Run: 2026-07-01-01KWEAB17Z5BT57Q8NMMRRXVGN

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Duration:
48.9s
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$0.035836
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Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign buzzed against the window, throwing its usual sickly glow across the wet pavement. Rory sat at the far end of the bar, peeling the label off a bottle of Peroni with her thumbnail, waiting for her shift at the Golden Empress to properly end in her head even though her body had clocked off an hour ago. Silas was restocking the shelf behind her, muttering about a delivery of gin that hadn't shown, when the door swung open and let in a gust of cold October air. Rory didn't look up until she heard the voice. "Rory Carter. As I live and breathe." She turned, and for a second the name didn't attach itself to a face she recognised. The woman standing in the doorway wore a coat that looked expensive in the way that tried too hard, and her hair, once a wild copper mess that Rory remembered braiding at three in the morning during exam term, hung flat and bleached at the ends. Then the smile arrived, crooked on the left side the way it always had been, and the years folded back. "Meg?" "Don't sound so shocked. I do still exist." Meg crossed the room and sat on the stool beside her without asking, the way she used to slide into any space like she'd been invited. Silas glanced over, caught Rory's eye, and busied himself with the gin order that hadn't come. "God. Meg Ferris. What are you even doing in Soho?" "Client dinner. Ran long, ran dry, needed a real drink after." Meg waved two fingers at Silas. "Whatever's brown and expensive." "You're still doing the law thing, then." "Still doing the law thing." Meg said it like a diagnosis. "Corporate, now. Mergers. I sit in rooms with men who've never carried their own bags and I tell them how to buy each other's companies without going to prison." "Sounds thrilling." "It pays for the coat." Meg pinched the lapel between two fingers, let it fall. "You always did have a mouth on you. I used to love that about you. Everyone else in our year was so bloody earnest." Silas set the whisky down without a word and drifted off toward the till, giving them room. "I thought about you a lot, actually," Meg said, turning the glass but not drinking. "After you dropped out. Everyone said you'd gone off with some bloke, that you'd thrown the whole degree away for him." "That's the short version." "Is there a long version?" Rory picked at the label again. "There's a version where I got out before it got worse. That's the only version I tell anymore." Meg's face did something complicated, a flicker of the old softness underneath something harder that had grown over it like scar tissue. "I heard bits. Eva mentioned something once, at a wedding. I should've called." "You had exams." "I had exams for six years, Rory. That's not an excuse, that's just what happened instead of being a friend." The admission sat between them, unglamorous and plain. Rory turned her bottle in a slow circle on the bar top. "You were going to be a judge," she said. "You used to say it like it was already true." "I remember." Meg laughed, but there wasn't much behind it. "Lord Justice Ferris. God, we were arrogant." "You're not arrogant now." "No." Meg looked at her drink instead of at Rory. "Turns out being brilliant at nineteen doesn't buy you anything at thirty-one except a corner office and a marriage that lasted four years and eleven days. I counted, once. Sad, isn't it, counting." "I'm sorry." "Don't be. You didn't do it." Meg took the whisky in one go, set the glass down harder than she needed to. "What about you, then? Last I heard you were somewhere in London working odd jobs, and I thought, God, what a waste, she had the best mind in the cohort and she's delivering pizzas." "Chinese food, actually. And I like it. I like the woman I work for. I like the bloke who owns this place." Rory nodded toward Silas, who was pretending very hard not to listen from the other end of the bar. "It's not what anyone pictured. But nobody's trying to bury me under paperwork, and nobody's telling me who to be." "That's not nothing," Meg said, and for a moment something like envy crossed her face, quick and unwelcome, like she hadn't meant to let it show. "I used to think you'd thrown your life away leaving Cardiff. Now I look at you and you seem more like yourself than I remember. That's the annoying part." "You look tired, Meg." "I am tired. Bone tired. The kind you don't sleep off." She turned the empty glass in her hands, studying it as if it might refill on its own. "We used to talk about this, remember? Sitting on your floor with a bottle of cheap wine, saying we'd never become the kind of people who forgot each other over a job. And then I did exactly that. I became precisely the thing we swore we wouldn't." "You didn't forget. You're sitting here." "I'm sitting here because I recognised the back of your head through a window and couldn't make myself walk past." Meg's voice cracked at the edges, just slightly, the crack of someone who hadn't let it show in a long time. "That's not the same as ten years of not calling." Rory didn't have an answer for that, so she didn't offer a false one. She reached over and refilled Meg's glass herself, using the bottle Silas kept behind the bar for regulars, and slid it across. "We're here now," she said. "That's something." Meg looked at the glass, then at her, and something in her shoulders let go, just a fraction, the posture of a woman setting down a bag she'd been carrying too long without noticing the weight. "To wasted potential," she said, lifting it. "To turning out different than we planned." They drank to that instead, and neither of them mentioned how long it might be before they sat like this again, though both of them, in the quiet under the neon buzz, understood the answer without needing to say it aloud.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.318
leniency0.636
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.73% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1051
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"precisely"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"precisely"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
85.73% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1051
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"flicker"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"potential"
count1
highlights
0"flicker"
1"weight"
2"potential"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences32
matches(empty)
98.21% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences32
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences62
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1051
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount554
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.35
worstName"Meg"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Meg"
discoveredNames
Peroni1
Golden1
Empress1
October1
Rory9
Silas6
Meg13
persons
0"Rory"
1"Silas"
2"Meg"
places
0"Golden"
globalScore0.327
windowScore0
63.79% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences29
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something like envy crossed her face, quick"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1051
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean26.28
std23.74
cv0.904
sampleLengths
091
19
27
382
41
58
642
710
821
97
1040
112
1239
1317
1436
154
165
1724
1835
193
2020
2120
2219
2317
244
2543
262
2756
2861
2955
304
3176
326
3351
3436
357
3636
377
387
3941
94.30% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences32
matches
0"been invited"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs99
matches
0"was pretending"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences62
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount554
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.03429602888086643
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.005415162454873646
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences62
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences62
mean16.95
std12.38
cv0.73
sampleLengths
017
144
230
39
47
516
646
720
81
98
1026
1116
1210
1317
144
157
1611
1729
182
1915
2024
2117
2215
2321
244
255
266
2718
2822
2913
303
3120
328
3312
349
3510
3610
377
384
3910
4033
412
4222
4334
4441
4520
4626
4729
484
4929
70.43% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.45161290322580644
totalSentences62
uniqueOpeners28
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences30
matches
0"Then the smile arrived, crooked"
ratio0.033
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount5
totalSentences30
matches
0"She turned, and for a"
1"She turned the empty glass"
2"She reached over and refilled"
3"she said, lifting it"
4"They drank to that instead,"
ratio0.167
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount29
totalSentences30
matches
0"The green neon sign buzzed"
1"Rory sat at the far"
2"Silas was restocking the shelf"
3"Rory didn't look up until"
4"She turned, and for a"
5"The woman standing in the"
6"Meg crossed the room and"
7"Silas glanced over, caught Rory's"
8"Meg waved two fingers at"
9"Meg said it like a"
10"Meg pinched the lapel between"
11"Silas set the whisky down"
12"Meg said, turning the glass"
13"Rory picked at the label"
14"Meg's face did something complicated,"
15"The admission sat between them,"
16"Rory turned her bottle in"
17"Meg laughed, but there wasn't"
18"Meg looked at her drink"
19"Meg took the whisky in"
ratio0.967
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences30
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences15
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Rory sat at the far end of the bar, peeling the label off a bottle of Peroni with her thumbnail, waiting for her shift at the Golden Empress to properly end in …"
1"Silas was restocking the shelf behind her, muttering about a delivery of gin that hadn't shown, when the door swung open and let in a gust of cold October air."
2"The woman standing in the doorway wore a coat that looked expensive in the way that tried too hard, and her hair, once a wild copper mess that Rory remembered b…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Meg laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.159
leniency0.318
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.045
83.2730%