Run: 2026-07-07-01KWZ31GYYM3F5P2K7AVD54ZGC

Run Details

Model:
Aion 3.0
Duration:
49.2s
Cost:
$0.016395
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory stepped through the gap between the two ancient oaks and the temperature dropped six degrees in the space of a single footstep. The Fae Grove opened before her like a wound in the world. She'd been here before—twice in daylight, once at dusk—but never at night. The standing stones that marked the boundary caught moonlight in ways the oaks outside didn't, as though the stones themselves held their own source of illumination. Pale. Cold. Nothing like the warm crimson glow that pulsed against her collarbone. The Heartstone Pendant pressed against her sternum, its heat rhythmic and insistent. That was why she'd come. Three nights running, the pendant had dragged her from sleep, its glow bright enough to cast shadows across her bedsit. Three nights, she'd traced the pull across London on her motorbike, through streets she didn't recognise, past landmarks that seemed to shift when she wasn't looking directly at them. Tonight, the trail ended here. "Right then," she muttered to the empty grove. "Show me what you've got." The wildflowers shouldn't have been visible at this hour. She knelt beside a cluster of something blue and bell-shaped that grew in a perfect circle. The petals luminesced just enough to illuminate the soil beneath them—soil that was too dark, too rich, too much like something that had been fed. Her phone said 2:47 AM. The time felt wrong in her mouth, like a word she'd said too many times. She straightened. The pendant pulsed harder. The clearing was roughly circular, forty metres across, bordered by standing stones that predated anything English Heritage would claim. Their surfaces bore carvings she'd never been able to photograph properly—the images always came out blurred, as though the stones refused to be recorded. Spiral patterns. Figures that might have been human. Figures that definitely weren't. Rory walked toward the centre. Her footsteps made no sound. The ground absorbed the noise the way a library absorbs whispers. She'd reached the middle of the grove when she heard the first sound. Not a natural sound. Not wind through leaves or distant traffic from the park's borders. A sort of wet clicking, like a tongue against a palate, but lower. Deeper. As though something very large was tasting the air. She turned a full circle. The stones stood in their ring, impassive. The oaks beyond them were still—too still for a November night in England where the wind never properly stopped. She checked the pendant. Its glow had intensified, the crimson bright enough now to light her hand from beneath when she pressed her fingers over it. "Okay." She spoke to herself the way she spoke when making a decision in court documents—steady, reasoned. "I've followed the pull. I'm here. Now what?" The pendant's heat spiked. A tendril of pain traced down her chest. The clicking sound came again, closer. Rory's hand went to the small of her back, where she kept the utility knife. Not much, but it was something. She flipped it open by feel, the blade catching the moonlight that shouldn't have been this bright. The wildflowers began to close. One by one, the luminescent bells folded inward, as though the grove itself was blinking. The darkness rushed in to fill the gaps, and with it came a smell—loamy and thick and wrong in a way she couldn't name. Not decay. Something else. Something that had never been alive in the first place. She backed toward the stone she'd entered through. Her heel caught on something and she stumbled, catching herself on her palms. The ground was warm. Ground shouldn't be warm in November. A sound behind her. Not the clicking this time. A whisper. Rory held her breath. The whisper came again, and this time she caught fragments. Not words she knew. Not Welsh, not English, not any language she'd heard. But the tone was familiar—the cadence of someone giving instructions. Someone patient. Someone who had done this before. "Who's there?" Silence. Then the wildflowers at the edge of the grove began to open again, one by one, but their light had changed. Where before it had been blue-white, now it was red. The same red as the Heartstone. The light spread outward from each flower like dye in water, illuminating things the darkness had hidden. The carvings on the standing stones were moving. Rory watched, frozen, as the spiral patterns on the nearest stone rotated slowly. The figures that might have been human were walking now, moving in a procession that led around the stone's circumference. And the figures that definitely weren't human— She looked away. Her pulse hammered in her ears. The pendant burned against her skin. A shape moved at the edge of her vision. She snapped her head toward it. Nothing. Just the stones, their carvings still now. She might have imagined it. Might have. The whispering started again. Multiple voices this time, overlapping. The fragments she caught sounded like questions. Questions directed at her. Rory's breath came short. The air had thickened, pressing against her lungs. She moved toward the entrance stones, quick now, not running but not walking either. The ground beneath her feet was soft in ways that suggested movement. Suggestion. Not certainty. She reached the gap between the oaks and stopped. The park beyond was gone. Where the path should have been, where the muddy track she'd walked an hour ago should have stretched back toward the car park, there was only more grove. Standing stones. Wildflowers. The same clearing, as though she'd stepped into a reflection that showed her where she'd just been. "No." She turned. The grove behind her stretched on, the stones circling, the wildflowers blooming red. The centre of the clearing, where she'd stood moments ago, was empty. Something had been standing there. She was sure of it. Something had been standing in the exact spot she'd occupied, watching her retreat. The pendant's heat was unbearable now. She grabbed the chain to pull it off and yelped—the silver had heated enough to leave a mark. The crescent scar on her wrist throbbed in sympathy, a phantom echo of old pain. The clicking sound returned. From every direction at once. Rory backed into the centre of the grove. It was the only direction left. The standing stones formed their circle around her, and the carvings had begun to move again, their processions leading somewhere she couldn't see. The wildflowers cast their red light across her face, her hands, the knife that looked absurdly small in her grip. She thought of Cardiff. Of her father's steady voice in court, the way he never raised it, never needed to. She thought of Eva's flat, the spare room she'd slept in for three weeks before finding her own place. She thought of the smell of golden syrup from the kitchen when her mother made Welsh cakes on Sunday mornings. The whispers coalesced into a single voice. It came from behind the largest stone—the one whose carvings she'd refused to examine closely. "Malphora." The name rang in the air like a bell struck underwater. The pendant blazed crimson. Rory's knees buckled. She caught herself on her hands again, the warm earth pulsing against her palms in the same rhythm as the Heartstone. Something stepped out from behind the stone. She saw only the edge of it—a limb, a joint, something that bent the wrong way—before she forced herself to look away. Her vision swam. The red light from the flowers intensified. "Malphora." The voice was patient. The voice that gave instructions. The crescent scar on her wrist split open. Blood welled up, dark in the crimson light. It didn't hurt. That was the wrong part—the absence of pain where pain should have been. Rory pressed her wrist against her chest, smearing blood across her shirt. The pendant's glow dimmed, then brightened, then dimmed again in a pattern that matched her heartbeat. Her heartbeat, or something else's. She looked up. The stars above the grove were wrong. The constellations had shifted, reordered into patterns she didn't recognise. One of the stars pulsed in time with the pendant. The shape behind the stone moved again. This time, she didn't look away.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.73% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1376
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
45.49% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1376
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"pulsed"
count3
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"traced"
count2
3
word"perfect"
count1
4
word"footsteps"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count2
6
word"familiar"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"throbbed"
count1
10
word"echo"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"rhythmic"
2"traced"
3"perfect"
4"footsteps"
5"whisper"
6"familiar"
7"silence"
8"pulse"
9"throbbed"
10"echo"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences144
matches
0"d in sympathy"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences144
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences147
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1363
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount1342
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.67
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"November"
discoveredNames
Fae1
Grove1
Heartstone3
Pendant1
London1
English2
Heritage1
November2
England1
Welsh2
Cardiff1
Eva1
Sunday1
Rory9
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Heritage"
2"Eva"
3"Rory"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"London"
3"November"
4"England"
5"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
94.44% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences90
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"landmarks that seemed to shift when she wasn't looking directly at them"
1"sounded like questions"
53.26% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.467
wordCount1363
matches
0"Not much, but it was something"
1"not running but not walking either"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences147
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean29.63
std19.31
cv0.652
sampleLengths
023
163
271
313
470
56
655
721
813
938
1057
1125
1212
136
1438
1558
1631
1711
184
1941
202
2155
228
2340
2415
2530
2620
2741
289
295
3048
3128
3223
3339
349
3557
3659
3722
3812
3928
4039
4110
4232
4333
4430
4513
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences144
matches
0"been fed"
1"was gone"
80.95% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs224
matches
0"wasn't looking"
1"was tasting"
2"was blinking"
3"were walking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences147
ratio0.082
matches
0"She'd been here before—twice in daylight, once at dusk—but never at night."
1"The petals luminesced just enough to illuminate the soil beneath them—soil that was too dark, too rich, too much like something that had been fed."
2"Their surfaces bore carvings she'd never been able to photograph properly—the images always came out blurred, as though the stones refused to be recorded."
3"The oaks beyond them were still—too still for a November night in England where the wind never properly stopped."
4"\"Okay.\" She spoke to herself the way she spoke when making a decision in court documents—steady, reasoned."
5"The darkness rushed in to fill the gaps, and with it came a smell—loamy and thick and wrong in a way she couldn't name."
6"But the tone was familiar—the cadence of someone giving instructions."
7"And the figures that definitely weren't human—"
8"She grabbed the chain to pull it off and yelped—the silver had heated enough to leave a mark."
9"It came from behind the largest stone—the one whose carvings she'd refused to examine closely."
10"She saw only the edge of it—a limb, a joint, something that bent the wrong way—before she forced herself to look away."
11"That was the wrong part—the absence of pain where pain should have been."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1357
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount51
adverbRatio0.03758290346352248
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.008843036109064112
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences147
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences147
mean9.27
std6.6
cv0.712
sampleLengths
023
112
212
326
41
51
611
712
85
920
1029
115
128
135
149
1516
1625
175
1815
192
204
2119
2224
232
246
254
265
275
2811
2913
304
3111
3213
331
349
355
367
3719
384
3922
4017
418
424
438
446
4515
466
4717
485
4915
41.27% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.3129251700680272
totalSentences147
uniqueOpeners46
52.49% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences127
matches
0"Then the wildflowers at the"
1"Just the stones, their carvings"
ratio0.016
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences127
matches
0"She'd been here before—twice in"
1"she muttered to the empty"
2"She knelt beside a cluster"
3"Her phone said 2:47 AM."
4"Their surfaces bore carvings she'd"
5"Her footsteps made no sound."
6"She'd reached the middle of"
7"She turned a full circle."
8"She checked the pendant."
9"Its glow had intensified, the"
10"She spoke to herself the"
11"She flipped it open by"
12"She backed toward the stone"
13"Her heel caught on something"
14"She looked away."
15"Her pulse hammered in her"
16"She snapped her head toward"
17"She might have imagined it."
18"She moved toward the entrance"
19"She reached the gap between"
ratio0.26
38.74% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount107
totalSentences127
matches
0"Rory stepped through the gap"
1"The Fae Grove opened before"
2"She'd been here before—twice in"
3"The standing stones that marked"
4"Nothing like the warm crimson"
5"The Heartstone Pendant pressed against"
6"That was why she'd come."
7"Tonight, the trail ended here."
8"she muttered to the empty"
9"The wildflowers shouldn't have been"
10"She knelt beside a cluster"
11"The petals luminesced just enough"
12"Her phone said 2:47 AM."
13"The time felt wrong in"
14"The pendant pulsed harder."
15"The clearing was roughly circular,"
16"Their surfaces bore carvings she'd"
17"Figures that might have been"
18"Figures that definitely weren't."
19"Rory walked toward the centre."
ratio0.843
39.37% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences127
matches
0"As though something very large"
ratio0.008
76.72% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The standing stones that marked the boundary caught moonlight in ways the oaks outside didn't, as though the stones themselves held their own source of illumina…"
1"Three nights, she'd traced the pull across London on her motorbike, through streets she didn't recognise, past landmarks that seemed to shift when she wasn't lo…"
2"The petals luminesced just enough to illuminate the soil beneath them—soil that was too dark, too rich, too much like something that had been fed."
3"She flipped it open by feel, the blade catching the moonlight that shouldn't have been this bright."
4"The wildflowers cast their red light across her face, her hands, the knife that looked absurdly small in her grip."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"She spoke (speak)"
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.5
80.5161%