| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.429 | | leniency | 0.857 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 84.79% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 986 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 64.50% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 986 | | totalAiIsms | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "echo" | | 3 | "echoed" | | 4 | "rhythmic" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "stomach" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 64 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 5 | | totalWords | 998 | | ratio | 0.005 | | matches | | 0 | "midnight, the grove, come alone" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 11 | | wordCount | 974 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.21 | | worstName | "Isolde" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 0.5 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Aurora | 1 | | Ham | 1 | | Gate | 1 | | Camden | 1 | | Isolde | 2 | | October | 2 | | Fae | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Ham" | | 3 | "Camden" | | 4 | "October" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 85.90% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "herself: deer, obviously, deer graze at nigh" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 998 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "questioning that months" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 35.64 | | std | 31.87 | | cv | 0.894 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 67 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 89 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 66 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 66 | | 8 | 65 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 50 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 45 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 72 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 49 | | 21 | 54 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 132 | | 25 | 29 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 49 |
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| 99.32% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 172 | | matches | | 0 | "weren't listening" | | 1 | "was standing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 63 | | ratio | 0.127 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped between two standing stones and felt the air change — thicker, warmer, pressing against her ears the way altitude does on a plane." | | 1 | "The clearing looked the same as always — ring of oaks, ring of stones inside that, wildflowers carpeting the space between like something out of a painting nobody sane would hang in their house." | | 2 | "She stood and paced the inner ring, counting stones the way she'd counted them before — seven, always seven — except this time she counted eight and stopped dead in the middle of the ring with her pulse going harder than the walk here warranted." | | 3 | "She spun toward the sound and caught — she was almost sure she caught — a shape withdrawing behind the widest oak, pale, tall, gone before her eyes could hold it." | | 4 | "Not warm — hot, hot enough that she pulled the chain away from her skin with two fingers and felt it burn faint red through the fabric of her shirt like a coal cooling in a grate." | | 5 | "Hot meant —" | | 6 | "She stood very still in the middle of the ring, seven stones, always seven, and listened to something graze in a place with no grass tall enough to graze, and felt — with a certainty that arrived all at once, fully formed, the way dread does when it finally stops pretending to be nerves — that she had walked into someone's kitchen rather than someone's parlour." | | 7 | "Every blade of unmoved grass in the clearing bent, all at once, all the same direction — toward her — as if something enormous had exhaled across the whole grove in a single breath, and the wildflowers that shouldn't bloom in October closed their petals like a held fist." |
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| 85.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 967 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "thicker, warmer, pressing against her" | | 1 | "Small, wet, rhythmic, coming" |
| | adverbCount | 42 | | adverbRatio | 0.04343329886246122 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012409513960703205 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 63 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 63 | | mean | 15.84 | | std | 15.32 | | cv | 0.967 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 33 | | 1 | 34 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 32 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 1 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 55 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 34 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 26 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 26 | | 35 | 45 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 41 | | 40 | 31 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 23 | | 45 | 21 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 37 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 68.78% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.5079365079365079 | | totalSentences | 63 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 61.73% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the grove, breathing around" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 64.44% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, mostly to hear" | | 1 | "She kept to the tree" | | 2 | "She'd found the place twice" | | 3 | "Their colour looked wrong under" | | 4 | "She stepped between two standing" | | 5 | "Her own voice came back" | | 6 | "She'd come because the note" | | 7 | "She checked her phone." | | 8 | "She sat on the flattest" | | 9 | "She told herself: deer, obviously," | | 10 | "She turned to look anyway" | | 11 | "she said, to the empty" | | 12 | "She stood and paced the" | | 13 | "She counted again." | | 14 | "She must've miscounted." | | 15 | "She spun toward the sound" | | 16 | "It had never done that." | | 17 | "She didn't know what hot" | | 18 | "She didn't turn round this" | | 19 | "She stood very still in" |
| | ratio | 0.389 | |
| 71.11% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 42 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "The gate into Richmond Park" | | 1 | "The pendant sat warm against" | | 2 | "she said, mostly to hear" | | 3 | "The deer didn't answer." | | 4 | "A dozen of them stood" | | 5 | "She kept to the tree" | | 6 | "She'd found the place twice" | | 7 | "Night was different." | | 8 | "Night made the path narrower" | | 9 | "The pendant pulsed again, a" | | 10 | "Wildflowers bloomed along the last" | | 11 | "Their colour looked wrong under" | | 12 | "She stepped between two standing" | | 13 | "Her own voice came back" | | 14 | "That wasn't right either." | | 15 | "This place ate sound whole." | | 16 | "She'd come because the note" | | 17 | "She checked her phone." | | 18 | "The clearing looked the same" | | 19 | "She sat on the flattest" |
| | ratio | 0.778 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 27 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers bloomed along the last stretch before the stones, which made no sense in October, but she'd stopped questioning that months ago." | | 1 | "No breeze reached in here, never had, but tonight even the tall grass stood perfectly still, as if someone had pressed pause on everything except her." | | 2 | "She stood and paced the inner ring, counting stones the way she'd counted them before — seven, always seven — except this time she counted eight and stopped dea…" | | 3 | "She stood very still in the middle of the ring, seven stones, always seven, and listened to something graze in a place with no grass tall enough to graze, and f…" | | 4 | "That whoever wrote it in that careful, trusted hand had wanted her here for a different reason entirely, and that reason was standing, or crouching, or coiling,…" | | 5 | "Every blade of unmoved grass in the clearing bent, all at once, all the same direction — toward her — as if something enormous had exhaled across the whole grov…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.429 | | leniency | 0.857 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |