Run: 2026-07-01-01KWEAA3ZEFASS3N9Q96MG9MT1

Run Details

Duration:
37.0s
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$0.027098
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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hit the pavement like static, turning Camden High Street into a smear of neon and shadow. Quinn's boots slapped through puddles as she rounded the corner past a shuttered chip shop, breath tearing at her throat. "Stop! Police!" The figure ahead didn't even glance back. Just a black coat, hood up, moving with an unnatural fluidity that made her stomach twist. Eighteen years of chasing people through London streets, and she'd learned to read a runner's gait—the stumble of panic, the calculated sprint of someone who knew the terrain. This wasn't either. This was something gliding. Her radio crackled against her hip. She ignored it. Backup was eight minutes out, and eight minutes was a lifetime. The suspect cut left down an alley slick with rain and rot, vaulting a chain-link fence without breaking stride. Quinn hit the fence hard, fingers screaming as she hauled herself over, jacket catching on a barb. She ripped free and kept going, the leather watch on her wrist ticking against her pulse like a second heartbeat. "You're not getting away from me." The words came out ragged, more promise to herself than threat to him. Three years since Morris. Three years since she'd watched her partner disappear into something the official report called "structural collapse" when she knew—knew—the walls hadn't moved on their own. This case had the same smell to it. The same wrongness curling at the edges. The figure ducked through a gap in a boarded fence, into the skeletal remains of what used to be a Tube station entrance, sealed off years ago after the flooding scare. Quinn's torch beam caught peeling warning signs, DANGER KEEP OUT, rust bleeding down concrete like old wounds. She didn't hesitate. Hesitation got people killed. Hesitation got partners killed. Down she went, into a stairwell that swallowed the rain and the streetlight both, her torch beam swinging wild against walls scrawled with graffiti older than she was. The suspect's footsteps echoed ahead, unhurried now, almost mocking. "There's nowhere to go down here," she called out. "I've got units coming." No response. Just water dripping somewhere in the dark, and that liquid smoothness to his movement that made the hair on her arms stand up. The stairwell bottomed out into a platform that shouldn't have existed—not on any map she'd seen, not on any transit plan filed with the city. Lanterns hung along the walls, real flame flickering behind glass, casting a warmth that had no business existing in a dead station. Quinn's torch beam felt suddenly stupid, redundant, a toy in a place built for something else. And there were people. Dozens of them, moving between stalls built from old shop counters and shipping crates, haggling over goods that caught the lantern light in ways glass and metal shouldn't. A woman with skin like cracked porcelain sold jars of something that moved on its own. A man—if he was a man—weighed out powder on scales made of bone. Quinn's suspect had stopped at the platform's edge, hood down now, and he was smiling at her. Not the smile of a man caught. The smile of a man who'd led her exactly where he wanted. "Detective," he said, and his voice carried a rasp like static on an old recording. "You shouldn't be here." "Neither should you." "Ah, but I have a token." He held it up, something small and pale between two fingers, and dropped it before she could get close enough to see. It rolled into a drain grate and vanished. "Enjoy explaining that one to your superiors," he said, and turned, melting into the crowd like smoke finding a draft. Quinn's hand went to her hip, to the reassurance of her sidearm, and she took one step forward before a voice stopped her cold. "I wouldn't." An old man behind the nearest stall, missing half his teeth, eyes clouded white but somehow fixed on her with perfect clarity. "You don't have a token, love. Means you don't belong. Means things down here start to notice you." "I'm a police officer." "Not down here you're not." The crowd had gone quiet around her, a ripple of attention spreading outward from her position like a stone dropped in still water. Faces turned. Some human. Some not quite. Quinn felt the weight of eighteen years of instinct screaming at her to retreat, and beneath that, something older and colder—the memory of Morris's face the last time she'd seen it, confused and afraid in a way she'd never seen him afraid before. Her radio crackled again. Static, then nothing. No signal down here. Of course there wasn't. She could go back. Climb the stairs, wait for backup that would arrive to find nothing but a boarded-up entrance and a missing suspect, another unexplained gap in a case file that already had too many. She could write it up as a dead end, the way she'd written up Morris's death as a structural failure, and let it join all the other things she couldn't explain in the file cabinet in her chest that never quite closed. Or she could take one more step. The suspect was gone, swallowed by the crowd, but the smell of him lingered—ozone and wet stone, something burnt at the edges. Somewhere in this market, if the old man was to be believed, she was already marked. Already noticed. Quinn's fingers found the edge of her badge, still clipped to her belt, absurd and useless down here. She thought of Morris. She thought of the eight minutes until backup arrived at a stairwell that led to nothing. "Fine," she said quietly, mostly to herself. "Let's see what you're all so afraid of." She stepped further onto the platform, torch beam cutting through lantern smoke, and the market seemed to inhale around her, every eye finding her in the dark.
created_at"2026-07-01T07:46:47.417Z" 7/1/2026, 7:46:47 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
75.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.313
leniency0.625
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.125
94.92% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount984
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.27% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount984
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"calculated"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"echoed"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count1
6
word"porcelain"
count1
7
word"perfect"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"calculated"
2"pulse"
3"footsteps"
4"echoed"
5"warmth"
6"porcelain"
7"perfect"
8"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences65
matches(empty)
98.90% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences65
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences76
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords976
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount897
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.89
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Morris"
discoveredNames
Camden1
High1
Street1
London1
Morris4
Tube1
Quinn8
persons
0"Morris"
1"Quinn"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
3"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount976
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean28.71
std21.65
cv0.754
sampleLengths
037
12
258
320
456
56
657
748
811
937
1013
1125
1263
1361
1436
1519
163
176
1830
1920
2024
212
2222
2318
244
255
2673
2715
2878
297
3040
3138
3215
3327
99.87% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences65
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs151
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences76
ratio0.079
matches
0"Eighteen years of chasing people through London streets, and she'd learned to read a runner's gait—the stumble of panic, the calculated sprint of someone who knew the terrain."
1"Three years since she'd watched her partner disappear into something the official report called \"structural collapse\" when she knew—knew—the walls hadn't moved on their own."
2"The stairwell bottomed out into a platform that shouldn't have existed—not on any map she'd seen, not on any transit plan filed with the city."
3"A man—if he was a man—weighed out powder on scales made of bone."
4"Quinn felt the weight of eighteen years of instinct screaming at her to retreat, and beneath that, something older and colder—the memory of Morris's face the last time she'd seen it, confused and afraid in a way she'd never seen him afraid before."
5"The suspect was gone, swallowed by the crowd, but the smell of him lingered—ozone and wet stone, something burnt at the edges."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount907
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.02866593164277839
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.004410143329658214
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences76
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences76
mean12.84
std9.9
cv0.771
sampleLengths
017
120
22
37
416
528
63
74
86
93
1011
1119
1217
1320
146
1513
164
1725
188
197
2031
2117
223
234
244
2528
269
279
284
292
3023
3125
3222
3316
344
3528
3616
3713
3817
397
4012
4115
424
433
446
4522
468
4720
4824
492
76.32% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.5131578947368421
totalSentences76
uniqueOpeners39
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences61
matches
0"Just a black coat, hood"
1"Just water dripping somewhere in"
2"Of course there wasn't."
3"Somewhere in this market, if"
ratio0.066
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences61
matches
0"Her radio crackled against her"
1"She ignored it."
2"She ripped free and kept"
3"She didn't hesitate."
4"she called out"
5"he said, and his voice"
6"He held it up, something"
7"It rolled into a drain"
8"he said, and turned, melting"
9"Her radio crackled again."
10"She could go back."
11"She could write it up"
12"She thought of Morris."
13"She thought of the eight"
14"she said quietly, mostly to"
15"She stepped further onto the"
ratio0.262
74.75% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount47
totalSentences61
matches
0"Quinn's boots slapped through puddles"
1"The figure ahead didn't even"
2"This wasn't either."
3"This was something gliding."
4"Her radio crackled against her"
5"She ignored it."
6"Backup was eight minutes out,"
7"The suspect cut left down"
8"Quinn hit the fence hard,"
9"She ripped free and kept"
10"The words came out ragged,"
11"This case had the same"
12"The same wrongness curling at"
13"The figure ducked through a"
14"Quinn's torch beam caught peeling"
15"She didn't hesitate."
16"Hesitation got people killed."
17"Hesitation got partners killed."
18"The suspect's footsteps echoed ahead,"
19"she called out"
ratio0.77
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Just a black coat, hood up, moving with an unnatural fluidity that made her stomach twist."
1"Eighteen years of chasing people through London streets, and she'd learned to read a runner's gait—the stumble of panic, the calculated sprint of someone who kn…"
2"She ripped free and kept going, the leather watch on her wrist ticking against her pulse like a second heartbeat."
3"Down she went, into a stairwell that swallowed the rain and the streetlight both, her torch beam swinging wild against walls scrawled with graffiti older than s…"
4"Just water dripping somewhere in the dark, and that liquid smoothness to his movement that made the hair on her arms stand up."
5"Lanterns hung along the walls, real flame flickering behind glass, casting a warmth that had no business existing in a dead station."
6"Dozens of them, moving between stalls built from old shop counters and shipping crates, haggling over goods that caught the lantern light in ways glass and meta…"
7"Climb the stairs, wait for backup that would arrive to find nothing but a boarded-up entrance and a missing suspect, another unexplained gap in a case file that…"
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said quietly, mostly to herself"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.188
leniency0.375
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.3008%