Run: 2026-07-01-01KWEADG34122AKQQ8PAYJD7ZH

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Duration:
35.5s
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$0.026794
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Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The three deadbolts stuck the way they always did, and Rory swore under her breath as she wrestled with the middle one. Ptolemy wound around her ankles, unbothered by the hour, unbothered by anything except the tin of tuna she'd forgotten to open. She yanked the door open ready to tell Eva to stop losing her keys again. Lucien stood on the landing instead, rain darkening the shoulders of his charcoal suit, cane hooked over one forearm like he'd just stepped out of a different century. "You're not Eva." "An astute observation. May I come in, or do you intend to leave me decorating the stairwell?" "Depends on why you're here." "Does it matter? I'm already wet." Rory held the door another second before she stepped back, more out of habit than hospitality. Lucien crossed the threshold and surveyed the flat the way he surveyed everything — cataloguing exits, weak points, things worth stealing. His eyes caught on the stacks of books, the scattered scrolls, the general chaos Eva called research and Rory called a fire hazard. "Charming as ever," he said. "Though I confess I expected more wards. Given the company you keep." "Eva handles that. I handle the door." "A division of labour. How practical." He set his cane against the arm of the sofa, the movement precise, unhurried, the kind of care that made Rory's jaw tighten. She remembered that precision on her skin once, in a hallway three months and a lifetime ago, before she'd told him to get out and meant it. "You could've called," she said. "I did. Four times." "I blocked your number." "Ah. That would explain the silence." He said it lightly, but something moved behind his mismatched eyes, amber catching the lamp, black staying flat and unreadable. Rory crossed her arms, aware of how thin her jumper was, how the flat suddenly felt too small for the two of them and a cat. "So talk," she said. "Then leave." "Straight to business. I'd forgotten how efficient you are when you're angry." "I'm not angry." "You're holding your own elbows like you're keeping yourself from throwing something. At me, presumably." "Don't flatter yourself. I'm cold." "It's July." "It's London." That almost got a smile out of him, the corner of his mouth twitching before he caught it, tucked it away like he did everything else. He sat without being asked, which was so entirely him that Rory felt something old and stupid flare in her chest, somewhere between fondness and fury. "There's a problem," he said. "With the Ashworth contract." "There's always a problem with the Ashworth contract. That's not why you're here at eleven at night looking like you walked through the Thames." "No," he admitted. "It isn't." "Then why." He didn't answer right away. He looked at the window instead, at the rain streaking the glass, at anything that wasn't her face. "I heard about Evan," he said finally. The name landed like a dropped glass, and Rory felt the old flinch before she could stop it. She unfolded her arms, refolded them the other way. "How." "I make it my business to know things. You're aware of this." "I don't want your pity, Lucien." "Good. I haven't brought any." "Then what did you bring?" "An apology, mostly unused. I find I don't know how to give it properly." Rory laughed, short and disbelieving, the sound scraping out of her before she could smooth it into something more composed. "You? Not knowing how to do something? That's new." "I've had practice at everything except this." "At what, exactly? Showing up soaking wet at midnight?" "At telling someone I was wrong." The rain kept going outside, tapping the glass in that patient London way, like it had nowhere else to be and neither did they. Rory sat on the arm of the chair across from him, not quite trusting her legs to hold her if she stood there any longer pretending this was easy. "You weren't wrong," she said. "You were careful. There's a difference." "Careful got you hurt. I watched you walk into that man's orbit and said nothing, because I told myself it wasn't my place, that I had no claim, that—" "You didn't have a claim, Lucien. That was the whole point. You made sure of that." "I know." "You made very sure. Very charcoal-suit, very ivory-cane, very 'I don't do attachments' sure." "I know," he said again, quieter this time, and something in his voice cracked just enough to let the truth through. "I told myself distance was a kindness. That whatever I am — whatever my father left in me — wasn't fit to be near something as breakable as affection." "I'm not breakable." "No. You're not. I was wrong about that too." Rory looked at him properly then, at the rain still clinging to his hair, at the tired set of his shoulders that no tailored suit could disguise. She remembered the hallway, the way his hands had been careful even when his voice wasn't, and how she'd hated him a little for being gentle right before he left. "You can't just turn up," she said. "Three months of nothing, and now you're on my — Eva's — doorstep with an apology you don't know how to finish." "I'm aware of the timing being poor." "The timing is atrocious." "Shall I go, then?" She should say yes. The word sat right there, easy, obvious. Ptolemy jumped onto the arm of the sofa and settled against Lucien's leg like a traitor, and Lucien's hand moved to scratch behind the cat's ear without thinking, an absent, unguarded gesture that undid something in Rory's chest she'd spent three months trying to keep stitched shut. "Stay till the rain stops," she said. "That's all I'm offering." "That's more than I expected." "Don't get used to it." "Wouldn't dream of it," he said, and the smile he gave her then was smaller than his usual, careful in a different way than before — like he was handing her something breakable and trusting her not to drop it.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he said finally [finally]"
1"he said again [again]"
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.193
leniency0.386
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.07
70.33% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1011
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count4
highlights
0"lightly"
1"suddenly"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
80.22% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1011
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"unreadable"
count1
2
word"efficient"
count1
3
word"affection"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"unreadable"
2"efficient"
3"affection"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences36
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences36
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences82
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1017
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
59.24% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount606
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity1.82
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory11
Eva2
London1
Lucien4
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.592
windowScore0.833
50.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences25
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite trusting her legs to hold her if she stood there any longer pretending this was easy"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1017
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences82
matches
0"remembered that precision"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs62
mean16.4
std16.83
cv1.026
sampleLengths
043
115
228
33
417
55
66
760
817
97
106
1150
125
134
144
156
1646
176
1812
193
2015
215
222
232
2452
259
2624
275
282
2923
307
3127
321
3312
346
355
365
3714
3820
399
407
419
426
4353
4411
4529
4616
472
4814
4950
95.52% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences36
matches
0"being asked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs112
matches
0"was handing"
73.17% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences82
ratio0.024
matches
0"Lucien crossed the threshold and surveyed the flat the way he surveyed everything — cataloguing exits, weak points, things worth stealing."
1"\"Wouldn't dream of it,\" he said, and the smile he gave her then was smaller than his usual, careful in a different way than before — like he was handing her something breakable and trusting her not to drop it."
91.54% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount604
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.04966887417218543
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.008278145695364239
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences82
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences82
mean12.4
std10.04
cv0.809
sampleLengths
022
121
215
328
43
517
65
76
816
921
1023
115
1212
137
146
1523
1627
175
184
194
206
2120
2226
234
242
2512
263
2715
285
292
302
3126
3226
335
344
3524
363
372
382
395
4018
417
4218
439
441
4512
466
475
485
4914
58.13% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.4146341463414634
totalSentences82
uniqueOpeners34
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences28
matches(empty)
ratio0
20.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences28
matches
0"She yanked the door open"
1"His eyes caught on the"
2"He set his cane against"
3"She remembered that precision on"
4"He said it lightly, but"
5"He sat without being asked,"
6"He didn't answer right away."
7"He looked at the window"
8"he said finally"
9"She unfolded her arms, refolded"
10"he said again, quieter this"
11"She remembered the hallway, the"
12"She should say yes."
13"he said, and the smile"
ratio0.5
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount28
totalSentences28
matches
0"The three deadbolts stuck the"
1"Ptolemy wound around her ankles,"
2"She yanked the door open"
3"Lucien stood on the landing"
4"Rory held the door another"
5"Lucien crossed the threshold and"
6"His eyes caught on the"
7"He set his cane against"
8"She remembered that precision on"
9"He said it lightly, but"
10"Rory crossed her arms, aware"
11"That almost got a smile"
12"He sat without being asked,"
13"He didn't answer right away."
14"He looked at the window"
15"he said finally"
16"The name landed like a"
17"She unfolded her arms, refolded"
18"Rory laughed, short and disbelieving,"
19"The rain kept going outside,"
ratio1
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences28
matches(empty)
ratio0
74.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He set his cane against the arm of the sofa, the movement precise, unhurried, the kind of care that made Rory's jaw tighten."
1"Ptolemy jumped onto the arm of the sofa and settled against Lucien's leg like a traitor, and Lucien's hand moved to scratch behind the cat's ear without thinkin…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.193
leniency0.386
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.035
79.0991%