| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.556 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 61.05% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1027 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "really" | | 1 | "deliberately" | | 2 | "perfectly" | | 3 | "very" | | 4 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 56.18% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1027 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "echo" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "scanning" | | 5 | "resolving" | | 6 | "footsteps" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 66 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 77.92% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 66 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 51 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1033 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 14 | | wordCount | 998 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 0.7 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Park | 1 | | Isolde | 4 | | Rory | 7 | | Hel | 1 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "It was as if the clearing had drawn a breath and hadn't yet let it go" | | 1 | "answer either, obviously, but the flowers al" | | 2 | "not quite a voice, not quite anything she could name" | | 3 | "not quite anything she could name" | | 4 | "felt like an invitation" |
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| 6.39% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.936 | | wordCount | 1033 | | matches | | 0 | "not really, but the silence" | | 1 | "not wind-rustle, but the specific weighted sound of something moving through it o" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 29 | | mean | 35.62 | | std | 23.27 | | cv | 0.653 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 36 | | 1 | 83 | | 2 | 56 | | 3 | 1 | | 4 | 40 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 60 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 48 | | 10 | 57 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 38 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 41 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 40 | | 17 | 61 | | 18 | 60 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 91 | | 22 | 37 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 47 | | 25 | 51 | | 26 | 31 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 34 |
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| 99.95% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 177 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 70 | | ratio | 0.086 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped between two of them and felt the air change — thicker, warmer, carrying a green smell like crushed stems that didn't belong to any month she recognised." | | 1 | "Ordinary silence had texture — the hush of wind through branches, the far-off drone of traffic outside the park's edges." | | 2 | "Behind her, the grass rustled — not wind-rustle, but the specific weighted sound of something moving through it on purpose." | | 3 | "Not a Hel portal, then — Isolde had told her once, off-hand, that the stone reacted differently to different things, that heat alone didn't always mean danger." | | 4 | "She became aware, in a slow crawling way, that she couldn't hear her own footsteps from a moment ago, couldn't hear anything from the world outside the grove — no distant cars, no aircraft, no city hum that always threaded through London nights no matter how far into the park you walked." | | 5 | "Time moved differently in here; Isolde had told her that too, offhand, like it was nothing." |
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| 81.52% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 998 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 61 | | adverbRatio | 0.061122244488977955 | | lyAdverbCount | 18 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.018036072144288578 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 70 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 70 | | mean | 14.76 | | std | 11.45 | | cv | 0.776 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 36 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 29 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 29 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 29 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 31 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 37 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 20 | | 44 | 27 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 20 | | 48 | 24 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 78.10% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.4857142857142857 | | totalSentences | 70 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 54.64% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "Just grass, flattened in a" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 75.74% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd come looking for Isolde," | | 1 | "Their bark had a sheen" | | 2 | "She stepped between two of" | | 3 | "Her voice didn't echo." | | 4 | "It just stopped, swallowed by" | | 5 | "She walked further in." | | 6 | "she said, tapping it through" | | 7 | "She hadn't expected it to," | | 8 | "It was as if the" | | 9 | "She told herself it was" | | 10 | "She kept walking, following the" | | 11 | "She stopped walking." | | 12 | "She started walking again." | | 13 | "They tilted again." | | 14 | "She kept her eyes on" | | 15 | "She spun around." | | 16 | "It rose and fell like" | | 17 | "She held still and listened," | | 18 | "She became aware, in a" | | 19 | "She turned her head and" |
| | ratio | 0.361 | |
| 17.38% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 54 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory found the standing stones" | | 1 | "Richmond Park at midnight looked" | | 2 | "The deer were gone, or" | | 3 | "She'd come looking for Isolde," | | 4 | "The oaks marking the grove's" | | 5 | "Their bark had a sheen" | | 6 | "She stepped between two of" | | 7 | "Her voice didn't echo." | | 8 | "It just stopped, swallowed by" | | 9 | "Wildflowers spread out ahead of" | | 10 | "She walked further in." | | 11 | "The pendant pulsed once against" | | 12 | "she said, tapping it through" | | 13 | "She hadn't expected it to," | | 14 | "This had none of that." | | 15 | "It was as if the" | | 16 | "A twig snapped somewhere to" | | 17 | "Rory turned fast, scanning the" | | 18 | "Nothing there but shadow stacked" | | 19 | "She told herself it was" |
| | ratio | 0.885 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 3.97% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Standing here now, boots sinking into grass that seemed too soft, too deliberate, she wondered if expecting it was the whole problem." | | 1 | "She stepped between two of them and felt the air change — thicker, warmer, carrying a green smell like crushed stems that didn't belong to any month she recogni…" | | 2 | "She hadn't expected it to, not really, but the silence that followed felt different from ordinary silence." | | 3 | "Nothing there but shadow stacked on shadow, the kind that shifted if she looked at it too long, resolving into branches and then unresolving again the moment sh…" | | 4 | "Just grass, flattened in a rough circle, as though something had been sitting there recently and had only just stood up to leave." | | 5 | "The flattened grass didn't answer either, obviously, but the flowers along its edge tilted toward her as she passed, a slow uniform lean like sunflowers trackin…" | | 6 | "She kept her eyes on them and took three more steps, deliberately slow, watching the movement track her like something patient, something that had all the time …" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.556 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.2 | |