Run: 2026-07-01-01KWEA9ZQ9V66947AB3CNTAHD2

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Duration:
41.1s
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$0.030320
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Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The address had come through at half four in the morning, scrawled on a call log that made no sense to anyone at the station — a flat above a defunct locksmith's on Chalk Farm Road, reported by a neighbour who'd smelled something through the floorboards. Quinn climbed the narrow stairwell with her torch cutting through dust that hung motionless in the air, like it hadn't been disturbed in years despite the building being occupied. The door to the flat stood open. Frost rimed the inside of the frame, thick as the kind that formed on a freezer left unplugged for a week, except it was July and the heatwave outside had turned the tarmac soft. "Detective Quinn." DS Patel straightened from where he'd been crouched by the body, notebook in hand. "Victim's male, early thirties, no ID on him yet. Landlord says the tenant's name was Halloway. Moved in eight months back, paid cash." Quinn crossed the threshold. The man lay on his back in the centre of the room, arms flung wide, mouth open like he'd been trying to shout something out before he stopped being able to shout at all. A ring of salt circled the body, unbroken except for one gap no wider than a boot print. "Gas leak," Patel said. "That's my read. Look at the state of him — no visible wounds, no blood. Pupils blown. We had a case in Lewisham last winter, same presentation, turned out to be a faulty boiler." "Where's the boiler in this flat?" Patel checked his notes, flipped a page. "There isn't one. Storage heaters." "So there's no gas line to leak from." "Could be carbon monoxide from next door, seeping through a wall cavity." Quinn crouched at the edge of the salt ring, careful not to disturb it, though something told her the disturbance had already happened, whatever it was. The salt wasn't table salt. It caught the torchlight with a faint blue shimmer, coarse-grained, laid down in a hand that hadn't been shaking. "You don't lay a perfect circle like this while you're choking on fumes," she said. "Look at the grain size, Patel. Consistent, deliberate. Someone did this on purpose, and they did it before whatever killed him." "Or he did it himself. Panic response. People do strange things when they can't breathe." She didn't answer that. Her eyes had caught the walls. Every window in the flat had been painted shut, layers of black gloss built up over what looked like years, but the paint tin sitting in the corner had a receipt taped to it dated three days ago. "He painted these windows shut three days before he died." "Maybe he had a fear of break-ins. This area's had a spate of burglaries." "Nobody paints windows shut to stop a break-in, Patel. You'd bar them. You'd get a lock. This is meant to stop something getting out, not in." She moved to the far wall where a mirror hung, its surface clouded with a residue that looked like verdigris, the same green-black bloom she'd seen once on an old brass instrument confiscated three years back, in the last week before Morris disappeared off the face of the earth without so much as a body to bury. She hadn't thought about that patina in a long time. She'd trained herself not to. "Ma'am?" "Get SOCO to swab this mirror. And bag whatever's under the bed, there's something reflecting under there." Patel crouched, reached, came back with a small brass compass, its casing dulled with the same green corrosion, its face etched with markings that weren't numbers. The needle spun, lazy, unbothered by any magnetic north Quinn had ever heard of. "Probably an antique," Patel said, turning it over. "Explains the cash payments, maybe. Bloke was into collecting." "Turn it toward the window." He did, humouring her. The needle swung hard, snapped toward the blacked-out glass and held there, trembling, as if the glass itself were pulling it. "That's not a compass anomaly," Quinn said. "That's not how magnets behave." "Old mechanism. Probably knackered." "Then explain why it's pointing at a wall he painted shut three days ago, and why the salt ring has a gap exactly where that wall meets the floor." Patel didn't have an answer for that. He set the compass down on the table, careful, the way you'd set down something that might bite. Quinn walked the gap in the salt line, heel to toe, and knelt where it met the skirting board. A scorch mark, no bigger than a coin, blackened the plaster, radiating outward in a pattern that reminded her of frost crystallising on a window, except drawn in soot instead of ice. "He wasn't trying to keep something out," she said. "He broke the circle himself. From the inside." "Why would he do that?" "Because whatever he was talking to on the other side of that wall told him to." Patel gave a short laugh, the kind that came out when a man wanted to dismiss something and couldn't quite manage it. "You're saying he opened a door." "I'm saying eighteen years on this job and I've never seen frost on a window in July, or salt laid in a perfect ring by a man supposedly choking on gas that isn't there, or a compass that points at a wall instead of north." She stood, brushing salt from her fingers, though it didn't want to brush off, clinging faintly to her skin like it had a memory of its own. "Bag the compass separately. Not with the rest of the evidence. I want it in my custody by end of day." "Chain of custody's going to ask questions if it's just you handling it." "Let them ask." She looked back at the body once more, at the mouth still open on whatever last word never made it out, and thought of Morris, three years gone, no case file that ever closed properly. "Get me everything on the tenant. Every name he used. And find out what shops on this road buy salt in bulk that doesn't come from a supermarket."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.242
leniency0.485
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1020
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Patel"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
80.39% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1020
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"perfect"
count2
1
word"etched"
count1
2
word"magnetic"
count1
highlights
0"perfect"
1"etched"
2"magnetic"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences34
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences34
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences59
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen72
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1022
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
91.76% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount601
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.16
worstName"Patel"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Patel"
discoveredNames
Chalk1
Farm1
Road1
July1
Patel7
Quinn6
Morris2
persons
0"Patel"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
places
0"Chalk"
1"Farm"
2"Road"
globalScore0.918
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences24
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like years, but the paint tin sitt"
1"looked like verdigris, the same green-bla"
2"quite manage it"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1022
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean29.2
std22.69
cv0.777
sampleLengths
075
141
239
356
438
56
612
78
812
950
1036
1115
1248
1310
1414
1526
1672
171
1817
1940
2017
215
2225
2312
244
2529
2625
2751
2817
295
3016
3128
3293
3313
3466
74.30% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences34
matches
0"been disturbed"
1"been crouched"
2"been painted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs112
matches
0"were pulling"
94.43% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences59
ratio0.017
matches
0"The address had come through at half four in the morning, scrawled on a call log that made no sense to anyone at the station — a flat above a defunct locksmith's on Chalk Farm Road, reported by a neighbour who'd smelled something through the floorboards."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount603
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"same green-black bloom"
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.026533996683250415
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.004975124378109453
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences59
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences59
mean17.32
std13.94
cv0.805
sampleLengths
046
129
27
334
416
523
64
734
818
94
1034
116
127
135
148
1512
1626
175
1819
1915
2021
2115
224
236
2438
2510
2614
2726
2857
2910
305
311
3217
3326
3414
358
369
375
384
3921
407
415
424
4329
447
4518
4619
4732
489
498
93.22% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.6101694915254238
totalSentences59
uniqueOpeners36
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences30
matches(empty)
ratio0
86.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount10
totalSentences30
matches
0"It caught the torchlight with"
1"She didn't answer that."
2"Her eyes had caught the"
3"She moved to the far"
4"She hadn't thought about that"
5"She'd trained herself not to."
6"He did, humouring her."
7"He set the compass down"
8"She stood, brushing salt from"
9"She looked back at the"
ratio0.333
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount30
totalSentences30
matches
0"The address had come through"
1"Quinn climbed the narrow stairwell"
2"The door to the flat"
3"Frost rimed the inside of"
4"DS Patel straightened from where"
5"Quinn crossed the threshold."
6"The man lay on his"
7"A ring of salt circled"
8"Patel checked his notes, flipped"
9"Quinn crouched at the edge"
10"The salt wasn't table salt."
11"It caught the torchlight with"
12"She didn't answer that."
13"Her eyes had caught the"
14"Every window in the flat"
15"She moved to the far"
16"She hadn't thought about that"
17"She'd trained herself not to."
18"Patel crouched, reached, came back"
19"The needle spun, lazy, unbothered"
ratio1
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences30
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences17
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The address had come through at half four in the morning, scrawled on a call log that made no sense to anyone at the station — a flat above a defunct locksmith'…"
1"Quinn climbed the narrow stairwell with her torch cutting through dust that hung motionless in the air, like it hadn't been disturbed in years despite the build…"
2"Frost rimed the inside of the frame, thick as the kind that formed on a freezer left unplugged for a week, except it was July and the heatwave outside had turne…"
3"It caught the torchlight with a faint blue shimmer, coarse-grained, laid down in a hand that hadn't been shaking."
4"She moved to the far wall where a mirror hung, its surface clouded with a residue that looked like verdigris, the same green-black bloom she'd seen once on an o…"
5"Patel crouched, reached, came back with a small brass compass, its casing dulled with the same green corrosion, its face etched with markings that weren't numbe…"
6"The needle swung hard, snapped toward the blacked-out glass and held there, trembling, as if the glass itself were pulling it."
7"A scorch mark, no bigger than a coin, blackened the plaster, radiating outward in a pattern that reminded her of frost crystallising on a window, except drawn i…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.152
leniency0.303
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.8259%