Run: 2026-07-01-01KWEA6CTKYV5SJYVWPJJTPD2D

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Duration:
35.0s
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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came at half past eleven, three sharp raps that made Ptolemy bolt off the windowsill and vanish under a pile of research notes. Rory set down the mug of tea she'd been nursing and crossed to the door, working through the deadbolts one by one. She checked the peephole out of habit more than caution. Lucien stood in the hallway, rain darkening the shoulders of his charcoal suit, his cane hooked over one forearm like he'd forgotten he was holding it. She opened the door but kept her hand braced against the frame. "You've got some nerve." "I've been told worse." His black eye caught the hallway light, the amber one staying dark in shadow. "May I come in, or would you rather conduct this conversation for the benefit of your neighbours?" "There's a bell downstairs. It's not decorative." "I didn't want to give you time to decide not to answer." She held the door a moment longer, long enough to make the point, then stepped back and let him pass. He smelled like rain and cigarettes and something underneath that she refused to name, something that used to mean safe before it meant something else entirely. "Nice place," he said, glancing at the scrolls stacked on every flat surface, the books spilling off shelves onto the floor. "Eva's doing, I take it. You've never been this tidy in your life." "Say what you came to say, Lucien." He set the cane against the wall by the door, an old habit, like he was staying. She hated that he still remembered where things went in a flat that wasn't his. "There's a problem. With the Vasquez situation." "There's always a problem with the Vasquez situation. That's not why you're here at half eleven looking like you walked through the Thames to get here." He didn't answer right away. Water dripped from his sleeve onto Eva's floorboards, and he watched it fall rather than look at her. "No," he said. "It's not." "So." "So I wanted to see you." "That's not how this works." She crossed her arms, aware of how close he was standing, aware of the three feet of space between them that felt like nothing at all. "You don't get to disappear for six weeks and then turn up dripping on my floor because you *wanted to see me*." "I didn't disappear. I was in Marseille. My father—" "I know where you were. Doesn't change that you left a note. An actual note, Lucien, like something out of a bad film, and then radio silence for six weeks while I—" She stopped herself, jaw tight. "While you what?" "Doesn't matter." "It clearly does, or you wouldn't have stopped talking." She turned away from him, busying her hands with the kettle even though she'd just made tea, even though the last thing she wanted was more tea. Behind her she heard him move, the particular quiet way he had of crossing a room like the air itself made way for him. "I thought you were dead," she said, to the kettle, not to him. "For about four days I genuinely thought you were dead, and I didn't know who to ask because half your contacts wouldn't tell me the time of day, and the other half I don't trust as far as I can throw them." "Rory." "Don't." "I should have called." "You should have called on day one. Not day forty-two, standing in my kitchen — well, Eva's kitchen — like this is a normal Tuesday." "Would you have answered? If I'd called on day one?" That stopped her. She set the kettle down without switching it on. "I don't know," she said. "Probably not. I was furious with you." "And now?" "Now I'm furious with you and relieved you're not dead, and I genuinely can't work out which feeling is winning, which is deeply annoying, so thank you for that as well." The corner of his mouth moved, not quite a smile. "I've missed your particular way of insulting me." "I wasn't insulting you. I was being honest, there's a difference." She finally turned to face him properly. Up close he looked tired in a way she hadn't seen before, the fine lines at the edge of his black eye deeper than she remembered. "Why Marseille? You never talk about your father." "He's dying." He said it simply, the way he said most difficult things, stripped of ornament. "Slowly. It's a demon thing, it takes years, but this was — a bad stretch. I went because someone had to, and there was no one else." "You could have told me that." "I could have. I chose not to, because telling you would have meant you'd have come with me, and Avaros is not a place I take people I—" He stopped. "People you what, Lucien?" He looked at her, both eyes now, the amber catching the lamp and the black staying fathomless, and for a second she thought he might actually finish the sentence. "People I'd rather not lose," he said instead. "That's not what you were going to say." "It's what I'm willing to say tonight." She wanted to push, wanted to drag the rest of it out of him the way she'd have done a year ago, before she'd learned exactly how good he was at not saying things. But there was something in the set of his shoulders, something worn thin, and she found the anger in her chest sitting alongside something softer, more complicated, harder to hold onto. "You're soaked through," she said finally. "There's a towel in the bathroom. Second door." "Is that forgiveness?" "It's a towel, Lucien. Don't get ahead of yourself." But she didn't move to unbolt the door and send him back out into the rain, and they both knew what that meant, standing there in Eva's cramped flat with the cat watching them from under a pile of research notes and the whole unfinished shape of six weeks lying open between them like something neither one of them had the nerve to close.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he said instead [instead]"
1"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.234
leniency0.468
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.085
95.07% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1014
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
90.14% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1014
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"the last thing"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"the last thing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences33
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences33
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences68
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen64
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords4
totalWords1017
ratio0.004
matches
0"wanted to see me"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions3
wordCount558
uniqueNames2
maxNameDensity0.36
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity0.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy1
Eva2
persons
0"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences25
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"smelled like rain and cigarettes and somet"
1"felt like nothing at all"
2"not quite a smile"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1017
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences68
matches
0"hated that he"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean20.76
std18.89
cv0.91
sampleLengths
057
126
212
34
435
57
612
746
834
97
1032
117
1226
1323
145
151
166
1753
189
1937
203
212
229
2351
2455
251
261
274
2825
2910
3012
3112
322
3331
3418
3552
3643
376
3830
394
4029
418
428
437
4465
4514
463
479
4864
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences33
matches(empty)
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs99
matches
0"was holding"
1"was staying"
2"was standing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences68
ratio0
matches(empty)
97.37% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount558
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.043010752688172046
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.012544802867383513
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences68
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences68
mean14.96
std11.94
cv0.799
sampleLengths
025
122
210
326
412
54
618
717
87
912
1020
1126
1221
1313
147
1517
1615
177
1826
195
2018
213
222
231
246
2531
2622
279
2837
293
302
319
3227
3324
3413
3542
361
371
384
3925
4010
413
429
435
447
452
4631
4710
488
4918
72.55% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.47058823529411764
totalSentences68
uniqueOpeners32
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences30
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences30
matches
0"She checked the peephole out"
1"She opened the door but"
2"His black eye caught the"
3"She held the door a"
4"He smelled like rain and"
5"he said, glancing at the"
6"He set the cane against"
7"She hated that he still"
8"He didn't answer right away."
9"She crossed her arms, aware"
10"She stopped herself, jaw tight"
11"She turned away from him,"
12"she said, to the kettle,"
13"She set the kettle down"
14"She finally turned to face"
15"He said it simply, the"
16"He looked at her, both"
17"he said instead"
18"She wanted to push, wanted"
19"she said finally"
ratio0.667
26.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount26
totalSentences30
matches
0"The knock came at half"
1"Rory set down the mug"
2"She checked the peephole out"
3"Lucien stood in the hallway,"
4"She opened the door but"
5"His black eye caught the"
6"She held the door a"
7"He smelled like rain and"
8"he said, glancing at the"
9"He set the cane against"
10"She hated that he still"
11"He didn't answer right away."
12"Water dripped from his sleeve"
13"She crossed her arms, aware"
14"She stopped herself, jaw tight"
15"She turned away from him,"
16"she said, to the kettle,"
17"That stopped her."
18"She set the kettle down"
19"The corner of his mouth"
ratio0.867
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences30
matches(empty)
ratio0
63.49% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences18
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The knock came at half past eleven, three sharp raps that made Ptolemy bolt off the windowsill and vanish under a pile of research notes."
1"He smelled like rain and cigarettes and something underneath that she refused to name, something that used to mean safe before it meant something else entirely."
79.55% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She stopped, jaw tight"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.149
leniency0.298
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.4942%