Run: 2026-07-01-01KWEA4GT9C8KGYFY413QQX0KR

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Duration:
29.9s
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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The three deadbolts took Rory longer than usual to work through, her fingers fumbling on the third one when she heard the voice through the wood. "Rory. It's me." She knew the voice before she finished turning the bolt. Low, faintly accented, the kind of voice that made ordinary words sound like they cost something to say. She yanked the door open anyway, because not opening it would have meant admitting she was afraid of what was on the other side. Lucien stood on the landing in one of his charcoal suits, rain darkening the shoulders, his cane held loose in one hand like an afterthought. The amber eye caught the hallway light. The black one didn't. "You could've called," Rory said, arms crossed over an old jumper that had definitely been Eva's at some point. "You blocked my number." "That was the general idea, yeah." He almost smiled, that small tilt of his mouth that used to undo her in about four seconds flat. It still worked in three. "May I come in? Or would you rather conduct this on the landing, for the benefit of your neighbours." Ptolemy chose that moment to yowl from somewhere behind a stack of books, as if lodging his own objection. Rory stepped back and let the door swing wider, which was as close to an invitation as she intended to give. "Two minutes," she said. "Then you're back out in the rain." "Generous." Lucien stepped over the threshold, glancing at the scrolls piled on the armchair, the candle stubs melted into saucers, the general chaos of Eva's research. "She's still playing at scholar, I see." "She's not playing. She found a binding circle in Deptford that actually worked." "I heard." He set the cane against the wall, deliberate, unhurried, the way he did everything. "That's rather why I'm here." Rory's stomach dropped an inch. "Of course it is." "Rory—" "No, go on. Tell me this isn't about you needing something. I'd love to hear it." "It isn't only that." "Right." She laughed, short and humourless, and crossed to the kitchenette to put the kettle on because her hands needed something to do that wasn't reaching for him. "Because the last time I saw you, you walked out of that warehouse without looking back, and I haven't heard a word in six weeks. Now you're on my doorstep in the rain talking about binding circles." "I looked back." His voice had gone quieter. "You weren't looking at me, so it hardly mattered." She turned the tap on harder than necessary. "Don't." "You wanted honesty. I recall you being quite insistent about that, actually, standing in that warehouse, soaked to the bone, telling me you were done with men who disappeared when things became difficult." "And you disappeared." "I was protecting you." "That's what they all say." The kettle clicked. She didn't move to pour it. "You could have told me what you were walking into. Instead I found out from Silas that you'd gone three streets over to negotiate with something that eats faces, Lucien. Faces." "It went perfectly well." "That's not the point." "Then what is the point, exactly? Because from where I'm standing, the point seems to be that you're furious with me for surviving." Rory turned around at that, and something in her chest that had been carefully wound tight for six weeks came a little loose. "The point is you didn't trust me enough to let me in. You never do. You'll hand me a cane with a blade in it and half a joke and call that intimacy, and then when it actually matters, when it's dangerous, you shut the door." "I was frightened," Lucien said, and the words landed strange in the cramped little kitchen, too plain for a man who usually spoke in half-truths and elegant evasions. "Not of the thing in the warehouse. Of what happens to me if something goes wrong and you're standing close enough to be part of the wreckage." Rory stared at him. Rain still clung to his hair, dripping slow down the platinum strands gone dark and heavy. "That's not your decision to make for me." "I'm aware." "So why are you here? If not to apologise properly, then what — you need Eva's research, you need me to ask her for something, and you thought you'd soften me up first?" "I came because Yu-Fei's restaurant had four deliveries cancelled last night after the drivers didn't come back," Lucien said, evenly now, business voice sliding back into place like armour. "Two of them were in your usual rotation, near Limehouse. I wanted to warn you before you found out by walking into it." The kettle steamed uselessly behind her. Rory felt something cold slide down her spine that had nothing to do with old hurt. "Limehouse," she repeated. "Something's hunting delivery drivers. I don't yet know what." His jaw tightened. "I would rather you heard that from me than from Yu-Fei tomorrow morning, after the fact." "You could have texted that." "I could have." His gaze didn't waver. "I wanted to see your face when I said it. I wanted, selfishly, five minutes in a room with you that wasn't ended by a slammed door or a locked one." Rory looked at him for a long moment, at the rain-damp shoulders and the too-careful stillness of his hands, and felt the old pull under her ribs, stubborn and unhelpful and entirely undiminished by six weeks of silence. "Two minutes is up," she said, but she reached past him to pull two mugs down from the cupboard instead of pointing him back toward the door.
created_at"2026-07-01T07:43:43.956Z" 7/1/2026, 7:43:43 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.295
leniency0.591
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.40% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount943
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
84.09% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount943
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"down her spine"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"down her spine"
2"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
99.75% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences33
matches
0"was afraid"
99.57% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences33
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences64
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords944
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
63.23% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions14
wordCount461
uniqueNames3
maxNameDensity1.74
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory8
Eva2
Lucien4
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
places(empty)
globalScore0.632
windowScore0.833
41.30% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences23
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if lodging his own objection"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount944
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences64
matches
0"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean22.48
std18.16
cv0.808
sampleLengths
026
13
252
336
419
54
66
724
819
940
1011
1133
1213
1321
149
151
1616
174
1865
1917
209
2133
223
234
2445
254
264
2723
2869
2955
3020
318
322
3333
3452
3522
363
3728
385
3938
4038
4127
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences33
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs85
matches
0"wasn't reaching"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences64
ratio0
matches(empty)
97.28% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount464
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.04310344827586207
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.015086206896551725
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences64
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences64
mean14.75
std11.13
cv0.755
sampleLengths
026
13
210
318
424
525
67
74
819
94
106
1119
125
1319
1419
1521
164
177
1826
197
2013
2116
225
235
244
251
2616
274
2828
2937
308
319
328
331
3433
353
364
378
386
3931
404
414
4223
4323
4446
4528
4627
474
4816
498
61.46% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.40625
totalSentences64
uniqueOpeners26
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences31
matches(empty)
ratio0
65.16% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences31
matches
0"She knew the voice before"
1"She yanked the door open"
2"He almost smiled, that small"
3"It still worked in three."
4"He set the cane against"
5"She laughed, short and humourless,"
6"His voice had gone quieter"
7"She turned the tap on"
8"She didn't move to pour"
9"His jaw tightened"
10"His gaze didn't waver"
11"she said, but she reached"
ratio0.387
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount29
totalSentences31
matches
0"The three deadbolts took Rory"
1"She knew the voice before"
2"She yanked the door open"
3"Lucien stood on the landing"
4"The amber eye caught the"
5"The black one didn't."
6"Rory said, arms crossed over"
7"He almost smiled, that small"
8"It still worked in three."
9"Ptolemy chose that moment to"
10"Rory stepped back and let"
11"Lucien stepped over the threshold,"
12"He set the cane against"
13"Rory's stomach dropped an inch."
14"She laughed, short and humourless,"
15"His voice had gone quieter"
16"She turned the tap on"
17"The kettle clicked"
18"She didn't move to pour"
19"Rory turned around at that,"
ratio0.935
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences31
matches(empty)
ratio0
23.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences12
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Ptolemy chose that moment to yowl from somewhere behind a stack of books, as if lodging his own objection."
1"Rory turned around at that, and something in her chest that had been carefully wound tight for six weeks came a little loose."
86.54% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Lucien said, and the words landed strange in the cramped little kitchen, too plain for a man who usually spoke in half-truths and elegant evasions"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"She laughed (laugh)"
1"she repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.159
leniency0.318
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.091
80.3864%