Run: 2026-07-01-01KWE9VMSNJW689PM0B9A1GGAZ

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Duration:
38.8s
Cost:
$0.026968
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the pavement outside Camden Lock, turning the cobbles slick and black under the sodium lights. Quinn's boots hit the ground hard, water splashing up her trouser legs as she rounded the corner after the man in the grey coat. He'd been quick on the CCTV footage too, ducking cameras like he knew exactly where they were mounted. "Police! Stop!" He didn't stop. He never did, not the ones worth chasing. Quinn's lungs burned, eighteen years of desk work and long stakeouts catching up with her knees, but she pushed through the ache. The man cut left down an alley stinking of bin juice and wet cardboard, and she followed, palm brushing the brick to keep her balance on the uneven ground. "You're making this worse for yourself," she called, though she doubted he cared. Men like him rarely did. He glanced back once. Pale face, dark eyes, something wrong about the way the streetlight didn't quite catch in his pupils. Quinn filed that detail away the way she filed away everything strange these days — carefully, without comment, the way you'd handle a live wire. The alley spat them out onto a service road running behind a row of shuttered shops. He was fifty feet ahead now, coat flapping like a broken wing, and Quinn's radio crackled uselessly against her hip. No backup for six blocks. She'd called it in but the response cars were snarled somewhere on the high street, drowned by traffic and rain. "Last chance," she said, mostly to herself. He dropped down a set of stairs she hadn't noticed, an old maintenance entrance sunk below street level, rusted railing slick with condensation. Quinn skidded to the top of the steps and looked down into darkness thick as tar. Camden Town station, disused, the one that had been closed off since the seventies for reasons the transport authority never fully explained. She knew the file. Everyone at the Yard knew the file, the one nobody read past the first page because the first page made your skin crawl and the rest didn't make sense. The man's footsteps echoed down there, unhurried now, like he knew she'd hesitate. Quinn's watch caught the streetlight, its leather strap dark with rain. Three years since Morris went into a place like this. Three years since she'd stood over an empty platform at two in the morning, radio silent, evidence log blank, and told his wife she didn't know what had happened to him. She still didn't know. That was the part that kept her up nights, more than the guilt. Not knowing. She thought about turning around. Radioing it in properly, sealing the entrance, letting the specialist units — whoever the hell they were, she'd heard whispers of a unit that didn't officially exist — handle whatever waited beneath London's skin. Then she thought about eighteen years of decorated service amounting to nothing if she let one more man vanish into the dark without a name attached to him. "Bollocks," she said, and went down the stairs. The air changed before her eyes adjusted — a mineral cold, underlaid with something sweetish and rotten, like flowers left too long in a vase. Her torch beam cut through settling dust, and somewhere ahead she heard voices. Not one voice. Many. The tunnel opened into what had once been a platform, tiled walls stained the colour of old tea, and there — impossibly — light. Warm light, lanterns strung along makeshift stalls, the low murmur of trade. Quinn stopped dead at the threshold, torch beam faltering against a crowd that shouldn't have existed under any London street she knew. Stalls sold things she had no names for. A woman with skin like polished obsidian weighed out powder the colour of dried blood onto brass scales. A man — if he was a man — haggled over a jar containing something that pulsed faintly against the glass. The grey-coated suspect was already thirty feet in, slipping between bodies, and at the mouth of the platform stood a broad figure checking something in visitors' palms before letting them pass. A token. They were checking for tokens. Quinn had no token. She had a badge, a torch, and a service weapon that suddenly felt very small. "Oi." The doorman's voice carried a rasp like gravel dragged over stone. His eyes found her, found the torch, found everything about her that marked her as not-belonging. "This ain't your market, love." "Metropolitan Police." She held up the badge anyway, muscle memory more than strategy. "I'm in pursuit of a suspect who just came through here." The doorman's mouth curled, not quite a smile. "Pursuit's over then, innit. Nobody chases anybody down here without an invite." Behind him, deeper in the tunnel, she caught a last glimpse of grey coat disappearing round a bend where the tiled wall gave way to older brick, Victorian brick, the kind that shouldn't have connected to a station built in the sixties. The whole geography of the place was wrong, folding in on itself like a map redrawn by someone who'd never seen the actual city. Quinn's hand drifted to her weapon and stopped. Eighteen years of instinct told her that pulling it here, now, surrounded by however many things she couldn't identify, was the fastest way to end up like Morris — a name in a file nobody closed. "I need five minutes," she said. "That's it." "You need to walk back up them stairs," the doorman said, "before something down here decides you're worth more than five minutes." Somewhere behind him, laughter rippled through the stalls, low and unbothered, the sound of a place utterly indifferent to the rules she'd spent her whole career enforcing. The rain still fell above, she could hear it dripping down through some crack in the old brick, a steady percussion against everything her training told her to do. She thought of Morris's wife again, the way her hands had shaken around a mug of tea that had long gone cold, waiting for an answer Quinn never gave her. She thought about turning back. She thought about the grey coat and the eyes that didn't catch the light right, and the case file that had brought her out into the rain in the first place, three separate disappearances all leading here, to this doorman, to this threshold between the world she understood and the one she didn't. "Fine," Quinn said, and took one step back up toward the stairs, torch beam swinging toward the exit — and then, before the doorman's satisfied grunt could fully land, she pivoted and drove past his shoulder into the crowd beyond, torch dying in her hand as something unseen swallowed the light whole.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.692
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.06% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1115
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
3
adverb"utterly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"suddenly"
2"very"
3"utterly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
86.55% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1115
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"footsteps"
count1
1
word"echoed"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"echoed"
2"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences64
matches(empty)
98.21% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences64
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"happened to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences69
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1125
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
97.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount1051
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.05
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden2
Lock1
Men1
Quinn11
Town1
Yard1
Morris3
London2
Victorian1
persons
0"Lock"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
places
0"Camden"
1"Town"
2"London"
globalScore0.977
windowScore1
43.62% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite catch in his pupils"
1"not quite a smile"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1125
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean35.16
std21.72
cv0.618
sampleLengths
059
12
211
351
418
546
661
77
839
955
1013
1171
1239
1328
148
1542
1658
1778
187
1919
2033
2124
2220
2366
2444
258
2622
2756
2830
295
3053
3152
94.30% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences64
matches
0"were snarled"
1"been closed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs179
matches
0"were checking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences69
ratio0.101
matches
0"Quinn filed that detail away the way she filed away everything strange these days — carefully, without comment, the way you'd handle a live wire."
1"Radioing it in properly, sealing the entrance, letting the specialist units — whoever the hell they were, she'd heard whispers of a unit that didn't officially exist — handle whatever waited beneath London's skin."
2"The air changed before her eyes adjusted — a mineral cold, underlaid with something sweetish and rotten, like flowers left too long in a vase."
3"The tunnel opened into what had once been a platform, tiled walls stained the colour of old tea, and there — impossibly — light."
4"A man — if he was a man — haggled over a jar containing something that pulsed faintly against the glass."
5"Eighteen years of instinct told her that pulling it here, now, surrounded by however many things she couldn't identify, was the fastest way to end up like Morris — a name in a file nobody closed."
6"\"Fine,\" Quinn said, and took one step back up toward the stairs, torch beam swinging toward the exit — and then, before the doorman's satisfied grunt could fully land, she pivoted and drove past his shoulder into the crowd beyond, torch dying in her hand as something unseen swallowed the light whole."
98.80% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount701
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.04136947218259629
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.014265335235378032
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences69
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences69
mean16.3
std11.68
cv0.717
sampleLengths
017
124
218
32
43
58
622
729
813
95
104
1117
1225
1316
1420
155
1620
177
1823
1916
2022
214
2229
2313
2411
2510
2631
274
2813
292
305
3134
3228
338
3425
3513
363
371
3824
3912
4022
418
4218
4321
4431
452
465
474
4815
4912
77.29% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.5072463768115942
totalSentences69
uniqueOpeners35
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences60
matches
0"Then she thought about eighteen"
1"Somewhere behind him, laughter rippled"
ratio0.033
80.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences60
matches
0"He'd been quick on the"
1"He didn't stop."
2"He never did, not the"
3"she called, though she doubted"
4"He glanced back once."
5"He was fifty feet ahead"
6"She'd called it in but"
7"she said, mostly to herself"
8"He dropped down a set"
9"She knew the file."
10"She still didn't know."
11"She thought about turning around."
12"she said, and went down"
13"Her torch beam cut through"
14"They were checking for tokens."
15"She had a badge, a"
16"His eyes found her, found"
17"She held up the badge"
18"She thought of Morris's wife"
19"She thought about turning back."
ratio0.35
60.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences60
matches
0"Quinn's boots hit the ground"
1"He'd been quick on the"
2"He didn't stop."
3"He never did, not the"
4"Quinn's lungs burned, eighteen years"
5"The man cut left down"
6"she called, though she doubted"
7"Men like him rarely did."
8"He glanced back once."
9"Quinn filed that detail away"
10"The alley spat them out"
11"He was fifty feet ahead"
12"She'd called it in but"
13"she said, mostly to herself"
14"He dropped down a set"
15"Quinn skidded to the top"
16"Camden Town station, disused, the"
17"She knew the file."
18"Everyone at the Yard knew"
19"The man's footsteps echoed down"
ratio0.8
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
27.03% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Radioing it in properly, sealing the entrance, letting the specialist units — whoever the hell they were, she'd heard whispers of a unit that didn't officially …"
1"Quinn stopped dead at the threshold, torch beam faltering against a crowd that shouldn't have existed under any London street she knew."
2"His eyes found her, found the torch, found everything about her that marked her as not-belonging."
3"Behind him, deeper in the tunnel, she caught a last glimpse of grey coat disappearing round a bend where the tiled wall gave way to older brick, Victorian brick…"
4"The whole geography of the place was wrong, folding in on itself like a map redrawn by someone who'd never seen the actual city."
5"She thought about the grey coat and the eyes that didn't catch the light right, and the case file that had brought her out into the rain in the first place, thr…"
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, mostly to herself"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.462
leniency0.923
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.8325%