Run: 2026-07-07-01KWZ30PEG6364X3QWJ85KV39A

Run Details

Model:
Aion 3.0
Duration:
1m 18s
Cost:
$0.017760
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain hammered the cement steps as Quinn descended into the forgotten arteries of London's underground. Her torch cut through the darkness, illuminating tiled walls streaked with decades of grime and neglect. The air tasted of rust and something else — something acrid that coated the back of her throat. She adjusted the beam toward the platform ahead where blue crime-scene tape fluttered in a nonexistent breeze. Abandoned Tube stations dotted the city's underbelly like sealed wounds, but this one beneath Camden had been closed since 1932. No trains had run through these tunnels in ninety years. Yet there, sprawled across the cracked platform tiles, a body lay beneath a white sheet. Quinn ducked under the tape. A uniformed officer she didn't recognize snapped to attention. "Detective Quinn. I was told you'd be coming down." "Who's already on scene?" "DCI Hargrove's team. And there's a civilian consultant — something about the museum sending her over." Quinn's jaw tightened. She strode past him toward the pool of portable lights set up around the body. Her boots splashed through shallow water that shouldn't have been there — the pumps had failed decades ago, but this much moisture suggested recent flooding. Or something else. The sheet had been pulled back to reveal a man in his mid-thirties, dressed in a tailored charcoal suit that belonged on a City banker rather than an abandoned station platform. His skin had taken on a waxy, greyish pallor. No visible wounds. No blood. But his expression — his mouth hung open in a silent scream, eyes fixed wide, pupils dilated to the point where no iris remained visible. "Elegant, isn't it?" Quinn turned to find a woman perched on the edge of the platform, legs dangling over the tracks. Curly red hair escaped from beneath a wool coat. Round glasses caught the glare of the forensic lights. She held a worn leather satchel across her lap, one hand resting on its flap as though guarding its contents. "And you are?" "Eva Kowalski. Research assistant at the British Museum." She hopped down from the platform. "Hargrove requested someone with knowledge of — unorthodox elements." "What makes this scene unorthodox?" Eva tucked a curl behind her left ear. "Apart from the fact that we're standing in a station that's been sealed since before the Blitz? Look at the walls." Quinn raised her torch. The tiles bore markings she hadn't noticed on her way in — scratches that formed patterns. Sigils. She'd seen similar markings three years ago, in the warehouse where DS Morris had been found. The memory lodged in her chest like a splinter. "Someone's been busy." "Someone or something." Eva reached into her satchel and produced a small brass compass. Its casing had gone green with verdigris, and its face bore etchings that matched the symbols on the walls. The needle spun in lazy, erratic circles. "This place registers on instruments that measure things outside normal electromagnetic range." Quinn fixed her with a look. "A compass. That's your professional opinion?" "Professional opinion? The readings on this device suggest we're standing near a convergence point. The markings on these walls aren't graffiti — they're containment sigils. Someone built something here. And our friend —" she gestured to the body "— walked into the middle of it." "Or someone put him there." Eva pushed her glasses up her nose. "You're thinking homicide. I'm thinking something more complicated." DCI Hargrove emerged from the tunnel that led back toward the surface. A barrel of a man with a florid complexion and the kind of moustache that belonged in a gentlemen's club. He trudged through the shallow water with the grace of a man wading through a particularly foul puddle. "Quinn. Good. I want your read on this." He stopped beside the body and crossed his arms. "We've got a John Doe, no ID, no phone, no wallet. Clean as a whistle. Forensics says preliminary TOD is between midnight and two AM. No signs of trauma, no defensive wounds, no bruising. My money's on a heart attack — poor sod wandered down here for who knows what reason and his ticker gave out." "In a sealed station." "Homeless people break into these places all the time. He could have been living down here." Quinn crouched beside the body. The man's hands were clean. Immaculate. His fingernails showed none of the grime that accumulated in a place like this. His shoes — polished Oxford brogues — had no scuff marks. She turned one foot slightly and noted the sole. Pristine. No wear, no water damage despite the standing water around them. "He didn't walk here." Hargrove's brow furrowed. "Come again?" "Look at his shoes. Look at his hands. There's no trace of the environment on him. Everyone who's come down here has muck on their boots — I watched you track it across the platform yourself." She stood. "He was placed here after death. Someone killed him elsewhere, transported him down here, and arranged him." "That's a leap." Quinn swept her torch across the platform floor. The standing water had been disturbed — boot prints from the forensics team, Hargrove's heavier impressions. But there, near the wall, a different set of marks. Narrow. Regular. Like something had been dragged. She followed them with her beam until they vanished into a service tunnel that had been barricaded with rotting wooden boards. One board had been pried loose. "Someone came through there." "Could be old. Years old." "The wood's fresh where it snapped. Green inside." Quinn crossed to the barricade and ran her fingers along the broken edge. Sap. She held up her hand to show Hargrove. "This happened within the last day." Eva had followed. Her compass needle had steadied, pointing directly toward the service tunnel. She looked at Quinn with an expression caught between fascination and alarm. "That passage leads deeper. The readings get stronger the further —" "I don't need readings." Quinn pulled the board aside and directed her torch into the passage. The beam revealed a narrow corridor, brick-lined, stretching beyond the reach of light. But she could see what lined the walls. More sigils. Dozens of them. Hundreds. Covering every surface in spiraling patterns that hurt to look at directly. "Whatever killed our John Doe isn't done," Eva murmured. Hargrove squeezed past them, his face creased with discomfort. "I'm calling in more teams. We'll search the whole tunnel system." "No." Quinn lowered her torch. "You need to get your people out of here. All of them. Now." "Like hell I'm —" "Look at the body again. His skin. The colour." She waited until Hargrove turned. In the harsh glare of the forensic lights, the dead man's flesh had shifted. The grey pallor had spread, darkened. Beneath the surface, something moved — a faint tracery of black lines spreading from the centre of his chest outward, following the paths of his veins. "That's not decomposition," Eva said, her voice steady. "That's contagion." Hargrove stumbled back from the body. His hand went to his radio. Quinn grabbed his arm. "Don't. Whatever this is, you don't want to broadcast it. Get your people out. Seal the entrance. No one goes in or out until I say." "And who the hell put you in charge?" "Three years ago, I lost my partner to something that looked exactly like this." She released him and turned back toward the tunnel. The sigils on its walls seemed to pulse in the peripheral edge of her vision. The sensation of wrongness crawled up her spine. "I'm the only one who's seen it before." Hargrove's face went through several colours. But he keyed his radio. "All units, evacuate the platform. Full withdrawal to street level. Now." The forensics team scrambled. Equipment clattered. Boots splashed through the water. Within minutes, the platform stood empty except for Quinn, Eva, and the body that was no longer entirely dead. Eva clutched her compass. The needle pointed into the tunnel and held steady. She met Quinn's gaze. "You said you've seen this before." Quinn pulled the worn leather watch from beneath her coat cuff. The crystal was cracked. It had stopped at 11:47 PM, three years ago, the night Morris died. She wound it between her fingers. "Not just seen it. I watched it take him." "Then you know what we're dealing with." "I know it's not a man in a suit having a heart attack." She aimed her torch back at the service tunnel. "And I know we're not leaving until I find out what's on the other end of those sigils."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.245
leniency0.49
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.47% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1417
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
82.36% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1417
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"fluttered"
count1
1
word"pristine"
count1
2
word"furrowed"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"crystal"
count1
highlights
0"fluttered"
1"pristine"
2"furrowed"
3"pulse"
4"crystal"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences97
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences97
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences134
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1430
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
62.66% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount916
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.75
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Quinn16
London1
Tube1
Camden1
City1
Eva8
Morris2
Hargrove8
Oxford1
Sap1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Camden"
2"Eva"
3"Morris"
4"Hargrove"
places
0"London"
1"Oxford"
globalScore0.627
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as though guarding its contents"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1430
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences134
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs56
mean25.54
std21.74
cv0.851
sampleLengths
067
145
214
39
44
516
646
770
83
956
103
1123
125
1329
1446
153
1652
1712
1845
195
2015
2150
2273
234
2416
2557
264
275
2855
293
3068
314
325
3336
3426
3511
3655
379
3820
3918
404
4160
4210
4312
4430
458
4654
4711
4811
4930
79.94% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount7
totalSentences97
matches
0"been closed"
1"been pulled"
2"been found"
3"been disturbed "
4"been dragged"
5"been barricaded"
6"been pried"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs156
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences134
ratio0.052
matches
0"The air tasted of rust and something else — something acrid that coated the back of her throat."
1"Her boots splashed through shallow water that shouldn't have been there — the pumps had failed decades ago, but this much moisture suggested recent flooding."
2"But his expression — his mouth hung open in a silent scream, eyes fixed wide, pupils dilated to the point where no iris remained visible."
3"The tiles bore markings she hadn't noticed on her way in — scratches that formed patterns."
4"His shoes — polished Oxford brogues — had no scuff marks."
5"The standing water had been disturbed — boot prints from the forensics team, Hargrove's heavier impressions."
6"Beneath the surface, something moved — a faint tracery of black lines spreading from the centre of his chest outward, following the paths of his veins."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount874
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.013729977116704805
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.006864988558352402
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences134
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences134
mean10.67
std8.53
cv0.8
sampleLengths
016
116
218
317
420
510
615
75
89
99
104
1116
123
1315
1425
153
1631
179
183
192
2025
213
2218
239
249
2520
263
2714
289
295
308
3121
324
3316
341
3516
369
373
3814
3919
407
4112
426
436
4445
455
467
478
4812
4920
69.65% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.44029850746268656
totalSentences134
uniqueOpeners59
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences85
matches
0"Her torch cut through the"
1"She adjusted the beam toward"
2"She strode past him toward"
3"Her boots splashed through shallow"
4"His skin had taken on"
5"She held a worn leather"
6"She hopped down from the"
7"She'd seen similar markings three"
8"Its casing had gone green"
9"He trudged through the shallow"
10"He stopped beside the body"
11"His fingernails showed none of"
12"His shoes — polished Oxford"
13"She turned one foot slightly"
14"She followed them with her"
15"She held up her hand"
16"Her compass needle had steadied,"
17"She looked at Quinn with"
18"She waited until Hargrove turned"
19"His hand went to his"
ratio0.294
71.76% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences85
matches
0"The rain hammered the cement"
1"Her torch cut through the"
2"The air tasted of rust"
3"She adjusted the beam toward"
4"Quinn ducked under the tape."
5"A uniformed officer she didn't"
6"Quinn's jaw tightened."
7"She strode past him toward"
8"Her boots splashed through shallow"
9"The sheet had been pulled"
10"His skin had taken on"
11"Quinn turned to find a"
12"She held a worn leather"
13"She hopped down from the"
14"Eva tucked a curl behind"
15"Quinn raised her torch."
16"The tiles bore markings she"
17"She'd seen similar markings three"
18"The memory lodged in her"
19"Eva reached into her satchel"
ratio0.776
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
ratio0
58.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Her boots splashed through shallow water that shouldn't have been there — the pumps had failed decades ago, but this much moisture suggested recent flooding."
1"The sheet had been pulled back to reveal a man in his mid-thirties, dressed in a tailored charcoal suit that belonged on a City banker rather than an abandoned …"
2"She held a worn leather satchel across her lap, one hand resting on its flap as though guarding its contents."
3"A barrel of a man with a florid complexion and the kind of moustache that belonged in a gentlemen's club."
83.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Eva said, her voice steady"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Eva murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.041
leniency0.082
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.041
83.5003%