Run: 2026-07-07-01KWZ30RR82APF380FDWVQ1WCX

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1m 26s
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung open and there he was, rain-darkened shoulders and that infernal patience. Rory's hand stayed on the knob. Five months of silence, and he stood on her landing like he'd just popped round for sugar. "Bit late for social calls, Lucien." The name hung between them. She watched something flicker in his mismatched eyes — that amber one catching the bar's neon light from downstairs, the black one swallowing it. "You changed the locks." "They're my locks. Grafter's union sends a nice man round." She kept her voice steady, matched his calm. Learned it from him, actually. Fitting. "May I come in?" "No." A ghost of a smile tugged at his mouth. Those tailored suits of his looked rumpled, the first time she'd ever seen him less than pressed. A splatter of rain on his collar. Blood on his cuff, dark and fresh. *Interesting.* "Trouble found your name in someone's mouth tonight," he said. "I came to warn you." "My name's in plenty of mouths. I'm memorable." "You're not taking this seriously." "I'm not taking *you* seriously. There's a difference." She made to close the door. His hand caught it, palm flat against the wood, and she felt the tremor of it travel up her arm. Knew better than to fight it. Lucien Moreau had centuries of half-demon patience behind that grip, and she had a Chinese takeaway uniform and a bruised rib from a delivery gone wrong. "Eva's been making noise," he said. "Digging where she shouldn't. And you've been seen with her." "Eva's my best friend." "Eva's a research target. Someone paid good money to find out what she's found." The deadbolts on Eva's door flashed through her mind. Three of them. Ptolemy the tabby, hissing at shadows. "What does that have to do with me?" "She lives. You're at her flat three nights a week." His head tilted. The rain had slicked his platinum hair darker, made him look younger and older at once. "Someone's going to ask you what she's found. And they won't ask nicely." "Then I'll tell them she's found nothing. Because she shares her flat with a cat and too many books, not conspirators." "Rory." His voice dropped when he said her name. Always did. Like a stone into still water, sending ripples she couldn't stop feeling. "Don't." "You need to come with me. Tonight. Somewhere safe." "Safe." She laughed. No humour in it. "Like when you said I'd be safe in that hotel in Prague? Or when you promised the club in Berlin was secured?" "That was different." "Different how? Because those bullets were real. Those men were real. The only thing that wasn't real was you being there when I came out of that bathroom." He flinched. She caught it, savoured it. Let him feel that memory. "I was there." "Twenty minutes later. I counted." "Because I had to-" "Leave." She stepped back from the door. "That's what you're good at, isn't it? Showing up just long enough to warn me, then vanishing before the real trouble starts." The blood on his cuff had dried. She traced the brown stain with her eyes, imagined the story behind it. Someone else's blood. He'd tell her it was his if she asked. "I'm here now." "How long?" His jaw tightened. That familiar tell. He did it when he was calculating, spinning probabilities in that half-demon head. "I've bought us till dawn." "Us." "Whether you like it or not." She should close the door. Should shove his hand off the wood, throw the deadbolt, call Eva. Text her to run. Instead, she thought about Prague. About the way his hand had found hers in the dark of that hotel corridor, pulling her through a service door just as the first shots rang out. About how he'd pressed her against a wall and said *stay here* and she'd believed him. She'd believed him for ten years. Friends. Allies. More than either of those words could hold. "Till dawn," she said slowly. "And then?" "I leave again." The same words. The same ache, different city, different year. She caught herself staring at his mouth, remembered the shape of it against her throat that night in Berlin when they'd thought they wouldn't make it out. *We don't love each other*, he'd said afterwards. *Can't afford to.* She'd agreed. Kept agreeing. Every time he showed up, every time he broke her heart a little more efficiently than the last. "Fine." She stepped aside. "Till dawn." He moved past her, and she caught his scent. Wet wool, gunpowder, something ancient and familiar that she'd never been able to name. It settled in her chest like a bruise. "Don't touch anything," she said, closing the door. "Don't look through my things. And don't-" "Don't what?" *Don't make me want you again.* But she swallowed that, locked it away where she kept all the other stupid things she'd never tell him. "Don't make coffee. You brew it weak." "Nearly died for you in three countries, and you insult my coffee." "It's a matter of principle." His laugh was quiet, rusty. Like he hadn't used it in a while. She watched him move through her space, those calculating eyes reading every surface, every detail of her life. The books stacked on the counter. The takeaway menu pinned under a magnet shaped like a dragon. The single mug in the drying rack. "Still alone," he said. Not a question. "Still alive," she replied. "Different priorities." He turned from her window, and the streetlight caught his face. Shadows deep under those eyes. A split at the corner of his lip she hadn't noticed before. "Who did you bleed for tonight?" He touched the cut, seemed surprised to find it there. "Doesn't matter." "I'm letting you into my home, Lucien. The least you can do is tell me whose blood you're wearing." "Someone who had questions about you." Her stomach dropped. She kept her hands steady, her voice level. "And what did you tell them?" "The truth." He stepped closer. "That you're protected. That touching you means answering to me." *Protected.* How many ways could that word wound her? "I don't need your protection." "I know." He was close enough to touch now. She could see the rain in his hair, smell the iron in that drying blood. "But I need to give it." "Why?" His good eye found hers. The black one followed a beat behind, always a little slower, always a little too knowing. "Because I can't stop." "You said we couldn't afford this." "We can't." "So this is-" "This is me being selfish." He said it like a confession. Like a wound. "Just for tonight. Till dawn." She should push him away. Should remind him of every promise he'd broken, every door he'd walked through without looking back. Instead, she reached up and touched the cut on his lip. Felt him go still beneath her fingers. "You're bleeding on my floor." "Sorry." "I'll get a cloth." She turned, and he caught her wrist. His thumb pressed against her pulse point, counting her heartbeat like he'd taught her to read a room. "Rory." "What?" "The cut. I didn't get it tonight." His voice was rough. "Got it last night. Coming back to London. Thought about you the whole way." "That's not-" "I know." He let go of her wrist. Stepped back. "Just thought you should know." She stood there, the space between them electric, her skin still warm where he'd touched her. The kettle hissed on the counter. She'd forgotten she'd turned it on. "Coffee?" she asked. "Please." She busied herself with cups and grounds. Let him watch her back, her hands. Let him think whatever he wanted about the tremor she couldn't quite hide. "You said dawn." "I did." "What happens after?" "I told you. I leave." "And if I asked you to stay?" Silence. The longest of his life, maybe. She counted it in heartbeats, in the drip of rain against her window, in the way her breath caught waiting for an answer he'd never give. "Then I'd have to be selfish twice in one night." She poured the coffee. Black, strong. The way he'd taught her to drink it. "Then don't answer yet," she said, and handed him the cup. "We've got till dawn."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"She stepped back [back]"
1"she said slowly [slowly]"
2"She stepped aside [aside]"
dialogueSentences86
tagDensity0.186
leniency0.372
rawRatio0.188
effectiveRatio0.07
96.39% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1385
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
60.29% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1385
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"flicker"
count1
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count2
4
word"calculating"
count2
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"electric"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"flicker"
2"traced"
3"familiar"
4"calculating"
5"stomach"
6"pulse"
7"electric"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences112
matches
0"felt the tremor"
1"seemed surprised"
91.84% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences112
filterMatches
0"look"
1"feel"
2"watch"
3"think"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences180
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans7
markdownWords19
totalWords1386
ratio0.014
matches
0"Interesting."
1"you"
2"stay here"
3"We don't love each other"
4"Can't afford to."
5"Don't make me want you again."
6"Protected."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions29
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions14
wordCount902
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.33
worstName"Like"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Learned1
Moreau1
Chinese1
Eva2
Prague1
Berlin1
Like3
Stepped1
Let3
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Let"
places
0"Prague"
1"Berlin"
globalScore1
windowScore1
75.37% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"seemed surprised to find it there"
1"quite hide"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1386
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences180
matches
0"could that word"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
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mean13.59
std12.48
cv0.919
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64
71
840
91
1015
118
125
138
1458
1516
164
1714
1826
1942
2021
211
2222
231
249
2529
263
2728
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293
305
314
3229
3332
343
352
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371
386
3921
4049
4116
427
433
4437
4511
4622
476
4831
4915
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences112
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs167
matches
0"was calculating"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences180
ratio0.006
matches
0"She watched something flicker in his mismatched eyes — that amber one catching the bar's neon light from downstairs, the black one swallowing it."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount904
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.033185840707964605
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.00331858407079646
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences180
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences180
mean7.7
std6.01
cv0.781
sampleLengths
014
16
217
36
45
524
64
718
85
91
104
111
129
1317
147
157
161
1710
185
198
205
218
226
2320
246
2526
266
2710
284
2914
309
313
326
338
3413
3516
3613
3721
381
398
402
4112
421
439
443
454
4622
473
4828
492
67.59% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.4388888888888889
totalSentences180
uniqueOpeners79
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences95
matches
0"Instead, she thought about Prague."
1"More than either of those"
2"Instead, she reached up and"
ratio0.032
38.95% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences95
matches
0"She watched something flicker in"
1"She kept her voice steady,"
2"She made to close the"
3"His hand caught it, palm"
4"His head tilted"
5"His voice dropped when he"
6"She caught it, savoured it."
7"She stepped back from the"
8"She traced the brown stain"
9"He'd tell her it was"
10"His jaw tightened."
11"He did it when he"
12"She should close the door."
13"She'd believed him for ten"
14"she said slowly"
15"She caught herself staring at"
16"*We don't love each other*,"
17"She stepped aside"
18"He moved past her, and"
19"It settled in her chest"
ratio0.453
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences95
matches
0"The door swung open and"
1"Rory's hand stayed on the"
2"The name hung between them."
3"She watched something flicker in"
4"She kept her voice steady,"
5"A ghost of a smile"
6"Those tailored suits of his"
7"A splatter of rain on"
8"Blood on his cuff, dark"
9"She made to close the"
10"His hand caught it, palm"
11"Lucien Moreau had centuries of"
12"The deadbolts on Eva's door"
13"Ptolemy the tabby, hissing at"
14"His head tilted"
15"The rain had slicked his"
16"His voice dropped when he"
17"She caught it, savoured it."
18"She stepped back from the"
19"The blood on his cuff"
ratio0.716
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences86
tagDensity0.116
leniency0.233
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.023
91.0143%