Run: 2026-07-07-01KWZ327Y4TC4BMK4ZRPAX5TD7

Run Details

Duration:
1m 35s
Cost:
$0.005521
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon of the Raven's Nest sign bled through the rain-streaked window, casting an emerald glow across the bar's worn floorboards. Rory worked a chamois cloth over a pint glass, watching the sheen catch the light before setting it on the rack. Tuesday nights were dead. A few regulars nursed pints at the far end, and the jazz coming from the ancient record player behind the bar was low enough to hear the rain gutter. The door swung open. Rory didn't look up, just reached for another glass. "Table for one?" The woman's voice caught something in the air. A lilt, a rhythm, a ghost of a cadence from another life. Rory's hand stopped mid-reach. She looked. The woman stood in the doorway shaking rain from a Burberry trench. Dark hair, once long and loose, now cropped sharp at the jaw. A silver briefcase, the kind barristers carried. Gold studs in her ears. She'd filled out since university, her face losing the softness of twenty-two and settling into the sharper architecture of approaching thirty. Jess Morgan. Rory's throat tightened. She thought about ducking, about disappearing into the kitchen. But Jess looked up, sweeping the room with a quick professional survey, and their eyes met. The recognition came in stages. First the squint of politeness, the almost-smile reserved for strangers in hospitality. Then the tilt of the head, the narrowing of eyes. Then the widening of them. "Aurora?" The name landed like a stone in still water. Rory hadn't been Aurora in years. She was Rory here. She was no one's daughter, no one's ex, no one's almost-lawyer. "Jess." She set down the cloth. "Bloody hell." Jess crossed the room, heels clicking against the floorboards. She stopped two feet from the bar, close enough to touch, close enough for Rory to see the fine lines at the corners of her mouth. "I don't believe it." Jess laughed, but it came out strained. "I've been in London three months. Three months. And I walk into some random bar in Soho and there you are." "Small world." Rory heard how hollow her own voice sounded. "What are you doing here? Behind the bar? I thought—" Jess stopped herself. Rory knew what she'd almost said. *I thought you were in Cardiff. I thought you were studying law. I thought you were going to be somebody.* "Working." Rory picked up the cloth again, needing something to do with her hands. "I work here. Part-time. I live upstairs." Jess's eyes traveled over her. Taking in the faded black t-shirt, the apron tied at her waist, the lack of rings on her fingers. Rory saw the assessment and hated it. Hated how she must look. Hated that she cared. "You look good," Jess said. The lie sat between them. "You look like a barrister." Jess smiled, the professional one. "I am. Well. I'm doing my pupillage at Clifton Chambers. Commercial law." Rory nodded. The future she'd almost had, dressed in a Burberry coat and standing in front of her. "What about you?" Jess asked, too brightly. "You finished your degree? You must have graduated, what, three years ago?" "Didn't finish." The words dropped between them. Rory watched Jess's face cycle through confusion, concern, and that particular brand of pity reserved for people who'd wasted potential. "I left. Second year." "But you were top of the class. You were going to—" "I left." Silence. The jazz swelled for a moment, a trumpet solo that seemed too loud in the quiet between them. Jess unslung her briefcase and set it on the bar. "Can I get a drink? Something strong." Rory poured her a Glenlivet, no ice. She knew the order from memory. University bars, cheap wine, the night before Jess's twenty-first birthday. They'd snuck a bottle of single malt into Jess's dorm room and drunk it straight from the bottle while planning their futures. Jess was going to be the youngest silk in London. Rory was going to be the barrister who actually gave a damn about her clients. Rory placed the glass on a napkin. "On the house." "You don't have to—" "First customer in two hours. It's fine." Jess wrapped her fingers around the glass, cradling it without drinking. "We looked for you. After you vanished. Your mum called mine, said you'd dropped out, moved away. No one knew where." "I needed to leave." "Because of Evan?" Rory's jaw tightened. She hadn't said his name out loud in over a year. She'd trained herself not to think it. "Among other things." Jess leaned forward. "I saw him at a wedding last summer. He asked about you." "I don't want to talk about him." "Fair enough." Jess picked up the glass and drank. "This is good. Better than the crap in my chambers." "It's the only thing Silas does well. Keep the whisky list respectable." "Silas?" "The owner. Older bloke. Used to be MI6 or something. It's his bar." Jess looked around with new eyes. The maps on the walls, the black-and-white photographs, the hidden tension in the air that most people mistook for atmosphere. "I thought this was just some random Soho bar." "It's not random. It's home." The word came out before Rory could stop it. She felt the weight of it, what it meant that this dim, smoky room with its creaking floorboards and its retired spy of an owner was more home than Cardiff had ever been. Jess's expression softened. "Are you happy?" The question was so direct, so *Jess*, that Rory almost laughed. There was a time she would have answered without thinking, would have painted a bright picture of freedom and possibility. But the years had stripped her of easy answers. "I'm safe." "That's not what I asked." "It's the best I can do right now." Jess turned the glass in her hands, studying the amber liquid. "Do you remember that night on the Bute Park wall? When we got drunk on your dad's whiskey and you told me you were going to be the first female Lord Chief Justice?" Rory remembered. The river sliding dark below them, the lights of the castle behind, the certainty of youth. "I was nineteen." "You were brilliant. You are brilliant." Jess looked up, and Rory saw the old friend in her eyes, the one who'd held her hair back at freshers' week, who'd loaned her lecture notes when she was sick, who'd believed in every ridiculous dream she'd ever had. "What happened?" "Life happened." Rory reached for another glass to polish, needing the rhythm. "Evan happened. I happened. I made choices." "So did I. I chose to stay. I chose to do the pupillage, take the exams, climb the ladder. I chose to marry a man I don't love because he looks good on my arm at firm dinners." Rory stopped polishing. "You're married?" "Engaged. To Richard. He's a property developer. He thinks my work is 'cute.'" Jess's laugh was bitter. "Some choices look like success from the outside." "Why are you telling me this?" "Because you ran. And I stayed. And I'm not sure either of us made the right call." The record player clicked, the jazz ending. In the silence, Rory could hear the rain against the windows, the murmur of the regulars at the end of the bar. She set down the glass and met Jess's eyes. "You've got a silver briefcase and a Burberry trench." "And you've got peace. Look at you." Jess gestured. "You're not tense. You're not performing. When I walked in, you were just... wiping a glass. Existing. I can't remember the last time I existed without trying to impress someone." Rory wanted to tell her it was harder than it looked. That peace was maintenance, a constant effort. That some nights she still woke up convinced Evan was in the room. That she'd traded ambition for survival and wasn't sure which was heavier. Instead, she said, "You could stay. Have another drink." Jess looked at her watch. "I've got a meeting in an hour. Client dinner." "Right." "Same girl I would have said. 'Right.'" Jess smiled, and for a second she was twenty-one again, sprawled across a dorm room floor, laughing at nothing. "Aurora Carter. Always saving your words." "Rory. I go by Rory now." Jess stood, collecting her briefcase. "Rory, then." She pulled out a card and slid it across the bar. "My mobile's on there. If you ever want to talk. Or if you ever want to come to dinner and watch me pretend Richard's jokes are funny." Rory picked up the card. Cream stock, embossed letters. Jessica Morgan, Pupil Barrister. Clifton Chambers. A life in miniature. "Maybe I will." Jess held her gaze for a long moment. "You were my best friend, Aurora. For whatever that's worth. I never stopped wondering what happened to you." "Now you know." "No. Now I know where you are." Jess turned toward the door, then paused. "I don't know who you've become. But I'd like to." She pushed through the door into the rain. The neon sign flickered green across her shoulders as she walked away. Rory stood behind the bar, the card light in her hand, and watched until the rain swallowed her. The door stayed closed. Silas emerged from the back room, his limp barely audible on the floorboards. He picked up Jess's abandoned glass, examined it, and set it in the sink. "Friend from the old life?" "Something like that." "You didn't follow her out." Rory slipped the card into her pocket. "No." Silas said nothing. He just nodded, the way he did when he understood something without needing it explained, and limped back toward the storeroom. Rory picked up the chamois cloth. She reached for another glass. The weight in her pocket was warm, solid, a thread back to a girl she'd buried. She kept polishing, and the rain kept falling, and the green light outside the window painted everything in shades of what was lost.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences72
tagDensity0.222
leniency0.444
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1664
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
72.96% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1664
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"lilt"
count1
1
word"potential"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"silk"
count1
4
word"tension"
count1
5
word"weight"
count2
6
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"lilt"
1"potential"
2"silence"
3"silk"
4"tension"
5"weight"
6"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences115
matches
0"was bitter"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences115
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences170
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords21
totalWords1664
ratio0.013
matches
0"I thought you were in Cardiff. I thought you were studying law. I thought you were going to be somebody."
1"Jess"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions75
wordCount1095
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity2.83
worstName"Jess"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Jess"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Burberry2
Morgan2
Jess31
Aurora1
Rory29
Cardiff2
Glenlivet1
London1
Evan1
Pupil1
Barrister1
Chambers1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Morgan"
2"Jess"
3"Rory"
4"Evan"
5"Chambers"
places
0"Burberry"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
globalScore0.084
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences75
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1664
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences170
matches
0"Hated that she"
1"meant that this"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs84
mean19.81
std16.75
cv0.846
sampleLengths
076
113
23
324
42
557
62
728
832
91
1030
118
1235
1332
1410
1539
1621
1740
1810
195
2017
2118
2219
232
2425
254
2611
272
2819
2917
3070
3110
324
337
3432
354
363
3724
3815
397
4019
4112
421
4313
4435
4547
466
4740
482
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences115
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs195
matches
0"were studying"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences170
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount980
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.02959183673469388
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0020408163265306124
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences170
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences170
mean9.79
std7.65
cv0.781
sampleLengths
022
121
24
329
44
59
63
78
812
94
102
1112
1212
137
145
1521
162
173
189
1916
205
2112
2210
235
241
259
266
274
2811
296
302
319
3226
3311
3421
3510
3613
376
386
396
408
4114
427
435
4419
457
465
474
485
495
51.37% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.34705882352941175
totalSentences170
uniqueOpeners59
93.46% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences107
matches
0"Then the tilt of the"
1"Then the widening of them."
2"Instead, she said,"
ratio0.028
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences107
matches
0"She'd filled out since university,"
1"She thought about ducking, about"
2"She was Rory here."
3"She was no one's daughter,"
4"She set down the cloth"
5"She stopped two feet from"
6"*I thought you were in"
7"I thought you were studying"
8"I thought you were going"
9"She knew the order from"
10"They'd snuck a bottle of"
11"She hadn't said his name"
12"She'd trained herself not to"
13"She felt the weight of"
14"She set down the glass"
15"She pulled out a card"
16"She pushed through the door"
17"He picked up Jess's abandoned"
18"He just nodded, the way"
19"She reached for another glass."
ratio0.196
25.42% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount93
totalSentences107
matches
0"The green neon of the"
1"Rory worked a chamois cloth"
2"Tuesday nights were dead."
3"The door swung open."
4"Rory didn't look up, just"
5"The woman's voice caught something"
6"A lilt, a rhythm, a"
7"Rory's hand stopped mid-reach."
8"The woman stood in the"
9"A silver briefcase, the kind"
10"She'd filled out since university,"
11"Rory's throat tightened."
12"She thought about ducking, about"
13"The recognition came in stages."
14"The name landed like a"
15"Rory hadn't been Aurora in"
16"She was Rory here."
17"She was no one's daughter,"
18"She set down the cloth"
19"Jess crossed the room, heels"
ratio0.869
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She'd filled out since university, her face losing the softness of twenty-two and settling into the sharper architecture of approaching thirty."
1"Rory watched Jess's face cycle through confusion, concern, and that particular brand of pity reserved for people who'd wasted potential."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Jess laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences72
tagDensity0.056
leniency0.111
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.028
88.1069%