Run: 2026-07-01-01KWEA0NTV8H1CNPA96X3TYDTF

Run Details

Duration:
33.1s
Cost:
$0.022234
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The three deadbolts stuck like they always did, and Rory had to jiggle the key twice before the last one gave. She yanked the door open with a curse already forming on her lips for Eva, who never remembered to oil the damn things. Lucien stood on the landing instead, cane hooked over one forearm, looking like he'd stepped out of a magazine nobody in Brick Lane could afford to read. "You didn't call," she said. "I did. Four times. You didn't answer." "That's usually a hint." He smiled at that, the kind of smile that didn't reach the black eye, only warmed the amber one. Rory hated how her stomach still dropped at the lopsided asymmetry of it, two years on. "May I come in, or are we conducting this in the stairwell? Your neighbour's already got his ear pressed to the wall." "Mr. Okafor's deaf as a post." "Then he's reading lips remarkably well." She stepped back before she'd decided to, and he crossed the threshold like the flat belonged to him, like every room he entered simply rearranged itself around his presence. Ptolemy took one look at him from atop a stack of Eva's research and fled under the sofa. "Even the cat remembers," Rory said. "Cats have excellent judgement. It's people who complicate things." "You're one to talk about complicating things." Lucien set his cane against the bookshelf, careful, deliberate, the way he did everything. "I need your help. Or rather, Malphora's help. There's a difference, I know, but the two of you share a body and I'm not particular about which version answers the door." "Funny. I thought the demon-possessed assassin version of me was the one you actually wanted." "That's not fair." "Isn't it?" She crossed her arms, feeling the old scar on her wrist itch the way it did when her pulse climbed. "You spent three months teaching me how to fight, how to survive, and the second Malphora came out to play, you looked at me like I'd turned into something you needed a report filed on." "I looked at you like a man who watched someone he cared about get possessed by an ancient entity with a body count. Forgive me the moment of hesitation." "Moment. Right." She turned away from him, busied her hands with the kettle because if she looked at him a second longer she was going to say something she couldn't take back, or worse, something true. "You disappeared for six weeks, Lucien. Six weeks of nothing, and then you turn up here unannounced expecting me to just—what, forget it? Make you tea?" "I wasn't hiding from you." "Weren't you?" "I was finding out what she is. What's inside you." His voice dropped the polished edges, went rougher, more Marseille than mayfair. "Do you have any idea what I found in the old texts? What Malphora did to the last three people who hosted her?" Rory's hand stilled on the kettle. "No. Because you didn't tell me. You just vanished." "I was protecting you from information that would've kept you up at night." "That's not your call to make." "No," he admitted, and something in his shoulders dropped, some careful architecture giving way. "It wasn't. I know that now." The kettle clicked off. She poured two cups anyway, old habit, muscle memory from months of him turning up at odd hours with information and that damned cane and eyes that looked at her like she was a puzzle worth solving rather than a problem to be managed. She set his cup on the table without looking at him. "Why are you actually here, Lucien? And don't say Malphora. You could've sent a note for that." He was quiet long enough that she finally turned to look at him. He was studying the rim of the teacup like it held the answer. "Yu-Fei's restaurant," he said. "Someone's been asking after you. Not about deliveries. About the girl who works there with the very particular scar on her wrist and a habit of disappearing when the moon does something unusual." "Charming. Who?" "I don't know yet. That's the honest truth, and I came to tell you in person because you deserve to hear it from me and not from some panicked message passed through three different informants." He set the cup down, untouched. "And because I wanted to see you. Both reasons are true. I don't expect you to forgive the six weeks because of it." "Good. Because I haven't." "I wouldn't ask you to lie." Rory leaned against the counter, arms still crossed, though the anger had gone thin and papery, harder to hold onto now that he was looking at her like that, like the amber eye held something soft and stubborn that refused to quit no matter how many doors got shut on it. "You could've led with the threat," she said. "Instead of standing in my doorway being unbearable." "I find the two aren't mutually exclusive where you're concerned." "That's not a compliment." "It's the closest thing I've got tonight." He picked the tea back up, finally, held it like it was something to steady his hands rather than warm them. "Someone's watching you, Rory. I intend to find out who before they get any closer than asking questions in a takeaway." "And after that? After you've solved the puzzle and filed your report?" The question hung there, sharper than she meant it, more honest than she'd planned on being tonight. Lucien didn't look away from it. "After that," he said, "I suppose I'll still be standing in your doorway, being unbearable. If you'll let me." Ptolemy chose that moment to reappear, stalking out from under the sofa to wind himself around Lucien's ankles, traitor that he was. Rory watched it happen, watched the corner of Lucien's mouth twitch at the absurdity of it, and felt the last of her anger curdle into something else entirely, something she didn't have a tidy name for yet. "Drink your tea," she said. "Then you're telling me everything you know. All of it, this time." "All of it," he agreed, and for once, she believed him.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She turned away [away]"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.289
leniency0.578
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.044
95.14% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1029
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
90.28% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1029
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences32
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences32
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences64
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen51
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1028
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
91.97% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount517
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.16
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory6
Eva2
Brick1
Lane1
Lucien5
Marseille1
Ptolemy2
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
3"Ptolemy"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Marseille"
globalScore0.92
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences25
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1028
matches(empty)
62.50% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences64
matches
0"like that, like"
1"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean22.84
std19.3
cv0.845
sampleLengths
044
127
25
37
44
535
622
76
86
947
106
119
127
1345
1415
153
1657
1729
1862
195
202
2145
2215
2313
246
2520
2659
2717
2826
2937
302
3164
324
336
3451
3516
3610
374
3849
3912
4023
4119
4259
4317
4411
94.30% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences32
matches
0"got shut"
69.28% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs102
matches
0"was studying"
1"was looking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences64
ratio0
matches(empty)
97.77% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount517
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.0425531914893617
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.009671179883945842
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences64
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences64
mean16.06
std11.46
cv0.713
sampleLengths
021
123
227
35
47
54
619
716
822
96
106
1129
1218
136
149
157
1614
1731
1815
193
2022
2135
2229
2336
2426
255
262
2722
2823
296
309
3113
326
3314
346
354
3644
3711
3817
3913
4013
414
4233
432
4441
4523
464
476
4851
498
77.60% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.484375
totalSentences64
uniqueOpeners31
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences26
matches(empty)
ratio0
4.62% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences26
matches
0"She yanked the door open"
1"He smiled at that, the"
2"She stepped back before she'd"
3"She crossed her arms, feeling"
4"She turned away from him,"
5"His voice dropped the polished"
6"he admitted, and something in"
7"She poured two cups anyway,"
8"She set his cup on"
9"He was quiet long enough"
10"He was studying the rim"
11"He set the cup down,"
12"He picked the tea back"
13"he agreed, and for once,"
ratio0.538
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount26
totalSentences26
matches
0"The three deadbolts stuck like"
1"She yanked the door open"
2"Lucien stood on the landing"
3"He smiled at that, the"
4"Rory hated how her stomach"
5"She stepped back before she'd"
6"Ptolemy took one look at"
7"Lucien set his cane against"
8"She crossed her arms, feeling"
9"She turned away from him,"
10"His voice dropped the polished"
11"Rory's hand stilled on the"
12"he admitted, and something in"
13"The kettle clicked off."
14"She poured two cups anyway,"
15"She set his cup on"
16"He was quiet long enough"
17"He was studying the rim"
18"He set the cup down,"
19"Rory leaned against the counter,"
ratio1
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences26
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences16
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
86.54% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He set, untouched"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he admitted (admit)"
1"he agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.178
leniency0.356
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.089
82.3333%