Run: 2026-07-07-01KWZ36VV35KXB9S0VTB1QF8JK

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Model:
Aion 3.0
Duration:
47.4s
Cost:
$0.015159
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt stuck the way it always did. Rory wrenched it sideways, pulled the door inward, and the night air from the stairwell poured in carrying the smell of curry and rain and something sharper underneath — cedar, smoke, expensive leather. Lucien stood in the doorway. Water beaded on the shoulders of his charcoal suit. His platinum hair had come loose from its slick, a few strands falling across his forehead, and he looked... wrong. Not composed. Not the controlled, immaculate fixer who traded secrets in back rooms and spoke four languages like each one was a weapon. His amber eye caught the dim light from the hallway. His black eye swallowed it. "The door was locked." "Three deadbolts. Impressive for a ground-floor curry house tenant." "That's not what I—" "I know." He hadn't moved to step inside. His hand rested on the ivory handle of his cane, knuckles tight. Ptolemy wound between his ankles, and Lucien didn't flinch, didn't look down, just stood there on the threshold like crossing it would cost him something he wasn't sure he could pay. Rory's pulse hammered. She hated that it did. "You can't be here." "I'm aware." "Then why are you?" A long pause. The rain picked up behind him, drumming against the metal railing. Somewhere below, the kitchen of the curry house clattered with pots. "Because I made a mistake." His jaw tightened. "And I owe you the truth of it." She should slam the door. She should throw the deadbolts back into place, grab Ptolemy, and retreat to the bedroom where Eva's research notes formed a fortress of paper and half-finished theories. She should do anything except stand there in her vest and pyjama bottoms with her hair still damp from the shower. She stepped back. Left the door open. Lucien crossed the threshold. --- The flat was chaos. Scrolls teetered in stacks on every surface. Books spilled from the shelves in cascading waterfalls. A half-eaten bowl of cereal sat on top of a grimoire. Lucien's gaze moved across it all, cataloguing, and something in his expression shifted — not quite softening, but loosening. Like the wreckage of someone else's life reminded him of something he'd misplaced. Rory folded her arms. Ptolemy jumped onto the counter, knocked a stack of index cards onto the floor, and began eating the cereal. "You're soaked." "London weather. Novel concept." "Lucien." Her voice came out harder than she intended. His name landed between them like a stone dropped into still water. He turned to face her, and she caught it then — the tension in his shoulders, the way his grip on the cane had gone white-knuckled, the faint tremor in his left hand that he was fighting to still. Something had happened. Something bad. "What's going on?" "I told you. I made a—" "If the next word out of your mouth is 'mistake' again, I'm putting Ptolemy on you. He's part feral." Lucien's mouth curved. Not a smile. Never quite a smile with him. A fracture in the mask. "I handled the Vassiliev matter alone." Rory's stomach dropped. The Vassiliev matter. The job she'd walked away from three weeks ago, the one that had pulled them together in the first place. The one that had ended with Lucien's hand on her waist in a darkened corridor and his mouth near her ear and his voice low and certain saying *not yet, not like this, mon cœur* — and then nothing. Nothing but silence and distance and the distinct feeling of having been offered something precious before it was snatched back. "You went without me." "I went without you." "And?" "And it went badly." He moved to the window. Rain streaked the glass, distorting the amber glow of the streetlamp outside. In the reflection, his heterochromatic eyes stared back at him — one burning gold, one bottomless dark. "Lucien, look at me." He didn't. He looked at her reflection instead, and in the glass his expression was raw in a way she'd never seen it. Stripped of the polish. The charm. The careful, calculated warmth that he wielded like another blade. "I didn't go to Vassiliev for the job." Rory's arms tightened across her chest. "I went because I needed to know if I could." "If you could what?" "Let you go." The words hung in the air between them. Ptolemy stopped eating. Even the cat seemed to understand the weight of what had just landed. Rory crossed the small distance between them in four steps. Her hand found his arm — his jacket was damp, cold against her fingers — and she turned him. He let her. The cane bumped against the windowsill. His amber eye met hers, then his black one, and in the narrow space of the flat with its towers of books and its sleeping cat and its three deadbolts against the world, he was just a man. Half of one, anyway. "That's not your call to make." "Rory—" "No. You don't get to decide for me. You don't get to say *not yet* and then disappear for three weeks and then show up at my door in the rain looking like you've been in a fight—" "I have been in a fight." "I can see that! Your hand is shaking, your suit's ruined, and you're standing in Eva's flat pretending you came here for some noble reason when the truth is you missed me and you're too stubborn to just say it." Lucien exhaled. A long, slow breath that carried something out of him — some pretense, some wall. "I missed you." The admission cost him. She could see it in the way his jaw locked afterward, in the way his fingers curled against the windowsill, in the way his amber eye burned brighter for just a moment before he shuttered it. "You missed me." "Desperately." "You're an idiot." "Almost certainly." His hand came up. Slow. Giving her time to pull away. His fingers brushed the edge of her jaw, and the touch sent electricity skipping down her spine. She didn't move. Didn't breathe. The rain hammered the window and somewhere below someone laughed and a pan clattered and Ptolemy started eating the cereal again. "I left because I thought if I stayed, I'd ruin you." "Ruin me." "My father's blood is in me, Rory. Half of me is Avaros. Half of me is a place that devours everything it touches. And you—" "Me what?" He looked at her then. Both eyes. The full weight of his attention, and it was immense, and it was terrified, and it was the most honest thing she'd ever seen on his face. "You make me want to be human." The words landed like a blow. Not because they were soft or sentimental but because they were true in a way that stripped him bare. Lucien Moreau, the fixer, the broker, the man who traded in secrets and never gave one away for free — he stood in a cramped flat on Brick Lane and handed her the only thing he had left. Rory grabbed his tie. Pulled him down. Kissed him. He made a sound against her mouth — not a groan, something rawer. His hands found her waist, pulled her flush against him, and he kissed her back with the desperation of a man who had been drowning and only just remembered how to breathe. The cane clattered to the floor. Neither of them bent to pick it up. When they broke apart, his forehead rested against hers. His breath came ragged. "I'm still angry with you." "I know." "Three weeks." "I know." "You don't get to do that again." His thumb traced the line of her jaw. His amber eye searched her face. His black one reflected her back at her — rumpled, fierce, blue-eyed, refusing to let him go. "I won't." "You say that now." "I say it always. I just need you to believe it." Ptolemy meowed. The cereal bowl sat empty on the counter. Rain streaked the window, and the streetlamp outside flickered, and somewhere in the building a door slammed shut. Rory's hand found his. Their fingers laced together, and she held on.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.021
leniency0.042
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1357
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
52.10% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1357
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"cascading"
count1
2
word"tension"
count1
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"charm"
count1
6
word"calculated"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count1
8
word"weight"
count2
9
word"down her spine"
count1
10
word"traced"
count1
11
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"cascading"
2"tension"
3"stomach"
4"silence"
5"charm"
6"calculated"
7"warmth"
8"weight"
9"down her spine"
10"traced"
11"flickered"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences99
matches
0"was terrified"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences99
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences146
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords9
totalWords1368
ratio0.007
matches
0"not yet, not like this, mon cœur"
1"not yet"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount1057
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.76
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien8
Ptolemy6
Eva1
Vassiliev1
Moreau1
Brick1
Lane1
Rory8
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Eva"
3"Moreau"
4"Rory"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite softening, but loosening"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.731
wordCount1368
matches
0"not quite softening, but loosening"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences146
matches
0"hated that it"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs78
mean17.54
std21.14
cv1.205
sampleLengths
042
172
24
39
44
52
649
78
84
92
104
1125
1216
1353
147
154
161
1762
1823
192
204
211
2259
235
243
256
2619
2717
286
2985
304
314
321
334
3434
354
3639
378
386
3910
404
413
4224
4380
446
451
4638
476
4840
4917
98.17% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences99
matches
0"been offered"
1"was snatched"
2"was terrified"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs173
matches
0"was fighting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences146
ratio0.068
matches
0"Rory wrenched it sideways, pulled the door inward, and the night air from the stairwell poured in carrying the smell of curry and rain and something sharper underneath — cedar, smoke, expensive leather."
1"Lucien's gaze moved across it all, cataloguing, and something in his expression shifted — not quite softening, but loosening."
2"He turned to face her, and she caught it then — the tension in his shoulders, the way his grip on the cane had gone white-knuckled, the faint tremor in his left hand that he was fighting to still."
3"The one that had ended with Lucien's hand on her waist in a darkened corridor and his mouth near her ear and his voice low and certain saying *not yet, not like this, mon cœur* — and then nothing."
4"In the reflection, his heterochromatic eyes stared back at him — one burning gold, one bottomless dark."
5"Her hand found his arm — his jacket was damp, cold against her fingers — and she turned him."
6"A long, slow breath that carried something out of him — some pretense, some wall."
7"Lucien Moreau, the fixer, the broker, the man who traded in secrets and never gave one away for free — he stood in a cramped flat on Brick Lane and handed her the only thing he had left."
8"He made a sound against her mouth — not a groan, something rawer."
9"His black one reflected her back at her — rumpled, fierce, blue-eyed, refusing to let him go."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1051
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"damp, cold against her"
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.03330161750713606
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0019029495718363464
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences146
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences146
mean9.36
std9.45
cv1.01
sampleLengths
09
133
25
39
419
51
62
721
810
95
104
119
124
132
146
1512
1631
173
185
194
202
214
223
2311
2411
258
268
275
2827
2921
303
314
324
334
347
358
3611
3719
3813
394
4019
412
424
431
448
4512
4639
473
482
493
47.95% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.3493150684931507
totalSentences146
uniqueOpeners51
75.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences88
matches
0"Somewhere below, the kitchen of"
1"Even the cat seemed to"
ratio0.023
79.09% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences88
matches
0"His platinum hair had come"
1"His amber eye caught the"
2"His black eye swallowed it."
3"He hadn't moved to step"
4"His hand rested on the"
5"She hated that it did."
6"His jaw tightened"
7"She should slam the door."
8"She should throw the deadbolts"
9"She should do anything except"
10"She stepped back."
11"Her voice came out harder"
12"His name landed between them"
13"He turned to face her,"
14"He moved to the window."
15"He looked at her reflection"
16"Her hand found his arm"
17"He let her."
18"His amber eye met hers,"
19"She could see it in"
ratio0.352
33.86% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences88
matches
0"The third deadbolt stuck the"
1"Rory wrenched it sideways, pulled"
2"Lucien stood in the doorway."
3"Water beaded on the shoulders"
4"His platinum hair had come"
5"His amber eye caught the"
6"His black eye swallowed it."
7"He hadn't moved to step"
8"His hand rested on the"
9"Ptolemy wound between his ankles,"
10"Rory's pulse hammered."
11"She hated that it did."
12"A long pause."
13"The rain picked up behind"
14"His jaw tightened"
15"She should slam the door."
16"She should throw the deadbolts"
17"She should do anything except"
18"She stepped back."
19"Lucien crossed the threshold."
ratio0.852
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Not the controlled, immaculate fixer who traded secrets in back rooms and spoke four languages like each one was a weapon."
1"His hands found her waist, pulled her flush against him, and he kissed her back with the desperation of a man who had been drowning and only just remembered how…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.9200%