| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Quinn looked once [once]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.343 | | leniency | 0.686 | | rawRatio | 0.083 | | effectiveRatio | 0.057 | |
| 95.29% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1062 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 57.63% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1062 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "churned" | | 1 | "perfect" | | 2 | "glint" | | 3 | "pristine" | | 4 | "etched" | | 5 | "processed" | | 6 | "magnetic" | | 7 | "measured" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 37 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 37 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 60 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1059 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 82.20% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 17 | | wordCount | 590 | | uniqueNames | 3 | | maxNameDensity | 1.36 | | worstName | "Malik" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Malik" | | discoveredNames | | | persons | | | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.822 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 28 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1059 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 34 | | mean | 31.15 | | std | 25.19 | | cv | 0.809 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 64 | | 1 | 31 | | 2 | 34 | | 3 | 41 | | 4 | 33 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 34 | | 9 | 70 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 43 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 54 | | 14 | 40 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 51 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 60 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 93 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 30 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 53 | | 27 | 41 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 55 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 81 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 49 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 37 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 97 | | matches | | |
| 47.62% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 60 | | ratio | 0.033 | | matches | | 0 | "Her eye caught a glint near the dead man's outstretched hand—small, brassy, half-buried in the scorched dust." | | 1 | "She was looking at the needle, which sat still and unmoving despite the platform having no discernible magnetic anomaly that she knew of—should have been drifting toward magnetic north like any compass worth the name." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 594 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 19 | | adverbRatio | 0.03198653198653199 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008417508417508417 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 60 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 60 | | mean | 17.65 | | std | 12.64 | | cv | 0.716 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 30 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 31 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 24 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 30 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 31 | | 25 | 23 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 29 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 51 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 43 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 26 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 31 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 25 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 35 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 41 |
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| 98.33% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.65 | | totalSentences | 60 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 33 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead there were symbols etched" | | 1 | "Instead it pointed steady and" |
| | ratio | 0.061 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 33 | | matches | | 0 | "His clothes were intact, no" | | 1 | "He nodded toward a ring" | | 2 | "Her eye caught a glint" | | 3 | "She crouched again, careful not" | | 4 | "She was looking at the" | | 5 | "She stood, joints protesting, gaze" | | 6 | "She didn't believe it, and" |
| | ratio | 0.212 | |
| 35.76% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 33 | | matches | | 0 | "The tape came down at" | | 1 | "Quinn ducked under it without" | | 2 | "Someone had strung work lights" | | 3 | "DC Ravi Malik met her" | | 4 | "Quinn stepped onto the platform" | | 5 | "Malik gestured toward a knot" | | 6 | "Quinn walked the platform slowly," | | 7 | "Malik flipped a page." | | 8 | "Quinn crouched at the edge" | | 9 | "The man lay on his" | | 10 | "His clothes were intact, no" | | 11 | "Malik crouched beside her, close" | | 12 | "He nodded toward a ring" | | 13 | "Quinn ran a gloved finger" | | 14 | "The concrete felt cold to" | | 15 | "Malik didn't answer that." | | 16 | "Quinn stood and turned in" | | 17 | "Her eye caught a glint" | | 18 | "She crouched again, careful not" | | 19 | "A compass, or something built" |
| | ratio | 0.848 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 33 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 18 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn ducked under it without breaking stride, her boots finding the uneven steps by memory rather than sight." | | 1 | "The concrete felt cold to the touch, colder than the ambient air by a noticeable degree, as if the burn had drawn heat inward rather than radiating it outward." | | 2 | "A compass, or something built to look like one, its casing dulled with a greenish patina that didn't match the rest of its otherwise pristine condition." | | 3 | "Instead there were symbols etched into the glass, tight interlocking patterns that reminded her, uncomfortably, of the kind of thing you'd find carved into a ch…" | | 4 | "She was looking at the needle, which sat still and unmoving despite the platform having no discernible magnetic anomaly that she knew of—should have been drifti…" |
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| 83.33% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "She stood, joints protesting, gaze fixed on the tunnel's black throat" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.114 | | leniency | 0.229 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |