| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.29% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1061 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 85.86% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1061 | | totalAiIsms | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flicker" | | 1 | "stomach" | | 2 | "electric" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 57 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 57 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 51 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1051 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 36 | | wordCount | 1013 | | uniqueNames | 19 | | maxNameDensity | 0.89 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Herrera" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Soho | 2 | | Tomás | 1 | | Herrera | 6 | | Brewer | 1 | | Street | 2 | | Wardour | 1 | | Quinn | 9 | | Curzon | 1 | | Static | 1 | | Morris | 3 | | Deptford | 1 | | Victorian | 1 | | Underground | 1 | | Camden | 1 | | Transport | 1 | | London | 1 | | Yard | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nest" | | 1 | "Tomás" | | 2 | "Herrera" | | 3 | "Quinn" | | 4 | "Static" | | 5 | "Morris" |
| | places | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Soho" | | 2 | "Brewer" | | 3 | "Street" | | 4 | "Wardour" | | 5 | "Curzon" | | 6 | "Deptford" | | 7 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 45.83% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like a solid wall and disappeared" | | 1 | "something like packed earth reinforced with" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.951 | | wordCount | 1051 | | matches | | 0 | "not brick at all but something like packed earth reinforced with iron struts" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 29 | | mean | 36.24 | | std | 24.48 | | cv | 0.675 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 46 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 50 | | 4 | 51 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 71 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 50 | | 9 | 35 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 31 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 79 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 61 | | 16 | 56 | | 17 | 35 | | 18 | 59 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 82 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 60 | | 25 | 65 | | 26 | 51 | | 27 | 38 | | 28 | 23 |
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| 99.11% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | |
| 49.34% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 177 | | matches | | 0 | "was cataloguing" | | 1 | "was saying" | | 2 | "was running" | | 3 | "was losing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 60 | | ratio | 0.133 | | matches | | 0 | "Herrera ran like a man who'd done this before—economical strides, no wasted motion, eyes flicking to alley mouths and fire escapes like he was cataloguing exits." | | 1 | "She shouldered through, ignored the indignant shout of a man in a soaked trench coat, and caught sight of Herrera's dark curly hair vanishing down a side street she didn't recognise—which was saying something, because Quinn knew Soho like she knew the inside of her own flat." | | 2 | "Herrera was thirty feet ahead, and gaining distance, when he did something that made her stomach drop—he ducked sideways into what looked like a solid wall and disappeared." | | 3 | "The air changed almost immediately—the smell of rain and exhaust fumes giving way to something older, mineral and cold, like the inside of a cave." | | 4 | "Voices drifted up from somewhere further down—overlapping, dozens of them, the particular murmur of a crowd doing business." | | 5 | "The figure pressed a small white object—bone, she realised, actual bone, carved and yellowed—into a slot in the gate, and the gate groaned open." | | 6 | "Herrera glanced back once—just once—his warm brown eyes finding hers through the shrinking gap, and there was something in his face that wasn't guilt or fear." | | 7 | "Eighteen years of instinct told her this was the part where a smart detective turned around, climbed back up into the rain, and requested a specialist unit—assuming such a unit existed, assuming anyone at the Yard would believe a word of what she'd say." |
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| 97.44% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1025 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 44 | | adverbRatio | 0.042926829268292686 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005853658536585366 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 60 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 60 | | mean | 17.52 | | std | 11.69 | | cv | 0.667 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 30 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 26 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 47 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 28 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 39 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 25 | | 32 | 36 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 24 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 24 | | 40 | 24 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 40 | | 45 | 26 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 1 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 65.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.45 | | totalSentences | 60 | | uniqueOpeners | 27 | |
| 61.73% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "Just smooth iron and the" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 79.26% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "She was out of the" | | 1 | "He didn't stop." | | 2 | "He didn't even look back," | | 3 | "she called out, though she" | | 4 | "He hit Wardour Street and" | | 5 | "She shouldered through, ignored the" | | 6 | "She followed anyway." | | 7 | "She reached the spot: an" | | 8 | "She keyed her radio." | | 9 | "She checked a street sign," | | 10 | "She tried again and got" | | 11 | "She drew her torch instead" | | 12 | "She came out into a" | | 13 | "He slipped through and the" | | 14 | "Her fingers caught the edge," | | 15 | "It was pity." | | 16 | "She stepped back, played her" | | 17 | "She thought of Morris's face" | | 18 | "She thought of the eighteen" |
| | ratio | 0.352 | |
| 89.63% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 40 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn had been sitting across" | | 1 | "She was out of the" | | 2 | "He didn't stop." | | 3 | "He didn't even look back," | | 4 | "Quinn went after him, her" | | 5 | "Herrera ran like a man" | | 6 | "That told her more than" | | 7 | "she called out, though she" | | 8 | "He hit Wardour Street and" | | 9 | "She shouldered through, ignored the" | | 10 | "She followed anyway." | | 11 | "The street narrowed, brick walls" | | 12 | "Herrera was thirty feet ahead," | | 13 | "Quinn slowed, breathing hard, rain" | | 14 | "She reached the spot: an" | | 15 | "She keyed her radio." | | 16 | "She checked a street sign," | | 17 | "Static answered her." | | 18 | "She tried again and got" | | 19 | "Whatever had taken her partner" |
| | ratio | 0.741 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 26.58% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Herrera ran like a man who'd done this before—economical strides, no wasted motion, eyes flicking to alley mouths and fire escapes like he was cataloguing exits…" | | 1 | "Herrera was thirty feet ahead, and gaining distance, when he did something that made her stomach drop—he ducked sideways into what looked like a solid wall and …" | | 2 | "The stairs kept going longer than any building foundation should allow, spiralling down past strata of brick that looked Victorian, then older, then not brick a…" | | 3 | "Her fingers caught the edge, cold iron biting into her palms, and she saw through the narrowing gap a cavern of market stalls, strung lights, figures moving bet…" | | 4 | "Herrera glanced back once—just once—his warm brown eyes finding hers through the shrinking gap, and there was something in his face that wasn't guilt or fear." | | 5 | "But somewhere on the other side of that gate was a man who'd just run from a police officer into a place that couldn't exist, carrying secrets that had cost her…" | | 6 | "She thought of the eighteen months of therapy afterward, the inquest that closed with no findings, the nights she'd lain awake certain she was losing her mind." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she called out (call out)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.4 | |