Run: 2026-07-01-01KWEA0YDDMKVG485N9BAHT5W9

Run Details

Duration:
29.1s
Cost:
$0.020234
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came three times, sharp and deliberate, the kind of knock that belonged to someone who'd stood outside deciding whether to leave. Rory undid the first deadbolt, then the second, and paused with her hand on the third when she saw him through the gap—platinum hair catching the hallway light, cane resting against his leg like an afterthought. "You've got some nerve," she said, but the bolt slid free anyway. Lucien stepped in without waiting for an invitation, the way he always did, scanning the flat's chaos of books and scrolls before his eyes settled back on her. "I would have called first, but you never answer when it's me." "That should've told you something." "It told me you were busy. Or angry. Possibly both." He set the cane against Ptolemy's scratching post, and the cat gave him a look of deep betrayal before slinking under the sofa. "Charming as always." Rory crossed her arms, hip against the doorframe, not moving to let him further in than the three feet of hallway he'd already claimed. "Three months, Lucien. Not a word." "I sent word." "You sent Marguerite. With a note. Like I was a job you were closing out." His jaw tightened, just barely, the amber eye flickering with something she used to be able to read easily and now couldn't. "I was in Avaros. My father doesn't exactly permit correspondence." "You could have told me that before you left. Instead of just—" She stopped herself, throat tight, angry at how quickly the old wound opened back up. "Instead of leaving me standing outside Silas' bar like an idiot, waiting for a car that wasn't coming." "I know." "That's it? You know?" "What would you have me say, Rory?" He took a step closer, and she caught the familiar scent of cedar and something faintly sulfuric underneath, demon blood that never quite masked itself no matter how good his tailor was. "That I panicked? That watching you nearly bleed out over a case that had nothing to do with you frightened me more than facing my father ever has?" "I didn't ask you to protect me." "No. You never do." His voice dropped, quieter now, less performance in it. "That's rather the problem." She held his gaze, refusing to look away first, though her pulse had picked up traitorously. "So what, you disappear because I got hurt on a job? That's not protection, Lucien. That's you making a decision for both of us and not telling me." "I'm aware of how it looks." "Then why are you here? Three months of silence and you just knock on my door like it's nothing?" He glanced past her, toward the cluttered kitchen table where a half-drunk cup of tea had gone cold beside an open case file, then back to her face. "Because Yu-Fei Cheung's restaurant had a break-in last night. Someone went through the delivery routes. Yours specifically." The anger in her chest didn't leave, but something colder slid in beside it. "Why would anyone care about my delivery routes?" "That's what I intend to find out. Which is why I'm here, and not sending Marguerite with a note." "Convenient." "I didn't say it was the only reason." His eyes didn't waver from hers, and for a moment the hallway felt smaller than it had any right to be. "I missed you. Insufferably. If that means anything at all." Rory's arms loosened slightly, though she didn't let them drop. "It doesn't fix three months." "No. It doesn't." He reached up, slow, and tucked a strand of dark hair behind her ear, the gesture achingly familiar and unwelcome in how good it still felt. "But I'm here now. And someone's watching you, Rory, which means we don't exactly have the luxury of pretending I don't exist." "I was doing fine pretending." "Were you?" She didn't answer that, because the honest answer was written all over the cold tea and the file open to a page she hadn't been able to focus on for an hour before he'd knocked. "Fine," she said instead, stepping back to let him properly through the door. "Tell me about the break-in. But this—" she gestured between them, sharp and final "—we're not fixing this tonight." "Understood." He picked his cane back up, following her into the flat, careful to step over a stack of Eva's research notes on threshold wards. "Though for what it's worth, I don't intend to disappear again." "You said that last time." "I didn't say it last time. I simply left." He allowed himself a small, rueful smile. "Consider this an improvement." Rory swept the tea cup off the table, dumping it in the sink harder than necessary, using the motion to hide the way her mouth wanted to twitch upward despite everything. "Low bar." "I've always worked well beneath expectations." He settled into the chair across from where she usually sat, unbuttoning his suit jacket like he intended to stay a while. "Now. Tell me everything you remember about last night's deliveries. Who signed for what, who was at the door, anyone lingering who shouldn't have been." She sat across from him, pulling the case file closer, aware of his eyes on her in that way that made her want to simultaneously throw him out and ask him to stay. Neither feeling won. Both stayed, uneasy roommates in her chest, as she flipped to the first page and started talking.
created_at"2026-07-01T07:41:46.808Z" 7/1/2026, 7:41:46 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said instead [instead]"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.048
89.02% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount911
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
72.56% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount911
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"familiar"
2"pulse"
3"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences26
matches(empty)
87.91% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences26
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences56
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords909
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions7
wordCount530
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity0.75
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Lucien1
Ptolemy1
Rory4
Eva1
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences25
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount909
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean24.57
std17.38
cv0.707
sampleLengths
023
136
212
328
412
55
636
730
83
915
1032
1145
122
134
1467
157
1617
1744
186
1919
2045
2122
2219
231
2439
2515
2651
275
282
2935
3032
3136
325
3320
3433
3553
3653
91.77% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences26
matches
0"was written"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs93
matches(empty)
40.82% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences56
ratio0.036
matches
0"Rory undid the first deadbolt, then the second, and paused with her hand on the third when she saw him through the gap—platinum hair catching the hallway light, cane resting against his leg like an afterthought."
1"\"Tell me about the break-in. But this—\" she gestured between them, sharp and final \"—we're not fixing this tonight.\""
85.51% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount444
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.05630630630630631
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.02027027027027027
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences56
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences56
mean16.23
std10.71
cv0.66
sampleLengths
023
136
212
328
412
55
633
73
824
96
103
1115
1222
1310
1427
1518
162
174
1839
1928
207
2113
224
2316
2428
256
2619
2728
2817
2914
308
3119
321
3329
3410
3510
365
3729
3822
395
402
4135
4213
4319
4425
4511
465
4716
484
4931
90.48% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5535714285714286
totalSentences56
uniqueOpeners31
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences26
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences26
matches
0"she said, but the bolt"
1"He set the cane against"
2"His jaw tightened, just barely,"
3"She stopped herself, throat tight,"
4"He took a step closer,"
5"His voice dropped, quieter now,"
6"She held his gaze, refusing"
7"He glanced past her, toward"
8"His eyes didn't waver from"
9"He reached up, slow, and"
10"She didn't answer that, because"
11"she said instead, stepping back"
12"she gestured between them, sharp"
13"He picked his cane back"
14"He allowed himself a small,"
15"He settled into the chair"
16"She sat across from him,"
ratio0.654
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount26
totalSentences26
matches
0"The knock came three times,"
1"Rory undid the first deadbolt,"
2"she said, but the bolt"
3"Lucien stepped in without waiting"
4"He set the cane against"
5"Rory crossed her arms, hip"
6"His jaw tightened, just barely,"
7"She stopped herself, throat tight,"
8"He took a step closer,"
9"His voice dropped, quieter now,"
10"She held his gaze, refusing"
11"He glanced past her, toward"
12"The anger in her chest"
13"His eyes didn't waver from"
14"Rory's arms loosened slightly, though"
15"He reached up, slow, and"
16"She didn't answer that, because"
17"she said instead, stepping back"
18"she gestured between them, sharp"
19"He picked his cane back"
ratio1
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences26
matches(empty)
ratio0
87.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences13
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She sat across from him, pulling the case file closer, aware of his eyes on her in that way that made her want to simultaneously throw him out and ask him to st…"
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she said, but the bolt slid free anyway"
1"He set, and the cat gave him a look of deep betrayal before slinking under the sofa"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.048
leniency0.095
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.5880%