Run: 2026-07-07-01KWZ2X92YPAE1Z2PTWEX86PWH

Run Details

Duration:
1m 17s
Cost:
$0.004415
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
## The Raven's Nest The brass bell above the door chimed, and Rory looked up from polishing a glass. A man stood in the doorway, silhouetted against the neon green sign outside. He scanned the room with the careful assessment of someone who'd entered the wrong pub and was calculating the cost of leaving. She almost didn't recognize him. He'd filled out, shoulders broader under a navy peacoat that had seen better days. His face had changed too—the soft roundness of youth carved away, replaced by hard angles and a shadow of stubble that looked more like neglect than style. His hair was shorter, peppered with grey at the temples that shouldn't have been there at twenty-eight. "Marcus?" He turned at her voice. His eyes widened, then narrowed, processing. "Rory Carter?" She set down the glass. "Get out of town." He crossed the room, moving with a stiffness she didn't remember. When he reached the bar, he didn't sit, just stood there with his hands shoved in his coat pockets. "It's been—" she started. "Three years. Almost four." He pulled out a hand, rubbed the back of his neck. "You look good." "Liar." "I never lied to you." The words hung between them. She grabbed another glass, poured him a whiskey without asking. He took it, drank half in one swallow. "You're a long way from Cardiff," she said. "So are you." "Fair point." She leaned against the back counter. "What brings you to London?" He turned the glass in his hands, watching the amber liquid slide along the sides. "Divorce." The word landed flat, no emotion behind it. She waited. "Amelia?" she asked. "Who else?" They'd stood at his wedding five years ago. Rory had worn a burgundy dress she'd saved three months to buy, had smiled through the ceremony, had danced until her feet bled. She'd told herself it was happiness for him. "What happened?" "Life happened." He finished the whiskey, pushed the glass toward her. "She wanted a house in the suburbs and two kids and a dog. I wanted..." He trailed off, shook his head. "Doesn't matter what I wanted." "Here." She poured him another. "This one's on the house." "You work here?" "Above it. I deliver for a Chinese place in Chinatown. Silas—the owner—he lets me stay in the flat upstairs." Marcus looked around the bar with new eyes. The maps on the walls, the photographs, the dim lighting that hid more than it revealed. "This isn't your scene." "No. But it pays enough, and I don't have to think about it." "Thinking was always your problem." "And yours was not thinking enough." He smiled—a quick, pained thing that died before it reached his eyes. "Some things don't change." "You've changed." "I know." The admission caught her off guard. She studied him, really studied him. The old Marcus had been all swagger and certainty, a man who walked into rooms like he owned them. This man looked like he was apologizing for taking up space. "Remember the night we stole Professor Davies's grading book?" she asked. "We didn't steal it. You convinced me to borrow it and put it back before morning." "And you nearly got us caught because you couldn't stop laughing." "You photocopied every single page. Had to bribe the library assistant to use the machine after hours." "I still have those copies somewhere. Buried in a box." "Why?" "Sentimental reasons." He caught her eye, held it. "That's not like you." "People change too." "Not you. You always knew exactly what you wanted. Walked away from law school like it was nothing. Left Cardiff. Left everyone." His voice caught on the last word. "Left me." She'd known this was coming. She'd felt it since the moment he walked through the door, the weight of unfinished business pressing down on them both. "I didn't leave you," she said. "You were married. You'd chosen." "I chose because you never told me how you felt." "And what was I supposed to say? 'Congratulations on your engagement, by the way I'm in love with you'?" The words slipped out before she could stop them. She gripped the edge of the bar, knuckles white. Marcus stared at her. The bar hummed around them—the low murmur of other conversations, the clink of glasses, the distant jazz playing through hidden speakers. All of it faded to nothing. "You loved me," he said. Not a question. "Past tense. A long time ago." "You never said anything." "You never asked." He laughed, but it came out broken. "I was so busy being what everyone expected me to be. The good son. The successful friend. The perfect husband." He ran a hand through his hair. "I married Amelia because it was the right thing to do. We were compatible. Our families approved. It made sense." "Sense isn't love." "No shit." He slumped onto a bar stool, suddenly looking every year of his age. "She said I was never really present. That I was always somewhere else, thinking about someone else." He looked up at her. "She was right." "Marcus—" "I don't expect anything. I know it's been years. I know I have no right to show up here and—" "You showed up here by accident." "Maybe. Maybe I knew you'd be here. Maybe I've been driving past this street for three days, hoping I'd see you." She didn't know what to do with that. She busied herself with wiping the already-clean counter. "There's an echo in my life," he said quietly. "Everywhere I go, I hear it. It sounds like your laugh." "Stop." "I can't. That's the problem. I can't stop thinking about what would have happened if I'd been brave enough to walk away from the wedding. If I'd taken your hand and told you—" "Stop." Her voice cracked. She took a breath, steadied herself. "You made your choices. I made mine. We are not the people we were." "Then who are we now?" She looked at him. Really looked. The grey in his hair. The lines around his eyes. The way his hands shook slightly as he set down the glass. "I don't know," she said. "But I think we're still figuring it out." He nodded slowly. Reached into his pocket, pulled out a folded photograph. "I found this when I was packing. From the night we graduated." He slid it across the bar. She picked it up. Two young faces grinned back at her, arms around each other's shoulders, drunk on cheap champagne and the certainty that life would work out exactly as planned. She'd forgotten she used to smile like that—wide and unguarded, like joy was something she deserved. "Who were those people?" she asked, more to herself than him. "People who hadn't learned yet." He took the photo back, studied it. "People who still believed in happy endings." "Don't you believe anymore?" He looked at her. The bar lights caught his eyes—the same warm brown she remembered, but older now. Tired. "I believe in second chances." The word hung in the air, dangerous and tempting. She wanted to reach for it. She wanted to tell him that too much time had passed, that they were strangers now, that the people in that photograph no longer existed. But she'd spent three years telling herself that. Three years of delivering food, of living above a bar, of avoiding anything that reminded her of Cardiff. Three years of pretending she'd moved on. "One drink," she said. "We can have one drink and talk about old times." "After that?" "We'll see." She poured herself a whiskey, raised it in a toast. He mirrored her. "To old friends," she said. "And second chances." The glasses clinked. The night stretched ahead of them, full of possibilities and ghosts and the terrible weight of time that never quite healed what it touched. And for the first time in years, Rory didn't try to escape.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences80
tagDensity0.275
leniency0.55
rawRatio0.045
effectiveRatio0.025
77.38% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1326
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"really"
count3
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"suddenly"
2"slightly"
3"slowly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
77.38% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1326
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"calculating"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"perfect"
count1
4
word"echo"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"calculating"
2"weight"
3"perfect"
4"echo"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences88
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"try to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences146
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1319
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions9
wordCount784
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.38
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Marcus"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Rory3
Marcus3
Cardiff1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Rory"
2"Marcus"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like he was apologizing for taking"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1319
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences146
matches
0"passed, that they"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs86
mean15.34
std13.77
cv0.898
sampleLengths
04
150
25
358
41
513
69
730
84
918
101
115
1223
138
143
1513
1616
1710
183
192
2039
212
2237
2310
243
2519
2628
2713
285
296
3016
312
322
3342
3411
3516
3611
3717
3810
391
402
4110
423
4331
4426
4511
4610
4719
4818
4931
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
75.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs160
matches
0"was calculating"
1"was apologizing"
2"was coming"
45.01% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences146
ratio0.034
matches
0"His face had changed too—the soft roundness of youth carved away, replaced by hard angles and a shadow of stubble that looked more like neglect than style."
1"He smiled—a quick, pained thing that died before it reached his eyes."
2"The bar hummed around them—the low murmur of other conversations, the clink of glasses, the distant jazz playing through hidden speakers."
3"She'd forgotten she used to smile like that—wide and unguarded, like joy was something she deserved."
4"The bar lights caught his eyes—the same warm brown she remembered, but older now."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount791
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.03286978508217446
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.008849557522123894
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences146
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences146
mean9.03
std7
cv0.774
sampleLengths
019
113
222
35
414
527
617
71
85
96
102
115
124
1311
1419
154
1615
173
181
195
205
2110
228
238
243
258
265
2715
281
298
302
313
322
338
3423
358
362
3711
3821
395
405
415
423
4319
448
4516
464
4713
485
496
54.57% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.3767123287671233
totalSentences146
uniqueOpeners55
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount47
totalSentences76
matches
0"He scanned the room with"
1"She almost didn't recognize him."
2"He'd filled out, shoulders broader"
3"His face had changed too—the"
4"His hair was shorter, peppered"
5"He turned at her voice."
6"His eyes widened, then narrowed,"
7"She set down the glass."
8"He crossed the room, moving"
9"He pulled out a hand,"
10"She grabbed another glass, poured"
11"He took it, drank half"
12"She leaned against the back"
13"He turned the glass in"
14"They'd stood at his wedding"
15"She'd told herself it was"
16"He finished the whiskey, pushed"
17"He trailed off, shook his"
18"She poured him another"
19"He smiled—a quick, pained thing"
ratio0.618
19.21% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences76
matches
0"## The Raven's Nest The"
1"A man stood in the"
2"He scanned the room with"
3"She almost didn't recognize him."
4"He'd filled out, shoulders broader"
5"His face had changed too—the"
6"His hair was shorter, peppered"
7"He turned at her voice."
8"His eyes widened, then narrowed,"
9"She set down the glass."
10"He crossed the room, moving"
11"He pulled out a hand,"
12"The words hung between them."
13"She grabbed another glass, poured"
14"He took it, drank half"
15"She leaned against the back"
16"He turned the glass in"
17"The word landed flat, no"
18"They'd stood at his wedding"
19"Rory had worn a burgundy"
ratio0.882
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
5.49% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"He scanned the room with the careful assessment of someone who'd entered the wrong pub and was calculating the cost of leaving."
1"He'd filled out, shoulders broader under a navy peacoat that had seen better days."
2"His face had changed too—the soft roundness of youth carved away, replaced by hard angles and a shadow of stubble that looked more like neglect than style."
3"His hair was shorter, peppered with grey at the temples that shouldn't have been there at twenty-eight."
4"Three years of delivering food, of living above a bar, of avoiding anything that reminded her of Cardiff."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she asked, more to herself than him"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences80
tagDensity0.125
leniency0.25
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.8011%