Run: 2026-07-01-01KWEA0HQ15G843B268Y7PYDES

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Duration:
34.7s
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$0.026258
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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the pavement outside the Raven's Nest, turning Soho's cobblestones into a mirror smeared with neon. Quinn had been sitting across the street for forty minutes, watching the green sign flicker through her windscreen, when Tomás Herrera came out the side door at a run. She was out of the car before she'd finished the thought. "Herrera! Metropolitan Police, stop where you are!" He didn't stop. He didn't even look back, just put his head down and cut across Brewer Street, dodging between a delivery van and a knot of drenched tourists sheltering under an awning. Quinn went after him, her boots slapping through puddles, the cold soaking through her coat within seconds. Eighteen years on the force had taught her how people ran when they were guilty. Herrera ran like a man who'd done this before—economical strides, no wasted motion, eyes flicking to alley mouths and fire escapes like he was cataloguing exits. That told her more than any interview room ever would. "You're making this worse for yourself," she called out, though she doubted he could hear her over the rain. He hit Wardour Street and swung left, and Quinn nearly lost him in the crowd pouring out of a late show at the Curzon. She shouldered through, ignored the indignant shout of a man in a soaked trench coat, and caught sight of Herrera's dark curly hair vanishing down a side street she didn't recognise—which was saying something, because Quinn knew Soho like she knew the inside of her own flat. She followed anyway. The street narrowed, brick walls pressing close, and the neon glow fell away behind her until she was running by streetlight alone. Herrera was thirty feet ahead, and gaining distance, when he did something that made her stomach drop—he ducked sideways into what looked like a solid wall and disappeared. Quinn slowed, breathing hard, rain dripping off her nose. She reached the spot: an old service door, rusted at the hinges, propped open just enough for a man to slip through. Beyond it, stairs. Down. She keyed her radio. "This is DI Quinn, badge 4416, I'm in pursuit of a suspect, going below street level near—" She checked a street sign, found none. "Unmarked location off Wardour Street. Requesting backup." Static answered her. Then nothing. She tried again and got the same dead hiss, like the signal had been swallowed whole. Three years ago she'd have turned around right there. Three years ago, before Morris, she'd have called it in and waited for backup like the manual said, because chasing a suspect alone into an unknown space with no comms was how good coppers ended up dead or worse. But Morris had followed the rules too, and it hadn't saved him. Whatever had taken her partner in that warehouse in Deptford, radios and procedure hadn't been able to touch it. She drew her torch instead of her radio and went down the stairs. The air changed almost immediately—the smell of rain and exhaust fumes giving way to something older, mineral and cold, like the inside of a cave. The stairs kept going longer than any building foundation should allow, spiralling down past strata of brick that looked Victorian, then older, then not brick at all but something like packed earth reinforced with iron struts. She came out into a tunnel that had once, unmistakably, been part of the Underground. Tiled walls, curved ceiling, a rusted sign half-covered in grime that might have once read CAMDEN TOWN. Except Camden was miles from where she'd started running, and there was no way she'd covered that distance on foot in under two minutes. Ahead, torches burned in wall sconces where electric lights should have been, casting the tunnel in amber. Voices drifted up from somewhere further down—overlapping, dozens of them, the particular murmur of a crowd doing business. Quinn's torch beam caught movement at the end of the tunnel. A figure, hooded, checking something at a barrier of iron gates that shouldn't have existed in any Transport for London blueprint she'd ever seen. The figure pressed a small white object—bone, she realised, actual bone, carved and yellowed—into a slot in the gate, and the gate groaned open. Herrera. He slipped through and the gate began sliding shut behind him with the slow inevitability of a portcullis. Quinn ran the last twenty feet and hit the gate as it closed. Her fingers caught the edge, cold iron biting into her palms, and she saw through the narrowing gap a cavern of market stalls, strung lights, figures moving between them who didn't look entirely like anything she had a name for. Herrera glanced back once—just once—his warm brown eyes finding hers through the shrinking gap, and there was something in his face that wasn't guilt or fear. It was pity. "Herrera!" The gate shut with a sound like a coffin lid. Quinn stood there, breathing hard, hands still gripping cold iron, and pressed her ear to the metal. The murmur of voices continued on the other side, utterly indifferent to her. No lock mechanism she could see. No card reader, no keypad, nothing to pick or force. Just smooth iron and the ghost-memory of that carved bone token disappearing into it. She stepped back, played her torch along the gate's edges, looking for a seam, a hinge, anything a crowbar might exploit. Eighteen years of instinct told her this was the part where a smart detective turned around, climbed back up into the rain, and requested a specialist unit—assuming such a unit existed, assuming anyone at the Yard would believe a word of what she'd say. But somewhere on the other side of that gate was a man who'd just run from a police officer into a place that couldn't exist, carrying secrets that had cost her partner his life three years ago in a warehouse that had also, according to every official report, not existed either. She thought of Morris's face the last time she'd seen him. She thought of the eighteen months of therapy afterward, the inquest that closed with no findings, the nights she'd lain awake certain she was losing her mind. Quinn holstered her torch, tested the gate one more time with both hands, and began searching the tunnel wall for another way in.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.29% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1061
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count1
highlights
0"utterly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
85.86% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1061
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"flicker"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"electric"
count1
highlights
0"flicker"
1"stomach"
2"electric"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences57
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences57
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences60
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen51
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1051
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount1013
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity0.89
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Herrera"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho2
Tomás1
Herrera6
Brewer1
Street2
Wardour1
Quinn9
Curzon1
Static1
Morris3
Deptford1
Victorian1
Underground1
Camden1
Transport1
London1
Yard1
persons
0"Nest"
1"Tomás"
2"Herrera"
3"Quinn"
4"Static"
5"Morris"
places
0"Raven"
1"Soho"
2"Brewer"
3"Street"
4"Wardour"
5"Curzon"
6"Deptford"
7"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
45.83% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences48
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like a solid wall and disappeared"
1"something like packed earth reinforced with"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.951
wordCount1051
matches
0"not brick at all but something like packed earth reinforced with iron struts"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences60
matches
0"covered that distance"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean36.24
std24.48
cv0.675
sampleLengths
046
111
27
350
451
519
671
73
850
935
104
1131
1221
1379
1413
1561
1656
1735
1859
191
2018
2182
221
2310
2460
2565
2651
2738
2823
99.11% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences57
matches
0"been swallowed"
49.34% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs177
matches
0"was cataloguing"
1"was saying"
2"was running"
3"was losing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences60
ratio0.133
matches
0"Herrera ran like a man who'd done this before—economical strides, no wasted motion, eyes flicking to alley mouths and fire escapes like he was cataloguing exits."
1"She shouldered through, ignored the indignant shout of a man in a soaked trench coat, and caught sight of Herrera's dark curly hair vanishing down a side street she didn't recognise—which was saying something, because Quinn knew Soho like she knew the inside of her own flat."
2"Herrera was thirty feet ahead, and gaining distance, when he did something that made her stomach drop—he ducked sideways into what looked like a solid wall and disappeared."
3"The air changed almost immediately—the smell of rain and exhaust fumes giving way to something older, mineral and cold, like the inside of a cave."
4"Voices drifted up from somewhere further down—overlapping, dozens of them, the particular murmur of a crowd doing business."
5"The figure pressed a small white object—bone, she realised, actual bone, carved and yellowed—into a slot in the gate, and the gate groaned open."
6"Herrera glanced back once—just once—his warm brown eyes finding hers through the shrinking gap, and there was something in his face that wasn't guilt or fear."
7"Eighteen years of instinct told her this was the part where a smart detective turned around, climbed back up into the rain, and requested a specialist unit—assuming such a unit existed, assuming anyone at the Yard would believe a word of what she'd say."
97.44% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1025
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.042926829268292686
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.005853658536585366
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences60
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences60
mean17.52
std11.69
cv0.667
sampleLengths
017
129
211
37
43
530
617
715
826
910
1019
1124
1247
133
1422
1528
169
1722
183
191
204
2124
227
233
242
2516
269
2739
2812
2919
3013
3125
3236
3315
3417
3524
3617
3718
3811
3924
4024
411
4218
4313
4440
4526
463
471
4810
4917
65.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.45
totalSentences60
uniqueOpeners27
61.73% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences54
matches
0"Just smooth iron and the"
ratio0.019
79.26% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences54
matches
0"She was out of the"
1"He didn't stop."
2"He didn't even look back,"
3"she called out, though she"
4"He hit Wardour Street and"
5"She shouldered through, ignored the"
6"She followed anyway."
7"She reached the spot: an"
8"She keyed her radio."
9"She checked a street sign,"
10"She tried again and got"
11"She drew her torch instead"
12"She came out into a"
13"He slipped through and the"
14"Her fingers caught the edge,"
15"It was pity."
16"She stepped back, played her"
17"She thought of Morris's face"
18"She thought of the eighteen"
ratio0.352
89.63% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount40
totalSentences54
matches
0"Quinn had been sitting across"
1"She was out of the"
2"He didn't stop."
3"He didn't even look back,"
4"Quinn went after him, her"
5"Herrera ran like a man"
6"That told her more than"
7"she called out, though she"
8"He hit Wardour Street and"
9"She shouldered through, ignored the"
10"She followed anyway."
11"The street narrowed, brick walls"
12"Herrera was thirty feet ahead,"
13"Quinn slowed, breathing hard, rain"
14"She reached the spot: an"
15"She keyed her radio."
16"She checked a street sign,"
17"Static answered her."
18"She tried again and got"
19"Whatever had taken her partner"
ratio0.741
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
26.58% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Herrera ran like a man who'd done this before—economical strides, no wasted motion, eyes flicking to alley mouths and fire escapes like he was cataloguing exits…"
1"Herrera was thirty feet ahead, and gaining distance, when he did something that made her stomach drop—he ducked sideways into what looked like a solid wall and …"
2"The stairs kept going longer than any building foundation should allow, spiralling down past strata of brick that looked Victorian, then older, then not brick a…"
3"Her fingers caught the edge, cold iron biting into her palms, and she saw through the narrowing gap a cavern of market stalls, strung lights, figures moving bet…"
4"Herrera glanced back once—just once—his warm brown eyes finding hers through the shrinking gap, and there was something in his face that wasn't guilt or fear."
5"But somewhere on the other side of that gate was a man who'd just run from a police officer into a place that couldn't exist, carrying secrets that had cost her…"
6"She thought of the eighteen months of therapy afterward, the inquest that closed with no findings, the nights she'd lain awake certain she was losing her mind."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she called out (call out)"
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.4
79.8355%