| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 0 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1478 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 39.11% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1478 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "throb" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "echo" | | 5 | "resonance" | | 6 | "pulsed" | | 7 | "etched" | | 8 | "quickened" | | 9 | "could feel" | | 10 | "loomed" | | 11 | "tracing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 130 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 130 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 93.15% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 134 | | gibberishSentences | 2 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 2 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 46 | | ratio | 0.015 | | matches | | 0 | "</thinking>" | | 1 | "<uncensored_response>" |
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| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1498 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 21 | | wordCount | 1478 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.47 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Sheen | 1 | | Road | 1 | | Heathrow | 1 | | October | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Aurora | 7 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Silas" | | 3 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Sheen" | | 4 | "Road" | | 5 | "Heathrow" | | 6 | "October" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 60.71% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 84 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "patterns that seemed to shift when she looked at them from the corner of her eye" | | 1 | "quite managing it" | | 2 | "sounded like her own" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 5 | | per1kWords | 3.338 | | wordCount | 1498 | | matches | | 0 | "not the random drag of wind-blown debris but something deliberate, paced, the sound of something large mo" | | 1 | "not burned, but stained, as though the stone had bled through her skin" | | 2 | "not behind her now, but around her, on both sides, a closing circle" | | 3 | "Not red, not black, but a deep, bruised purple" | | 4 | "not black, but a deep, bruised purple" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 134 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 46 | | mean | 32.57 | | std | 26.66 | | cv | 0.819 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 1 | | 1 | 1 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 95 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 64 | | 6 | 82 | | 7 | 95 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 30 | | 10 | 38 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 33 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 76 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 47 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 36 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 72 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 43 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 58 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 45 | | 30 | 59 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 30 | | 33 | 41 | | 34 | 65 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 53 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 50 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 56 | | 41 | 27 | | 42 | 48 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 47 | | 45 | 1 |
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| 97.17% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 130 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "was gone" |
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| 85.55% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 233 | | matches | | 0 | "was pulling" | | 1 | "wasn't quite managing" | | 2 | "were spreading" | | 3 | "was spreading" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 20 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 19 | | totalSentences | 134 | | ratio | 0.142 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant hung warm against her sternum, its pulse a steady throb beneath her shirt — faster than her own heartbeat, slower than she remembered." | | 1 | "Not gradually, not in pieces — all at once, like someone had pulled a plug." | | 2 | "The moon hung fat and low on the horizon — impossibly large, close enough that she could see the pockmarks and ridges of its surface without squinting." | | 3 | "Three weeks ago, the pendant had begun warming on its own — not near any door, not in the presence of anything unusual." | | 4 | "Not the clean mineral scent of rain on soil — something heavier, richer, like the ground had been recently turned." | | 5 | "The pendant pulsed against her chest — warm, warmer, a heartbeat that wasn't hers." | | 6 | "Her breath hung in the air — visible, though the night wasn't cold." | | 7 | "Through the fabric of her shirt, the Heartstone's pulse quickened — rapid, urgent, the rhythm of something frightened." | | 8 | "The wildflowers here were taller — knee-height, waist-height, their blooms colourless in the shadow of the oak, pale as dead skin." | | 9 | "This time it carried a rhythm — not the random drag of wind-blown debris but something deliberate, paced, the sound of something large moving with care." | | 10 | "She pulled her fingers away and saw they were red — not burned, but stained, as though the stone had bled through her skin." | | 11 | "The flowers followed, stems stretching, petals opening wider, and the sound came again — not behind her now, but around her, on both sides, a closing circle." | | 12 | "The shadows had shifted, redistributed, and where there had been one dark pool beneath the oak there were now several — scattered across the clearing like ink spills, each one deeper than the moonlight should have allowed." | | 13 | "They pointed — every spiral, every line, every etched mark in the ancient oak — they pointed inward." | | 14 | "Not shifting with the moon — moving on their own, sliding across the flowers like oil on water, and where they passed the blooms didn't close." | | 15 | "The standing stones loomed ahead, the boundary, the way out, and the carvings on their surfaces had all turned to face her now — every spiral open, every line directed outward, a thousand stone eyes watching her flee." | | 16 | "The sounds of the city crashed back — traffic, planes, the distant wail of a siren." | | 17 | "Not red, not black, but a deep, bruised purple — the colour of the wildflowers she'd crushed beneath her boots." | | 18 | "And from somewhere behind her, from the grove that existed between worlds, she heard it one last time — the rustling of fabric, the wet sound of feet on earth, and beneath it, so faint she might have imagined it, a voice that sounded like her own." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 248 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 5 | | adverbRatio | 0.020161290322580645 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008064516129032258 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 134 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 134 | | mean | 11.18 | | std | 9.63 | | cv | 0.862 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 1 | | 1 | 1 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 26 | | 5 | 31 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 26 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 34 | | 43 | 26 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 37.56% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 18 | | diversityRatio | 0.30597014925373134 | | totalSentences | 134 | | uniqueOpeners | 41 | |
| 30.30% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "Just warmth, building slow, a" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 89.09% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 36 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd felt it grow warmer" | | 1 | "She stepped between two of" | | 2 | "It lit the grove in" | | 3 | "She'd come for answers." | | 4 | "She'd mentioned it to Silas," | | 5 | "He'd told her about the" | | 6 | "He hadn't told her it" | | 7 | "She watched them settle back" | | 8 | "Her voice fell flat." | | 9 | "She tried again." | | 10 | "She made a full circuit" | | 11 | "Her breath hung in the" | | 12 | "It came from the far" | | 13 | "She turned to face it." | | 14 | "She said it to herself." | | 15 | "She said it because saying" | | 16 | "Her boots pressed into earth" | | 17 | "They didn't move away from" | | 18 | "They reached toward her, petals" | | 19 | "She wiped her palm on" |
| | ratio | 0.327 | |
| 55.45% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 89 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose from" | | 1 | "Aurora stopped at the edge" | | 2 | "The Heartstone Pendant hung warm" | | 3 | "She'd felt it grow warmer" | | 4 | "She stepped between two of" | | 5 | "The city vanished." | | 6 | "The distant growl of traffic" | | 7 | "Wildflowers carpeted the clearing in" | | 8 | "Violet blooms she couldn't name," | | 9 | "The moon hung fat and" | | 10 | "It lit the grove in" | | 11 | "She'd come for answers." | | 12 | "She'd mentioned it to Silas," | | 13 | "He'd told her about the" | | 14 | "He hadn't told her it" | | 15 | "The air tasted of copper" | | 16 | "Aurora moved forward." | | 17 | "The wildflowers bent away from" | | 18 | "She watched them settle back" | | 19 | "Her voice fell flat." |
| | ratio | 0.809 | |
| 45.45% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, at the boundary of" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 38.96% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd mentioned it to Silas, who'd gone quiet behind the bar in a way that made his scarred face look older." | | 1 | "The grove swallowed it without echo, without resonance, as though the clearing existed in a space too small or too vast for sound to travel properly." | | 2 | "The pendant pulsed against her chest — warm, warmer, a heartbeat that wasn't hers." | | 3 | "Her boots pressed into earth that yielded too much, soft and wet, each step sinking an inch before finding purchase." | | 4 | "They reached toward her, petals brushing her legs, her hands, leaving streaks of something cool and viscous on her skin." | | 5 | "It sat on the denim, shimmering faintly, catching light that shouldn't have existed in the shadow." | | 6 | "She could feel it through her shirt, through her skin, a pulse that matched something else." | | 7 | "And from somewhere behind her, from the grove that existed between worlds, she heard it one last time — the rustling of fabric, the wet sound of feet on earth, …" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |