place had settled into the hush that came after the after-work crowd cleared out and before the night crowd arrived. The door opened. Rory didn't look up right away—just registered the bell, the gust of wet air, the shuffle of boots on the mat. "Bloody hell, it is you." She looked up. A woman stood there dripping, dark curls flattened to her forehead, an old denim jacket soaked through at the shoulders. It took Rory a second—the face had thinned out, the eyes had gone tired in a way that hadn't been there before—but then it clicked. "Meg?" "Don't sound so surprised, I know I look like death's cousin." Rory came round the bar, and they hugged, awkward at first, then not. Meg smelled like cigarettes and rain and something chemical underneath, like hospital soap that hadn't quite washed out. "What are you doing in London? Last I heard you were still in Cardiff, doing the—" Rory stopped herself, not sure where the sentence was going. "The teaching thing. Yeah. That didn't last." Meg peeled off her jacket and draped it over a stool, then sat before Rory could offer. Up close, the changes were harder to ignore. She'd always been the loud one, the one who talked with her hands and laughed too hard at her own jokes, cheeks always a little flushed like she'd just run somewhere. Now her hands sat still on the bar top. Her jaw had a tightness to it, like she was holding something behind her teeth. "You look good," Meg said, and there was no bitterness in it, just a flat observation. "London's done you well." "It's done something to me, anyway." Rory reached for a glass. "What'll you have?" "Whatever's cheap." Rory poured a whisky, more than she should have for a first drink, and set it down without being asked. "On the house. Least I can do for six years." "Seven, actually." Meg took a sip, winced. "Since your going-away thing. The one at the Owain Glyndŵr, remember, where Ffion fell off the bar trying to do that toast?" "I remember thinking I'd never laugh that hard again." "Have you?" Rory considered it. "Sometimes. Different kind of laughing, though." Meg turned the glass in slow circles on the wood, watching the amber catch the light from the bulb overhead. "You look like you've got your life sorted. Nice bar, nice city. Still doing the law thing?" "God, no." Rory almost laughed. "I deliver Chinese food part-time. Long story." "That's not what your mam told my mam." "My mam tells your mam a lot of things that aren't strictly accurate." Meg's mouth twitched, something like the old smile trying to surface and not quite managing it. She looked down at her hands instead. "I heard about Evan," she said. "Sorry. I should've called. I always meant to call." Rory's jaw tightened, just slightly, the rag going still in her hand. "It's fine. Long time ago now." "Is it, though? Feels like yesterday to me, most days. Everything from back then does. Like it's stuck." Meg took another drink, longer this time. "Can't work out if that's better or worse than what you've done. Moving on. Making a whole new life." "It wasn't a straight line, Meg. It never is." "No. Suppose not." Meg's eyes drifted to the old maps on the wall, the black-and-white photographs of streets that didn't exist anymore, or existed differently. "You always were the clever one. Quick on your feet. I used to hate that about you, you know. Just a bit." "I didn't know that." "Course you didn't. You were too busy being clever to notice." It came out without malice, more like an old ache being pressed to see if it still hurt. It clearly did. Rory poured herself a small measure, something to do with her hands. "What happened, Meg? After the teaching." Meg's laugh had no humour in it, just breath. "Life happened. Money happened. A bloke happened, and then didn't happen anymore, and by the time I looked up I was thirty-one and living with my sister and picking up work wherever people didn't ask too many questions." She said it fast, like ripping off a plaster. "I'm not looking for pity. Just explaining the maths of how you end up somewhere you didn't plan to be." "I'm not pitying you." "You are a bit. It's in your face." Rory didn't argue. She refilled Meg's glass instead, and this one Meg didn't drink so fast. "Do you ever think about it?" Meg asked. "How we all used to talk about what we'd be. You were going to be some hotshot barrister, terrifying juries. I was going to write novels nobody read but everyone pretended to." She shook her head slowly. "Feels like we were talking about two other people." "Maybe we were," Rory said. "Maybe that's the point. You don't get to stay who you were at twenty-two." "Some people do." "No. They just get better at pretending." Meg looked at her properly then, searching her face for something, and whatever she found made her shoulders drop half an inch, some tension leaving her that Rory hadn't noticed until it was gone. "You've changed too, then. Underneath the good haircut and the London polish." "Everybody's got a Prague," Rory said, before she could stop herself, thinking of Silas, of what he never said out loud but wore in his knee and his eyes. "What?" "Nothing. Old joke. Doesn't translate." The bell over the door rang again, and a group came in shaking umbrellas, loud with the relief of getting out of the rain. Rory glanced toward them, then back to Meg, who was already gathering her damp jacket like she expected to be sent off. "You don't have to go," Rory said. "I know." Meg stood anyway, but slower than before, like she was giving Rory the chance to ask her to stay properly. "Just—habit. Never did learn how to sit still in a place that's warm." "Stay for one more. I'll close up in an hour, we can talk properly. Not this—" Rory gestured vaguely between them. "Not this stepping around everything." Meg looked at the door, then at the stool, then sat back down, slower this time, like she was allowing herself something she'd decided not to want. "One more," she said. "For old times." "For old times," Rory said, and poured.
created_at"2026-07-01T07:36:37.006Z" 7/1/2026, 7:36:37 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Meg stood anyway [anyway]"
1"Rory gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences55
tagDensity0.327
leniency0.655
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.073
91.17% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1133
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
95.59% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1133
totalAiIsms1
found
0
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences49
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences49
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences85
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1129
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount647
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity3.25
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Meg"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Silas3
Rory21
Meg16
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
4"Meg"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences33
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite washed out"
1"smelled like cigarettes and rain and somet"
2"something like the old smile trying to surfa"
3"not quite managing it"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1129
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean22.14
std19.83
cv0.896
sampleLengths
078
124
25
348
41
511
631
726
87
980
1020
1114
122
1320
1410
1529
169
172
189
1937
2012
218
2213
2323
2415
2518
2644
279
2847
294
3032
3118
3276
334
348
3516
3654
3719
383
397
4046
4129
421
435
4446
457
4635
4726
4827
497
83.78% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences49
matches
0"being asked"
1"being pressed"
2"was gone"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs128
matches
0"was going"
1"was holding"
2"was already gathering"
3"was giving"
4"was allowing"
75.63% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences85
ratio0.024
matches
0"Rory didn't look up right away—just registered the bell, the gust of wet air, the shuffle of boots on the mat."
1"It took Rory a second—the face had thinned out, the eyes had gone tired in a way that hadn't been there before—but then it clicked."
77.38% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount653
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.06584992343032159
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.010719754977029096
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences85
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences85
mean13.28
std9.71
cv0.731
sampleLengths
019
122
237
33
421
55
63
720
825
91
1011
1113
1218
1326
147
1517
168
1731
189
1915
2016
214
2211
233
242
2520
2610
277
2822
299
302
313
326
3320
3417
355
367
378
3813
3916
407
416
429
4312
446
4525
4619
479
4825
4922
82.75% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.5176470588235295
totalSentences85
uniqueOpeners44
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences44
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount10
totalSentences44
matches
0"She looked up."
1"It took Rory a second—the"
2"She'd always been the loud"
3"Her jaw had a tightness"
4"She looked down at her"
5"It came out without malice,"
6"It clearly did."
7"She said it fast, like"
8"She refilled Meg's glass instead,"
9"She shook her head slowly"
ratio0.227
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount42
totalSentences44
matches
0"Rain streaked the window of"
1"Rory wiped down the bar"
2"Silas was in the back,"
3"The door opened."
4"Rory didn't look up right"
5"She looked up."
6"A woman stood there dripping,"
7"It took Rory a second—the"
8"Rory came round the bar,"
9"Meg smelled like cigarettes and"
10"Rory stopped herself, not sure"
11"Meg peeled off her jacket"
12"She'd always been the loud"
13"Her jaw had a tightness"
14"Meg said, and there was"
15"Rory reached for a glass"
16"Rory poured a whisky, more"
17"Meg took a sip, winced"
18"Rory considered it."
19"Meg turned the glass in"
ratio0.955
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences44
matches
0"Now her hands sat still"
ratio0.023
74.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Silas was in the back, doing whatever Silas did when he disappeared behind that bookshelf, and the place had settled into the hush that came after the after-wor…"
1"Meg smelled like cigarettes and rain and something chemical underneath, like hospital soap that hadn't quite washed out."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences55
tagDensity0.164
leniency0.327
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.3709%