| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she tried again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |
| 85.56% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1039 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 56.69% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1039 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "echo" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "stomach" | | 5 | "sense of" | | 6 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 55 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 5 | | totalWords | 1046 | | ratio | 0.005 | | matches | | 0 | "sorting your shite out" | | 1 | "shape" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 16 | | wordCount | 1008 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.69 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Rory | 7 | | October | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Hel-touched | 1 | | November | 1 | | Hel | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "October" | | 3 | "Hel" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "November" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like flowers the way a photograph" | | 1 | "felt like ten now, and the standing sto" | | 2 | "felt like an invitation, though she cou" | | 3 | "felt like committing to something she w" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.868 | | wordCount | 1046 | | matches | | 0 | "not that there was no reply, she hadn't expected one straight off, but" | | 1 | "not a shadow, not an absence of light, but a *shape*, tall" | | 2 | "not an absence of light, but a *shape*, tall" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 25 | | mean | 41.84 | | std | 32.58 | | cv | 0.779 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 89 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 1 | | 4 | 66 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 68 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 64 | | 9 | 64 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 74 | | 12 | 29 | | 13 | 45 | | 14 | 69 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 86 | | 17 | 45 | | 18 | 26 | | 19 | 115 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 83 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 2 |
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| 84.32% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "forgotten" | | 1 | "were meant" | | 2 | "was meant" | | 3 | "meant" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 175 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 70 | | ratio | 0.071 | | matches | | 0 | "That was the first wrong thing — not that there was no reply, she hadn't expected one straight off, but that the word just stopped, swallowed whole by air that felt thicker than October should allow." | | 1 | "Not wind — there was no wind, the leaves above her hung dead still, a held breath in the shape of a canopy — but a rustle, low, close to the ground, the kind of sound a fox makes crossing dry brush." | | 2 | "But the flowers nearest her — the black-veined ones — turned." | | 3 | "Rory's hand found the small knife she kept at her belt — more habit than protection, these days, though it had saved her more than once." | | 4 | "That was the only way she could describe it after, lying awake later trying to make sense of what she'd seen — not a shadow, not an absence of light, but a *shape*, tall and narrow and utterly still, the kind of still that living things can't manage because living things breathe, twitch, shift their weight." |
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| 96.81% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1008 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 44 | | adverbRatio | 0.04365079365079365 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007936507936507936 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 70 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 70 | | mean | 14.94 | | std | 14.01 | | cv | 0.938 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 35 | | 3 | 29 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 36 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 36 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 42 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 24 | | 29 | 30 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 34 | | 37 | 29 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 23 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 32 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 27 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 21 |
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| 76.67% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.4857142857142857 | | totalSentences | 70 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "Only more of the too-tall" | | 1 | "Instead she stood very still," | | 2 | "Somewhere off to her left," | | 3 | "Just an exhale, long and" |
| | ratio | 0.073 | |
| 96.36% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "She hadn't meant to come" | | 1 | "Her voice didn't echo." | | 2 | "She rubbed her thumb over" | | 3 | "She stepped between the stones." | | 4 | "She'd seen the grove blooming" | | 5 | "She kept walking." | | 6 | "She didn't run." | | 7 | "It wasn't empty." | | 8 | "They turned the way sunflowers" | | 9 | "She backed up a step." | | 10 | "Her heel caught on a" | | 11 | "It wasn't a big sound." | | 12 | "She didn't draw it." | | 13 | "she tried again, quieter this" | | 14 | "It simply was, the way" | | 15 | "Her pendant stayed cold against" | | 16 | "She began to back away," |
| | ratio | 0.309 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 36 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "The stones stood the way" | | 1 | "Rory counted seven of them" | | 2 | "She hadn't meant to come" | | 3 | "Her voice didn't echo." | | 4 | "That was the first wrong" | | 5 | "She rubbed her thumb over" | | 6 | "Whatever waited here wasn't Hel-touched," | | 7 | "She stepped between the stones." | | 8 | "The wildflowers brushed her calves," | | 9 | "She'd seen the grove blooming" | | 10 | "Rory said, to nobody, because" | | 11 | "Something rustled off to her" | | 12 | "She kept walking." | | 13 | "The grove had never felt" | | 14 | "Isolde's clearing was meant to" | | 15 | "The second rustle came from" | | 16 | "She didn't run." | | 17 | "Running felt like an invitation," | | 18 | "It wasn't empty." | | 19 | "Rory said, keeping her voice" |
| | ratio | 0.655 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, standing at the boundary" | | 1 | "As if they'd never moved." | | 2 | "As if she'd imagined the" |
| | ratio | 0.055 | |
| 50.69% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 31 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "But Rory had been walking for what felt like ten now, and the standing stones behind her had vanished into a dark that pooled between the trees like something s…" | | 1 | "As if she'd imagined the whole thing, except she hadn't, she knew the difference between a trick of moonlight and a hundred small black faces watching her." | | 2 | "Just an exhale, long and slow, the kind a person makes when they're settling into a chair after a hard day, except it came from somewhere at head height among t…" | | 3 | "It simply was, the way the stones were, the way the grove itself was, ancient and patient and paying her the particular attention of something that had all the …" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |