Run: 2026-07-01-01KWEA430X08V67244D97ENK74

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31.9s
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You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The standing stones marked the tree line like broken teeth, pale under a moon that seemed too bright for London's smog-choked sky. Rory checked her phone again — no signal, not even the single bar she'd had in the car park. She pocketed it and pushed through the bracken, the pendant cold against her collarbone. Eva had said the grove would help. Eva had said a lot of things. "This had better be worth it," Rory muttered, ducking under a low branch. "I've got a six a.m. delivery shift and a landlord who thinks 'creative deadline' means 'creative excuse.'" The wildflowers gave her pause. Bluebells, foxglove, things that shouldn't bloom in November, all standing straight and defiant against a frost that hadn't touched them. She crouched, ran a finger along a petal. Warm. Not cold like it should be, not damp with dew. Warm like skin. She stood too fast, wiped her hand on her jeans. "Right. Fine. Warm flowers. Not a big deal." Her voice didn't carry the way it should have. It went out into the clearing and simply stopped, swallowed whole, no echo bouncing off the stones behind her. She'd noticed the same thing about her footsteps — she couldn't hear them anymore, though she could feel the give of the earth beneath her boots. The pendant pulsed. Once. A small warmth against her sternum, gone before she could be sure she hadn't imagined it. "Okay," she said, mostly to hear something. "Okay, that's new." She turned in a slow circle. The oaks ringed the clearing like sentries, black against a sky gone the wrong colour of purple, and for a moment she could have sworn one of them had moved — not swayed, not bent in wind, but shifted its position entirely, closer than it had been. She counted them. Nine. She counted again. Nine. "Nine's fine. Nine's a normal number of trees." Somewhere to her left, a branch cracked. She spun, pendant swinging out from her chest, and found nothing but more bracken, more shadow, the silhouette of the path she'd come in on. She told herself it was a fox. London parks were full of foxes, bold little bastards that didn't care if you were standing right there. But foxes made noise when they moved after that. Rustling, panting, the scrabble of claws on frozen ground. This had made one sound and then gone utterly, perfectly silent, the kind of silence that came from something choosing not to move rather than something that had stopped. She kept walking. The grove was supposed to have a heart to it, Eva had said, a centre point where the boundary between here and there went thin enough to touch. Rory just needed to find it, needed answers about the pendant and what it wanted from her, and then she could leave and pretend the last month of her life made some kind of sense. The flowers thickened underfoot as she went, brushing cold-warm against her ankles, and she noticed — she couldn't not notice — that they all leaned the same direction. Not towards her. Away from something behind her. She didn't turn around straight away. She made herself count to five first, made herself breathe, because if she spun around gasping like a woman in a bad film then whatever this was would know it had gotten to her. When she did turn, there was nothing there. Of course there was nothing there. Except the tree line looked different. Closer. And she was fairly sure — not certain, but fairly sure — that she'd walked in a straight line from the standing stones, and yet the stones were nowhere in sight now, no pale teeth marking the way back out. "That's not — that's not how paths work," she said, and her voice sounded thin even to her, stretched too tight over something underneath it. A sound came from directly behind the nearest oak. Wet. Low. Like breath drawn through something that wasn't quite a throat, wasn't quite a nose, wasn't quite anything Rory had a word for. She didn't move towards it. She didn't move away either. She stood very still and watched the shadow at the base of that oak, and the shadow watched her back — she was sure of that too, sure the way you're sure someone's staring at you on the tube, that prickling certainty at the back of the neck that has no evidence behind it and doesn't need any. The pendant flared, properly this time, a burst of warmth so sudden she gasped and closed her fist around it through her jumper. "What do you want," she said, not really a question, more a demand thrown out into the dark to see what came back. Nothing came back. The wet breathing sound simply — stopped. And in the new quiet, worse than the sound had been, Rory became aware of the flowers again. They'd turned. All of them, every bloom in the clearing, had rotated on their stems like a field of tiny pale faces, and they were no longer facing away from whatever stood behind the oak. They were facing her. She backed up a step. The ground didn't feel the same beneath her boot — softer, wrong, like she'd stepped somewhere the earth hadn't quite finished deciding to be earth yet. "Right," she breathed. "Right, I'm leaving. Nice grove. Lovely flowers. I'll just —" Something moved at the very edge of her vision, off to the right, low to the ground and quick, gone before she could turn her head fully towards it. When she did turn, the space where it had been held only darkness pooled between two oaks that she was almost certain hadn't been standing quite so close together a moment ago. She didn't run. Running felt like the wrong thing to do, felt like it would matter to whatever was here whether she ran or not, would give it something to want. She walked. Fast, deliberate, the pendant clutched so hard in her fist that the chain bit into her fingers, back towards where the stones ought to be, where they had to be, because a clearing this small couldn't simply swallow its own exit. Behind her, softly, almost gently, something exhaled.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
66.28% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1038
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count2
3
adverb"really"
count1
4
adverb"softly"
count1
5
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"utterly"
1"perfectly"
2"very"
3"really"
4"softly"
5"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
66.28% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1038
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"echo"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"could feel"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count2
5
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"echo"
1"footsteps"
2"could feel"
3"pulsed"
4"warmth"
5"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences72
matches
0"a burst of warmth"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences72
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences77
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen57
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1049
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions11
wordCount983
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity0.51
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
London2
November1
Eva3
Rory5
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
places
0"London"
1"November"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences48
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"quite a throat, wasn't quite a nose, wasn't quite anything Rory had a word for"
1"quite a nose, wasn't quite anything Rory had a word for"
2"quite finished deciding to be earth yet"
3"felt like the wrong thing to do, felt l"
4"felt like it would matter to whatever w"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.86
wordCount1049
matches
0"not swayed, not bent in wind, but shifted its position entirely, closer than it had been"
1"not bent in wind, but shifted its position entirely, closer than it had been"
2"not certain, but fairly sure"
80.09% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences77
matches
0"notice — that they"
1"sure — that she'd"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean33.84
std24.55
cv0.725
sampleLengths
055
114
230
347
410
58
654
720
810
953
104
114
128
1357
1447
1566
1636
1740
1814
1947
2025
21101
2223
2323
2463
254
2631
2713
2861
2974
307
95.52% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences72
matches
0"was supposed"
1"been held"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs173
matches
0"were standing"
1"were facing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences77
ratio0.104
matches
0"Rory checked her phone again — no signal, not even the single bar she'd had in the car park."
1"She'd noticed the same thing about her footsteps — she couldn't hear them anymore, though she could feel the give of the earth beneath her boots."
2"The oaks ringed the clearing like sentries, black against a sky gone the wrong colour of purple, and for a moment she could have sworn one of them had moved — not swayed, not bent in wind, but shifted its position entirely, closer than it had been."
3"The flowers thickened underfoot as she went, brushing cold-warm against her ankles, and she noticed — she couldn't not notice — that they all leaned the same direction."
4"And she was fairly sure — not certain, but fairly sure — that she'd walked in a straight line from the standing stones, and yet the stones were nowhere in sight now, no pale teeth marking the way back out."
5"She stood very still and watched the shadow at the base of that oak, and the shadow watched her back — she was sure of that too, sure the way you're sure someone's staring at you on the tube, that prickling certainty at the back of the neck that has no evidence behind it and doesn't need any."
6"The wet breathing sound simply — stopped."
7"The ground didn't feel the same beneath her boot — softer, wrong, like she'd stepped somewhere the earth hadn't quite finished deciding to be earth yet."
71.23% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount833
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"cold-warm against her"
adverbCount55
adverbRatio0.06602641056422569
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.013205282112845138
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences77
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences77
mean13.62
std12.49
cv0.917
sampleLengths
022
119
214
37
47
513
617
75
820
98
101
1110
123
1310
148
159
1619
1726
183
191
2016
217
223
236
2447
253
261
273
281
298
307
3125
327
3318
349
359
3629
373
3828
3935
4028
413
425
436
4434
458
466
476
481
4940
71.86% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.4935064935064935
totalSentences77
uniqueOpeners38
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences62
matches
0"Somewhere to her left, a"
1"Away from something behind her."
2"Of course there was nothing"
ratio0.048
71.61% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences62
matches
0"She pocketed it and pushed"
1"She crouched, ran a finger"
2"She stood too fast, wiped"
3"Her voice didn't carry the"
4"It went out into the"
5"She'd noticed the same thing"
6"she said, mostly to hear"
7"She turned in a slow"
8"She counted them."
9"She counted again."
10"She spun, pendant swinging out"
11"She told herself it was"
12"She kept walking."
13"She didn't turn around straight"
14"She made herself count to"
15"she said, and her voice"
16"She didn't move towards it."
17"She didn't move away either."
18"She stood very still and"
19"she said, not really a"
ratio0.371
97.10% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount45
totalSentences62
matches
0"The standing stones marked the"
1"Rory checked her phone again"
2"She pocketed it and pushed"
3"Eva had said the grove"
4"Eva had said a lot"
5"Rory muttered, ducking under a"
6"The wildflowers gave her pause."
7"Bluebells, foxglove, things that shouldn't"
8"She crouched, ran a finger"
9"She stood too fast, wiped"
10"Her voice didn't carry the"
11"It went out into the"
12"She'd noticed the same thing"
13"The pendant pulsed."
14"A small warmth against her"
15"she said, mostly to hear"
16"She turned in a slow"
17"The oaks ringed the clearing"
18"She counted them."
19"She counted again."
ratio0.726
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
15.31% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The standing stones marked the tree line like broken teeth, pale under a moon that seemed too bright for London's smog-choked sky."
1"Bluebells, foxglove, things that shouldn't bloom in November, all standing straight and defiant against a frost that hadn't touched them."
2"London parks were full of foxes, bold little bastards that didn't care if you were standing right there."
3"This had made one sound and then gone utterly, perfectly silent, the kind of silence that came from something choosing not to move rather than something that ha…"
4"She stood very still and watched the shadow at the base of that oak, and the shadow watched her back — she was sure of that too, sure the way you're sure someon…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Rory muttered (mutter)"
1"she breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.4
74.5090%